Hey guys riya here and this is my new first episode of this ff hope u all will like it so let’s start it-
……………………………………….ANDHERA BHI NA JAANE KITNE RAAZ CHUPAE BAITHA HAI ( No one knows how many secrets r buried under this darkness)
……………………………………………………KOI ISSE ANDHERE MEIN DE RAHA HAI DASTAK (Someone is coming from this darkness)
Episode start in a lonely long highway ,it is soo dark and so silent no one is present there except some some street dogs ……………………………….
Camera moves towards a temple ,a famous temple of godess KAALI .A priest is chanting some mantras with closed eyes suddenly he open his eyes and soon it get wide as if he has sense someone presence immediately he stood up and said loudly-
PRIEST- i think he is coming yah i am ri8 he is coming !!! today’s night belong to him now he will surely ruin there life yah he will…………………..
song start playing in BG- (MUSKAAN JHOTI HAIN FROM TALAASH)
RAAT MEIN HI JAAGTE HAIN
YEH GUNAAHON KE GHAR
INKI RAAHEIN KHOLE BAAHEIN
JO BHI AAYE IDHAR
AA HAA……………………………………………………….
(Now camera shows that lonely highway that was completely drench in darkness)
YE HAI GUM RAAHON KA RASTA
MUSKAANEIN JHOOTI HAIN
PECHANEIN JHOOTI HAIN
RANGEENI HAI CHHAYI
PHIR BHI HAI TANHAAYI………………………………
(The dogs who were sleeping few min above suddenly got awake as if they sense something weird then they start barking so loudly)
KAL INHI GALIYON MEIN
IN MASLI KALIYON MEIN
TOH YEH DHOOM THI
(Then a car is shown which is coming on that highway with a averge speed suddenly it stops at the middle of the road with a jerk)
JO ROOH PYAASI HAIN
JISMEIN UDASSI HAI
WOH HAI GHOOMTI
SABKO TALASSH WOHI
SAMJHE YE KAASH KOI
(Then the car start and now it is running with it’s full speed as if it is going to lose it’s balance then a man throw himself from the driver seat and then the car get hitted by a tree and suddenly it catches fire)
YEH HAI GUMRAHOON KA RAASTA
MUSKAAN JHOOTI HAIN
PECHANEIN JHOTI HAIN
RANGEENI HAI CHHAYI
PHIR BHI HAI TANHAAYI……………………………………………………………
(Now the camera moves from the car that was burning to the young man who was lying on the highway unconsiously)
HALKE UJAALO MEIN
HALKE ANDHERO MEIN JO IK RAAZ HAI
KYU KHO GAYA HAI WOH
KYA HO GAYA HAI KI WOH NARAZ HAI
AYE RAAT ITNA BATAA,TUJHKO TO HOGA PATA………………………………………
AA HAA………………………………………………………………………………………………………..
(Now again silence blew in air and darkness start swallowing the higway)
YEH HAI GUMRAAHON KA RAASTA
MUSKAANE JHOOTI HAI
PECHAEIN JHOOTI HAI
RANGEENI HA CHHAYI
PHIR BHI HAI TANHAAYI………………………………………………………..
Now the screen shift towards a big mansion which was decorated soo beautifully and inside the mansion a big party was on it’s full swing then a girl call someone’s name
GIRL- ragini !!! ragini !!
Listening her name a beautiful girl turn her back ,she was looking so pretty in pink and diamond embroiderd gown ,Then her simile and then her big beautiful eyes r shown she is none other than RAGINI- MRS RAGINI LAKSH NANDA wife of LAKSH NANDA one of richest business man of mumbai
Then she move towards the girl
RAGINI- what happen tina ?? why r u calling me ??
TINA- uff !! ragz common yaar today is ur b’day party and where is ur handsome husband ?? all we r waiting 4 him
Listening this ragini become little sad and then slowly said
RAGINI- vo…vo u know na nowaday laksh is so busy in his work so i think he is on a way
TINA- common yar from 1 hr ur saying the same line look at the clock dear only 20 mins r left for 12 o clock !!!
RAGINI- relax relax tina look u guys enjoy i am going to call him now happy !!!
TINA- yah come fast we all r waiting 4 u
With this ragini left from there and lock herself in her room and start dialling laksh no.
RAGINI- common laksh just pick up the phone !!!! oh god just pick up the phone laksh !!!
Then she throw her cellphone on floor and said with losts of anger
RAGINI- damn it !!! this is too much now ,only work work and work no space 4 wife now come i will see u, i will ignore u then only u will repent 4 ur mistake
With this she came near towards the mirror and start caring her makeup suddenly she saw someone image in the mirror it was looking like as if someone is standing behind her immediately she turn back but no one was there then again she notice the same thing and again she turn back but still no one was there
RAGINI- what is happening with me ?? i think…………
Before she could say anything tina called her from downstair
TINA- ragzz come fast darling see few min r left 4 ur b’day
RAGINI- yah i am coming
With this she left from there and then a big picture of raglak which was hanging on the wall the blood start oozing out from laksh’s eyes as if he is crying with tears of blood.
Here ragini who was coming from upstair was so surprised because the mansion’s hall was so dark
RAGINI- what happen suddenly ?? why is there so much darkness
Then she came near on the middle of the hall and was about to say something but suddenly someone catches her from waist ,a small simile appear on her lips then a manly voice say so softly near her ear
VOICE- my ragu was missing me !!
With this he hug her from back but still there were dark and they can feel each other presence
RAGINI- laksh ? what is this ? is this the time to come in ur wif…………………….
Before she could say anything he plant a soft kiss on her neck
LAKSH- shhhhh …………..don’t say anything just feel this moment !! i luv u so much
With this he tighten his grip and hug her more tightly
LAKSH- do u know what ragu ur laksh is nothing without u !! u r my life !!! ur my jaan !!! and ur my angel
Listening these cheesey words from her husband ragini blushed hard ,she was feeling so special in his arm although she is habitual of his embrace but now she is feeling something strange something so beautiful that even i can’t describe in words ( how can i ?? even till now i haven’t feel like that lol)
When laksh notice this that his angel is blushing like this he said so softly near her ear
LAKSH- whenever u blush like this i always lose my control
With this he plant a soft kiss on her shoulder
song start playing in BG ( TUMHE APNA BANANE KA FROM HATE STORY 3)
TUMHE APNA BANANE KA JUNOON
SAR PE HAI KAB SAI
(Then ragini turn towards him and hug him tightly )
MUJHE AADAT BANA LO IK
KHENA YEH TUM SE HAI
(Then laksh break the hug and put his hand around her waist and pull her closer towards him both were so close to each other and were lost in each other eyes )
TUMHE APNA BANANE KA JUNOON
SAR PE HAI KAB SE HAI
SAR PE HAI KAB SE HAI
(Then ragini hold his cheek and start kissing him on his lips laksh also reciprocate with her)
JISM KE SAMANDER MEIN
IK LEHAR JO THEHARI HAI
USME THODI HARQAT HONE DO……………………………
(Then laksh broke the kiss and bent her slightly in his arm and then touch her face with his finger ,ragini closes her eyes to feel his presence )
SHAYARI SUNAATI INN DO NASHEELI AANKHON KO
MUJHKO PAAS AAKE PADHNE DO
ISHQ KI KHWASHISHON MEIN
BHEEG LO BAARISHON MEIN
AOO NA………………………………………………………………..
(Then he start dancing with a salsa move)
TUMHE APNA BANANE KA JUNOON
SAR PE HAI ,KAB SE HAI
SAR PE HAI KAB SE HAI
(Then she close her eyes to feel his presence but then she realise that she is alone immedately she open her eyes and saw light came back but no one was there )
RAGINI- laksh ?? laksh ?? where r u ? laksh ? lak……………..
Then she notice a big box lying on the table on which it was written ” 4 my ragu’ .A big simile came on her lips
RAGINI- oh so this is my gift
She was about to open that gift suddenly her phone rang
RAGINI- hello ?? who is this ??
MAN- hello mam we r calling from city hospital
RAGINI- city hospital ??
MAN- yah wo actually ur husband mr laksh nanda has met with an accident plz come fast !!!
RAGINI- what ??????
With this she drop her mobile from her hand
RAGINI- laksh’s accident ? but laksh was here with me then …………………………………………………………….
Then a hand is shown which was of any dead body who was writting this with his own blood by rubbing his finger against the wall- ” I AM BACK ”
So guys i hope u will like it and yah about YEH HAI AASHIQUI and PYAAR TUNE KYA KIYA (SEASON 2 ) i will soon start them after few days because this ff KHOMOSHIYAN is small it will end in 10 or 15 episode but in between i will surely start them hope u all will understand me love u all bye !!!
24 Comments
Superb and it is so scary didi….
excellent
it’s really scary and awesome
Wow riya I’m so happy to see u… U nailed it girl.. Superb epi n scary too… Raglak romance was superb as usual… Can’t wait for the nxt epi
Interesting…
Sooperb explanation & is it alone movie?
Omg it’s so scary yaar yet awesome… I luved it.. Try to post the next part soon dear..
Awesome… I love horror, and I felt happy reading your FF…. Can’t wait till the next episode, it’s amazing!! Take care and keep smiling.
So who s tat ghost???..
Mind blowing… The imagery was just outstanding!! Keep up the great work!! And Didi, I am also writing a FF here;
“Once Upon a Love Story… A Swasan and Raglak Fan Fiction”
And here is the link for you;
http://www.tellyupdates.com/upon-love-story-swasan-raglak-fan-fiction-episode-3/
Hope you will read it!!
Once again simply superb episode☺
I guess the link is not correct,
http://www.tellyupdates.com/upon-love-storya-swasan-raglak-fan-fiction-episode-3/
Superb.. Waitng for nxt part … Upadate soon ..
Laksh had accident than who was with her or was that her imagination
riya must tel ua an awsome writer.d way u xplain each line,with bg song awesome.i hd xams so hd stopped readng pyar tune kya kiya.bt nw read it in one go.wow yaar awesome.sad ending tat was.i literally cried.im vry much attachd twrds raglak.n while reading last episode tears were flowing without my knwledge.a biggg hug.love u swthrt.keep up d gud wrk.i was a silent reader bt aftr reading tat epi i cudnt resist frm comenting.
Awesome as usual Riya lol that part was hilarious that you couldn’t describe that part 😉 :p it is true though anyways the chappy was super cool keep rocking and smiling 🙂 😀
Amazing Awesome Superb
Really eagerly waiting for the upcoming updates
Very interesting dear and eagerly waiting for next episode
omg!! too good
Awesome episode
Awesome. Loved it. Excited for the next update
Awesome as usual. Sorry siso for late reply. I was quiet busy. Waiting eagerly for next episode ☺
awesome story, concept ,everything .
update nxt asap
Superb… totally mysterious nd song selection jst too good
Superb mind blowing story… Plz post daily…
awesome but please continue dilo ke rishte