Kuch na kaha!
After 8long hours operation completed and it is successful. All came out. Cabir came to Manik said with smile. Manik hugged him and cried loudly. Cabir hugged Manik with more care and love he too got tears. Mukhti and cabir knows that Manik is never away from nandini and sadana.
Sadana is shifted to icu. Nandini is specially taking care of sadana not even a nurse is allowed to go to sadana without nandini’s permission. Nandini’s assistant is seeing all patients as nandu is busy with sadana. Manik is going from dadi to sadana wise versa.
After a weak nandini brought sadana home. She is taking care of her. Sri is also help his mom.
Manik is busy in party office and returned late at night. Nandini is waiting for him
“You didnot sleep?”
“Iam waiting for you?”
“Why? How is sadana? Any complications?” Manik tensed.
“No! I fact she is healthy.”
“Then?”
“Tomm iam discharging dadi, mom is also well now they both can travel. I think you are also busy with your politics so you can leave”
“Ok you are throwing me out”Manik harshly asked
“It’s not like that”
“Then what it is?”
“Look Manik I don’t want to argue”
“Then what you are doing?”
“All are again pointing out about my charecter”
“They all even pointing on me too”
Nandini calm downed
“Manik iam fed up I don’t have energy it’s enough please leave me”
Manik came near her “leave this stupidity”
“Manik at least once listen to me respect my descission ”
“If it’s correct one I would have but for this no way”
“Ok then tomm I will leave from here”
Manik just looked at her and lifted her in arms , nandini want to shout but sadana might get disturbed she didnot
Manik took her to room and dropped her on bed slowly and climbed on her”if you do any stupid thinks I will just rape you and make you again pragnant.”Manik is running his nose on her neck. He knew this is her weakest point.
Nandini is going into trans but shakes her thoughts and tried to push him from her
“You know you can’t then why do you try? On that day it was different but today shall we start the game?”
“Manik” nandini is pushing her
Manik took her hands and pinned on her hand with his hands.
“Now what can you do?”
Nandini looked at him and with her folded knees forcedly hit Manik where she shouldn’t
Manik screamed hardly
Nandini pushed him away and got up from him”this is what I can do. So don’t under estimate me”
“Devil! Aaaauchhh! It’s paining”
Nandini went near him”is it really paining?”
“Go and bring some ice”Manik shouted nandini ran down and brought ice
Manik kept there ice
Nandini felt so sorry and even years filled her eyes
“Stop crying and iam hungry please bring something to eat”
Nandini brought food
He ate it stomach full and took the edge of nandu’s aaree pallu which she pulcked at her waist and wiped her lips and hand.
“Now let us sleep”
“You sleep I will sleep with sri”
“Why you don’t want to sleep with me?”
“No”
“Ok then go but I want to hug you and sleep, when you keep your head on my chest I will feel more happy. But if you don’t want then it’s ok”
Nandini is emotionally diverted. Her body is also responding to Manik . Manik changed dress, then came to bed to sleep, nandini is sleeping on corner. Manik smiled.
Manik wantedly kept his hand and leg on nandini. She didnot respond. Nandini knew responding to his moves lead to more complications
Manik is Manik he removed his hand and started to play with his finger on her bare waist. As nandini is wearing saree.
“Manik it’s enough stay away”nandini warned
Manik all of sudden got on her
“Manik!”screamed with pushing him.
“You know that when you are infront of me it’s impossible for me to stay away. You even know that iam shameless then why do you try?”Manik is kissing her neck playing with her waist
“Manik answer one question,”
“How come you know about sri birth? When you were there at delivery time, then why didn’t you come to me? If you know about sri then why were you shocked to see sri?” Manik I’m one go said all these
“Yes”
Manik slept besides her and took her to his chest
“Do you know that your dad died not because of heart attack, he is been murder. In Front of my eyes. You know who?????my own dadu!. Two men are standing near you and your mom where you were sitting along with pistols. I and dadu are inside room. He removed oxygen mask. For 8mina he just scribbled, fighter and wanted to say something to me and lost his breath. I was begging shouting fighting crying still no use. He just killed your father infront of me. You know why he did that? Just to be in this politics, when I came to know that you are pregnant, I came to you, but found that you all are in hospital, I came running. I was just three steps away from you and shouting your name dadu just snatched me to your dads room and did all this. On that I was helpless, I can’t loose you,my child same way I can’t even loose your dad I begged him that I will not go, still he killed him. So that I can’t date any more. I was just back of you in room crying along with you.
Pihu! It’s hell. It’s really hell to be the reason for ones death, I broke down. Totally. I became MLA. Iam with you like a shadow. I know everything each and everything about you. To give dadu checkmate I took these many years. That is why I kept you and sadana away from me. But iam not away from you both. Never.”
Nandini tears are flowing and making manik’s shoulder wet she held his tee tight.
Manik kissed her forehead. His eyes were also wet
“Iam sorry Pihu! Iam sorry.”
“Manik and I hated you to the core.”
“Really? Then why on every june14th you go to siddivinayak on bare foot?”
“No I never”
“A ha!!!!”Manik giggled her.
Both had best night.
Next day both decided to go to Ranchi with family.
Guys I know I revealed the secret of my story. After knowing this so many stop reading this ff but think once how this all happened? Why only Manik can become politican? When dadu have three more grandsons? Why was he so cruel? What made Manik to do all this? How did Manik defeated dadu? How he always stayed with nandini? About his college love story. Then read my next story.
Any wild guesses are invited.
One more thing guys I want to know which charecter of Manik and Nandini did you like from my all three ff s
I love to know why?
For a week iam
Busy iam joining my daughter in hostel for inter, I want to give her total time so sorry for not uploading till Friday. But I will check comments love you all.
61 Comments
Nice story….I loved it
Thank you
I am bad at guessing so no guesses.
I’m going to miss u and ur ff like hell?
Thank you
Business rivals and dream girl
Seriously business rivals n this kuch nahi kaha is also great fabulous amazing really true artist is u awesome way u described them in totally different way just be lie this updating ……thanks to u alot…..really love all ur ffs. …Stay blessed. …
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i love all all of them…. this was very nice. but the suspense is still there suni n will eagerly wait for friday.
S suspense is lot more
loved ur ff enjoy with ur daughter
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U r fabulous writer yar…..the way u express feelings is just mind blowing……
Seriously yar……ur all the 3 ff were super hit…..
nd I also know that……ur this story is also gonna super duper hit….
keep going….
Love u loads…..
Thank you
You are such an awesome writer it’s very difficult to say which one is better I just loved your all three ff the way you portrayed the characters is amazing n eagerly waiting for Friday and ya again thank you much for giving us such an amazing ff love you loads stay blessed
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Buisness rivals mein jo manik aur nandini ke character the vo best the us ff mein dono ke beech emotion,cute romance,fun scene sab kuch tha
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Ur 3ff were super its just fabbb no words to say…
Waw thank you
I thought I have to wait one long day for this update … it’s amazing… so finally secret revealed .. nice
Yes
Not 3, i love all 4 of ur stories. So i cant judge. Bt i think i loved mm slightly more. U r a faboulus writer who makes her every story just perfect. Dont worry. Take ur time. I will missing u. N come back soon. Kuch na kaha is just awsome. Nobody will stop reading. Revelation was needed for the story. N i m sure there r litss more twist n turn of the story. Take care
Dadu should punished
True that dadu should be punished.. But Sri?? Poor boy all of a sudden telling him that he is a son of MP…
Dadu is in power it’s not that easy to punish plotting has to be done
I know there’s lot more in this story so no one will stop reading till u tell us that u r ending and it is the last episode.. About the episode it was amazing. And I hope anytime manik and nandini should clarify that they are husband and wife and clear their character in public …
And about manik and nandini s character..
Manik s current character and nandini s character in its my love story.
Manik here coz despite being rude and dominating he brings the best out of nandini and changed her 360 degree..
While nandini there silently understood maniks emotions and situations very well and holded herself and her feelings and was strength for manik all the time..
Will definitely miss u and ur updates till then. TC.. Come back soon
I too like nandini in Manik malhotra_its my love story
But Manik charecter in one more story which I didnot start that one I love seriously crazy
A guy who is totally mad at a lady who leaves family, wife. Even ready to stay away from his daughter to just love her madly.
I love that Manik
Wow sunitha dear m glad that u ready with one more story of its.. Whenever u start it. I m excited from now on .. But pls do something for dream girl also .. It’s nowhere….
Business rivals … Manan charecters r really fab in dat n dis kuch na kaha also gmg good ..gonna miss ua ff badly btwn njy ua daughter …wth lods of love …. ??? SWEETY.. ?
Thank you
I luv them alll…. Sunitha di…
I luv kuch na kaha the most…
Bt Business rival not less than it…
Will u miss…
U r of those writer who write regularly… Along with 2-3 updates daily…
I cnt guess… Will wait for more…
That you
Your name is cute
your each and every story is different. u kept characters as per story. so I liked all ur ff.
thank u for updating. waiting for the next update.
Thank you
Update was awesome dii….your stories always have that flow…and I think your success as a writer is not only because of your amazing writing skills but also because of your punctuality for updates.usually what happens nah even if I am soo interested in a story line while reading because of delayed updates I lost the continuity and interest and also its hard to find an update especially fanfics because of similar names and photos….but u are amazing dii
Thank you veena
i loveeeeeeee ur stories madly ??????
Thank you madlyyyyy
Sunitha d.. I think I should call u that.. I am just a teenage girl..u know I loved all ur ff’s but best was off course business rivals..u r an amazing writer ..
Its getting more and more exciting day by day..
Keep smiling..
Thank you
You can call me didi
Even aunty
this is what we need. new and different attempts from stories. thid is why we all love you sunitha. pls continue and mesmerizing us with ur talent. lots of from us!
this is what we need. new and different attempts from stories. this is why we all love you sunitha. pls continue and mesmerizing us with ur talent. lots of love from us!
Thank you
miss you badly
Miss you
Every ff of ur was awesome dear..ur way portraying characters in ur each fabrications r unique frm one another so it is difficult to choose..
Iam glad
Superb and a mind blowing update. …ur all the ffs are awesome but I loved and liked the most is business rivals I justtttttttt loved it to the core u know one thing I read it 10 times fully…..
That’s truly amazing
Missing ur ff badly … addicted to it in a week …
im waiting?
im waiting .for updates
Awesome Awesome! waiting for the next ?when are u going to update?
Hi suni…I was a silent reader for ur all ff I like it no no I love ur ffs….Please please update the next episode soon