Hi it’s me manya I am going to write a little different ……
Epi starts
A modern but traditional girl , cute chubby Sweet very beautiful girl ( we knw twinkle )
A dashing hero smart hansom none other than Kunj
So llet’s start
A girl is shown sleeping with blanket ac fan evrythig
An old lady shouts her name twinkle
Nd twinkle sill sleeping. The old lady is revealed to be leela…
A hot hansom boy jogging in the road nd all the gals staring him ….Our Kunj….He re turns home Nd greats his family …evry1 settles down fur bf nd Kunj started shouting czz it was the first day of their practice
Same here with twinj
L . Tw get up u forgot abt the practice? ?
Tw. Maaaaaaammm 2 min
L. Agerily shours
Tw. Haaam mmmaaeeaaa I woke up ohhhh shit it’s 10. I’ll be late shit by naaa by evry1
Kunj also drives for his practice
On the road both twinj cars in opp direction but both of them dinnt see…..
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17 Comments
Nice 1 but plzz make lil long….do cont…
Manya its nice…..??? but its short pl write l- onger episode nxt time
*longer
Amazing start dear loved it do cont asap plzzzzzzzzz
hi dear u started to wrie ff when no one is there…all tu fans r busy…so donot be sad if the no. of comments will be less bcauz when all be free they will of course comment…. come back guyz i am missing u all( crazy ritzi akku pali sanam sweetue anushka lovleen and many more …come back and plz comment)
Nice start ….waiting fr d next episode
Nice beginning…. Waiting for the next update….
Nice but longer next time
Nice Manya, but try making it longer.
Thnx guys next time I’ll make a bigger one
Actually m a dancer so that’s y
This ff is nt exactly like tei….but will be different 1
Nw my xams r going on ill write evrydae 1
After mah xms I’ll write more than 1 okk
Nd I’ll introduce to the rest charecters afterwards in the
Stories
Nyc one….
Fabulous
Hima.s in the sense r u hima srinivas.
Nd Manya it’s nice.
Amazing amazing amazing manya
Tq…….