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DIXIT HOUSE
Dr. Sonakshi (sona) is preparing food for Ishwari when Radha rani comes
Radha rani: aa doctorni aapna kam jaldi khatam karo
Sona: why autyji? something special/
Radha rani: Yes Dev’s would be inlaws and wife are coming for dinner
Sona: would be inlaws??
Radha rani : yes the Gujrals are coming.
(Sona gets sad)
Sona: (to herself with tears) i am a middle class girl who cant even afford Natasha’s duplicate clothes, Natasha is a well behaved, cultural, potential and capable girl and she is perfect for Dev . its my fault to take his concern to be love.
(sona finishes her work and is about to leave, when the Gujrals enter )
Mr Gujral; hello mrDev, how are you?
Dev; Very fine Thank you for coming.
(Natasha touches Ishwari and Radha rani’s feet)
Radha rani;(taunting sona) This is called culture
JUST THEN A HANDSOME, DASHING GUY ENTERS WHO IS NATASHA’S BROTHER. HIS NAME IS KARAN GUJRAL
Karan; hi everybody,(touches Ishwari,Mamaji and Radha rani’s feet)
KARAN AND DEV SHAKE HANDS JUST THEN SONA ARRIVES WITH TRAY OF JUICE
Radha rani; our Dev is so rich that he has afforded a doctor as his cook.
SONA SEES KARAN
Karan; Finally, (goes near sona and gives her a flower) i got you Dr.Sonakshi Bose
SONA SMILES WHILE DEV LOOKS AT THEM AND FEELS BAD
Karan; Sorry to interupt but auntyji she is not a cook but the best nutritionist of this place her name is included in the top 50 nutritionists of India.
KARAN AND DEV WERE STANDING NEXT TO EACH OTHER
Sona; I am glad to see you Dr.Karan
Karan;(in a low voice ) i just want to keep admiring you ?Dr.Bose
Dev on hearing this becomes sad.
ALL WERE HAVING DINNER AND SONA, NEHA AND KETCHU WERE SERVING,
Karan; So Dr bose what have you decided??
Dev; why are you asking her? what is it?
Karan; actually in the last conference i and Dr Bose were selected to represent INDIA internationally to give a presentation on health welfare. but Dr.Bose refused on account of this work as we will have to go to US
Ishwari; Wow sona, i think you should go. its a big chance
ON ISHWARI’S INSISTANCE SONA AGREES AND UNKNOWINGLY WITH CURIOSITY AND HAPPINESS KARAN HUGS HER. DEV GETS ANGRY AND LEAVES FROM THERE
SONA GETS READY TO LEAVE WHEN DEV AND KARAN SIMULTANEOUSLY APPROACH HER AND SHE ACCEPTS KARAN’S OFFER WHICH IRKS DEV
BHOSE HOUSE
At night sona tells elena all that happened
Elena: Sona forget Dev and do your work. he is happy with Natasha and you have accepted this now
SONA RECIEVES A GOOD NIGHT MSG FROM KARAN
Sona: Karan is very good and smart guy.
ELENA:Karan ha?
Sona: shut up Elena
THEY BOTH GO OFF TO SLEEP
DIXIT HOUSE
DEV IS UNABLE TO SLEEP THINKING OF SONA AND KARAN
Dev:Yeh Dr Bose Karan ko dekh kar itna smile kyu kar rahi thi?? aur ye nikki bhi na why did she have to say they have a fab chemistry
(Dev takes sleeping pills and goes off to sleep)
IN THE MORNING DEV SEES THAT KARAN HAS COME FOR DROPING NATASHA AND ASKS SONA TO COME FOR A COFFEE WITH HIM AND SONA AGREES
IN THE KITCHEN
Dev:(in an angry voice) what is wrong with you?? he asked you for a coffee date and you agreed?? are you alright Dr Bose?
Sona: yes i am fine, I agreed because Karan is a matured and smart guy and a good friend too
DEV WAS ABOUT TO TELL SONA SOMETHING WHEN NATASHA INTERUPTS THEM
Dev: Natasha would you like to come for a coffee date with me???
Natasha: (happily) of course
DEV LOOKS AT SONA WHO IS ANGRY
13 Comments
Nice …
The double jealousy track is nice
Nice… Just update regularly ..
Awesome!!!!!
Superb……
Update next part…..plz plz…
Nice… Plzz update it daily…
sanaya wats this frnd….r u a writer of original krpkab??..i hope same story continue in future…its just fabulous frnd!!!!!! keep going and update ur next epi fastttttt
Thanx guys pls keep supporting me
Superb yaar try to update regularly
Wow Sanaya nice Dev also got jealous yeah lol 😛
amazing, keep going, pls update regularly I am eager to read the next update.
Now Dev will understand how sona feels seeing him wid dat fat-so Natasha
Sanaya its brilliant… Keep writing.. Iam soo happy to see Dev being jealous…