Hey !! How r u guys doing… Here I m wid d third part ..
Location : shravans room
Shravan was roaming here n dere..
Shravan: (talking to himself) yaaaaar ye sumo ne to neend hi udaa Di..
WO ldka prem usse to SB psnd krte h, khi sumo v maan gai to… No no !! Sumo to jungli billi hai usse aise sweet type k ldke psnd nai aane wale..
PR… Aa gya to… Mmmm.. Waise wo h mtlb normal sa asa v kuch khas nai h..
Sumo k layak to bilkul nai…
Someone says ; to kon h sumo k layak??
He turns n is shocked to see himself in front of him…
Shravan : wooah!! Tum kon ho?
Shravan 2 : itna surprise hone ki zarurt nai h mai Teri hi antar aatma hun..
Shravan : antar wat?????
Shravan 2 : antar aatma dude ur innerself !!
Shravan : ooh !! I get it.. Pr tm yaha kyu aaye ho??
Shravan 2 : wo kya h na ,, jb log hmari baten andar se nai samajh pate to hme personally darshan dena pdta h…
Shravan : hmhh!! Ye sumo ki trh taane kyu maar rae ho.. Jo bolna h saaf bolo na…
Shravan 2 : saaf saaf.. Saaf jaanna h to sun ..
Tu bilkul khush nai h sumo ki shadi se ..
Shravan : usse sumo srf mai bulata hun.. Tm mt bolo..
Shravan 2 : shut up!!
Teri jalti h jb tu usse uss prem ya kisi ar k sath dkhta h..
Ar isse phle ki tu mujhe mere language (*jalti h, tu*) k bare me lecture de mai tujhe bta dun ki London return tu hoga mai to dilli ka hi bnda
hun.. Kyuki dil to hmesha tera yhi tha…
Shravan smiles n looks outside his window…
He turns n sees noone..
Shravan : lo,, ye kyu aaya tha meri confusion ar bdhane … Arhhh !!
Its 5 in the morning
Location : sumans room
After all dat happened yesterday.. Suman slept after a big rift between her heart n brain
Her phone rings..,,
Suman: ( sleepy ) hmm hello!!
Shravan : sumo listen to me carefully..
Suman : shravan !!! Tumhe kya chain nai h,, (,sees d tym) paanch bje koi kisi ko phone krta h ??
Shravan : ( in his heart : yha meri neind udd gai h,, ar iss madam ko sona h)
Suman : ab kuch bologe..
Shravan : tum bolne dogi to bolunga na yaar …
Suman : bolo..
Shravan : mujhe tmse Milna h..
Suman : abhi??
Shravan : haan…
Suman : dimag sahi thikane pe h ya fr morning walk pe bheja h??
Shravan: bkwas mt kro na sumo jaldi se aa jao..
Suman : mai nai aa rai shravan … Ar waise v ab meri shadi tay ho gai h to phle ki trhh
Shravan : tay ho gai h??
Kya tay ?? Listen abhi kuch fix nai hua h..
Suman: han to?? Plz yaar shravan pkao mt..
Mai nai aa rai abhi n dats final..
N she cuts d call
Her phone rings again
She picks up,
Shravan : plz somoo
Sumo again cuts d call in irritation ..
Her phone again rings she ignores it ..
D phone rings for d fourth tym.. She picks it up
Suman: (almost shouting ) shravan ,, pagal ho
Gaee ho kya ittni subah..
Caller: hello!!
Suman gets confused n checks d no.
It wasn’t shravan’s no.
Suman : hello ! M sorry WO mai..app.. Kon!?
Prem : mai ,, prem…
Suman : ooh ,, ap..
Prem : amm.. M sorry bht subah subah phone kr dia ..mai. Baad me krta hun..
Suman : nai nai btaiye..
Prem : wo actually,mai tmhe lunch pe milna chahta tha… Soo…
Suman : (raises her one eyebrow) amm… To???
Prem : to.. Kya hm mil skte h,, aj ?
Suman : ya sure..
Prem : great !! To mai place tmhe text krta hun..
Suman : okay
Prem : k den.. Amm mai wo .. M sorry bht subah subah call kr dia .. Wo mujhse wait hi nai ho ra tha ..
Suman : okay ,, koi baat nai..
Prem : okay see ya..
Suman gets sad about it ..
She gets up n starts to get ready..
Suman was thinking about shravan ..
She climbs up on d chair to get a bag from the shelf..
While taking it she slips n shravan holds her… (Hothon pe tere .. Plays)
They share a eyelock ..
Suman : (realises) tum??
Shravan was still lost in her..
Suman : ye,, kya … Choro mujhe..
Shravan leaves her she was about to fall wen he again holds her ..
Suman : hahh.. Pagal ho kya .. Mujhe lga tm mujhe chor doge..
Shravan : dont worry chorne wala tha pr ab nai chorunga.. (He smiles)
Suman looks at him for long..
Suman gets up..
Suman : tm yha?
Shravan : I wanted to talk!
Suman : bolo..
Shravan : mm .. Yha nai amm… Let’s meet up at lunch.. Wat say..
Suman : not possible..
Shravan : kyu??
Suman : mujhe lunch pe Jana h..
Shravan : ( annoyed) kiske sath?
Suman : (looks at him) prem..
Shravan : okay so .. Enjoy den..
N leaves in anger..
Suman : ajeeb pagal ldka h kB kis baat pe gussa aa jae u never know..
Afternoon.,
Prem n suman meet at a restraunt …
Prem : u lyk d place ??
Suman : yeah ( looks around n smiles)
Prem’ s phone fells down..
He takes it n suman sees shravan coming n staring right at her.. ( ek duje ke vaste plays)
Next part coming soon
Keep ur comments coming n I hope u liking it…
Lots of love..
9 Comments
Awesomeeeeeeee very nice yaar superb
thanks yar .. 🙂
Itsss good
Keep writing please
Yaar superb…..
Great dialoguess……..
Keep wrtng dear ……….
It’s so good
lovely update…. thankss sumo
hiiii sumo…..4th part kb upload kroge…..plssss jaldi se kar dijiye…..
hey Ankita … sorry wasn’t available bcz of xamz n I will not be able to continue dis ff bcz of less comments and moreover bcz of xamz so m sorry.. but will write soon..
just wait for a new story.. 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 lots of love..
thanks for appreciation everyone.. 🙂