When he reached home lights were off
“Mom..swara, uttara.where are u…? i think the elecricity has gone “.
he tries to switch on the lights by mobile’s flash light
but suddenly lights turned on with a scream…kids gathered around him.
“Sanskar bhayaa yeee…?????”
Mitti shouted.she is 5 year old,
Sanskar rolled his eyes.
“What…shethanoom, are u all here to tortue me…??”.
“yepee”…kittu and golu intertwined their hands
Akkad bakkad bambe bo
assi nabbe ya poore sau
Raat ke baje gaye paune doo
Jo hota hai hone do ..
“Sanskar their exams are over and vaccation has started .U know that they wont stay at home for more than a sec now.
they persuaded me to bring them here, otherwise they might eat away my brain.
You pamper them a lot and they have become so naughty that I cant’t handle them alone nowadays.”Sujatha said
Sanskar:. chachi when did u come..?”.He became so happy on seeing her.
Sujatha:”Today afternoon .i got lot of work in our farm ,so i cant stay for more than one week here, other wise
our cultivation will get spoiled,i dont know when these kids will return.”
“Mom u go ,no need to stay here we will meet after one month, shall I help u to pack ur bags”..golu said with excitement
Sanskar: “chachi…one month with this badmashoom…its better if a disaster would have come??”
Sujatha:”shethanoo…u r going to pack up ur own mum’s bag…Hey Ramji 9 months carry them on my womb, now see this what I got in return.? ”
Golu:”what mom u start again… 9 months huff”. He rubbed his head walked away from there briskly and came with a basket and placed it on the floor.
Golu:”Mom pls get into this basket I will carry u 12 months on my head. Is this oky with u ??”.
Everyone burst out laughing.Sujatha become more angry.
Sujatha: “See jiji what he said..this boy have no respect to elders..Suniye ji golu ke pappa..u have left me alone with these shethanoom and
gone to bhagvanji and u r watching and enjoying this
whole thamasha there?? “.
Golu:”Ha pappa why did u go..??” He looked up.
At that time all became very silent and a bit emotional,Seeing the situation swara changed the topic.
Swara:”chachi what all he said is good na..how many mother’s would get this opportunity..haha..u should be proud of ur son”.
AP:”haha swara is right u r very lucky..to have a son like him. Suji they are kids na if they are not naughty then how can we call them as kids”.
Sujatha: “Kids huff..jiji..fed up with thier mischief..u know one thing the whole village came along with us to railway station for bidding bye to them?”.
Uttara: “wow chachi whole village love them so much..??”.
Sujatha: “Na re uttara.. They came there bz for at least one month they will get rid of these monsters.
Now they might have started to curse themselves for praying to god to bless me and ur chahu with a baby?”
“Mami…what I did…am the younger one “.Mitti made a pout face
“Mitti ki bachi, she is their leader…if u and ur cousins play some prank on others, if something happen… ohh God then what shall i tell ur mom and dad..
be a good girl here”.
Mitti:”Mami I can’t carry u like golu bhayaa…bz u r so fat”.
Sujatha: “what me ..i look fat?? “.Suji widened her mouth.
AP:”suju haha..leave it”,Then kittu start crying.
Everyone one looked at her.
Sanskar: “what happened kittu ..why r u crying..?”.
Kittu: “No one giving me a chance to speak??”. She is slurring .
AP:”Ohh mera bachha come here ..lets talk a lot..haa”.she kissed her cheek.
Kittu:”Woo I have equal rights to carry my mom bz we r twins na?”.
Sujatha placed her hand on head “yeh bhagvan”
Golu and kittu(Gopal and kritika) are twins of Ram prasad and sujatha.They r in 7 th class.Mitti is their cousin’s daughter.
Uttara: “Thank god u all r here lets make a blast from today onwards.. Uttara give them HiFi”.
Swara is standing there with a smile..enjoying their convo..still her intense gaze on sanskar..
Aankhon Ki Gustakhiyan Maaf Ho
Let the mistakes done by these eyes be forgiven
Ho… Aankhon Ki Gustakhiyan Maaf Ho
Let the mistakes done by these eyes be forgiven
Ek Tuk Tumhein Dekhti Hai
They look at Your for a moment
Jo Baat Kehna Chaahe Zubaan
What my mouth wants to say to You
Tumse Ye Woh Kehti Hai
They speak that to You.
Kittu:”Sanskar bhayya see what we have brought for u..”.
They handed him a huge box .He opened the box. It contained ripe mangoes
.”Bachho attack..”.Mangoes are his favourite.
They started eating mangoes and click a mango selfe.But swara’s concentration was full on sanskar rather than eating mangoes.
Uttara started to tease her.”Bhabhi mangoes r in ur hand not in Bhai’s face.” Just then everyone noticed her .She felt embarrassed.
Sanskar: “swara what happened don’t u like mangoes”. She fumbled ,doesn’t know what to say.
Uttara: “Bhai u r a tube light.. why u asking ,feed her na”.
He smiled and placed a piece of mango on her mouth.when he turned 3 small mouths were already opened.
He also fed them with mangoes.After finishing the mangoes they went back to thier rooms.
After taking bath Sanskar came back to his room,He found swara standing near the window in a mango yellow saree.”
He couldn’t take off his eyes from her.
“Saree ..? Shona r u planning to go outside”,
“No .. it was gifted by u,so i just tried wearing it”.
He was wearing a leaf green T-shirt.
“u r looking beautiful shona”.Saying this he moved closed to her.Their eyes met..
Kaajal Ka Ek Til Tumhare Labon Pe Laga Loon
Let me apply a small dot of kajal on Your lips
He continuously stared at her beautiful eyes and tugged her hair strand behind her ear.She lowered her head
Haan Chanda Aur Suraj Ki Nazron Se Tumko Bacha Loon
Let me protect You from the evil eye of the Moon and the Sun
Palkon Ki Chilman Mein Aao Main Tumko Chhupa Loon
He touched her chin with one hand raised slowly and softly touched her cheek .
She leaned forward to inhale his fragrance and closed her eyes.
A blow of mild wind touched her hair.Moon now hide his face on clouds to leave them alone.
stars r start blushing and glittered more and more to add glow on her face.
Let me hide You behind the curtains of these eyelashes
Khayaalon Ki Ye Shokhiyaan Maaf Ho
Let the sauciness (vividness) of these thoughts be forgiven
Har Dam Tumhein Sochti Hai
They think of You all the time
Jab Hosh Mein Hota Hai Jahaan Madhosh Ye Karti Hai
While the world around me is in their senses, it makes me intoxicated
Aankhon Ki Sharm-o-Haya Maaf Ho
Let the modesty and transgress done by these eyes be forgive
He carefully took a fallen eyelash from below the eyes and smiles victoriously “yes I got it,forward ur hand shona”.
But she is standing closed eyes.He shaked her shoulder “shona u r sleeping here in this state, come lay on beb”.
She suddenly came in to sense.same time they hear a bang on the door.
when he opened the door bachaa party entered the room with full force.
Mitti climbed on the bed and start to jump,and shouted I will sleep here.
Hearing this a thunder fall on her heart.
“Come sit Bhai we will talk late night and full masti” Kittu invited them.
Golu:”Hey will arrange a DJ party here”.
“Badmashoom u all here let them sleep”. Uttara came there by following them.
“But we r always used to sleep here na uttara Di”.
“Ha now swara bhabi also sleeping here..look she is tired. So no masti get up”
“Ha I will make her sleep I know many songs..Di come sit on my lap”. Mitti find a solution.
“Mitti ki bachi come here”. Uttara took her hand .
“No leave me ..leave my hand…” She started to scream. Uttara put her hand on her mouth but she bite
Uttara jumped with pain.Mitti start to run on the bed and uttara run behind her stumbled and fell on floor.But she didn’t open her eyes. Everyone one feared.. Called her name”uttara.. “.But she didn’t wake up.Her eyes are closed. Swara splashed water on her face.
“Miiti killed uttara Di..?” Golu said in fearful voice.Mitti’s face changed she scared start sobbing.
“I didn’t do anything ?”. Said in a pleading sound.
Sanskar: “shut up golu she didn’t do anything”.
Kittu:”I think she goes to bhagvanji’s lap like pappa ?”.
Mitti: “uttara Di..don’t go to bhagvanji’s home ..we will miss u..pls come back.I will give u golu bhayya’s chocolates from his pocket pakka..voo I already ate my chocolates na ?” . She again start crying.Then trio start weeping.
.suddenly uttara opened her eyes “na bachaa nothing happened to me I was just kidding ??”
sanskar give her a angry glare? .But Mitti didn’t stop crying.swara put her on shoulder pated her head.
“Mitti look at me..nothing happened to ur Di..see her”.
Uttara feels guilty on her prank.
Some how she managed her to make sleep and laid in bed.
Sanskar:”uttara , kittu, golu u all go ..she will sleep here”.They go back to their room.
Swara leaned near to her and Sanskar on other side.Mitti’s thumb is on her mouth while sleeping.
“Sanskar ..I really miss Bobby..”.
“Yes am too..we will call Bidya aunty tomorrow.” They fell on asleep.
After sometime swara wake up and look into Sanskar who is in deep sleep.she came near to him rubbed her hand on his hairs.Then she walk towards the balcony stand there by staring moon.She is disturbed.. What’s happening to me..why this moon and stars looking different .. I want to count all these stars why..? I don’t know.Till now this feeling is unknown to me.I know him from years do I feel anything like this before I don’t know,but now am carving for his touch and want his presence around me. Yes I always miss him when he was not with me. I can’t bear anyone getting close to him more than me, may be all this bz of my friendship..may be..hmm. But this time more than a friendship I have a feeling that he is only mine and i have full rights on him,as a wife..?.Now I got to knew why marriage is very special thing to everyone. She hold her mangalsuthra and kissed on it.Goes near to the dressing table and looked into the mirror. she touched her forehead and filled sindoor there with ecstasy a tear escaped from her eye corner.
She came near to bed miiti is now sleeping edge of the bed , she try to turn her but she is again rolled to other side then swara placed a pillow on there.she came to Sanskar side there is a little space for her.She remember the morning after their wedding and rubbed her fore head on him .He became reddish due to her sindoor….look more cute on that red mark.A curvey smile appeared on her face. someone said love makes a person mad..its true that’s y am doing such crazy things.
Its 5am her phone rang continuously.. She wakeup it was uttara..
“Uttara what happened why r u calling”
“Bhabhi pls come outside the room am here.”
*******************************Hi guy’s ..sorry for the late update due to some personal reasons I was bcy…
Anji finally I updated .Thanku my friends for reading Ff and my silent readers love u all
Sree harini..read ur comments dear, they r valuble for me…
I don’t know how to express my feelings ..after reading everyone Comments..sus,shan, dhara,navi nive,Falguni,Anji,pratheeksha, Neha,shagun,Anu, musku,Rosh,jasmine,kanak, priyanka,Natasha, likhitha,swasan,harini,ayesha,nikki meera…anyone left..?Thanku for the love and support
Vaishu and vaibhavi love u…joya, anjali ,vini, needhi, divya,Shradha,Vinitha, vaishu, mickey, Sree,Anu, Sujata..enjoyed those chats..??????…got emoji’s?.
Kakku I hope u got all the links..I replied u twice.
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182 Comments
nyc one…
thank u riya….
hi, I really loved todays eps. I was amused after reading the bacha party dialogue. simply loved this eps., always amazing, tnx. Waiting for next eps. 🙂
Thank u dr…for ur continous support…keep reading
awesome….hope swara proposes sanky soon
haha may be…she will propose…thank u dr….
Haha too good
sus…thank u dr…………..
Nice episode dr…
hai..sneha…thank u…
Wow! U described the baccha party so nicely. Specially that suju & baccha party talks. Haha 🙂 golu will carry her for 12 months…. lol….
Next part asap…..
And pls gv swasan romance pls
Romance…its a difficult task for me to implement…i will try…
u r commenting here for the first time na..thank u so much dr…keep reading
I simply opened the site n seeing this episode was like winning a lottery,now where to start ,so happy to see Uttara’s character getting so much of importance,kids,nothing to say,u have conveyed their nature,carrying mom inside basket,I was laughing ,u know why?marykku undoru kunjaadu movie,I watch it every time it comes on TV,Dileep’s character has told this ,no?remindede of that n all of those movie scenes came to mind,couldn’t resist laughing,then mango selfie wall paper n scene,nicely used in this episode, Sujatha character is so funny,I don’t watch real Swaragini nowadays but I am a big fan of Sonica who is playing Sujatha on screen…then I couldn’t check the previous episode,I am sure army would have had a nice time,tc…
ooh no i thought it will be a unique dialogue…actuall my cousin told this to his mum’ he will carry his mum in basket’
and i laughed alot hearing this…mango scenes happened in b/w me and my cousins
haaha it was full of fun…nature of the kids dialogues adapted from my cousins ,our army…Mitti
remind me mickey’s character,kittu vaishu…haha…last episode they
created so much of fun on chatting section lol..
Mitti mere jaisa h..ekdm innocent??????
And your ff is really good,writing also,very nice…keep going…before typing these I posted the first comment…
Vini dr when will you update???
?????????????????????????????????????????????…………………
Awesome epi……………aaj to Smileys ki barish huyi hai ha………..
Bachchaa party,mango scene, uttara’s prank,Swara’s emotions and behaviour, aankhon ki gustakhiyan maf ho……superb……..very nice………………..
Dekh k yeh najara,chhand bhi muskuraya hai……..
Sitaron se aasman ko tumhare liye hi sajaya hai…….
Jan le wajah hai bahot khasss,
Saari kaynat se jitkar,Ranjha tumhara,tumhare paaas aaya hai…………….
How r u now?????? And ur parents???????
actuall i dont know joya i was disturbed…like iwant to cry a lot
so everyone told me to divert ur mind….so start to reply ur comments
u know what joya…i feel better…its true
my Grandmaa was 86 year old and she was paralised hmm
tomorrow we have some rituals that should be performed after death
I wanna say that i m always wid u………. Just take care of yourself and ur parents also………………
Agar tum muskuraogi to wo jaha bhi hongi tumhari muskurahat dekhakar khush ho jayengi…………….
Take care……
Oh God such a cute episode??
Bacha party killed it totally????
I really love kids u know n enjoy reading such stuff?
N God Swaras becoming crazyyyy in ur words Intoxicated with love hub??
I m just waiting for her confession realisation toh hogaya
Poor sanky let him also have his share of happiness? atleast shonas love ?
N ahha sethuuu
Aakhonkii Gustakhiyaaa
Maaf hooi????
Ahem ahem
Today is my 1st annual lab exams peeps wish me luck?
I oy get to see this site either morning or night..
Miss u alll a looottttt??
All the best shradha dr.for ur lab exam…….
hey joya ne kaha he ki thum sankar ke liyee fast rehthee hum,,,…haha lol
Haha lol joya will always be joya…..
Kya fast yr koi mere liye rakhlo
Taki mere exams ache se hojaye…
You know thses ffs are such a mind refreshers sethooo tqsm for writing this??
N since I cudnt catch up with u all recently so probably I missed the news just saw joyas n ur chat
U had a sad demise in ur family?ur grandma?
That’s really sad…
May her soul rest in peace….
Take care of itself sethoothy tough times test u…. But she’ll be der in ur heart n in stars blessing u ?
Take care of ur parents too
Sharddha
Joya willl alsways be joya haaaaaaaaaaaaaa??
How r u both??????
Heyyyyyy Joyaaaaa……
I.miss u all really???
Kaise hu?
Matt puch yaar…..
Sem end hai na toh tboda exam pressure hai….
Btw joya ur 3rd yr or fianl yr???!
N network engg yani tumhe bhi sare programming languages honge na subs me???
Khair chodo
Aaj me dominos gayi thiii yehhhh…..
Labs khatam hone ke khushi me lol???
Exam khatam hone ke khushi me pata nahi kya karungi????
Tu apna bata jooooooo???
Di its awesome..loved Bachcha party’s dialogues.. sujju’s convo WD them..And mango scene.. ?? love u di..BTW di When will Vini di upload her next chap?????? plz post next part ASAP..
And swara’s emotions and uttra’s character also…I think in ur ff for 1st time Uttara is getting this much importance..☺???
in real serial i like suju’s character she is very funny…………….
keep reading dr,…thanku for the support….love u too………….
Loved it 🙂
thank u dhara……………
You forgot me to mention???? 👿 Not fair!!! I won’t talk wid uh Seeethoty!! ❗
Well the writer of this ff,its damn awesome! I was waiting for it. I loved Uttu today in this episode! Great yaar! The story plot is so ggoooddd!!! I cant even describe in words! God knows how u write so brilliant story!
Teach me something!!
oh…OMG jyoti…u r always here dr..thats y didnt mentioned u in…haha
sorry i missed ur name.thanku for the support
waiting for ur spring…season..loved ur fiction…have no words to praise ur writting skills
its different….love u dr…………..
am not dr… i think i must learn from u …..
Hi di ….how r u ??r u ok now??ur parents??…..today’s epi is awesome ….i am loving swara …..vo din ba din apni pyaar mai dhubh rahi hai ,seriously it is really too good nd bachcha party !!awwwee….they ruled d epi ..nd bichari suju……i totally enjoyed d epi a lot…now a days aapka sense of humer bahut bad gaya hai ….kya baath hai hamara asar hai ya kisi aur ka ya aaphi ka jo abhi abhi bahar aa raha hai??……..nd love u too di frm both of us…..
Vinitha di sabhko vabhavi ki frnds list mai add karungi tikh hai…..
vaishu kutty…am oky.dr…parents are fine now….
thum logom ka asar thoo hey…everyone called me as a fun loving person…actually i dont know is it true or not…
Ha ha ha… ???? these kids are too naughty… I cant control my laughter… golu kittu mitti chanceless?? poor sujju… the whole village comes to send off them… lol… ?? you remind me one tamil vijay movie…aww… mango party… you know sunday I did water melon party with my nephews and niece… not party but fight ?? also you can say we celebrate holi using water melon… ? ? but finally gt scolded by elders ? ? but who will mind all this… ha ha ha 😀 😀 yup… finally swara started to realise her love… Superb epi…. 🙂 🙂 hmm… U ended previous epi with suspense… whom sanky spying…??? and Rags blushes when sanskar admire her.. did you planned something ? ?
Finally they posted my cmnt… yesterday when i try to post cmnt in ur prev page.. i gt word press error-
Finally they posted my cmnt… yesterday when i try to post cmnt in ur prev page.. i gt word press error- “u r pstng cmnt too quickly pls slow down” .. lol.. lazy cat like me how can post cmnt too quickly… moreover that was my first cmnt yesterday… I tried more than 20 tym… but all the tym i gt same error… I gt frustrated and went back without cmntng… 🙁 🙁 sorry..!!!
mee tooooo
Same problem!! Got so pissed off…
Hey anjali, I saw ur reply in ur page bcz of this prob i didnt post any cmnt… you looking cute yaar…
ofc I’m ur ka so return my sorry 😉 😉 aww… you’re chiti for 3 kids thats cool… but I’m fr 6 kids and aunt for 2 kids… 🙂 🙂 Surely will give ur hugs and kisses to them… but its difficult to give elder one bcz yesterday i didnt take him out… so sir kovama irukkaru… 😀 😀 🙂 well you are in joint family.. same pinch me too… but we are living in same house… I always feel blessed to being with my families… all are too caring 🙂 🙂 and loves us lot… 🙂
LOL!! So cutee….
Buy an ice cream or a chocolate or a balloon!!!!
MY 6 year old bro loves these stuff!!!
Thnxxx!!!!
UR family sounds sooo nice!!!! So happy for you!! <3 <3
Oh don’t say sorry nive…this happened with me many times Dr…
Wow u r from joint family thatz too cool..yaar..u r very lucky…I can imagine the situation kids around u…wow
if i bought all those stuffs.. when I reach home he get only empty packets… bcoz I too love all these… lol… ha ha ha… already gave his fav choco to him… and promised him to take out at wk end… now he is ok… 🙂 🙂
nive….miss u lot….what u doing dr…working?
Actually these dialogues are adapted from my cousins convo…
same pitch we had a mango party before 2 week…haha full of masti
ys sanky spying something it will reveal soon….Rag and san..dont know what will happened next…haha
Yeah dr… I’m working… I too missed u… waiting for ur nxt epi…
Ur cousin is vijay fan… thats grt… my elder sis also… she is mad on vijay… she is having all the sorts of vijay collection… we always used to tease vijay to irritate her… thats a kind of enjoyment… ha ha ha… my sis husband was so much of jealous on vijay… Sometimes he feel why dont he born as vijay… lol… ha ha ha…???
and my 4th sis surya fan…
ha ha ha… you’re imagining with kids… uk sometimes I will bcm lyk sujju f ur ff bcoz of them… ???
My cousin is vijay fan..they have vijay fan association here….in fb, watsapp his profile PIC is vijay Everytime his dialogue etc….and bt love Surya..haha
nice. loved bpg and uttara.. and swara is falling in love with him,,,
thank u anu….
Awww…… so funny and cutee….,
LOVE THOSE BACHAS!!!!
Awesome Sethoo di!!!!
Hiii Sethoo di, Shraddha, Joya, Vaishuuu, vinita, vini di, rups, Sree and anu!! (as and when they come) 😀 😀
hey…anjali how u dr..? profile pic is so cute…..
thank u dr……………….
So finally it’s here I was jumping after finding it… God bacha party is so good full dramebaaz……so swara finally accepted feelings for sanskar she is craving for his touch n sanskar became dumb… Being practical but not understanding what his wife is doing she is actually checking him out?? loved the epi on whole
haha actually i have the same doubt why he become so dumb…haha
thank u neha…..for ur support and encouragement….
Sethuuuuuuuuuu di!!!!!!!!!!! It is so nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
How are you????
How are your parents???????
I was feeling so hungry when I read about the mangoes!!
hai vinitha…they r fine dr…
how u dr….?
The bacha party is so niceeee.
Hi everyone !!!
Vini di how are you???
Awesome as always but please try to update regularly bcoz I’m a raglak fan and this is the one and only ff I read on swasan as ur an amazing writer… Thanks for the update
OMg u r a raglak fan…now i start to like their pairing…they have awsome chemistry after marriage
ragini is my fav….she is so cute and acting is mindblowing…now raglak become adorable couple
Finally u r back.. missed u n ur ff so much sethooty n
i m late 😉 hehehehe..
actually now days i was little busy.. bcs now i have job with Puppet show..
but to days episode chiller party rocked it n swara in previous episode oh god totally like filmy heroin but it’s looking nice to imagine the situation.. n to day poor swasan 🙁 kids ban gaye kabab me haddi.. n swara’s midnight activity she going crazy day by day LOL.. hope she soon realize her love for sanskar.. 🙂
Falguni miss u lot Dr….puppet show…means ‘meine payal he chamkayi…’ Song came into my mind…Falguni Patak..her albums are my fav …
Swara she is crazy..haha…actually one of my friend , a book worm she is not interested in love and all..one day she fell in love..at that time her behaviour is like that..flying in air..
I m Gujarati dear.. n when i saw interview of Helly n Varun n know that they r also gujarati n from Ahemdabad i m on cloud 9.. so i like Falguni pathak’s Garba song more then Album songs.. don’t mind bcs we r more interested in Garba rather then any Dance.. i think ku6 zyada ho gaya..?
N yes puppet show is my Hobby n it’s for kids n in that moral stories for children n their parents also anybody can easily understand wt we want to say from d puppet show n entertainment also involved so basically it’s fun to do that..
n frankly speaking i never understand this feeling called “LOVE”.. we r single is better then mingle 😉
Garba dance ..that performed in navaratri rite..?
Wow I want to see ur puppet show…great Dr…
Actually wen I was in college.. I always think that why this 3 letter matters everyone…. And am not aware of this feeling..at that time…LOVE we could nt define this feeling until it catch ur soul and mind…
Famous quote of a writer ..later it turn to be unsuccessful but u must fall in love atleast once in a life time..
Hey di just awesome till now I was used to comment sometimes but now ill be regular awesome di love u pls be regular with ur uploads love u
Thanku divya…for the support…
I am perfectly alright!!!!!!!!!!
There is a mango tree in the backyard of the house and now the first job which i do every morning is to stare at the mangoes which have not turned ripe yet. I am becoming a total bhukkad day by day because of mangoes!!!!!!1!
Bhukkad..Vinitha..ahem ahem…
Where is the next part of ur story…. Didn’t update?
Sethu di I finished my ff. Chapter eight was the last one.
Sethu di!!
Aakhon Ki gustakhiyan ………AHEM AHEM ???????
Haha??????
But u r still bhukhad ….lol..
Bukhad Vinitha…ur nick name …haha..
K I will read 8 th epi missed it..
Joya di woh lines kya apane likha hai???????????
Aaj se aap meri shayari didi ho
I knw a girl and whenever I see her I always remember you because her name is SHAYARI!!!!!
Ha yr humne hi likhi hai……
Tumne hi to kaha tha na tum humri shayari ko miss kar rahi ho isliye likhi………
Shayari didi……….nice
Tumhe pasand nahi aayi??????????????????????????
Joya loved ur lines..aap tho shayarii queen hai…
Joya di!!!!!! Aapne aisa kaise socha ki mujhko aapka shayari acha nehi lagega???????
Kya aisa kabhi ho sakta hai ki vinita ko aapki shayari acha nehi lagegi??????
Apka shayari BEST hai!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Rona band kar dijiye warna meri room mai flood aa jayenga because even I will start to cry. then all the neighbours will start to complain ki unki locality mai flood kyu aya!!
Yeah!nice..
Mickey…Dr how u..?
I m fine di…bas exam sal rhe h..n wht about u?
Mickey…Dr how u..?.Thank u shradha Vinitha joya..vaishu ..for ur every words ..am fine…
Arey seetu di its true di aap really ek fun loving person ho……..
Nd mai kittu jaisi hu awwwwww
Shraddha di golu jaisi hai ,hai na??
Shraddha di anjali ki ff mai ,maine aapkho nick name rakha hai aapne nahi dekha kya??
Joya di aapne shayari likhi ho aur hume pasand na aaye aisa kabhi hosaktha hai kya…nahi na
Shradha golu jaisee hai…haha..what’s her nick name ..?shyari queen joya..
Hi malar how r u dr actually I m busy with festival..hope ur well dr..actually today part was very nice..do u know in my house my cousin children has come they r so naughty dr..more than dis children. When dey come to my home means v can’t study only if I close door also they will shout and they will run and push d door..more than 15 children dr they will play under d bed some children play with TV some with computer then some fan..they all destroy it they r more naughty..more than tat do u know one time they call to ambulance…pls come uncle my mother is in emergency..and later they call to 100 police control room..then police control phone back to Thier house told dont give mobile to children..still more to say dr if u want to know pls ask me if will tell in detail.. at present 5 children in my home bec now my bhai and bhabhi had open new shop they make them busy in tat..yesterday they came to home and they went due to tat children my pug didn’t sleep only they made my pug(milly) eyes with chilly powder later we wash her face..its very difficult to take care of tat children and my pug also she is very naughty she always bite my hand leg and she tore my dress also..I. m became mad so difficult to handle her..really now a days children r so scary…..
Haha divya…ur naughty cousins..am.laughing here like hell…plz plz tell me want to know more ….haha???????????? lol
Hi friends hope u all r well..miss u so much come to my village festival…
Fine Dr…festival in ur village..do where is our treat…?
U liked the name joya di?
Toh ajse aapka naam Sheetal se shayari Ho gaya?????