Hi friends this is my first ff ever so help me by guiding me so here we go and guyzs this is just an intro and if you like it a want me to continue soo do comment it will seriosly encourage me this is going to be unique story and iam going to add twist and turn too . And it will be very interesting and guyzs tell me whether i should add radha rani or not . Vicky and elena will be good together or not? Guyzs please do support me plssss
sona- hi
dev- hi
sona- how’s life dev?( teared eye)
dev- good.
dev- after a long time miss bose
sona- yup after a really long time
suddenly a voice
elena- sona …. Come see who is here
sona- yaa comming … 2min
elena- no…… Come now
dev- go miss bose
sona- yes
sona went down and…
guyzs this is just a glimpse ( intro) my story hope you like it . And please doo comment
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Plzz don’t tell me dat Ishwari has already become a hurdle in Devakshi’s love life.
Well that’s a suspense dear and thankyou for reading
Wow very nice intro. Can’t wait to read its more episode.
Update quickly?
Thanks will try to post soon
add radha rani but male her character so weak n athrill intro. luv to read ur nxt epi. post it asap
Thanks butbaby doll Radha rani in male avatar ?
PLEASE WRITE ASAP … iTS INTERESTING …. DON’T ADD RADHA RANI N ELENA N VICKY PAIRING IS A YUP
Ok fine bhabya i will try and thanks for the idea and thankyou for reading.?
Its fine with radha rani if she can bring in humour and Vicky and Elena is good
N I didn’t understand y they r so away from each other plz specify
Something new, don’t make Elena and vicky together because theirs no comparison between them ,also Vicky is so cheap type and that Elena just fabulous and its OK if u add radharani for comedy because in end scene hamesa uska he hota hai