so how was dhamaka ?
i know i know all were angry on me….
but kya karun adatsemajbur..
any waay hii to all ..sab kushalmangal na?and yeah thanku for support and sorry for the prank!
so shall we move to episode now?
n one more thing…i have so many little little fans na..so now guys u can read too..
i wont do such secnes too..
and yup few can have over romantic recnes or over harsh things ..but the caution ll be given before handed..
but i very well know the human nature
“that if someone says dont do..we purpusly do…!”
han na?
let c the recap!
intro for the characters was done in last episode..
any way i know u ll bash me out this time if i do bak bak so directly to the episode..
“Diiiiiii”..some one shouted ..
T-are meri behena…mere kan ke parde phadne ka irada hai kya???(aree my sister do u have any plans of making me deff)
that u r screaming so loudly..
i m right here na…
twinkle gets down from the stairs…and cms to her..
now cm lets go choti…!
m-arrhhhh dont call me that dii..
O-what ever u say but u ll be our choti…
T-are wahhh so u are also accompning me for shopping…
wow..after a long time we all ll have fun…
yahhhh!
O-s..i m cmming today..
but i need to discuss something…really urgent and that too with u..
T-han bolo…
wait m i forgetting something..
c..
all oldies medicines are also their..
as i had said harikaka to keep them..
maa had a meeting..but any way shes cming next month…
so no prob..
then whats the problem…
O-ufff u girls…
dii my frnd need ur help..for his sister..so..
plzz dii help him…
T-hmm..say me whats the matter..
M-ufffff..again started ..u guys cm and discuss about it..in car..
by the time we ll reach their..
O-ooooo..time management..
M-obvio after all i m soon to be the best writer..
as my stories are best time sellers..
O-dont forget its all dii helps u..
u just give her the prologue..
but shes the one who guides u..so creadit goes to dii..
u better ge that chudaillll..
T-basssss..stop guys stop…
had hoti hai yar..
now lets go and omi say me about the girl…
and how to help her..
trio lev n car..
O-actually dii..i have a frnd…her sis ranked the state..
but her brother i mean another one is not allowing her to study further..
so my frnd is making her study
T-(interupts) oky oky..i got it..
get her tommo or her brother dayafter tommo..
all the trio do shopping and are back home…
there is a bell a the door..
ding dong!
T-chk whos it mahi..
M-chk whos it bhai..
O-what?
me…
its as if..
ghode ne gade se kaha n gade ne bandar se..
(its as if like a horse said to donkey and donkey to monkey..its a provrb..)
M-oooo so u mean ur monkey..
O-s..n u donkey…
both start the cusion fight…
T-ufff…(she huzzes off and goes to open the door…
their comes the siblings of beast..hehehehe!)
hello mohit..
M-diii i missed ur hand food…
so i came here with my sis to have it…
T-awww…how swwet of u..
cm its paneer tikka today…
cm lets go in first these devils are their…
M-okky challo…
T-are is she the same about whom omi said me..
M-yeah..
T-feel free amya..u can cal me dii..as all call me so..
M-yeah including all elders coz shes their mother m i right..
O-just shup up u donkey..
M-u monkey..
T-stop…urrhhhh
A-shall i help u dii..
T-no re ur guest..so enjoy..
A-u just said me i m ur sister and a sister can help other sister ri8..
T-hmm vo..no i like doing things my own..
A-n i like helping u
T-oky challo..
O-learn from her something…
hai amya plz teach this donkey some values…
M-and mohit u teach this monkey oky…
O-hes ur brothers best frnd..u call me bhai na?
call him same..
M-what bhai and he..
no way…i wont call (getting wt she was about to speak)
T-wts going on?
M-vo..dii is one duffer bhai less..to get another?
no way..
achha anyway amya..say me so from when shd we start the classes..
M-when bhai is not around u can..
T-dont worry..i dont get how can a brother be obstracle to their sibblings…
A-di..
t-han..
A-(hugs her)tq so much..actually bhai is not like this..hes made to be so..
anyway mahi dii..
M-what?
diii hahaah!beter call me mahii.
A-oky mahi dii..opps i mean mahi..
M-u guys better start from tommo…
as bhai ll not be their..tommo..
but never cm alone tommo..if at all we are caught..
i can say that u came with omi..
once he meets u and omi together then i ll say u bth became frnds…
and then u can cm often..
M-wow…muhhhhuu(gives flying kiss)u are the best mohit…
T-ahem ahem..
we are still here…
M-what?dont run horses oky..
just frnds…
next day…
twinkle in party..
kunj is also present their..
and it was announced the best bussinessman award goes to mis Twikle Taneja..
rather say best bussiness women award!
Twinkles POV’
i proceedeed to t ake the award..
all were praising me..my eyes went on the best person of my like my omi..
who was their just to cheer me..with my rather say our little sister..
she was jumping and clapping..
and cheering me..
“dii u r the best”
s..i knew these two were my life i can surender my life to them then their wish of seeing me as n this stage was also fulfilled by me..
n i was happy…!
as i proceeded down back i saw the best..
s the person who ruined my life years ago was their…
i was like y the hell god cant wish to see me happy..
days went on..and on…mahi started guiding amya..
and sucessfully with mahis guidence amya wrote the exams..
Ding dong!
the bell rang..
twinkle entered a big mansion…
she saw the board Sarnas..
but ignored it as their are many sarnas in the world…
she saw amya their..
amya ran and hugged her tight…
and twriling her..
shouting jumping and wahat not…!
T-congrats!
A-tq diii..
T-accha wr is mohit..
A-u know na wr might bhai b and wt he might be doing..
obvio he is with my future bhabhi…
T-ask ur partents if i can meet them…
A-did u?
T-yeah!actually..
A-let me call nani dadi and bebe…
T-hmm..
amya gets them…
and says all with the excitment…
Bebe-but beta..elders are supposed to get rishta,,
T-i agree…actually only dadi stays with us…here…
maa and all are in london…
and dadi needs rest..i cant let her do these all..
Bebe-wow beta…i really like u…
are u married…?
matlab ur elder than mahi u shd be married first….
T-i know its an custom but sometimes a daughter ca also becm son and take responsibilites..
i have few more left…after they all are completed i ll think of my marriage…bebe..
btwn shall i think it as s..from u guys..
actually mohit said me..
that its already s..
but i taught..
its better if i speak to u all too once..
Nani-beta…if u are so sanskari then obvio ur sister ll also b..
i m ready…
Dadi-me too
and usha ko mein batadungi..
A-dont worry maa knows all..
bhai said her
bebe-but v shd consult him too..
mohit-no need..its my life i can handle it..
i dont care if he is or not n my marriage..
i m happy that most precious members of my life are with me..
next day..
Twinkles POV’
i got a blank call that day..
i taught who would call be in such early morning..
as it was just 3..
i with great difficulty picked the call..
“whos it?” i grumbled…
“hiii babs..how are u”a voice choked from other side..
i was terified to listen the same voice….
i was like “dont know what game is now god again planning to pay with me”
he said”meet me if u love ur sister”
“what the hell..dont u dare go near her..else i ll chop u”i screwd
“then meet me”he said..i m right at ur home..enterance..
come to backyrd..i ll b waiting for u…
i went to back yard..and what he said to me took my life..
ss..it was the beast..the same beast…of my life…
he thretnd me to marry him else he would brak the alliance…
pov ends…
a tear dropped from her eye
(camera rolled..she was on the sage..
dressed like a queen..
lets go near to her..
omg she wore mangalsutra…had filled her vermillon…lets c what happens now)
a thudd…voice came..
s it was the noice of the door getting locked..
a guy walked in..
it was shown to be as kunj….
“so how are u feeling mrs Kunj sarna…”kunj spoke..
“how would a girl feel..
s..i m married to the guy i loved the most whom i felt as my everything..
but to my utter itterence….it was the same guy who destryed me life..who raped me… who is coward…who killed my child…,
what do u think i feel ” said twinkle in a firm voice..
“and do u love me still”kunj said..
“no way..i just hate u..to the cor..who killed his own child..
who is a beast…
did u listen what i say s..u are a beast…
from whom his own family fears”,twinkle repled…
k-“aww..twinkle this is what i like n u..
u r hatred..is what makes me more crazy…this is what i love in u…must say…u are still hot…the same fragrence..(going towards her..touching her sensuily…)
twinkle pushed him…
k-dont u dare do it again…
he pinned her to wall..and placed his rough lips on hers…
she mouned n pain…
“this to make me angry”,and when ever u do so..i ll reply u in this way..
oky baby..
now lets start…
T-what
K-suhagrat…!
t-what?dont even dare..
K-dont worry…i wont…till u approve..
he goes to couch and sleeps…
thats it…
so how was it guys….
sudden change over of story na?
dont worry u have many shocks waiting for u….
hopw u like it..
throw the tantrumssss!
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regards….
22 Comments
the episode was full of thrill and suspense liked it very much good work keep it up
awesome…
Amazing
Omggg it was like wat the hell.. how cme a person kill his own child.. there r many cases of humiliating wives.. bg killing own children is really weird… anyways.. u r awesomeee… actually its a very ittu sa word to describe u… u r far more better than that.. love u!!!!?????????????
Awesome ….
Amazing
ohh i liked it so much bt i dnt like this beast kunj….hope he changes soon..
U trust me na?
Crazy….wow….what a brilliant writer u are…..I’m so happy with ur story ….keep it up….superb….was a really long episode…. Pls post regularly…..
Crazy ….crazy…… Crazy….. Crazy ur an amazing wrter I just loved it so much ur story is such osmmmmmmmm do cont asap plzzzzzzzzz plzzzzz
Hey crazy ur multi talented yaar…hw u manage to write so good…plz post nxt soon n post twinj love strategy also…ur both ffs r awesome I don’t hv words to describe hw gud dey r…plz try to b regular…
Crazy tu na puri crazy hai…kya likhati hai yaar….osum epi….mind blowing…..ctd soon.,.shocks ki dukaan, ur epi are just like chota pack, bada dhamaka
I just loved ur epi waiting for the next..post it asap
Hey crazy di… U r just fab..awesome….. Crazy.. Lovely… Amazing… Marvelous.. And what not…..and if any time it happens that u r unable 2 recognize me then remember that only I call u ‘crazy di’as even it sounds crazy….??????its ur cutie only..
.love u di and thanks 4 permission…
??????????? what was that??? Hey crazy u always manage to keep suspence in ur stories…. The beast kunj…marriage… Baby…past…omg it was superb
I hope u will post next epi tomorrow… I will be eagerly waiting for it??
omg .u write such good stories !! i m speechless di
Nyc bt whn will u post lov strategy nxt part waiting g 4 it n plzz reveal d left out parts kunj proposing twinkle n all
crazy u have made me crazy after ur ff..
U r really crazy! !! Muuaaah! Luvd it!
Plz kunj ko jaldi change kardo!
crazy ua srsly crazy heheh the epi was hott hehe
Awesome
crazy i was confused between povs and present time in both your ff and can’t able 2 recognise
please make it more clear
anyways epi was superbbbbbbbbb