Hi all! I am Shruthy and basically a silent reader but this going-on track made me write something on ViDha. Actually I used to imagine some plots for myself but never wrote them on something. Anyways! So this is an imaginary continuation after Viplav dropping Dhaani off at the ashram. And yeah, I started writing one week ago, so basically the story hasn’t been inspired by the real storyline (you might understand later). Episodes will be divided in parts.
Hopefully you will like it!
Episode 1 – Part 1
Dhaani’s side
Time flies like passing clouds and Dhaani still waits for Viplav desperately. Sitting in the corner of her bedroom in the ashram under Gods’ pictures, she looks upside her head thinking about her fate. Suddenly some smokes cover the floor making Dhaani turns her head towards the mirror. She falls on a bright light coming from that same place and blinded by it, she hides her face holding her hand in front of it. She then slowly turns her head towards that direction and gets surprised seeing Viplav standing there, arms crossed and smiling at her. Seeing his figure in front of her, her lips show a big curve on her face.
Dhaani : Viplav?
Viplav : Is it the way you react seeing your husband?
He suddenly forwards his arm towards her asking her to come near him and teary eyed, she looks at his hand. Smiling, she slowly goes to hold his hand in hers when suddenly a voice wakes her up.
… : Dhaani what are you doing?
Dhaani stops moving and looks on her right side to fall on Rajlakshmi looking at her confused. She then looks towards the window and sees nothing was there, neither smokes, nor any bright light and nor her Viplav. She looks at that place astonished not understanding anything and then leans her head on the wall. Rajlakshmi, who can see her pain, goes towards her and sits next to her.
Rajlakshmi : (puts her hand on Dhaani’s shoulder) Don’t worry Dhaani, Jeejaji will surely come to take you back home.
Dhaani : I don’t know Rajlakshmi. More time keeps flying; more I feel getting separated of him.
Rajlakshmi : Then go and meet him. Talk to him, you might feel better.
Dhaani : He doesn’t even want to see my face. Do you really think he will talk to me?
Rajlakshmi : He really loves you Dhaani. I am sure he will. May be if you say sorry…
Dhaani : (angrier) Don’t expect me to forgive them Rajlakshmi. Those who insulted my family (the ashram ladies) don’t deserve my forgiveness.
Rajlakshmi : But you know how much jeejaji loves his family. Though it’s true, he will never believe you if you say anything bad about them.
Dhaani : That’s the problem. But if he really loves me, then he might know that I never lie and at any cost I won’t insult his family like they do with me and my hermitage because you are my real family. And if he can’t trust my words, then he might not love me that much.
Rajlakshmi : What happened to you Dhaani? Don’t you trust jeejaji’s love for you anymore?
Dhaani : Of course I do, but I fear he doesn’t anymore.
She closes her eyes and sighs.
Dhaani : I wish a miracle does happen that could vanish all our misunderstandings and reunite us once again.
Suddenly a flower falls on her head which makes her eyes open and look above her head. She then looks at the flower again with a shocked expression and holding it in her hand, stands up, followed by Rajlakshmi. Dhaani looks at the flower and then looks at Gods’ pictures under what she was sitting.
Rajlakshmi : (puts her hand on her shoulder smiling) See! Even God heard you and gave his blessings. Don’t worry, everything will be fine.
Dhaani smiles seeing the God’s idol and then looking at Rajlakshmi, hugs tightly her friend.
At Viplav’s side
Viplav is in his room sitting on the bed looking at a small frame of Dhaani’s picture. He stares at her smile that makes him smile and slowly caresses her face.
… : Viplav ?
Hearing that voice, he gets back to his senses and looks around him searching for her.
Viplav : Dhaani ?
He then notices someone sitting next to him on the bed. He turns his head all by sudden and sees Dhaani there, sitting on the bed, wearing a red and black coloured chiffon saree, her hair flying in the air, and that smile that attracts him the most. Seeing her so, he stares at her surprised but more than that, mesmerized.
Dhaani : What ? Why are you looking at me like this?
Viplav : Dhaani you …
Dhaani : (cute smile) … are looking gorgeous right ? (puts a finger on her cheek looking up) What would you say? (turns her head to look at him) Gorgeous, no?
Viplav : More than that!
Dhaani : Oh really ?
Viplav : I don’t have words to describe it.
Dhaani : Then how will you tell me ?
Viplav : I have many other ways for that.
Dhaani : Like?
He suddenly holds her hand in his, looking at her and the kisses slowly in her hand which makes her smile shyly.
Suddenly he gets waken up by a hand on his shoulder. He opens his eyes and realises he was dreaming. He then turns to see whose hand it is and falls on Kamini. He gets shocked and immediately stands up to remove her hand from his shoulder and walks forwards showing his back to her. Kamini gets surprised of his reaction and quite irritated.
Viplav : Kamini… You, here?
Kamini erases her irritated expression from her face and, smiling, goes towards Viplav slowly.
Kamini : Actually … I wanted to see how you were now. After all what happened …
Viplav : Please don’t mind, but I wish not to talk about it now. I … I want to be alone for some time.
Kamini : Alright if you wish so. But yeah, please remember that if you are in need, (looking at him) I am here for you always.
Viplav turns back to face her, confused of what she said.
Kamini : I mean, if you need a friend to whom you would like to talk.
Viplav : That’s really sweet of you. Thank you so much.
Kamini : You don’t have to thank me for this. All the pleasure is mine.
She walks away from there while Viplav does the same to look somewhere else. Suddenly Kamini stops walking and turns back to look at Viplav.
Kamini : (thinks) Don’t worry darling, only few days more. After that, we will happily live our life together, only us, in our own world. Where there will be no Dhaani to disturb us. (smirks)
Precap : Dhaani feels unwell.
Credit to: Shruthy
19 Comments
Wow Shruthy, you are an amazing writer, I loved it thoroughly and please unite them soon!!
That’s really sweet of you Maria!❤️ Thanks for liking it.
Haha woh toh wakt hi bataega.? But don’t worry, there is no IKRS without ViDha’s love story right? ? They will meet, but after some drama. ?
Shruthy its too good. Superb. Splendid job. Go on dear. Loved it.
Thank you so much dear! Glad you do. ☺️❤️
Shruthy good yess as maria said unite them sooooon
Thank you Nancy!
Sure will try to make it as soon as possible 🙂
Shruthy…go on dear…amazing one…. don’t let Kaamini daayan win even in your ff
Haha no worries. ViDha will always be winner whatever happens 🙂
Shruthy you have an amazing…amazing..writing skills..???
No words..?
I loved reading it.. I loved it..❤
Your words were so powerful..
Keep writing dear..?
Aww that’s really sweet of you! I just write like that but well glad you guys like it. 🙂
Thank you thank you thank you <3
Sure no worries! I am already preparing a different ViDha ff but dont know when I will be posting. Anyways thanks for liking again and again 🙂
Please post it soon
I loved the way your write…left an imprint in my heart❤
Wow awesome 🙂
thanks 🙂
Shuruthy it was very very good.. thanks for writing on this track .. please unite vidhani soon
Thank you so much 🙂 Well the plot just came into my mind and I felt to share 🙂 haha yeah will bring them together for sure 🙂
Shrutty it is really fabulously written. The best part is that it is on the tracks of current ikrs. Could feel vidhàni’s pain n really got irritated on kamini. Great ✌??✌i know u wud unite them i wish cvs also read your ff n remake the current track. ?
How sweet! Thank you so much <3 Yeah that's what made me write in fact 🙂
Of course I will but not now 😉 LOL well let's see what happens in tomorrow's episode. I am just sad we won't have Eisha anymore :/
WOW AMAZING SHRUTHY I REALLY LOVED VIPLAV’S IMAGINATION
WAITING FOR NEXT PART
shruthy really enjoyed it…..keep it up