hello my cute ff readers cum frnds…… u guys wont believe tht ri8 now i m travelling in a bus… m on the way to my nani’s house… ok no more my real life stories…. but according to rituals… let me start the thanks giving ceremony ?
mannat, aastha, sayeeda, jasmin, lama, yashika, shreya aka cutie, mahi, naina, fiona, cutie pie, riya, panchi, zikra, Hima. S, rupam, jaya, anushka, shatakshi, amii, riya, loveleen, sidmin (twinj), sasmerra, ruchi, khushi, romaisah, sam, crazy and fatarajo…. sorry if i missed anyone
Many of u complained tht there r no twinj scenes…. well in tht case i only want to say 2 things
1. if i will show u all the romantic scenes between twinj be4 marriage then there will be nothing new in my ff….. nd its not tht i hvnt given u twinj scenes but u knw i cannot afford to give much intense scenes BE4 MARRIAGE….. thts the reason i m paying attention on pluto which will give u sm funny scenes nd will never allow to feel u the absence of romance but i think i failed in tht attempt
2. The speciality of my ff is comedy… look i cannot give u tht much romantic ff like tht of pali nd ridhima nd many more…. but srsly guys trust me i m trying my best nd will keep trying my best to keep u entertain
Finally i jst want to say tht i cannot asure u “ALWAYS” twinj’s romance….. loke i gave stress on word always which means i will give u twinj’s romance frequently but not daily
sorry if i hv disappointed u guys but cannot give u fake promise nd all tht na!
Okay so enough of my head eating lecture… now lets move on to the epi….
The epi starts with twinkle reaching home along with pluto in her hand who is still trying to free himself
Twinkle reaches the hall… where sarnas nd luthras r already there
pluto still trying his best
T: arre arre pl.. pluto control ur self baby… i know ur sad bcus i didnt let u stay with her…. sorry na pluto
P:(sadly)bow vow!
All the family memebers stand up seeing pluto in tht aggressive state
NOTE: Mahi was not there bcus she was not allowed to meet uv nd all tht
Uv: twinkle wht happened to this pluto…. he is not in control nd tht too when he is wid u!
pluto finally gets successful to free hinself frm twinkle’s cluthes nd he quickly runs towards the door to meet his love
T: pluto one mire step nd then ur nt my baby anyomre okay!
pluto stops at the very moment nd runs back nd hides himself under a sofa… as he didnt wanted to loose twinkle too…. his tears shedding voice was clearly audible
T: aww pluto
Uv:twinkle now would u pls explain us wht happened to pluto
Twinkle told everything…. everyone started laughing loudly
L:haha twinkle…. pluto is in love…. haahaa
T:(sadly)maa…. i m feeling sad for him nd ull r laughing here…. i wish i could bring tht dog here
just then a voice is heard frm enterance
Voice: yr voice is granted twinkle
everyone looks towards enterance nd its none other than our kunj…. he is with the same female dog
T: kunj! wht is this!
everyone too looked confused
K: shh….pluto… pluto where r u… look wht i brought for u… cm out pluto
pluto cms out of the sofa nd was literally jumping to see her
P:bow vow bow vow
saying this he rans towards his gf nd he licked her
T: kunj… thnks yaar… i too was thinking the same so tht pluto can get his life partener nd stay happy
K:me too… i was thinking the same
K thinks: actually a little different…. if pluto will get busy in his own life then there would be no one who will cm in between me nd twinkle
pluto looked at kunj…
K: de… dekh plu.. pluto… i.. i did this 4 u!
pluto starts walking towards kunj
K: pluto… dekh now… dont get mad on me again
but pluto was not listening nd jst miving towards him… kunj to started moving backwords unti ge falls on sofa
T: pluto… look no scrating again uh!
pluto jumped on kunj
K: aaaaaah!
but to his surprise… pluto was nt scrating or getting angry on kunj infact he started licking kunj
all gets happy to see as finally they both became frnds
T: finally yey!
pluto again goes to his gf nd they go towards pluto’s dog house
Leela now walks towards twinkle nd turns her opp. to kunj such tht she shows her back to kunj
L:wht yay uh! twinkle u shouldnt cheat…. why did u broke the ritual
T: ma! ok i will not see kunj but be4 tht let me do his first aid na..look he got so hurt due to pluto
K: haan haan maa… once let her do my first aid then she will not meet me (he thinks but i can meet her even aftr tht)
L: ek baar na bola samj mei nhi aata kya
twij gets scared
L: kunj… u go in the guest room, there will be first aid box… i will give u first aid… nd twinkle run to ur room… quick!
twinkle got scared
T: o.. ok maa!
nd she ran ti her room
K: no need leela maa… (sadly)i will do the first aid on my own… just show me the guest room
Leela shows him the way nd he went there
@ Guest room
kunj gets the first aid box nd tries to put ointment on his face… but all in vain….. just then he feels two warm arms
without even seeing the face
K:twinkle….
Yes he was correct…. it was twinkle
she too sat on the bed
K: twinkle u… u here
T: ofcourse…. how can i see my kunj in pain
kunj got a smile on his tiredful face
Twinkle takes the ointment nd spreads it on kunj’s face
K: aah…. its burning
Twinkle quickly blows air on his face…. kunj felt heavenly relaxation
K: and wht about the ritual
T:(unknowingly) arre bhaad mei jaye aisa riwaz
kunj gets surprised and lifts his two eyebrows
Twinkle then cms in her senses nd she starts to leave
T:i think… i… i.. should go now
but kunj holds her wrist nd pulls her towards him… which makes twinkle sit on his lap
T: k.. kunj… s.. sm1 will cm
K: i dont care
kunj now starts to move his lips on twinkle’s left side of the face
Twinkle felt a gr8 relaxation nd closes r eyes due to it… kunj sees her like this nd gets over excited
he now starts to kiss twinkle’s left neck (as twinkle is sitting on his lap…. her keft side is only visible to kunj)
T: kunj… leave me pls….
K: (still kissing her neck) arre why should i….. look now no 1 will cm in between us…. not even pluto…. now who will save u frm me uh!
T: my mobile
kunj stops kissing her neck
K: what do u mean by yr mobile????
Twinkle takes out her mobile and shows a video to kunj… kunj is shocked seeing it
K: twinkle…. when did u do this?
Guys twinkle had taken video when pluto was running behind kunj nd was continuously scratching him…. nd our kunj was shouting 4 help
T: kunj juat think if this video gets on fb or instagram then…… fir toh tumhari izzat ka faluda ho jayega
K: twinkle…. twinkle ur a gud girl ri8! pls give me yr phone
T: kunj i m a gud girl but yr intentions doesnt seems gud…. so pluto nhi toh mobile hi sahi!
K: twinkle pls yaar plsssssssss let me romance na…. i m srsly dying to touch u
Twinkle cups kunj’s face
T: (softly) hey…… look i understand u… ur emotions…. ur feelings… i also dont like to stay away frm u… but its just few days den….. as i told u be4…. i will be all urs…. u can do anything u wnt to do wid me… but not be4 wedding na pls! infact after our wedding i myself will arrange a special ni8 for us…. nd its my promise!
Kunj smiles
K: sorry twinkle
T: u need not be
K: but i am eagerly waiting for our special ni8
T: me too!
Now twinkle stands up frm his lap
T: look kunj jitna sabra karoge uska phal utna hi meetha hoga (how much u will wait… its fruit will be tht much sweet)
K: i think u r ri8….. ok so me kunj sarna… i take an oath tht i will nt even see twinklebuntil our wedding ni8
Twinkle gers shocked
T: who told u to do tht!
kunj smiles
K: jitna sabra karoge…. usska phal utna hi meetha hoga
Both laughs
Precap: leap of a week…… marriage day nd a new twist
hey guys…. tiday i didnt felt so confident in writing my ff… i think u guys r not liking my ff…. as ull need romance… nd thts correct too…. but i cannot give u tht always… so sorry guys but still of ull feel i m wrong in my personal point of view then i will stop this ff.
Stay blessed!!!
35 Comments
Hey ritzii m so srry I can’t comment in ur previous episodes srry again n yaaa I don’t want that much Twinj scenes yaar m ok wid the romance cum comedy
No!!! Dont end this ff.. plz I beg u!! :'(. Its one of my favourite ff…. the episode was osm! Again requesting u plz! I dont want much twinj scenes… I m ok with comedy!
hey Ritzi don’t say sorry u write so well n I will kill u if u stop dis ff I luv ur ff I know all are asking for twinj romance n u r also right at ur point romance with comedy is fun so keep going . waiting for next episode luv u dear . loved ur thanks giving ceremony
Plzz ritzi don end this ff…ots one pf my favourite…loved d epi…yaar plzz…love u loads…..
Is the twist related to kabir…..wow…episode was just awesome…..
hey ritzi dnt feel bad…i dnt knw abt oders bt i personally love ur ff alot…i love d way u giv comedy inbetwn romanc..see everybody has their own style of writing..its nt necessary tht u ll b gud at giving romnc scences too…i love ur way n plz continue ur writing…watever u write it wl b acceptd by me at once…
Hey ritzi, don’t end your ff!! I really enjoy it even without twinj romance. Today’s episode was really good. Please don’t stop 🙂
U r a fabulous writer… Nice epi and that too on time… So sweet of u yaar..
Amaazing episode Ritzi…..U r fabulous
R u kidding me…
u kw i always keep on scrolling up nd down to find ur ff…its my fav…i love it
totally different nd u make me laugh always widout dissapointment haha…
Nd i love this epi as well..plz keep writing…love u soo much nd ur ff too…
hi ritzi .i am new hea please dont end this ff as this ff is one of ma favourite ff and u are really an awesome writer .i was silent reader but i am impressed by ur awesome ff .that it forced me too comment hea.its a request please dont end this ff ritzi
Hey ritzi pls dnt even thnk 2 end ur ff …….. i love ur ff a lot …….. it z one of my fav ff…….. i m ok wd d romance com comedy so pls dont stop it ……. and today epi is awesome ……. wtng fr d nxt one ……luv u ……
HEY RITZI DI…IFOUND THAT YOU WANT TO CHANGE YOUR DP SO
for that u have to go in contact us there tell them that u want to change your dp IN REPLY THEY WILL GIVE YOU A LINK JUST GO TO IT AND DO AS INSTRUCTIONS
HOPE IT HELPED
AND EPISODE WAS AWESOME
Ritzi u have to swear on me that u’ll never say that we r not liking ur ff. We really enjoy reading ur fan fiction dear.
plzzzz ritzi don’t end your ff yrr i love your ff …….your ff is really awesome b’coz you add more chilli pataka by mixing comedy with romance…..I love your ff from the bottom of my heart
Hey ritzi plz dont feel bad . Ur story line is superb .and m great fan of it . But dont feel bad for demand of twinj scenes . U just carry on with ur storyline . As if there are person who will make u feel speacial , so there will also be person who will discourage u.
Ritziii plzzz don’t end this ff yrr ….I cant even imagine a day without ur ff …and seriously I liking comedy part a lot.
Plzzz don’t lose ur confidence coz our hopes r build on ur confidence and if u goona loose it what will happen to our expectations and I totally agree with u that u should continue d romance section after marriage..nd it’s very difficult to make someone smile and u r doing that difficult task in an easier way through ur writing ….I request don’t get disheartened and don’t say to end it…
Very nice pls dont end it soon
Hey u r good in everything pls not stop it
Its amazing pls pls
Hey Ritz never say that again coz for me this ff is really amazing and you are really a great write sweetheart
Amazing amazing osmmmmmmmm epi dear loved it so sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much do cont asap plzzzzzzzzz plzzzzz bt don’t end it plzzzzz
Come on ritzi don’t think that way we’re all enjoying ur ff n we know that u’re good at romance scenes (kunj confession ?) so we can wait ure a gud writer n we luv the comedy scenes i give us … So just be quiet n keep giving us this wonderful entertainment !! :v btw episode was too good ? :p im waiting eagerly for next epi 🙂
Aur haa .. Maybe the twist is ant kabir?? O.o just a gyess anyway i srsly thouggt u forgot abt him ?
hey…plz dont stop this ff…its really awesome…..n ya ur a great writer so do as u think…I love ur ff….
ritzi yaar plzzzzzz don’t stop ur ff… ur ff s one of my fav ffs…Im madly in love with ur ff…plz don’t loose ur confidence n post nxt epi soon
Awesome post soon
no its nt like that i like ur funny epi ….donot think so nd enjoy in ur nanighar
Ur ff is becoming more interesting day by day keep it up 🙂
Why do you feel so insecure? Chillax. We all are happy with Pluto sequence but, what we were asking for little romance in between(I guess) like today’s episode.. And, for God’s sake don’t stop your ff.. I love it sooo much.
Hey ritzi don’t u dare to end it coz I luv it soooo very much..n that’s n warning… Just kidding but plzzzz I hope feelings tum take pahuch gaye…he he??