hello guys welcome back to twinj land thanks for your lovely comments
thnx mitali,ritzi,panchi,sayeeda,amii,zarmeen,kinjal,jaya,shreya,keerthana,anushka,sam,zikra,lama
SHREYA—i think there is a confusion by saying UNITE i dont meant that unite i wanted to say just friendship one unite btw thnx for commenting
SAYEEDA,AMII,SAM—sorry guys now i will try to post longer episode
mitali,panchi,sayeeda,amii,zarmeen,keerthana thnx for congregating me
and zarmeen i am studying in 7th class and i think i am younger than all of you as i am 12 so now can i call u di if u dont mind
sayeeda,amii,zarmeen,kinjal and shreya..i think u r new readers so welcome and thnx for reading hope you will like my ff and keep commenting
now enough bakwass lets get back to work
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Sikkim(jail)
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the inspector comes and sees that twinkle is unconscious so he calls lady inspector who tries to wake her but she didn’t respond
inspector-i think we have to take her to hospital
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Airport
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k-dekho twinkle aaa gaya mai tujhe lene
he comes out of airport and take taxi…
taxi moves (tu hai ke nahi plays)
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hospital
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doctor says to inspector that twinkle got unconscious because of tiredness and tension she will get fine till night
doc leaves inspector says a havaldar to stay in front of twinkle’s room
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In HoTel (night)
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kunj comes in room
k-twinkle i arrived here but now how i will find you its ok i will think in morning
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hospital
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twinkle wakes up but is still lost in something she goes out and sees that the havaldar is sleeping ..she gets out of hospital and walking on road lifeless on the other hand kunj cant sleep as he is continually thinking about her(do pal ki ye dilon ki dastan plays)
after sometime a car comes in speed and hit twinkle badly kunj shouts TWINKLE!! and gets up
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next scene (in morning)in front of operation theater
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inspector is scolding havaldar (please tell what havaldar is called in english)as he dont took care just then doc comes out
doc-too much blood had flown out
ins-so take blood from blood bank
doc-no it is not possible
ins-why
doc-she has a very rare blood group.AB- we have to quickly arrange blood before 24 hours
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in hotel
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k-twinkle yaar how will i find u
he picks up paper
k-what rubbish facilities 2 days before newspaper
he calls the room service ..a boy comes
boy-good morning sir how may i help you
kunj-take this and bring new newspaper
the boy is about to pick it just then kunj sees something
he takes the newspaper
k-you go
he leaves
kunj eyes filled with tear
in newspaper there is news of twinkle being in jail
precap:kunj and twinkle confrontation
thnx guys i hope this time it is long
and keerthana dear i am really sorry this time i cant put emojis but next time pakka ok pinky promise
till then…
keep smiling keep laughing. keep watching and keep reading my stupid ff
21 Comments
Loved it twinju…
eagerly waiting for nezt epi..
post it asap
it was really nice and yes havaldar is called constable in english
N plzz read my ff also
twin-a never ending love story(how tashan changes to ishq)
n yeah loved todays epi….
sory again posting a comment….
love u loads…
muahh!!!!
heeeyyyy bhavika can u pls give a short summary tht how twinj got sperated…. but it was awesome epi dear
someone leak twinkle picture with a man in bed (same as manohar and purvi pic in tei)
then it leaks and shown on tv and kunj ne twinkle ko ghar se bahar nikal deya
hope u read it
ohhhh u r just 7th and writing a very good ff i loved ur ff ya iam new reader and today i read ur all epi from first it was very goood dear……
ohhhh u r just 7th and writing a very good ff i loved ur ff ya iam new reader and today i read ur all epi from first it was very goood dear……and i dont mind u call us di ….
Sweet twinju ???
Cant wait to read the next episode… im soo excited…!!! ??
Hey,bhavika firstly congrats for silver jubliee of ur ff ………. now cmng 2 d epi it is nyc …….. eagerly wtng fr d nxt epi for twinkle and kunj confrontation …… pls post it soon …….
Hello bhavika although u’re 12 u’re an awesome writer!!! I can’t wait for twinkle n kunj Confrontation 🙂 i luv u n ur ff plzz post ur next epi as soon as possible 🙂
twinj and read my ff allso twinj made for each other
but it will not be perfect like u really twinju ….
Emotional one …waiting fr their confrontation. I really liked it and plz don’t let forgive twinki forgive kunj so easily I know that twinkle is not upset with kunj ;it’s just a suggestion to my chotu sis hope u don’t mind it .
And of course u can call me di coz I m much elder than u .
Oh so u r in 7th… N so much creative dear.. I love uhh yrrr.. . N waiting for ur next ff.. ?? n m regular reader dear. But I don’t have so much time for comment. So u can call me a silent reader also. ? but pehle. Ab to m active. Actually m a medical student yrr to zyada time nhi milta for comment sryy ?? n luv uh soo much ma dear swt lil sis.. ?
Awesome.. Eager for the confrontation.
Awesome
Mind blowing yaar…..havaldar is called Constable
Verrrry nice twinju
Ossum
I must appreciate ur story line
Love u and ur ff
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awesome epi bhavika
and u are in 7 th grade
i am impressed how much beautiful are u writing
Loved it yaar. U r just awsm
Great episode! Looking forward to the next part 🙂
Osmm epi dear loved it