Hey guys …thanks for the support u have given me in the previous episode ….I have replied to all ur comments ….
And about swasan …guys this is currently an hate story track …so I will have to show some Swara suffering and some sanskar cruel type too ..
But don’t worry soon sanskar will realize the actual matter ….(suspense)
So here is the story ,
@night….
SANSKAR POV ,
hmm …..my head is paining like hell …..ahhhh ….its spinning …..I woke up and sat leaning to my pillow ……wait a sec , how did I land up in bed ….
I was drinking wine in the hall ….after that …..I don’t remember anything ….god what happened ….
I took my phone to check the time and I was surprised as it is 7 pm …….how did I sleep for so long ..sleeping is never a habit of mine …
I saw the drawer side …there was a lime juice ……yep my head is spinning and the tablet is next to lime juice ….but who did it …..
I want the answer ….who did ….it …!
Wait !
God I am married …and Swara …..where is she …..? …..I started to search the bathroom , the vanity room …I couldn’t find her ….
Oh god ….what am I doing …..
I came out of the room and was shocked seeing a pool of blood all over the corridor …….
Oh god …did I do any mistake …..did I mur……..no nothing ….., while going through stairs ….there were blood all over ….
I was worried , shocked ……I rushed into kitchen ….I couldn’t see anyone ….
Then I went into halll ……and I was shocked seeing Swara …my tears started to flow
She was moping the area where ever the blood spilled …..I was noticed all over her body and I dought her right leg …
The palm of the right leg was tied with a cloth …..and the blood was non stop so …the white cloth became red in color …..
I saw her face pale and dull with tears ,,……..she was cleaning …….
I couldn’t control myself ………..and rushed and hugged her tightly ……..
SANSKAR POV ENDS
Swara was startled seeing sanskar sudden hug ….
Sanskar throws the mop and picks her in his hands ….in a bridal attire …..
He goes up to his room in stairs …..Swara numb all the way …..don’t know how to react …when she knows that her husband is not hers …..but someone else …
Sanskar was very worried …we can see it in his eyes and face ……
Sanskar places Swara on the bed …..and takes the first aid box
Sanskar slowly removes the cloth …..Swara hissess with pain …
Sanskar (tears) : sorry ..
Swara was shocked seeing sanskar teary eyed .
Sanskar slowly removed it and starts to apply dettol ..
SWARA POV ,
I wish I could shout …..but I couldn’t …its paining like hell …but it is healing seeing the tears of sanskar …I don’t know y
I am loving him this much …..whenever he is near me ….I don’t feel to loose him …..but I am late already he belongs to someone ….sorry my own bhabhi ….
I couldn’t control my self whenever the fact comes ….that sanskar is not swara’s …its breaking my heart into pieces ….
This is not the first time …..
Sanskar breaks it whenever he feels like …I guess ….but now he is near me sitting opposite to me …..but I don’t have the right to touch him or call him my husband …..as he is not mine …..
Y god …….y u want ur child to suffer this much …….one side the one whom I loved from my childhoon , the one who was more than my father …
Betrayed me …..u broke me ….now whom I loved the most more than my father …..whom I carved for most of the time ………he betrayed me
U broke me ……u only tell me what else can a girl suffers more than this ………
Is there a end for this ……
SWARA POV ENDS .
sanskar perfectly or the first aid …
Swara was staring him only ….all the time
Sanskar turning the other side …now Swara can see his back …
Sanskar ; I can’t face u ….as I know this happened because …..but I don’t remember what happened …or what ever I spoke ….
I can just say a sorry …..as I don’t even have the right to face u now …..forgiving me or not is ur decision …..I can’t do anything …but all I can say is whatever I said in the drunken motion are not serious …I don’t what I said but still if u said anything plz don’t take it serious …..
Swara : in that case ….u didn’t love bhabhi ….
Sanskar was shocked ….
Sanskar turns back again ..now swasan or face to face ….
Sanskar : what …..which ……bhabhi …..
Swara : sanskar don’t try to be smart ….I know u love ………r.a.g.I.n.I.bhabhi …(she has tears)
She avoids eye contact and turns her face other side ….
Sanskar was shocked as she came to know …
Sanskar : I …..I ….
Swara (tears) : its OK sanskar …..I know love doesn’t need rights …anyone can love in this world ……I am not angry or sad ….I am just saying that a person who doesn’t know to express his/her love in the correct time is regarded as coward ….sacrificing his/her life for some third person is a useless thing ……and that case I think it suits u sanskar ….but now everything is beyond ur hands ….it’s better u divorce me ……as ……..u ….I mean …….I can’t live with a person who doesn’t belong to me ……..
Sanskar was double shocked …
“I CANT LIVE WITH A PERSON WHO DOESNT BELONG TO ME ” was continuously echoing in his ears ……
Swara : divorce is better than being in a fake relations ….sanskar I just want to say one thing ….don’t spoil ur life for an third person ..as its …..
I know …..because I felt it ….and I don’t want u to go under the circumstances ….believe me or not that’s the truth ….
Sanskar doesn’t gets words to speak
The door bell rings ….
Sanskar goes down to open ….
Sanskar opens the door and was shocked seeing Laksh and ragini …..
Sanskar : oh hey bro and ragini plz come in ….
They both comes in ..
@hall
Ragini : oh oh devarji enjoying haan ..
Sanskar gives a fake smile..
Laksh : ragini y r u teasing him yaar ….
Sanskar blushes a bit ..
Sanskar : OK what would u like to have ….
Laksh : array sanskar no formalities …as I came to give Swara phone as she left it in home
Sanskar : oh ….u give me
Ragini : where is Swara ….
Sanskar : she ……she ……is sleeping ……
Laksh : ya ya …she must be tired ….as last night she would have been not slept …
Ragini laughs ….
Sanskar in mind : I am sorry Laksh ….but what u r saying is totally opposite .
Sanskar : array u both stop teasing me …yaar …
Ragini : OK OK devar ji ….here Swara phone
She gives him ….and sanskar takes it …
Laksh : I don’t want to disturb her ….let her sleep …..we will meet her next time …
Bro , bahbhi a voice comes from stairs ….
Trio turn to see its Swara ….
Swara was coming slowly ….
Swara was wearing Saree to that they cannot see her leg injury
Ragini gets up and hugs her …
Swara : bhabhi …when did u both come …
Laksh : just now dear ….he said u were sleeping …
Swara (fake smile) : hmm ya ….sanskar is not letting me to do a single work …always telling me to rest ….that’s y …
Sanskar was surprised and shocked …
Ragini : Laksh learn from ur brother ….
Laksh : what can I do ….he loves her so much that’s y
Swara gets tears …
Swara : sanskar die u give them anything …
Sanskar : no actually they said no need …
Swara : what yaar …if they say u will leave haan …
Laksh : no Swara …..we don’t need anything …
Swara : come on bro ..u came first time na …u wait …I will bring coffee ….
Saying Swara goes to kitchen slowly …..as she cannot walk ….but hides her pain and walks …
Sanskar : I will be back …
Sanskar too goes following Swara ..
Ragini : see Laksh ….sanskar cannot even stay one minute without Swara …
Laksh : Swara is very lucky……..
@kitchen ..
Swara was washing the cups …
Sanskar : what was the need to come down …
Swara : they are my family ..and it is my responsibility ….
Sanskar : y r u acting ….tell them right ……I don’t want u to do fake acting
Swara : sanskar ….sanskar ….already my family is suffering a lot ……I can add more fuel to the fire …..u go and sit in hall ……because u have business there not here …….go sit with whom u belong ……I know u don’t belong to me …at least
Sanskar : Swara ….(loudly)
Swara : what I am saying the fact ….go enjoy ….
Sanskar goes towards her and pulls her closer ….there is an inch gap between them ….
Both look into each other eyes ……
Sanskar : why are u talking like this …..
Swara : I only like to talk the truth sanskar ,…..,…., I can’t accept that u don’t belong to me …because I think u as me ……that’s the mistake I did ..and I am still doing it ….l can’t share my husband ,…….not only me …but no one will ..,
Both share a long eye lock (eyes speaks more than mouth)
Ragini come ..
Ragini : ahem …ahem ……ahem ….
Both break the eyelock …
Swara goes near stove and sanskar sits on the counter ..,
Ragini : both of u can’t live without each other haan …
Swara avoiding eye contact
Swara : no bhabhi …..actually he was scolding me for working in kitchen …so
Ragini : if this is the scolding then ….Swara enjoy ,…
Swara gives a fake smile but was crying ‘,,
Ragini : I never thought my devar is so romantic …unlike his brother ,…
Sanskar gives a fake smile ….
Swara : OK the coffee is ready ….
@hall ..
They all drink coffee and chit chat for sometime ….
Laksh : OK we need to leave …as its already late now …
Ragini : hmm ya ..tomorrow there is check up …
Swara looks at sanskar …
Laksh notices this ……he thinks in another way ..
Laksh : don’t worry Swara …soon even u will go for check up …
Raglak laughs …
Swara blushes a bit ….
Sanskar : u guys again started haan .
Swara : bhabhi if u don’t mind …can I come with u to check up as I am scared if some one does something
Swara was looking at sanskar …..
Sanskar feels guilty but hides it …
Raglak were confused
Laksh : OK then u go with her ….I will go office as I have a important meeting also
Ragini : OK then …u come we both will go
Swara smiles…
Laksh : OK its late bye
Ragini : bye …
Swasan wave bye ….
And raglak leaves ……
Sanskar locks the door ……
Sanskar : who gave u the right to go ,..,,
Swara : I don’t need anyone’s right ….as its my life my decision not like others who sacrifice for others ….
Saying this Swara leaves ……
Sanskar looks on …….
Sanskar was about to call Swara and give the phone …
But when the screen appears sanskar was surprised ….seeing his photo …..
Sanskar : did I really spoil my life !
NO PRECAP
so guys …..I am done with the chapter ….I guess its enough for today ……hope u all like it an plz comment ….
Hope u all will like hate story track …..
Shoot ur comments ……
If u have any doubt ……ask me through ur comments ….I am always there ……
With love ,
Dolly
52 Comments
Yaa its amazing…. Superb Bt now Plzz don’t ragsan…… Plzz update next part soon….
Thanks pia@ …..now only sanskar is realising let us give him time dear ….
awesome
Thanks anu
Hey this is the first time I am reading ur ff. Can u pls give me little summary .so I could cope with ur story. Nice job very well written.
Oh sure vb ….I will give summary of this …don’t worry …and plz keep reading
.thanks for the comment
Nice episode..
Thanks mariya
amazing
Thanks rosey
I am really very happy that sanskar is changing …but keep swara a bit strong ….n yr koi Lao na swara k liye taki sanky jealous ho
I will see ur idea dear ….but swara is madly in love with sanskar so she can’t be with other …but she will be strong ..
Thanks for the comment
Nice
Thanks ZZZ (charming)
Hi dolly this is awesome I’m eagerly waiting for next part pls pls update next part soon pls
Thanks priya. .but I will next one tomorrow …sorry for that
It is very nice dolly but I m happy that sanskar is improving his feelings for swara.ragini same hone me baad bhi aaj use swara ki care this I like this track
Thanks nikita ….I am happy that u r liking this track …soon sanskar will change ..
Nice…
Thanks ayesha
Its amazing dear……loved it
Thanks soujanya kundu….I think u were silent reader …huh …anyways I am happy
Hey.. Thanks for the welcome dear. And if u don’t mind please could u suggest a few more ff’s for me to read. Please…. It would be a great favour for me. I’m sorry I’m troubling and burdening u so much. But still it would seriously be of great help if u could suggest a few ffs. Thanks a lot dear.. Nice episode.
Hey akshara u r back …..no need of welcome dear …u r like my sis …
u can read these ff”s
1.fixing the broken souls
2.Mr maheshwari and I
3.childhood sweethearts
4.rishto ki datan
5.yellow rose
6.destiny
7.true love never dies
8.fix u
9.acceptance
There are many more dear ….actually I read the selective only ….but still I am reading many …more ….
It’s not at all burden dear ….u r my sis and I am helping u that’s it ….feel free to ask me
I am happy that u asked me help
..I am always ready to help
Thanks for the comment dear
Amazing.
Hey here is my sis …thanks uma
Awesome
Thanks dhara
Superb dolly.awaitting for next
Thanks sumeeta
Take ur time for swasan but plz not add any more ragsan .
Awesome part ! It is simply amazing . Upload nxt part asap.
Ya there won’t be any scenes of ragsan don’t worry …
I am happy that u liked the part and thanks
Awesome dolly I am really enjoying ur ff and can u put some awesome romance of swasan a small request update soon will be waiting
I m happy that u like my ff dear …ya u will get to see swasan romance in upcoming episode …..u r request is accepted …thanks for the comment dear
wow ..dolly I was a silent reader ..but today u made me to comment ..
I have no words to explain dear …u have just rocked dear …..u take the feelings slowly ..I love swara character in ur ff …..a girl should be bold enough ..update next asap dear
I am happy that no made my silent reader to comment at last ….that’s a pleasure dear ….I am happy that u like this ff and swara character …..
Thanks for the comment dear
omg in a single episode this much difference.. last part & this part how much diff..
Yep …there will be lot of changes in each episodes from now on dear ..
Thanks for the comment
Let us introduce any new character in swaras life yaar..make love triangle yaar…so that it will be interesting
I will see kavya …. as I am a die hard fan of sanskar ….I can’t see anyone other than sanskar with swara …..so I can’t help it …but somewhat I will see dear
Thanks for the comment
awesome…..loved it….but even now i cant digest the fact that sanky loved ragini…..i cant even imagine other than swasan…..though u end up with swasan but the fact s dat sanky loved ragini……i cant accept their pair…..for me they are like siblings…..i cant imagine them pairs……now pls pls dont show that sanky s n thoughts f ragini……pls……i m sry if it hurts u…..
Thanks shan …ya even I think ragsan are like siblings but just for an twist I added it …no worries …there won’t be any ragsan things …sanskar will slowly change his feeling’s dear …
Thanks for the comment ..
Maximum hw many episode is there. Plz tel.and ya eri was awesome. Plz swasan ko jaldi ek karo. Make him realise his lov for swara.
I don’t know naina maximum how many …but I guess 25 parts or less than that …
I am happy that u liked the episode ..ya soon swasan will become one
Thanks for the comment
awesome..:)
Thanks kumu
superrrrrrrr
Thanks tani
Uff. No words to describe. You literally made us feel the pain of swara. Waiting eagerly for next episode
Really ….I am happy that I made u feel the pain of swara ….thanks a lot dear …
I am happy that u r liking this ff …
Thanks for the comment dear …
awesome yaar no words to describe u
wen will u update next part…waiting eagerly..