Hello guys ..I’m miss x from kerla …
I just thought of writing a fan fiction . please do tell your views in the comment section. Wheter it is positive or negative I don’t care . but I just need your comments lovlies π
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This story is about nesam..and ardika my fav couple ……….I will introduce u the characters as I move on to the story …
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OK so the story begins like ,
The beach was filled brightness. The brightness which seemed like the sun has achieved it’s success and is smiling with its all its might. The sun was happy and so was NEIL, The creative writter of the famous BIRDSONG. He was enjoying his holiday In so called beach of Goa. It was like he absorbed the happiness of the sun.
He grasped the glass bottle near by. With his hard hands. He could see the mango juice in that glassed which also had the same colour of the sun. Basically every living creature or even non living creature was happy in there. He pulled the straw apart towards his mouth he sipped a drop from the glass. He could feel the heal that it made to his thirsty throat.
He wished his life was like this.
Wherein he would just lie in those comfy chairs all day and sip the juice . wearing a hat that would make him feel young ( or maybe just for him).
There he lied being intoxicated with the happiness that nature provided. Just then a blonde lady with a heart shaped face walked by and and and. She just dashed him …banggg his juice fell down onto the sand and spread all over beneath. All he could do was stare at that person who interrupted his happiness.
The face of the lady..oh yes he could recognize her. He felt he had seen her somewhere. Just then that lady who was wearing a red coulored strapless dress which made her more beautiful called out “IDIOT WAKE UPPP , ITS ALDREADY TIME. WE SHOULD NOT BE LATE TODAY ALSO”
“Uh what Sam , weren’t u there in that beach. Omg u looked so pretty in that attire u know what I could just stop staring at you ”
“Offo don’t prove me more that you are idiot . come on get ready we r getting later” “hurry up ” said Sam in a hurry ” I thought u would be ready by this time. But no u r still sleeping idiot ” she pushed neil out of his sofa ……
“Samudra singhh…wait yaar . why do you want to hurry . why do you want to go there so early come on ” said Neil with a face that made him look so innocent
“Bass’s !!!! Chal ready ho jayoo””” “no more arguments ” …so Neil went to his bathroom brushed his teath and went and started sleeping in the bed again .
BANNNGGGGGGGGG
Sammmm!!! I’m so tired y r u breaking my bones and making me more tired come on. Sam I love you u love me . so plz stop this …
BANNGGGGGGGGGGG
okie yaar I ll get ready….n so he wore a suit a black and white one with a red coloured tie .which made him soo formal .
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Heyyy please do comment and let me know if it is good .
Should I continue writing .? It is my first ff …. !!!! I’m impatiently waiting for ur reviews guys ..
Sorry for the grammatical mistakes
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It’s really nice dear π π π pls do continue π π ur first para I loved D most it’s really amazing π π π π NeSam always cute together wheres our kadhoos n chirpy??? π π waiting for them π π
Thank you so much dear ??….ur comment made my day…..I’m actually good at explaining the surrounding more than conversations ?……kadoos and chirpy β€ ll be coming in the next episode ??….do u write ffs….if so plz do tell me I would love to read it ?
No no no dear :O I can’t do it even in dreams π π π π i know only to read π π π oh babe it’s really cool π π π π love u babe π <3
No dear…even I thought the same at first ….but after reading others ff …I thought I should also write something……so I just wrote it…n discovered my love for writing…ur English is good …n u surely can….nothing is impossible ??….love u too deariee β€β€β€
It z ossum but I hav 2 questions….. are nesam married? and when will u introduce aradhika?yup do continue I feel ur story has spark…..update next one soon…stay blessed
Heyyy thank you soo much …??..
No nesam r not married …they r just friends …..and yaa ardika ll be coming in the next episode βΊ….thanks youu so much ??…I ll update soon
If u write any ffs plz do tell
Nice start dear….my fav couple too ardhika….waiting for their entry…pls continue soon….all the best….tc..
Yeahh dear sushi I ll update soon along with all time fav couple ardhika ?…thank you sooo much
Hey there. I loved it. Please update soon.
Yeahh sure dude…..ll update soon…and thankuuuu sooo much ??
hello miss.x…njanm malayaliyaa..evde orupad mallus und.ur story is nice..pls continue..n where is ardhΓka? Pls update soon.
Yeah …evde orupad mallaylis und …..I’m sooo happy ??…..thank you sooo much dear ??….ardhika ll be coming in the next episode
Wow wat was d 2 bangs….???well a nc opening …plzz b regular n a lovely epi….???n plzz continue miss???….vl wait for d nxt???
Haha….that bang was the sound that was heard after Sam beat her idiot ??……thankuuuu soo much ??……yes I ll update soon βΊ
*beats….
A kind of patting ?..I guess
Haha
Nice start.loved nesam talks.ur first para about surroundings was awesome.vegam attuitha ep upload cheyu.waiting for aradhika intro.
Thankyou soo much ??…….thank you soo mcuh ??….ardhika ll be there in the next epi for sure ?….suree njn vegan upload cheyam βΊ
nice start
Thank you soo much gauri ???
you have chosen the bestest couple… π lookin forward to see ardhika as well… π miss miss X
Yup I love nesam and their nok jhoks a lot β€β€..sure dude …..they both r getting ready to cum in the NXT epi ?
Hey miss x. How are you?
Wow wow wow like just fabulous. You rocked it on the first one. In glad you also started a ff. You are amazing!
I’m looking forward for it.
And I haven’t been on dehleez page for , I guess about a week. Just so busy with new classes ? lol
Hope you would understand.
And yeah I wanted to thank you for liking my story. I’m glad you liked it.
And you have great plot one. A really different one.
Take care??
Heyyyyy misha β€?
I’m sooooo very very glad that u liked it ??….you r also amazing ?
N I also haven’t been much on dehleez page..?….yup I can understand ? was a kindaa busyy actually so I didn’t comment much over there …hehe
Anyone who read ur story would definitely fall in love with ur ff ….seriously ?
Thankuuuu sooo muchhh ???
Good start, continue with the story. π
Thank you so much brain….sure I ll continue it βΊ
*brin …soo sorry …..I didn’t see it properly
Another story of ardhika…wow
Thank you so much rosiee….ardhika ll be introduced in the NXT epi ?….!!
Sweet name ??
Hi Rosie how are you and how was your exam, waiting for your fanfiction. π
Thanks dear….looking forward ur ff?
Thanks brin….my exams went well…m Fyn…which one would you like me to update …dark or new dimension
New Dimension π
Heyyy rosiiee update soon yaar I want to read all the ff…u to brin??
Oh my god….
How can we… Not comment… Ofcourse i ll do miss X…., after all its abt my fav couple NESAM… i love them…. So i love ur fiction.. Continue βΊβΊ??
I’m sooo glad u liked it :’) ……thank you so much ?.
Yaa ll surely continue βΊβΊ
Namaskaaram..vandanam..
Nalla start…yet..abhipraayam ardhika vannit parayaam…..
Ardhika varum…
Ellam sheriyaakum…lol
Nannieee hope βΊβΊ
Ardika vegan varum….
Next epi IL varum ?
Nice start looking toward to reading more
Thank you so much ??
hey miss x , u frm kerala ???????? …………..in which part of kerala do u live in ????? in wich class are you studying ?????????
well I loved the scenery in the 1st para………….was it all Niel’s dream ???????? is nesam already in love in this ??? or are they just best friends ????? when will you introduce ardhika ????? ……………plzz update sooooooooon………………
Heyyy asastha …thank you sooo much ??
….sorry was not able to cmnt bfore …bcoz tu page was telling me not to cmmnt so fast ?
I’m from Trivandrum ….wbu βΊ
Awwwieee thankYouuu so much :’) ..I’m glad u liked it .
Yeah it was all that idiots dreams ?
No they r in love…but not in lovee…..haha….actually they r unknowingly in love ?
Ardhika ll be cmng in the NXT epi ?
Yaa sureeeeeeieeeeeee
hey missi ( can I call you like that ?????? )…………I’m from ernakulam………….nee enthu cheyuva ??????????? ardhika adutha epiyil varumennu paranappol manasil laddo potti……………
Yaa suree u can call me lyk that ??…….can I callashuu nicysh name ???……wow …I was in ernakulum for abt 3 yrs…..u knw edapally ?βΊ…..njn ipom 10 th illa…..Ni oh ? …eeee ??……tahnkyeww
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Do u write any ffs ?? If so please do tl ?
missi njan 12th kazhinnu…………….nee edappaliyil ayirunno tamasichirunnath ?????? nee eni 10thilekano atho 10th kazhinno ????????
io njan chotikkan marannu nee FBil undo ????????
super start…….eagerly waiting next one……….tc
Thankyou so much subhaa ??….
Awesome episode, wowwww loved it very very muchhhh. …lovely start…plzzzz continue dear. ..all the best…..it’s very interesting. …love you loads