Swara;I guess you’re right.But just so you know,this is not exactly the way I had envisioned our first anniversary
she pouted He raised an eyebrow
Don:Oh, don’t worry,it’s not even noon yet
he then spanked her behind to get her moving into the bathroom.
Don:Aram se,tikkhe?
Swara was feeling very uneasy even if it was Don doing it,and not some nurse He made her sit on a chair with her forearm extended across the backrest
Don:Form a fist for mesweetheart
She sighed and did so,he then disinfected her skin with some rubbing alcohol and took out the syringe from a their first aid kid drawer
Don:It might sting a bit
he warned She closed her eyes
Swara:Just do it already
He chuckled,she was just too cute.He inserted the needle and began collecting blood.Before she knew it he placed another cotton pad on her skin and withdrew the needle.She opened her eyes
Don:That’s it?
He leaned in and gave her a soft kiss
Don:Wasn’t so bad, was it?
Swara:Are you sure you did it right?
she frowned
Swara:It didn’t hurt at all!
Don:I’m quite sure
he said showing her the syringe, now filled with her blood The sight of it made her dizzy
Swara:Oh God
He chuckled
Don:Ok,let’s get you lying in bed for a few minutes
and as he said so he picked her up into his arms and walked towards their bed
Don:Are you alright?
She nodded
Swara:Yea,don’t know what came over me
Don:It’s a normal reaction.You haven’t eaten.I’ll just get dressed
he took a small plastic container and placed it on her nightstand
Don:Don’t forget about this.Then we’ll eat something down town, alright?
She nodded.As he disappeared into the walk in closet she sat on the edge of the bed to make sure she was feeling alright,then went back into the bathroom taking the container along with her.Don took her to her favorite restaurant,but she didn’t feel like ordering anything she’d normally have
Don:I’m really starting to get worried,you know
Don said
Don:You always have eggs benedict for breakfast here
She wrinkled her nose
Wara:Yea,I don’t know…I feel like just eating a salad.With lots of vinegar
Don had dropped her samples over at a laboratory previously, and they were going to collect the results in only one hour
Don:I have half a mind to call dr Hussain and have him lookat the results as soon as we’re done here
Swara:You’ll do no such thing
she warned.The man is enjoying his Sunday.Waise bhi,there’s nothing wrong with me.I don’t have a sore throat or anything. Maybe it’s just spring asthenia
Don:You’re pale,you’ve lost your appetite,you’re weakened and look like a fragile doll.And frankly,it doesn’t quite suit what I had in mind for tonight
She blushed.Especially since she knew he was right,she was not apt for one of theirall-nighters.
She was looking out the window to their Maserati Granturismo as we waited for Don to return with her test results.She finally saw him approaching the car while talking on the phone.
Swara:Got them?
she asked as he stepped into the car
Don:Mhm
he said as he put his cell away She sighed
Swars:Come on Don,stop being so worried.It’s nothing.You’ll see tomorrow,he’ll probably just give me some vitamins,some Calcium and what not
He nodded and kept his eyes on the road She was beginning to feel bad.She was ruining their anniversary.Minutes later,she was feeling downright sad.She almost wanted to cry.She really struggled to keep it together.She felt like the way back home had lasted forever,for some reason Don was driving awfully slowShe wanted this day tobe perfect,she wasn’t going to spoil it further. Don stopped the car and got out, quickly helping her out of it as well.She noticed he didn’t let go of her hand as they were walking towards the entrance.As soon as she stepped foot inside,she was taken aback.Everywhere she looked she saw red roses.Must have been hundreds.She gasped, looking around.She turned to Don and hugged him tight
Swara:I love you
she said,finally letting a tear fall down her cheeks He sensed she was crying and kissed her
Don:And I,you.Why are you crying?
he cupped her face gently
Swara:I’m sorry
she sighed smilingly
Don:It’s been a very emotional day
He smiled and searched her eyesfor a long time,wiping the tears that were still falling down her cheeks without her consent.
Swara:Don’t be mad
shesaid shaking her head
Swara,:I don’t know what came over me.I love it
she looked around
Don:Why would I be mad?
Swara:Because I’m crying for no reason
she giggled
Don:You’re crying for a reason. You just don’t know it yet
She looked at him questioningly
Don:And how can I be mad? Never.I loveyou,Swara. You’ve changed my life in a way I never thought possible.I can never thank you enough for everything
he cupped her face again, caressing her cheeks with his thumbs
Don:You mean the world to me. Much more than I could ever express.Forget my poetry,that’s nothing.Today I read something that …
he closed his eyes and took a deep breath she furrowed her eyes smilingly
Swara:You mean what I had engraved?That is your poetry
she giggled
Don:No, no
he shook his head still not opening his eyes.When he finally opened them,swara was shocked to see tears in them She even stepped back a bit,she was that taken aback by the sightof Don having tears in his eyes for the first time, ever
Swara:Don…what happened?
He looked at her and gazed at her with a sweet smile,which calmed her down a bit. For a split second,all kinds of thoughts ran through her mind. As if he was preparing to tell her she was terminally ill or something
Don:…A miracle
he finally said,a singular tear escaping his eyes She was all the more confused.Why wouldn’t he tell her already,what was it? She quickly hugged him tight swara:Please tell me,what’s going on?Why are you crying?
He hugged her back,real tight for what seemed like an eternity to Swara.Finally, with a deep breath, he said
Don:A few months back Iwent to see dr.Hussain.He ran some tests and…Ididn’t want to get your hopes up.You may have noticed that I was particularly busy for two weeks when I had to go to Berlin with Sam and you couldn’t join because you had that tournament with the kids
Swara:Yea…
she said hesitatingly.Her mind was racing.How could she forget?Must have been one of the hardest moments for her,to be so far away from him for that long.
Don:In fact,I had to keep away from you
She broke their embrace and looked at him,puzzled Swara:Why?!
Don:Because dr.Hussain couldn’t stress out enough how important it was that we should not have s*x for two weeks
She couldn’t understand a word he was saying.It was as if he was talking in Chinese to her Swara:Don,what are you saying? Please stop this.What’s happening!?
Another tear escaped his eyes
Don:I had my vasectomy reversed,Swara.
She stared at him.It was as if his words were not reaching her ears He took out a piece of paper from his pocket and slowly unfolded it,as if he was afraid to find something else written on it.He looked at it and had to take another deep breath Swara grabbed the paper from his hands and quickly read it. After numbers and values she did notunderstand her eyes fell on a particular phrase
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“consider the patient pregnant when interpretation of test:Beta HCG test = Positive ☑”
Swara screamed,she literally screamed.She covered her mouth immediately but couldn’t stop herself from screaming hysterically When she finally got her eyes off the results and looked back at Don she was trembling
Swara:How…what…how can this be?
Don shrugged biting his lower lip.He didn’t know how to interpret her reaction.Was she happy,was she mad?Was she terrified?But before he could wonder about it further she hugged him tight and began crying
Swara:I can’t believe this! I’m so happy!
Don finally heard the magic words and picked her off the ground hugging her tightly
Swara:I’m the happiest woman in the world,Don!
Later that night,She was almost pleading for Don not to stop.But he was adamant that they should take it easier for the following months She giggled Swara:Trust me.Nothing bad can happen.It’s actually beneficial for the pregnancy
Don:We can’t risk it
he kissed her temple chastely as he held her into his arms.He then looked into his new watch that hehadn’t taken off
Don:It’s been 2 hours.Greedy little kitten,aren’t you?
he added,biting her earlobe She giggled
Swara:I’m beginning to regret gifting you that
Don:I love it.And I loveyou.And your biggest gift is on its way. And I can’t wait
he whispered,caressing her arm with his fingers ashe kissed her shoulder with each sentence
Swara,:I can’t believe I’m pregnant
she whispered
Don:You’re the one who has given me the biggest gift.I never even dreamed it could come true
Swara:You’re my biggest dream that I never thought would come true.You’re what I never knew was missing until I found you. Somehow you’ve always been there,inside of me,just aching to make me complete.You’re my heart’s desire that I never knew existed until you came into my life and opened my eyes
She turned around and looked into his eyes.What she saw was breathtaking.It was more than words could ever say.She kissed him and nestled into his protective arms.She closed her eyes,letting happiness wash all over her.
She was smiling to herself thinking how Don suspected her to be pregnant all these past days but somehow managed to hide his anxiety and wait for their anniversary to findout.And how cleverly he had handled it, careful not to hurt her feelings in the eventuality of a negative result,and therefore,an unsuccessful attempt to reversehis vasectomy.She opened her eyes and looked at the man next to her.
She still couldn’t believe he was laying there next to her.She knew she would never get used to or tired of looking at him, wondering how they got there.It all still seemed surreal.But was very much real.And the proof of it was going to stand right there between them oneday,soon.
__THE END__
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I know u all must be shock how I ended it without giving any hint.actually I really don’t have any option other than ending this ff.
I’m in 12th std. So I have to concentrate on my study.for that I’m going to handover my mobile to my mom.at the time if my brothers she also did the same so now it’s my turn.may be today or tomorrow I’ll give my phone but before that I have to end the ff.that’s why I was posting it so fast.so finally I have complete my work.
So it’s last episode of my ff n last day at tellyupdate.I don’t want this day to come.I made many friends their I’ll miss them all.some ff’s which I read I’ll miss them like hell.don’t know whether I’ll come here again or not but i always miss all of u.
i want to thank all of you that have read my story i started writing it almost 2 months ago! u don’t know how much it meant to me to read all ur wonderful feedback!even those who have not posted any feedback or read it quietly are to be thanked!i truly hope u liked it and that it made u smile or deconnect from ur day to day
problems,worries and what not i also hope i did justice to Don’s character . once u read it all in one go u can see the transformation both the protagonists have suffered more smoothly Hebe?
I have one request with u all.who is reading the last part plz comment bcz.I need it.I have never anyone to comment except one time but today I need your comment.just tell me how u like the story even if it is in the single word.I want everyone to comment not even a single person to miss the comment.itna to expect kar sakti hoon na..I have to say many things but space problem I’ll personally talk to u through comments..I beg u to comment.I wanna thank each n every person who read my ff personally I’m not going to mention their name I’ll thank them personally waiting for your comment.. last request from me…I won’t disturb u or irritate u after this…
Love u all don’t forget me bcz I’ll never ever forget me just remember me in your prayers… Love u all once again n thanx a lot.
Your Ireena
122 Comments
the most beautiful piece ever..!
come back soon
best luck
thanx Stoneheart for your appreciation I wish I could get a chance to come back soon dear.once again a big thank you?
It’s write and can u write a ff on naagin?
sorry dear but I can’t write?
Ohhhhh myy goshhhh!!!!!!!! Such a shock……….oh god hhhhh really i cant believe dat dz ff z no more…..u dnt knw hw i used to wait fr ur update…..hmmm anyway it was really awesome ha thodaa no nt thoda…zyadaa high voltage romance tha itz k…….itz really diffrnt romance thrill suspense evrythng was in ur ff….hum chah kar b bhul nhi sakte…..anyway have a great day…all d best fr ur studies…….thank u byeeeee…..actlly am really feeling veryyyyy bad to say bye…lekin aaj nhi tho kal jaana tho hoga hi….anyways take care byee dear
I know it’s a big shock?…I’m also feeling sad by ending this ff.glad u like the Romance ?. it’s u who find everything in my ff?.I’m also feeling very bad to say bye but it was necessary ?.I’ll miss you too I hope I could see u again bye dear?
Awesome …..
tysm dear?
Beautiful ff…..
All the best for your board exam… ??
thank a lot Vinita?
I never expected this to end like this. Ur ff was a part of my daily routine. My expressions r a mixed??????????? these all r my reactions. I will miss u a lotttt. U became a very good friend of mine. Truly i am in shock. But i understand studies r very important. Now i get why u use to post asap and why u said u will reveal the reason in end??. I am very happy to see this sweet and cute ending. The way u have brought this story is amazing. U r a great writer. Could even day awesome writer. I will miss u????
Good luck for u studies as well as the life ahead. Love u alootttttt dear ???????????????????????????????????????
I will surely wait for ur reply.???
take care????
I know truly I understand how you are feeling right now…I’ll surely miss u the most…you are also special to me…I also find a grt friend in you…I also love your…I never wanted to end this ff but it happens I wish I could see u all again.that’s the reason I used to post as fast bcz I don’t wanted to stop it in middle dear…
studies are most important…now it’s mine time to study…I’m feeling very sad I’m in the verge of crying
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I’m happy that u like the ending…u know I can’t write more but one thing I wanna say u is that ki I miss u a lot dear may u get all the success in your life…love you too dear
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I will miss u very much. Now i am at the verge of crying. Yes now its ur time to study. But plz do come here after ur 12th. Even i wont be able to come here after some months. When i think about it i feel horrible. So i can understand ur feeling. I will always remember u. Is ur real name ireena???
Ireen plz ask ur mom to get ur phone tomorrow. I will post a ep for u. Even i am gonna end it. Tomorrow’s ep will be 2nd last ep. I havent written anything yet. But for u i am gonna start writing??
so sweet of u yaar…yes it’s too horrible when u get very attached to something n suddenly u have to leave that thing was so heartbreaking…I’ll surely came back after my 12th but miss u a lot dear…yes my real name is ireena…at that time I’m also crying…so sweet of u will write for me then I’ll wait for it n will read it for sure kuch na kuch karu gi mein love you dear take care?????????????
I love your ff, and it was an amazing ending, though sudden, it was awesome. And good luck with your exams. And I really really hope you come back with a small epilogue of their parent life. I really want to see Don as a father. Overall, I loved your unique story.
thanx a lot dear…I’m glad u understand.I’ll try but frankly speaking o don’t think it’s possible thank a lot for your comment?
Hey!! it was an amazing story that i can read many times without getting bore!! best of luck for ur exams
thank lucky it’s a grt complement for me…thanx for your comments n wishes?
This has been one of the best ffs I have ever come across. With the frequent updates and amazing story it just kept me wanting for more. 😀
Just loved it.
You are an amazing writer. Hope to see your new ff after your 12th gets over.
All the very best for your future.
Lots of love! :*
tysm for your lovely comment Sulagna.I wish I could get a chance to comeback…bcz I’ll miss writing & reading too…it will take a lot of time for 12.thanx once again.?
Awesome ireena!!!!! I would miss u and your don a lot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?truly speaking !!! I love your ff and it’s one of the best ff I have ever read!!!!! I truly fell in love with don!!!!!! Please come back after your exams again with another wonderful ff!!!!! And all the best for your studies!!!!!!????
yes dear I also will miss your all comments n writing about Don…glad u like my Don…if I get a chance I’ll definitely come back..that’s the huge complement dear thanks a lot?
Its wonderful ff and I am a silent reader I love your ff very much and I realy miss this and best of luck for your 12 l wish Allah help you
tysm maryum I’ll miss u too dear?
Hey Ireena…
Loved the way you write…read the whole ff in 2 days…I was so engrossed in your ff the way you express emotions of don with his silence and expressing his love through gestures and notes is amazing also the misunderstanding which is solved between them.Swara’s character strong yet fragile and so expressive as well as silent ….Loved this journey of theirs….
Loved your writing keep up the good work. And all the best for your future Dear…
wow the whole ff in just two days…that’s grt dear…so happy u liked it…Both Swara n Don’s character.thanx for the comment?
luvd it
i m nt a swasan fan n hrdly hv intrest in swasan fanfics bt trst me i hv hrdly evr missed out an epi of ur ff
jst luv it
thnku fr d wnderful ff
keep writing
all d bst for 12th its a crucial yr indeed
a big teddy bear hug from my syd :-*
thanx ahana.it’s grt complement for me not been a swasan fan u read the ff…tysm dear. I wish I could write more but have to give phone to mom.thanx for your wishes thanx a lot for your comment ?
Plz give a epilogue….
Plz yâar irrena. .. just try to give it. …
I am also in 12th I can understand….
Hope for the best for. …
Feeling literally sad… as it’s the end
I can understand I wish I could di this for you but it seriously it’s not possible for me.bczu have to give this to my mom today or tomorrow n right now I’m using it with my brother’s WiFi I will not get this chance again so sorry for that???
you are also in 12th best of luck to u too?. I’ll miss your ff badly n also like your SS. I wish I could read further chapters but?….let it be I’m also sad to leave the telly updates don’t know whether I’ll able to come here or not so I don’t wanna give u false hope..
thanx for reading the ff n commenting
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One word wonderful???
thanx a lot dear?
What????
U r just in 12th
But how did u manage to write this at this small age…
Really interesting& wonderful..
I’ll miss your ff definitely.
So,
All the best Ireena for your future…
thanx Sravya sri.I also miss writing dear tysm for comment ?
Hy Ireena…ur story is soo awesome..im gonna miss u $ur ff….hope u will come back soon .
u fully justify don chatracter…
all the best fr ur study….
thanx yaar I too miss u.hope I’ll also get a chance to meet u soon…?
Ireena dear..It’s awesome..But I’m feeling sad because it’s the last episode..I’m gonna miss this FF like hell..It’s one of my most fav FF’s.. 🙂 You have engraved a place for Don and his Roma in my heart.. 🙂 These two characters(Don,Swara) have become really close to my heart..Their love is eternal..<3 Finally they are going to become parents..Yayy!!!!Perfect beginning to their perfect life.. 😀
You are in 12th??I just can't believe that..You know why??Because you write like a Pro,my dear..Every emotion is clearly depicted and very straight to the point.. 😀
Anyways 12th is really an important phase,so all the very best dear.. 🙂 Hope we will meet through some other FF of yours in future.. 🙂 Stay blessed and keep smiling.. 🙂 Lots of love.. 😀 <3 My prayers are always with you.. 🙂 Take care..
I know you are sad n u like my ff very much. I saw in one of the ff analysis… thanx for that dear…I wish I get a chance to write I’ll surely write…they both also have a special place in my heart too. but 12 had to concentrate on it….thanx for your sweet comments dear I’ll surely miss u
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I understand that dear..So don’t worry..Concentrate on your studies and when you return, I’m dead sure you’ll return with a bang.. 😀
In analysis section,I couldn’t appreciate you properly..Seriously I’m out of words for your FF.. 🙂 Lots of love.. 🙂
tysm Sweetie not with a bang but I wish I could return here…you are so sweet…once again thanx for comment n understanding what u wrote in analysis was enough for me dear…take care don’t forget me?
Definitely not..I’m never gonna forget you..You too take care and all the best for your future.. 😀
Forgot to tell you..Eid mubarak in advance.. 🙂
Awesome
thank dear?
just awsm…:-)
tysm abc?
IREENA IREENA IREENA…wat shud i say abt u…u r such a sweetheart…u know wat i ws in complete shock wen i took a look at captain lyk last episode..i never thought it ws a big ff..still i feel lyk small one…nd another big shock is dat u wont b back at tellyupdate..i gonna really miss u dr..u became sooo clos to my heart within a short tym…wid ur excellent story…i want to b in touch wid u….coming to episode it ws jst sensational block buster hit…thankuu sweetheart fr such amazing ff…u know i ws reading dis ff frm season1 of episode 1 se leke till end tak..ur journey ws not wid red roses der were also many thorns in ur journey…i doo remember wen u felt sad fr not getting response n dat make u to come wid slyt change in ur writing wid season 2…..but u nevr gaveup…u continued writing and see wat it gave u…immense popularity….u received wat u deserve am sooo happy fr u dr…am gonna miss u soo much…while writing dis der were tears in my eyes…thinking dat am not see diss ff furtherr…dis ff is one my favorites IREENA….n u became my besty writter……i nevr gonna forget u…u alwys remains in my heart sweetheart..love u dr….love u loads..if possible b in touch wid tellyupdates….i want to read more story of nly swasan written by u….waiting fr dat dayy…a big hug and kissy frm my side IREENA…miss u dr…
yes even I feel the same when while writing I feel i have written very less but when I type episode number I feel like how can I write this much?…I know it’s a very shocking news but had to end…u don’t know how much bad I’m feeling by ending this ff…writing about Don, your lovely comments everything I’m gonna miss yaar…U know what whenever I read your comment I always smile.ur comment make me smile.thr way u express your feeling is very nice n when u share your feelings I also like it…u know I’m reading your comment again n again I’m feeling very bad bcz I’ll miss u all but happy bcz u give me so much love…I wish I could get a chance to write I’ll definitely try my best…I always get inspired by ur comment u motivate…u definitely have a place in my heart…I wish I could extend the journey little more…I wait for your comment…love you too dear n will miss u n never ever forget u love too infinity…I’m not a emotional girl I never cried except any serious reason…I have not even cried at my farewell when I was leaving my school I felt bad but didn’t cry but right now I’m crying…it will be very difficult for me bye hope I meet u soon.
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Last but not least…I hope u get succeeded in ur evry stream..
Stupendous………
Welldone girl!!
U truly rocked.
All the best dear.
tysm Needhi?
Really gonna miss u……specially DON ?????????Thought u vll finish this ff for another3/4 parts. ..but never thought so soon….It was just a wonderful ff…
ALL THE BEST FOR UR FUTURE
tysm dear for understanding…I will also miss writing about Don n u all too?
It was awesome. I had always looked fr ur ff. But ur studies r also imp. Come back soon dear with another interesting story
tysm dear I know how much wait for my ff.tysm for loving my ff.?
I vl miss ur ff badly…gud luck for exams
tysm eshu?
Ahan … A journey of 2 ppl with mixed emotions … how they met … how they loved each other ….. how they escaped their feelings …. how they suffered with the support of love presented by you Ireena ♥ .
Seriously appreciating your work and talent as well .
And I know how difficult it is to keep things parallel while studying as I’m in 1st year so I can understand how difficult it is and yeah will miss you alot 🙂
Best of luck for your entire life 🙂 And EID Mubarak in advance because I don’t know if we’ll meet again or will not 🙂
tysm for such a lovely comment dear surely I’ll miss u..u know I like your name very much it’s so sweet ..u give such inspiring comment.I wish I could be able to write further but studies are must my mom doesn’t want take any risk about that…n ya Eid-Mubarak to u too don’t know whether we will meet or not live u dear?????????
How sweet 🙂
Khair Mubarak and yeah Don gya to gya hmari Ireena b le gya 😛
don’t worry jab Don aayega na toh ireena bhi wapas aajayegi?.
I’m not not a regular commenter of your ff… Usually I’m a silent reader.. Your ff make my day… It was more dan awesome ,amazing , no words to say.. But today when I saw last part… I feel to cry… Anyway all due very best for your future and exams.. Hope you’ll come back with a new one .. When u r free..once again love u and ur ff dear
thanx Anu Ann u read my daily is imp. not comment. I’m also a reader so can understand it’s quite difficult to comment daily love u dear???. if my mom give me chance I’ll definitely write more thanx for reading.?
Hey Ireena I had a doubt when I read previous part… but didnt expect u ll end dis on very nxt episode… your ff was one of my fav… this one really unique from all… You shown a sanskar in diff shade… I liked a lot this Don… The way you expressed Don love emotions.. his poem… Romance suspense… all r just awesome… I loved everything… Day by day my interest on ur ff peaked high… I’m really gonna to miss U and ur ff… but what to do… You’re in 12th std now… studies are important… i can understand… Study well..!!! Take Care..!! Come back soon…!!!
I thought about that no one get a doubt by last episode….but in you got it.glad u liked it. n considering my ff a good one.I’m also going to miss u I can never forgive u you were the first one who’s ff I read n u encourage me a lot u r such kind hearted dear I love it so much..just bcz it’s 12 otherwise I would have started Season 3? bcz I can’t control myself from writing thanx dear love u a lot????????????
take care ?
Nice..all the best for your exams
tysm Afra?
IREENA dear, yours is the only fanfic i have read right from the beginning and loved it all the way to its very last episode 🙂 not to mention that this would be my very first and last comment in TU! And yes, i must suggest u to reconsider your future career plans 🙂 you would make a great author someday…afterall, the choice of words you have preferred to make use in each & every episode of your ff proves it right. So finally, thank you for giving us readers the pleasure to read a beautiful fantasy like this…and all the very best for your exams, do well. 🙂
thanks a lot P.S.S.it’s such a honourable comment.tysm for loving it so much…I’ll surely think about it…it’s bcz of readers like u who like my ff n love it u where there that’s why I was able to write this much…once again tysm dear?