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I THOT THAT NO ONE LIKES MY THIS FF.. THANKS A LOT BINDU… U MADE ME CRY TODAY…. PLZZ KEEP COMMENTING GUYS…
actually my college started and am in inter 1st year… SI lots if pressure.. That’s d reason am not able to upload regulary… But I promise… When ever I get time…ill post… Thanks for commenting on both of my ff…
So lets directly go to the topic…
Episode 4—
The episode starts with the four of them reaching the hotel…
By that time nandini fell asleep on maniks shoulder…
Dhruvbir get out when they turn to find manan, they don’t find them…
They check in the car, they see nandini on maniks shoulder and manik almost asleep..
They knock the window door manik wakes up and eyes nandu,a curve appeared on his face…
Again dhruv knocks on the window..
Manik puts finger on his lip and signs shhh to be quite cuz Nandini is sleeping…
He slowly opens the door and asks cabir to come from that side..
Cabir comes… Manik asks cabir to hold nandus head from falling and cabir does so.. Manik comes to the other side and carries nandini in his arms to the room.. Dhruvbir share dhruvs room…
Here manik makes nandini lay down on bed and moves back slowly but stops as nandini holds him..
Nandini- thank u manik..?
Man- acha.. So all dis was drama?
Nan- hmm..
Man- smirks- soo.. ND comes closer
Nan-wha…what..so…sooo
Man- so where is my reward for carrying you till d room..
Nan-breathing fastly- what…. Re..reward u…want????
Manik just keeps coming close.. He puts his hand around her waist slowly.. Nandini closes her eyes and parts her lips cuz she understood what manik wanted…
Manik too closed his eyes and parted his lips… Both were just 0.0001cm away when a voice said- wow how romantic…
They set apart and looked with embarrassment at the door and found dhruvbir standing with their luggage…
Dhr- yaar cabir!! Y did u interrupt..v know how talented manik is.. So we could have even checked out his talent…
Amd both giggled while mama looked at each other and nandini fumed and ran into washroom….
Man- WTH guys… What r u doing in our room..
Cab- Vo na manik.. Actually there’s a water leakage in our room so we don’t have any other place to sleep.. So..
Man- so what?
Dhr- so we went and asked in reception about extra room.. But all rooms are full so..
Man- so what guys…
Cab- so what? Dhruv, dost ab dost na raha( frnd is no longer a frnd) [acting]
Man- shut up cabir.. I’ll just check in the reception and come…
He went out and dhruvbir hifi each other and laugh…
***FLASHBACK***
Dhrubir in dhruvs room…
Cab- yaar dhruv..its been a long time since we have troubled someone with our pranks..
Dhr- ha cabir..
Cab- so shall v do a prank now?
Dhr- on whom?
Cab- on who else? Manan yaar..
Dhr- but how??
Cab- lets drench this room with water…
Amd winks..
Both smile…
They go down to reception and sbribe him and told him to say there aren’t any vacant rooms if manik comes and asks…
***FLASHBACK ENDS***
As a result, manik didn’t find any vacant room and goes to his room… He saw dhruvbir sleeping on bed like they have never slept before by occupying the whole bed… Nandini was sitting on the couch with her chin in her hands like a cup in a saucer…
He understood and explained everything to nandini.. She nodes and asked where should we sleep now?
Manik nods negatively saying donno.. Both sit on couch… After sum time manik lays of nandinis lap..
She runs her fingers through his hair and kisses his forehead… He soon drips into sleep… She admires him… She too sleeps..
Next day morning, she wakes up due to sleep and then first sees maniks faces which was more cuter than a 1year baby while sleeping…. Suddenly manik wakes up due to a water which fell on his face… He looks up and finds nandu smiling with tears..
He wakes up with a jerk and asks..
Man- nandini are u ok… Y r u crying?? All ok??
Nan- ha manik am all fyn.. Just thot of d days wen u were away from me.. All those 4 month were like 4 centuries for me….
I felt like killing myself…. But I knew ki u wer alive a d will still come me.. Cuz manik manik can never leave his nandini… And smiles..
They hug tightly and nandini keeps sobbing…
Manik keeps rubbing her back to console her.. After a while she stopped sobbing.. Manik wanted to break the hug but nandini pulled him back so he too stayed like that…
Suddenly they heard cabir sayin- kya yaar subah subah shuru ho jaate hai ye dono… (these two na…. They even start at this hour in the morning)
They then break the hug.. As nandini was facing them they could see nandini wiping her tears which were still flowing…
She excuses herself and goes to washroom..
Dhruv- manik kya Hua”? Y was she crying?
Manik explains them…
Cabir- but u r right in front of her alrite den what is d need to cry??
Manik- dats wat yaar!!
Dhruv- zaroorat hai buddy.. Zaroorat hai..(its needed buddy its needed)
Manbir- what?!
Dhruv- pata hai manik.. When v got to know ki u and cabir in that accident… After v all presumed your death na.
v all cried each and every day but it was nandini who didnt even cry.. Even if she would shed tears for a second she would wipe them off saying my manik will come and he does not like me.crying.. And to be honest.. Chachi also said that she did not cry at all and made herself busy with all unwanted stuff… Infact even one day she fainted… When v asked the doctor she said ki it was depression and stress that she burried deep in herself.. In her heart…the only remedy to bring her out was she to get all her depression and worries out by crying and sharing with someone… Th..
Suddenly all heard a thud from washroom….
All rush to the washroom…
All knock the door but no response..
Manik – nandini open d door… Knock knock…. Open the door damnit..
Dhrubir- nandini open the door… Yaar.. If its any prank then just stop it ok.. Its enough…. Open the door..
Cabir- damn… Manik v gotta break it…
he nods a all 3 in a go kick the door… It opens… Dhruv- manik u go inside and c.. V vil.wait here…
He rushes inside.. What he saw madi him teary eyed…
He saw his nandu lying on the floor lifeless without any motion in front of which he could ha e accepted death…
He ran to her.. Put her head on his lap and and started crying- nandini wake up… Wake ul damnit… C if u wont wake up na.. I swear ill go aww from u…plzz wake up nandini… Plzz… N he broke down…
Dhruv.. Cabir….
Both came in…
Man- plz u both start the car.. Gotta take her to hospital…
They go in car to the hospital… The doctor checks her and says- umm…may I knw who u r??
Man- crying- hw does it even matter damn it.. Just tell hw she is!!
Cab- calm down manik… Calm down.. Dr v r her friends and he is her fiancĂ©…so u can tell us..
Dr- hmm… I guess she has fainted before too.. I mean like this suddenly?
Dhr- s doctor..
Dr- wt was d reason?
Dhrv actually that time Dr said due to suppressed depression and unbearable yet controlled sorrow….
Dr- this the reason this time too…
Cab- hw can she be fine?
Dr- she has to open up… And u Mr.?
Cab- manik.. He’s manik
Dr- okay.. So u being her fiance manik… Try getting her worries out n nly this can help her be normal.. Excuse me…
He left
Dhruv- ha manik Dr is rite.. U r only one who can make nandini become normal..
Cab- ya manik… If anyone can make her happy its u… If anyone can make her angry is u… If anyone can make her calm..its u..if anyone can make her cry its u…. Manik…its u manik..u…. Go and get our old nandu back…
Manuvbir hugged and consoled manik who was crying more miserably than a child…..
At evening nandu was discharged… All reached the room…
Manik- guys ill be back in sumtym…
Nan- kaha manik?
Manik signs dhruvbir….
Dhruv- Jane do na nandini… Waise bhi v haven’t spent time together since such a long time.. U go manik.. V r here…
Cab- ha ha.. U go… V r here.. Waise nandini….
And they sit for a chat…
Manik goes out.
Nan- hahaha…dat was a good one cabir…
Dhruv- seriously yaar u and ur pjs.. But this was good….
Cab- in the whole world nandini, what do u love d most… B honest… ND ha plz don say manik…
nan- no I wont say manik…
Dhruv-what…
Nan- I mean… I love chachis head massage… To b specific chachi does awsum tel malish u knw…
Cabir suddenly becomes num- ha.. Tel malish…. He says it with tears… And also a tear roll down his cheek..
Nan- cabir y r u crying?? I never saw u crying? Wat happened!!
Dhr- cabir kya Hua..all okay?!!!
Manik also enters…
Man- cabir? U okay..
Cab- wiping the tear away- kuch nai yaar am.all.okay… I just remember how madhubhala used to torture me to do her tel malish… Lol… In the mid night she used to wake me up a d torture me….. ND I could even reject her seeing her puppy face…
Nan- u miss her a lot na cabir…
Cab- miss kaise nai karu… She and her tortures….In such a less time she became an indispensable part of my life… And when she was in her 4th month na den…wait wait.. Now toh she must b having a baby.. Right…
Dhruni nod..
Cabir-with tears rolling down- boy or girl.. And what is the baby’s name? Do u have the pic… I mean the baby must be same like navya.. Irritating but cute… Naughty but loveable… Say na… Omg now to madhubala would have become a big fat hen… Haha.. I knw knw… She must have even started dieting by now… My god…
Cabir was too emotional…. Tears were not just stopping from his eyes….
Man- its a boy and his name is Abheer..
Dhr- u know what she named him after you…cabeer’s abeer.. This what she always says..
Nan- see his pic..
He sees a pic of navya a d abeer at the hospital after delivery….
He smiles with tears….
Man- madhubala ke saath reh kar na Tu na itna melodramatic hogaya hai na!!! Uff.. Donno who has to bear u for all her life..
Nan- On a serious note…The girl who wud luv you na… She wud be very lucky…
Dhr- pata hai cabir..wen v presumed your death na.. Then no one imagined that navya could ever become so weak(by heart)..me alya and mukti would share sorrow with each other but navya!! She had no one… She like a mad would always say about you to abeer who was not even born at that time…. She never said but v all saw her swollen eyes everyday in the morning…. Mukti once even caught her talking to some sponge bob ka toy about you…and…
Cab- wat she still has that? I thot ki she threw it some where… Anyways.. U say aur what pagalpanti she did??
Dhr- aur to aur usko na hospital me bhi ek baar admit karaya due to over stress and doctors said ki it was really unsure if abeer could ever be born…. But all d time she said ki she cant afford to loose you again… Yes cabir.. She sees you in abeer…
She didn’t even talk to nandini for 2 whole months cuz nandini talked about adoption and she kept saying the same… I cant afford to loose cabir again…. Aur….
And he continued..
All d while cabir kept shedding tears… He was oblivious of the newly blossoming feeling…
The screen freezes on cabirs face…
PRECAP- execution of maniks plan… Return to India…
Waoahhhhhh so long one guys…
So I expect the comments also to be more….
Luv u guys…
Take care?
15 Comments
The episode is fantastic and plsssssssssss give regular updates yaaar
firstly thank u for mentioning my name and sry for making u cry.coming to ur ff thank u for long and sweet update. take ur own time but update longer one like today, but not much time please. ur both ff are good.try to update soon waiting for ur next update.
What about me
Of course, why wouldn’t v comment
As usual loved ur ff ???????
where did manik go. what is he planning for nandini?? and this was too emotional remembering flashback. nice one .
awsome…. update next part soon
Interesting
Lara … U seriously made me cry today.. I could see all the scenes flashing before my eyes… Lovely update..
Keep going
Keep smiling
Very emotional epi.. I almost cried reading this… Very good awsome yaar… I miss kyy too much… If you can’t update regularly then update in weekends and please make it long… Love you lara very much…
And yah v love your ff… Very much…
Awesome episode dear
plz try to update the next update asap
i know that u said ur busy but please try to update it soon please waiting for ur next update.
Awesome episode. ….very interesting. ..love you loads
update ur next parts of both ff
please waiting.
please please update ur both ffs please try to update it.