Hi guys,hope u read the 43rd episode posted on tuesday …I don’t know how this will be,still,to avoid gap between episodes I am posting something,spare the rod here,please…
(In that we saw Sanskar,Sumi-Swara conversation,Swara – Sanskaar conversation at his office)
Scene 1:
Same evening,cafeteria …
Swara was waiting for Sanskaar there,he returned a lot late because of his work,Swara is clearly annoyed and as soon as she saw Sanskaar coming,got up and was about to shout,quickly realised where they are and composed herself and said, ‘’Oh,you came so early,I thought you will have work till morning”,Sanskaar who understood the teasing tone in her voice,gave her a strong look and said, “yea,had plans to stay awake till morning ,but was scared if the one who I left here will eat the manager also out of hunger,so I came early,why you didn’t like?”,Swara stares at him, Sanskaar continues, “Will u stand here like this,come ,we will go,if it rains ,will be difficult to drive …”,saying this he looks at her bag and says, “yea,I know it is my duty to lift this,no need to hint that ok..”Swara quickly says, “no I was planning to lift one,now that you wish to lift that also, I am not interfering,I don’t like to hurt people’s feelings,give me the keys,I will go wait there,come fast,ok..saying this she goes near to take keys from his pocket,Sanskaar is surprised by her behaviour and is staring at her whereas Swara who grabbed the keys had started walking…
Scene 2:Parking area..
Swara is standing near the car,she is throwing the keys in the air and catching it continuously . Sanskaar after keeping the luggage,asks her to drive and opens the door for her,Swara comes near him,pulls his hand and keeps the keys inside and signs him to get inside and drive,she goes to the other side,gets inside,extends her neck and through expressions asks him if he will start or not,he gets inside,looks at her,she again frowns and asks “what?”,Sanskaar sits straight and takes a deep breath,closes his eyes , prays for a second and starts,Swara looks at him and says, “oh good habit,you always pray before you start,I haven’t noticed…”,Sanskaar in his usual tone says, “ah,usually I pray in my mind only ,but now when this kind of an antique piece is to be transported,I have to pray,don’t know from which all angles troubles will come,no?Swara leans to press his neck ,he shouts, “Swara,sit properly,if we hit somewhere,not just the two of us,many others will be in trouble,atleast for them,listen to me,ah,I will switch on some music,either listen to that or close your eyes and sleep,I think latter would be better for me…Swara gives a naughty smile and says, “yea,that will be better for you,so ,I wont do that,why Sanskaar,we have been married for some time,now,I am not that bad,ah,may not be as good as Sanju,still…..ah,I wonder why you haven’t fallen in love with me,yet??”,Sanskaar applies a sudden brake and takes a bottle of water,gulped down and then looks at her and says, “Swara,it is just a few days that you left from cottage,no?I mean when was Lucky’s engagement?,ah just a few days”he rubs his forehead and continues, “I don’t understand what happened to you after that,why are you behaving like this yaar,simply going on talking,talking and talking,give some rest to that tongue ,it must be begging…”
Swara listens carefully,adorned a serious look and told him, “yaar Sanskaar,we have known each other for years,you noticed that I am hyperactive now,ok,just consider that I got the license now”,Sanskaar suddenly asks, “ah,what license?”,Swara replies, “wife,I am your wife now,massive change in status that is,now I can behave however I want to,but you tell me,you were always that patient,loving ,caring,ideal boy,why are you getting irritated easily now,in fact,you are losing your temper with every word of mine,what happened,stress due to the job or…..”?she leans towards him,he looks at her seeing that and asks “or?”,she looks straight into his eyes and replies, “or,you are afraid you will fall in love with me?eh?”,Sanskaar for a moment blankly stares at her,is about say something,swallows,and gives the bottle to her and tells her, “you drink some water…”,he is about to start the car,Swara has no intention to leave him,asks him, “but Sanskaar,I didn’t ask for water,I asked something else…”,Sanskaar ignores the question ,raises the voice in the system and behaves as though he is driving with full concentration,where as Swara leans backward to the seat,looks at him by gently tilting her head towards his side,enjoys his nervousness,smiles at him….(it is not that naughty Swara who Sanskaar saw a couple of minutes back,all her love for him is clearly evident in those eyes……….)
Scene 3:
After some time…
“Sanskaaaaaar”,Sanskaar again applies a sudden brake hearing that scream and asks her, “what happened Swara,why are you shouting?,he lowers the volume and looks at her,Swara points towards outside and says, “look,I want to have something from there”,Sanskaar leans to her side and finds that it is a road side restaurant,he gives a strong look to her and says, “Swara,where is all this going,some worm is there or what?,is there any space left?,see,I have no problem in buying,but you know ,no?outside food,you have a sensitive stomach,is it necessary now?,we will go home,cook something and eat,I will also join you”She pleads, “please Sanskaar please,last time I had seen this place,but since I was dressed up for the function ,I couldn’t get down “.
Sanskaar nods,takes his wallet and says, “ok,come”Swara leans towards him out of excitement as though to kiss his cheek for agreeing,suddenly realises what she was about to do,simply pats his cheek and then softly rubs it and says, “should wash properly after having something,I had to clean this now”,Sanskaar who partly understood what she was about to do,asks her, “you didn’t see this till now,now only you saw the remnants,after all,I didn’t have anything properly today,then what dirt that was……?”Swara ,to wind up the topic says, “ah,I don’t know,u come,we will go…”,Swara as they walked towards the place,found the area crowded and is a little uncomfortable,but in no mood to go back,she felt like holding his hand,but is in dilemma to do that or not,Sanskaar who saw the crowd there,slowly held her hand,Swara looked at him in surprise,she wanted that but never expected such a sweet gesture from him,he looked at her ,in a serious yet soft tone said, “I know some stubborn ghost has entered my wife,so she wont go back even if I ask her to,so as a good husband ,it is my duty to buy what my wife wants,so I am holding her hand and taking her that side…”saying that much seriously he bursted out into laughter,Swara who was looking at him lovingly smiles hearing the tone change and laughter..Sanskaar who was still holding her hand started walking but Swara pulled his hand with both her hands and he stopped and looked at her,Swara,softly said, “it is so good to see you laughing Sanskaar,I know this laughter had vanished because of me,but,trust me,I just wish that you keep smiling like this always…”,Sanskaar smiled hearing her and said, “look Swara,if I always keep smiling,people will think something is seriously wrong wih me,so just take that ‘always’ back from your wish”,Swara shows a fake anger and hits his shoulder softly…they walked towards the restaurant…
Scene 4:
Same night ,cottage….
Swara and Sanskaar has reached the cottage,Sanskaar goes to take bath and after some time comes out,he tells Swara to shift to Seema aunty’s room if she wants to,Swara whose intention is to spend maximum time with him doesn’t agree and tells him that since Seema aunty’s belongings are there in the other room ,she doesn’t want to mess that up and that she will stay in the same room with Sanskaar,saying this she slowly rubs her tummy ,excuses herself and rushes to the washroom…after some time Swara comes out,Sanskaar who felt that something is wrong,slowly walks out ,Swara,after some time is seated on the bed,she is holding her stomach and rubbing continuously,she tries to lie down but is not able to,she gets up and again lie down,after some time ,she calls Sanskaar,Sanskaar rushes inside,seeing her face itself he understood that something is wrong,Sanskaar sat near her,Swara is going on rubbing her stomach,Sanskaar stopped her,and asked, “how many times ?Swara said, “4 times already,still feel like going,I am exhausted yaar,Sanskaar,I should have listened to you,omg,I will die now….”,Sanskaar slowly held her face,made her sit properly and took a comb and tied her hair,he then opened the windows and came back and said, “shall we go to hospital ?Swara says “no,no,I want to sleep yaar”,Sanskaar made her lie down slowly and said, “I know it is not right to scold you or blame you now,but I had expected this and that is why I told you,but ,no problem dear,you will be fine,I am here,no?I will bring a lime tea,you will be fine yaar,he got up to leave…Swara held his hand and asked him to stay there,he agreed and slowly patted her forehead and asked her to sleep,Swara is rubbing her stomach ,he gently held her hand and stopped her,then,first hesitated,later with a confused face,slowly and gently rubbed her stomach…..after some time,he understood that she had slept,slowly got up,covered her with the blanket ,then went,lifted a chair and without making noise kept it near the bed ,sat on it,looked at her,and recalled the day’s events……..
(Not proof read,sorry…)
81 Comments
ya vini you are right.that was my first comment….i couldnt control myself….thats why i comment….becoz you ff is one of my favourite ff. I missed your ff so much……
Dr what happend u are too late. I missed your ff soo much. ….anyway today epi soooo lovely just awesome dr…waiting for next part…..
Lolol…. Swara and Sanskaar as usual awesomeee….. 😀 😀
Superb Vini diii!!!! 😀
btw… u had asked me what I’m doing now?
I just finished my second semester (first year) of college…
I am IT btech student in chennai 🙂 🙂
Baaki sab kahan gaye…
SREEEE…. I hope ur seeing this? How r u? Why u being soo quiet nowadays? Update mat karo… But talk to everyone 🙂 🙂 🙂
Aur vaishu bhi inactive h aaj kal…
Sirf m, vinita aur rups active h 😛 😛
SETHOOOO DI!!! Next epi plzzzzzzz <3 <3 <3
Shraddha ki bacchi… U told u will keep on nagging me… kuch nhi kiya tumne…. Jao… booo…
I said I’ll keep nagging about Ur story duh????? abhi tu humare swasan ko alag karegi na isiliye nagging shuru hoga,,,….. Abhi Kya u thought me aivayi karungi ☹️☹️Shraddha Bohot achi hai Aisa Sab nahi kartiiii???Got it Anju ki bachiiii
nhi… karo nagging tum…
Mujhe dekhna h
baat karo… someone told they will be active :/
Ohhhh Aisa Kya chal Theek hai tu Bhi Kya yaad rakhegi ?? n btw ise active he Krhte hai …?ya so nagging aapko apke a and wali episodes me dikhegi kyuki I aapnee humare swasan ko alag karna jo socha?? tabtak keliye kripaya dheeraj dhare ? OK anjuuu dearrrr
Hi vini di
Finally ur back.. .. I’m so happy today
Now only i saw updates.. But couldn’t comment on ur last updates
Sorry
Today’s epi was awesome and pls try to update regularly
Luv u
Wow u r back again…
Wow vini di what a surprise knock knock you’re here….. So good to see the ff…..
Amazing episode only full of swasan I’m loving this swara a lot a tit for tat way….. Ahh bechara full of frustration now….. He’s completely shocked and confused with swars….. Sometimes I feel like he’s getting 220 volt ka jhatka…..
I loved the car driving drama and the way swara took car keys and walked off without paying a look…
Swasan episode wonderful…. Keep posting…. N love you
Sweet, but again chotu wala update. No problem. Post next part soon. Thank u so much.
awesome….waiting for sankys confession…..
Superb superb superb superb superb!!!;
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Vini diiiiiii U killed it!!!!! My God Sarcasm I soooo love it!!!!
Really entire episode is only bat them n their Convoooo ?????????
I dunno wer to start like Pur episode was dhasoooo combo of Snapping n Sweet cute thingssss N this swara is soooo awesome poor sankyy????
But the way he’s snapping back seems like just old days only that Swara earlier wasn’t this awesome lol hahahahah??she was but this one is like wild cat……
Ah Vini di thank you so much for thissss n sooo early I thought again wen I’ll see u but u made it yipeeee tq tq tq
Shraddha and joya di check previous episode’s comments. There are two comments for both of you… ???
Katti……?????aap dono is masum si choti behen ko bhul gaye….
This is for the entire army…………..
My friend kavya(who wrote it started with a hate request..) is writing another ff bring me back to life…she is extremely depressed due to lack of comments……… pls encourage her….I am not promoting her ff but I cannot see her being dejected… she is a very good frnd of mine
Oh how vinitaaa baby don’t be sad….. I din check last episode ke comments lately abhi jaldi she jake karungi ok??? see u der
Vini ws missing u nd ur ff too…. u told u wil b regular… wr r u yaar???
Hw ru??
And sorry ws nt able to comment in last part… bt it ws nice… and wt is swara planning??? She used sanju to excute hr plan..
and today part awesome… lovly aftr many episodes…. hahege swara’s actions are not predictable…. ur awesime vini….
com bck soon.. tc
So happy happy to see this chapter… I really didn’t expected it.
Swasan are awesome as usual ☺☺☺? I really loved it…
It was not my first comment on previous chapter, out was my second.. I had commented on chapter 42 too but I think it was in different name Mona ( Ash).
Pinne chechinde juniorsinekkaalum ethroyo junioraanu njan… Pakshe inganeyaayippoyi enthu cheyyanaaaa
Vini di is back with a bang!!
Yahhoooi?????
Swasan were so cute?????
Swara took his keys!!
Awwww!!
That’s so sweet nd funny!!???
She walked away ignoring him!!
Kitna cute moments hai????
Missed ur ff nd ofcourse uh dii??????
I could not comment on last chappy as I was busy but I had read!
It was damn awesome!
Hello vini di!!,?
How are you? Seeing you after a long time!
Episode was just awesome…sweet and lively….loved it….
Upload soon <3
Fabulous di…swasan were adorable….
Seeing you after a long time?
How are you? Even I had sent you required on fb if you do. Not have any problem please accept it!!….
Back with a bang!;
Upload soon di!!?
Superb
Yayyayyyy Vivi do ur back!!! Love you!
After 2 days you post..it’s ok dear..as ur ff is awsm we will wait any number of days
Awesome episode
Hi guys..thank u for the feedbk..yet to read. Was replying to the pending ones under the previous episode..I will read n respond tomorrow…
Hey di! Happy to c u back.. was waiting for ur epi… it was awesome as always.. love u!!
wowwww yaar…such a wonderful episode
Vini di what is the meaning of ur name???????
U r still awake dr?actually Vini is my first name,I don’t knw if it has some meaning or not,u knw when I asked my mom y they kept this, it was she herself who mixed my dad’s name which has ‘Wi’ sound at the beginning and mom’s pet name which ends with ‘ni’,mummy mixed those two n instead of Wini,made it Vini,that is how they kept this as my first name..middle name is my grandma(ie my Dad’s mom’s name..),and lastly Ross is my dad’s surname….
That’s soooo sweet Vini dii!! 😀 😀
Btw.. i heard u are in B’lore…
I’m coming there on Tuesday!! YAYYYY!!!!
Nice concept….
I think even Nelson Mandela’s wife’s name was Winnie….
awwww… awesome
. scne 4 me jo tha na mera mummma v aise he krte h jb mujhe v hota j swara jsa hlt??????
Aapkho toh hona hi hai…hamesha maggi,ya aisa kuch kaana jo kathi ho???…
?????????? even I know rupsikha….. u love maggi…..
Di its awesome epi….i loved it…..after many days seeing dis convo….poor swara..same like my bro …hahaha…sanky’s concern… Omg…he is always d bst…nd today swara literally acted like child…enjoyed a lot…lazyness gone??….
Vinitha…did seetu di ask me abt telugu marriage rituals!!!????..
Seetu di kya kar rahi ho??itna busy hogayi ho kya…
Shraddha di even i missed listening vaishu ki bachi frm u.. Now holidays for u no??but also u r busy aa??
Joya di kya hua…aap mujse baath kyu nahi kar rahi ho…missed u lottt di…
NOTE:
WANTED
NAME: NEEDHI
AGE:17
PLS DO INFORM ME IF ANYONE FIND THIS MENTAL GIRL
😛 😛 😛
Lol…
Haha….am sure needhi will kill u…????
Vaishu yaar , u r too crazy…
Us Dr am going to shift to hostel tmrw..vaishu… Lil bcy…
SHRADDHA.. This is for you!!!
im not gonna separate swasan… bharosa nhi h kya mujhpe?
Vaise bolo na… tum fb me ho??
vini… Huh… finally u r back… Missed u a lot dear… I had to daily scroll up telly updates to check whether u updated r nt… Thanku soo much dear for d update…nd I wish u update nxt part soon….
Vini…superb epi..this epi is again connected.. Haha..u understand what I hint…nice
Loved naughty side of swara..
Vinitha, anjali, shradha, mickey , joya,vini, vaishu, needhi,Sree…good after noon…
Yes anjali posted my next epi…
Vinitha…vaishu ki bachi..u didn’t give any explanation about the thelungu culture…
Ohh u asked me only….ok ok…..i will tell…..so u want to know abt telugu marriage culture???
I was wanted to know about Telugu food and festivals….
Even I am writing a note…
NAME: SHEETAL ( SHEETU TAI,JOYA DI,SHAYARI DIDI)
CITY: PUNE
AGE: 23
EDUCATION : ENGINEERING LAST YEAR
KNOWN AS PUNAR JANAM OF MIRZA GHALIB…..
WANTED… WANTED…WANTED…
IF ANYONE CAN TRACE HER INFORM VINITA
(Vaishu i copied u?)
Festivals I know…bz am also a south Indian..food little bit I know…
But don’t know about marriage rituals.. That’s why I asked
Vinu dis is cheating u copied me ???…but its ok coz i also wanted to missing note of joya di along with needhi…
Ok i will tell all i mean abt festivals, food nd marriage nd all ..i will tell dat tomorrow ok…