HEY GUYS! So I AM here with all your double dhamaka! Read it and you will get your shamaka!! So excited about it?? 😛
Swara opened that letter with her heart pounding. It was written.
Dear Tanya,
I cannot live even a second without you. I will marry only you. You say this to your daddy and mummy. We don’t need to wait till our studies to get over. We can marry after reaching America but we have to wait till me attain the eligible age for marriage. I will say all these to daddy before leaving for America. I don’t need my mom’s opinion. I will go there after two days. You say all these to your mom. I think that a lovable,caring and broad minded lady like her will not object our relationship. Love you and always will forever.
Yuvraaj
Swara shaked like a powerful earthquake. Someone pulled the rug beneath her legs. Her body was drenched in sweat. Now she cannot keep Tanya’s past in darkness. She have to disclose all these to Yuvraaj. But what will be Tanya’s state after that? Swara was confused what to do. She then decided that she will show the letter to Sanskar and seek his help. But no! What will Sanskar say? He will mock her. He will say that Tanya is her daughter and is walking on her path.
No! She will solve this alone. She doesn’t need anyone’s help. She don’t have anyone to pick up the stones from her path. She have to pick it up on her own or else she will be injured.
Swara was sitting alone these 2 days. Faking her illnesses she asked everyone to leave her alone. She was thinking what she will do next.
She heard a car’s horn from outside. Swara came outside with trembling legs. She saw Yuvraaj getting off the car. His face was shining. Swara’s blood was boiling. Son is more dangerous than father. After all fooling innocent girls in his blood. Yuvraj was walking just like Laksh. He was going directly into Tanya’s room.
Swara: Stop there.
Yuvraj stood there. Swara went to her room and brought the letter. She handed the letter to him.
Swara: Have you written this?
Yuvraj: Yes
Swara: What is your age?
Yuvraj: Running sixteen.
Swara: Don’t you feel shame?
Yuvraj: There is no reason to feel shame.
Swara became angrier. How shameless is this boy!
Swara:I am warning you. Stay away from Tanya. She is like your sister. Don’t keep any bad intentions.
Yuvraj: Bad intentions? You don’t know anything about us. She is my sweetheart. I love her. Yes! I will marry her. Nobody in the whole world can stop it.
Swara: Get out from my house. You are saying to marry my daughter in front of me? Besharam.
Swara’s eyes were red in anger. Yuvraaj’s eyes were even more red. His eyes were like burning balls.
Yuvraj: Aunty I am also warning you as you are Tanya’s mom but you will repent for this.
Swara:Get out.
Swara was screaming. Yuvraj went out without looking back even once. Tanya and Sanskar came out listening to Swara’s scream. Tanya was screaming and running behind Yuvraj.
Tanya: Listen Yuvraj. Have faith on me. I will not care anybody. I am yours.
Yuvraj started his car and waved his hands bidding bye to Tanya.
Yuvraj: We will talk in America, not here.
Yuvraj increased the sped of his car. Tanya sat at the entance of the house crying. Then she got up and went near Swara.
Tanya: Mumma!What you did? You don’t know Yuvraj is very sentimental and emotional. I can’t live without him.
Tanya said in between her sobs. Swara had not expected this from her. She became angrier. She slapped her furiously and continuously. (Remember once Sumi had slapped Ragu after ahe kidnapped her and forced swasan to marry)
Swara: Shameless girl. You should die. Yes I will kill you before marrying Yuvraj.
Sanskar pushed Swara and hugged Tanya. Swara’s hand marks were on Tanya’s face. Blood was oozing out from her lips.
Swara:Leave her. Today I will kill her.
Sanskar: Tanya will only marry Yuvraj. Who are you to touch her?
Swara: I am her mother. I have given her birth. I can kill her,slap her. I can do anything thatbI want. And if u will support you I will give poison to you.
Sanskar: You are not Tanya’s mother. You don’t have any right to touch her. She is my daughter. Ragini died after giving birth to Tanya. This is the truth.
Sanskar took Tanya and went inside. Swara cooled down like a ice. Few seconds ago she was crushing herself to have given birth to Tanya and now this have turned into the truth. She have been cheated her whole life. Adarsh bhai,Laksh and Sanskar-everyone have cheated her. The feelings which she had developed for Sanskar faded away. She saw Sanskar was applying ointments on Tanya’s wound.
Sanskar: Tanya have patience. You get well and then we will go to Yuvraj.
Tanya: Daddy you don’t know but he will never come here.
Sanskar: But after knowing that Swara is not your mother,he will definitely come here.
Tanya: Daddy don’t say like that. Mummy is now angry but later she will agree.
Sanskar: Tanya this is the truth. I married Swara after 1 month of your birth.
Tanya was crying while Swara came to her
Swara: Tanya, I am sorry. If I would have known that you are not my daughter, I would never have slapped you.
Swara ran to her room and cried lying on her bed.
Where is her child? Who will say her? From where will she get her child? She wants to hug her child just once.
Sanskar felt restless after listening Swara’s cry. Sanskar had kept her in darkness and she did not ask him why he did like this?
If she would have asked him,Sanskar would have said the real reason. But Swara had no complaint for Sanskar. Sanskar went near Swara. Swara got off from the bed seeing him.
Swara: Sanskar I am sorry to slap your daughter.
Sanskar: Swara,let me explain why I have done this.
Swara: No need to think about the past. I have no complaints against you. You go to your hospital, it’s very late. Even I am going to “Bachpan”. I have not gone there since 2 days.
Without waiting for Sanskar’s answer Swara went out. The next day Sanskar took Tanya and went to Uttara’s house. There they meet Yuvraaj. Sanskar decided to bring Uttara to their room so that she can explain everything to Swara. Uttara came to their house but Swara was not there so she decided to drop a letter for her. Swara opened that letter after returning and read it.
Swara,
Now it is very important to say you everything. After returning from you Yuvraaj is very sad. He is saying that if he will not marry Tanya he will not return from America. I thought after bringing the child away from you, you will live happily. I thought after marrying Sanskar you will get back your lost love. After all one day he was your dream man. Tanya is not your daughter. Now do you have any problem? Will you spoil Yuvraj’s life just to take revenge from Laksh bhai? Yuvraj is your son. I didn’t feel like giving him to orphanage. I kept him in my house. After 5 years of marriage medical reports said that bhabi can never become a mother. After that I said everything to Laksh bhai and handed him Yuvraj. But Yuvraj don’t know anything. He thinks that his mother left him with me and went. I also want to say something to Sanskar. I know you must never have said him that he is your Mr. Sweet.
Swara closed the letter.She hated herself for slapping her own son. She desired to hug him but now she can never do that.
She looked at her reflection in the mirror. She wiped her tears. She packed her own bags and went out. This world is very big. There are many children who are fighting for their life. There are many more unfortunate people than her. She will also live. But not for her. for others. For helpless children.
Today she aims to build the life of thousands illegitimate children. With this aim she was walking on Delhi’s highway all alone. The sun rays was falling on her. The autumn season was bidding bye to her. She shadow led her way- but where is the end?
#The_end!
So guys how was the end? Hope I have proved that this is a pure Swara ff!
How was the double dhamaka? The first dhamaka is that Yuvraj is swalak’s son and the second dhamaka is that this chappy is the end.
Silent readers I want to make me feel your existence! Thank you everyone for your unflinching love and support. You all mean the world to me. I am nothing without you! 😉
A new ff is coming soon!!! 😀
THANK YOU!
Love you all forever! 😉
110 Comments
Sorry to say but didn’t like the end 🙁 Swara still didn’t got her real happinness…
Dhara di! Never mind! I will write one happy epilogue.?
Good.but i expected that ine whole life swara face so many problems.sanskar love wara.both are love each other but cannot but cannot express thier feelings.i hope there live together.
Sorry Anu! I could not stand up ur expecations!?
i was literally crying how can anyone be so cruel to her. they all cheated her made her life miserable 🙁
Thanks for being connected!
Plz give proper ending
We can’t say this ep as a end
Swara didn’t settle in her life
Dear Swara did settle as she found an aim in her life.
its quite saddening….plzz make a happy endings
Will definitely try one?
I was a silent reader but seeing ur end I got furious….I don’t like ur ending sorry to say but that’s the truth…this is not the appropriate ending for ur ff…maybe u can think its a correct end but not everyone… Pls. If u can give one more epi with good appropriate ending..let yuvaraj know about the truth..yuvi’s reaction..swara reaction..etc..et..pls. With all this come up with one more epi….
Sorry Priya! I could not stand ur expecation. Here I failed as a writer!?
I asking for one more epi…with yuvaraj coming to know the truth..his reaction..swara’s reaction hearing that yuvi came to know that she is her son…and many more happenings….pls. I request u to write a epilogue…
Priya! I will write an epilogue regarding this.
yes i too feel like we need justice for swara…..make her happier pls..
Sherin I ll try!!
Jyotii…i think i hardly commented in this ff….but i never missed an episode of this ff….this was one of the best ff i have ever read…i loved all the part…Rain,Spring and Autumn….but everywhere Swara lost..everyone played with her…and her emotions..that’s sad…every story doesn’t have a happy ending…i would love to read some more of this ff….plz plz plz Jyotiii keep writing…and i will read your new ff for sure.. 😀 😀
Eva! Commenting is not a big deal! You are reading this n its enough for me. Thanks a lot for boosting my engery
Hi Eva!! How are you?? Actually you are really an awesome author… And do read my stuff too and comment SAMJHOTA yah pyaar Swaragini
I’ll read it dear?
Wow. Dis was. A heart touching ff. Painful.. Feeling bad for swara. Unpredictable one.. Nd different from typical ff’s.. Hope that one day YU write a ff like dis on ragini also since m a ragini fan.. It’s a request. 🙂
Liz thank you very much! I will definitely try to write one ff on Ragini! ?
PLEASE CHANGE THE END LET SANSKAR AND SWARA BE TOGETHER
From d starting I had said that this a pure Swara ff!
Everyone deserves happiness in their lifes…. Same with swara you can’t leave the end just like that.. Even the same with sanskar…… Pls we need a happy ending. Like swasan union and they gets Tanya and yuvraj married….
Will definitely consider ur suggestion while writing epilogue.
i cant belive tht it ended…… really soooo much lve for swara……. evry one she loves just betrayd her……. adarsh bhay for cheap intension ovr her body…. laksh for also same n for a beautiful time pass lvr…. n we cant say tht sanskar betrayd her fully…. he jst covr the truth for her good bu jst hurt at last…..
yes we can see sanskar lvd her soooo much…… but the swasan nevr united…… really sad for tht…….
and jyoti i hve a rqst plz update n epilogue or smnthg… bcoz we r eagerly wyting to wht hpn nxt in the lyf of swara, sanskar, yuvraj, tanya n laksh…..
hope u make it asusual lyk ur wondrful skill ????
love u lotz….
Aami thank you very much! I will definitely write an epilogue with happy ending. And you all will like it!?
wyting for it dear…. ???
i am always a silent reader nd i agree dat in reality ending mustnt be always happy bt plzzzzzzzzz i want a conclusive end can u just write an epilogue with all loose strings tied up ..plzzzz ….plzzz jyoti
Ty! I will definitely tie up all tge looae strings.
Please give a appropriate ending yaar
Sure
Don’t get sad Jyotii. I liked the end. You prooved that this is a pure Swara ff. 🙂
But if Yuvraaj would have united wid her,it would have great but still this is good.
I did not end it in a pair as I always wanted Swara to live her life alone.
Different and super ……l am a person reading ffs for stories not pairs ….so luved it …I HV NVR seen original swaragini serial….. Try to give an epilogue…… But life usually s not conclusive….wt next …z always mystery …something always left in complete….
You are cent percent correct! I have planned to give an epilogue.
Plz give a proper end… This is not call an end…. If you can’t give end than atleast give a epilogue…..plz…
Yes I ll keep d epilogue tomorrow.
Never had thought this would be the ending. But please write an epilogue with happy ending.
I will post an epilogue.
Please give an epilogue..please please please…
Mugdha, i ll give!
Epilogue Pls! ???
So sad ending…..
I am crying Pls!!……
Jaf, I am giving an epilogue. Don’t worry!
sorry yaar.. i didn’t like the ending.. it was an interesting ff.. but last part something is missing.. it is a swara ff not meant that she can’t live happily or she can’t have a family.. please give her some happiness.. don’t end it like this.. please.. it was my favorite ff.. please don’t destroy it by giving such an unpleasant ending
From the beginning I had decided this end. Sorry to destroy ur interest in dis ff. But I am writing a happy ending.
if you are really ending it please come with another ff with swara as lead please.. it is a request..
Many have requested to write on Ragini after that I ll write on Swara.
Jyotii it is very nice. I love this. Real life is like this . You have depicted emotions very well. N i am with you in this end. Love this nd U 😉
You r first one who fully agreed totally wid my end. Thanks a ton for understanding me!!??
I am pissed off with this ending. Please make Swara happy. Write one more epi. Plzzzzz. A request. 🙁
I will consider ur request.?
The ending is good but you need an epilogue.. You don’t need to show swasan united or anything… But just like Swara is living happily rather than just wandering on the road.. Also unite Tanya and Yuvraj
If you can write such a ff on Ragini also
This is purely my opinion.. You can take it if you want 🙂
Swara had got an aim to build d future of many illegitimate children. Shez not wondering on street.
I will definitely write one on Ragu!
Didu
I don’t like the end. But this is fav. ff. Don’t think that m bashing ew. I am just saying that its very sad. Please I want a happy ending.
Dii don’t get disheartened. I love ew didu. 😉
I know u can never bash me. I will surely give a happy wala end.
ooohh dear life may itna struggle kare ke baad end may khushi jarur milti hai……plz yaar yaha end mat karo……swasan ko mila do……really disgusting end
Ur every line is correct except the last one yr
.plz don’t be soo harsh yr
sorry dear but itney ache ff ka sad end hona bohot bura lagta hai….life may itna struggle karne k baad swara ko saskar ka pyaar milna chahiye tha
Chotu chill yaar!?
Apurva, I know u love this ff but u hate this end!
Have u read d intro? There I had said this ia a pure Swara ff! I cannot write any pair at d end! But only for all u readers I am writing one!
Jyo, its too good. I love the end. Cuz from d ending you have said this will be a swara ff. I knew frm d bgng that Swara ll be alone at d end. But at the end Swara got an aim which is too good.
Waiting for new ff.
Meher! You always understand me!! Thanks a ton for this! New ff is cmng soon!!?
Dii the end was good but it can be better. I hope u ll give us an epilogue.?
Shona! I ll give an epilogue. Thanks!
Thank u for giving an epilogue.???
The end was bakwass.
Please don’t be harsh dear! She is thinking to change it!
Lovely, sorry if u r hurt by d end.