hiii guys as uh all know m ending my first ff “Twinj- A heart of love” here r the links http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=Twinj-+A+heart+of+love+
u can read my os “Profound Love In Heavy Rain” http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=Profound+Love+in+Heavy+Rain+……..+OS
u can read my intro here http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=love+in+enimity+……..+can+it+happen+%3F%3F%3F
so this is my new ff hope u will like it n yeah whoever want to connect wid me on fb specially hima n akansha uh can send me the request uh jst have to type my email id in the search box my email is [email protected] plss connect n comment plssss
here is the first epi
TANEJA MANSION
A big room is shown when a girl is laughing if girl then obviously our twinkle taneja n a guy is struggling to stop her laughter if boy that too in taneja mansion then obviously our yuvraj taneja aka uv
T- hehehe……uv tu ….hehehe….pass….hehehehe …uv acha .last tym bol de plsss
U- twinkle i topped in the class
T- pheeehehehheheheheheh
U- is liye isliye ni bata rha tha main apna result
T- ab tu soch uv tera paper kisne check kiya hoga heheehehe tu toh fail hote hote paas ho gaya re hehehe…….main chali maa ko gud news dene
twinkle runs from there n goes to leela
T- maaa maa … maaa sun rhe ho kyaa aap ….. kaha ho maaa??
L- haa putaar bol
T- maaa uv ….. hehehehe….uv….hehehe…….uv…..heheheeh
L- teri gaadi uv…hehe..uv…hehe pr q ruk rhi h aage v badh
T- maaa uv fail hote hote top kr gaya
L- what ??? main aaj party rakh rhi hoon
U- koi jaroorat ni h maa i know u r nt at all happy n plsss i dont want ur party plsss aapka jhootha pyaar mujhe ni chahiye
T- uv rhne de main tujhe party doongi 1 week tk tujhe jaha jaha party krni h tu kr skta h aur haa bss sach bata de ki tu fail ho gya h
U- twinkle ki bachi
T- aaaahhhh…..dekh uv maine avi tkk kisi ke saath suhaag raat ni mani h toh mere bache kaha se aaye bol
they both r in the hall so they start running there when uv takes a pillow twinkle is moving first right then left then again right then again left heheh nw twinkle runs out uv also follows her they both r on the road doing tamasha ( same wid me hm hmesha bahar apne lane me hi ldte h lol)
taneja mansion is opposite to sarna mansion and alisha was coming in her full attitude uv throws the pillow twinkle bends pillow hits alisha on her face twinkle starts laughing holding her stomach
T- hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahaha ……. omg yaar uv heheheh tune toh galat bandi ko maar diya … hehehe
A- aaaaaaaahhhhhh……. hw dare uh
U- ohh hello it wa jst a mistake okk
A- really it was jst a mistake uh idiot it wasnt a mistake uh did it purpously
U- hey miss makeup jst cut the crab main aur woh v tmhe marroonga kvi ni mere ghar ke pillow kharab ho jayenge do uh get that
kunj comes there
K- what happened baby ???
A- bhai see this idiot isne mujhe mujhe alisha sarna ko pillow se maara
T- hehehehehe…… uv … tune isse isse alisha sarna ko pillow se maara …. heheheehhe
K- oh hello miss taneja uh dont have any right to speak about my sister
T- whatever mr sarna m talking with my bro so u too dont have any right to interuppt in between m so srry to ask bt dont uh have any manners
K&T- uhh ( pointing their fingers)
both turn twiraj n shanj( alisha n kunj) leave to eo mansion
shanj r in kunjs room
A- bhai y did uh talk so rudely wid bhabhi i mean it wasnt her fault that idiot uurrghh uvv did that
K- i know aaaloo bt surjeet uncle was behind us
A- ohhh….
twiraj are in uv room
U- twinkle why did uh talk to kunj so rudely
T- are my bacha surjeet uncle was there thats y we did this
U- ohhh
T- acha btw really uh topped n or uh failed
U- twinkle m nt going to leave uh….
T- heheh pehle pakar toh le …hehehe
U- hehe
they have a sis bro moment
precap– uv and alisha are fighting twinkle comes n starts fighting wid them usha n leela joins them kunj comes n twinj fight then a competition luthras arrival
20 Comments
Omg kystal di it ws jus amazing all d epi wen ws reading I ws jus laughing hehehehehhe u made me smile bcz I ws so sad u kno abt it btw do cont asap plzzzzzzzzz
thxxx zikra
Nice loved it
thxxx sam
whoo….jakkas start…hehe,,,i know it became a bit tapoori type so…..mindblowing epi krysti…hope u liked ur new name
i loved it ritzii n yeah plss continue your ff
Krystal it was just mind blowing.BTW guys have u checked Jasmin bhasin’s Instagram she has just updated a pic with sidhant wishing him for his future and tommorow is kunj’s last epi in tei. will miss him very badly.
ohhhooo…. OMG!!!!!! krystal…… u jst rocked… superbbbbb……… luv u n ur ff… update nxt asap…
Wooooow…..Fabulous Episode…..Love this new track
Hey Krystal loved it
It was osum??
wow..osum…
Oh god! It’s amazing.. and, do twinj already love each other? Yes right?
Hey di..loved it…it was awesome like u??????????
Krystal superb…ctd soon
it’s too too good ???
i was laughing like anything ???????
awesome
Really loved it…..awesome….
Awesome strt krystii ….. loved it ….
lovely my love
awesone my cutieeeeeee 🙂