Hi friends this my fourth ff.Hope you all will like it.And after reading please tell your opinion.
Ritik Malhotra-He is 25 years old handsome boy.Dream boy of every girl.He is business tycoon.He is CEO of Malhotra industry.He is smallest brother among 3 brothers.
Raman Malhotra-He is 36 years old.He is very
arrogant and rude but good by heart.He is owner
of Malhotra industry.And also Big brother of Dev and Ritik.
Dev Malhotra-He is 31 years old.A little flirty but good by heart.He is Boss of Malhotra industry.Big brother of Ritik and small brother of Raman.
Shivanya Joshi-She is a beautiful yet intelligent girl and is very good in household work.But want to do a job.Her age is 21 years.
Ishita Joshi-She is a dentist and is very clever and thinks practically and emotionally.Her age is 34 years.
Nakshi Mehta-She is Ishita and Shivanya’sit cousin.She stays with them since childhood.Her age is 29 years.
Mrs Malhotra-She is Raman,Ritik and Dev’s mother.
Mr Malhotra-He is Raman,Ritik and Dev’s father.
Mrs Joshi-She is Ishita and Shivanya’sit mother
and Nakshi’s aunt but love all three equally.
Mr Joshi-He is Ishita and Shivanya’sit father and
Nakshi’so uncle but loves her equally.
Boy:Maa where are you in am getting late for
meeting.This meeting is very important.
Lady:Wait wait first eat this dahi shakkar as it is
good.
She is Mrs Malhotra and boy is Raman.
Raman:Okay maa bye.Ritik and Dev are waiting for me in office.He goes from there.
Raman reaches the office.
Ritik:Bhai how much time you took.Meeting is going to start.
Raman:Maa was not letting me go.
Ritik:Why?
Raman:Leave all this now let’s go the meeting is going to start in few minutes.
All the 3 go inside conference room.
Inside the room.
Raman:To increase our business we should work hard but all of you are just doing time pass.Don’t forget that you all content. Everyone here to work not to do time pass.
A employee stands and says
Employee:Sir everyone are working hard but results are still negative.What can we do ?We work hard but no positive results come.
Raman:If you will work hard then only results will be positive.I know you are telling lie.If you will tell lie then I will throw you off the company. (With anger)
Ritik stands and says
Ritik:Bhai calm down and you employee what is your name?
Employee:Raj
Ritik:Raj sit down and don’t tell lie again.
In anger Raman goes out of the room and Ritik follows him.
Ritik:Bhai why are you getting this much angry?
Raman:With difficulties we have build this industry and this people are destroying our industry.So why should I calm.
Ritik:Bhai but
Raman:No but now go from here
Ritik:But bhai
Raman:I said go.
So guys how is my ff.Please comment.
20 Comments
The heroine of KRPKAB name is so nakshi but I wanted to keep her name nakshi.
its wonderful siddhi , so nakshi is a nutritionist here also . raman , dev, ritik all are here , good idea
Thanks varshini.
Wow intersting plz update everyday
Thanks and I will try to update everyday.
It’s nice and interesting next one please
Plz dont use nakshi… Sonakshi is better…
Niceee . But pls keep the name Sonakshi .
Okay I will keep her so nakshi only.
Good intro….but I have a question.. Shivanya is nagin here???????
No Shivanya is not a naagin.
Friends please comment.I always feel disappointed when I see less comments.
siddhi don’t feel upset there r much more silent readers , n a good start bt y u wanna call sonakshi as nakshi ? N pls tell me ur std n whr r u frm? Sry 4 askin’ soo many ques
I am 21 years old. I am an dentist.
siddhi don’t feel upset there r many more silent readers n ur ff is super nyc
Nice but if you keep sonakshi it will easy
Heyy!! its a nice one.Keep the good work up 🙂 But please keep her name as sonakshi not nakshi pleaseeee 🙂
Nice..but don’t u think d age of all characters is quite elder n they r not married also at d age of 36 or 29
See if age is elder then only you will get entertain.
sry siddhi di i thought tat u r a student n i’m in 12 n u r a dentist wow