Its ur salluzz…im again back with my one shot…I have written manu os, bt it was all swasan…so for a change, I thoughy to written about raglak..bt then also im feeling about to write ragsan swalak..so guys I have decided…I will write an os in which raglak swalak swasan ragsan are there…..I will give a small intro of character to sorts all confusion..so here we go:
Swara/ragini:her full name is ragini gadodia, bt for her best frnds, she is Swara….only in business field she is knw as ragini..else its just swara….
Sanskar:a big business tycoon, he is knwn as laksh because currently he is suffering frm partial memmory loss, ap and dp got him as he forgot his ware about they named him as laksh…
Dp&ap:very caring patents…loves laksh a lot (sanskar)
Su&rp:biological parents of sanskar
Sujatha and dp are siblings, when Sujatha runs away frm wedding day to marry rp, dp breaks all ties with her
Now coming to the story:
It was pleasant morning for our bubbly charming
Sumi:swara…beready beta…today is ur last day in college naa…and even u r gettinh internship….
Swara/ragini:haa maa…bt give me 5 min…let me sleep maa…
Sumi smiles and cares her head…
After 5min swara/ragini gets up and kisses sumi and goes to washroom…
After sometime she comes out wearing a blue color frock with full length (if u have seen move aadhavan, in that during the song varayu vaarayu kadhal, nayanthara wears this dress in the last part of this song)
She comes down and have breakfast
Shekar:my princess is looking gorgeous…
Sumi:swara….eat fast..u should go
Swara:see baba..maa is jealous naa….
Sumi:y should I jealous
Swara:im giving more importance to baba..
Sumi:achchaa…im jealous naa..then dont come to me for any help
Swara thinks something
Swara; what is this maa..how can my maa get jealous when I love her more than anything…u r our queen naa
Shekar:then im the king
Swara:ofcouse baba…so ur princess ragini gadodia is leavinh for college…so kindly give ur blessing
Shekar:beta…even im going naa…we can go together
Swara:no baba..if I come with u..all will understand that im gadodia…I dont want that baba…I want them to knw me as swara
Shekar:I knw beta…dont get late..and give this packet to kavitha…
Swara:what is this baba
Shekar:she is getting married naa…so give this frm our side…its my duty to do
Swara nodes and leaves
She reaches college, whole college is memmerised seeing het..she used to wear tomboy dress, its for the first time tbey are seeing her like this
Sahil cimes there
Sahil:wow..swara…If I gets to knw that u have such beauti, they I would have proposed u
ACHCHA..THEY ME??
Sahil turns back and finds kavitha
Sahil:hii kavi..
Kavitha:what are doing sahil
Sahil:dont mistake me kavi..I was just
Swara:flirting
Swara and kavitha gives hifi
Swara:waise sahil sir
Sahil:dont call me sir…after all im going to become ur jiju
Kavitha:how u become jiju
Sahil:swara is like ur sister naa..so sisters hubby jiju naa
Sayinh swara and sahil gives hifi
Swara:mm…kavi..keep this, maa baa gave this
Kavitha takes the paket and have tears in eyes..
Kavitha:swara
Swara:what is this kavi…
Kavitha:this dress
Swara:for ur engagement
Kavitha:bt
Swara:I knw what u must think…u knw naa kavi…maa baba consider u as their own daughter..thats y..its their duty
Kavitha:swara…only because them naa
Swara:dont be emotional….
Both hugs
Sahil:so u leave me alone
Swara:jiju…come on
Trio hugs..
(Sahil works there as professor and consider swara as own sister)
At auditorium
Sahil comes to the stage
Sahil:hii good eveninh my children….so im not makinh u bore with my speech…so lets start with giving awards..
First award is for best student in college..and I call upon mr durga prasad maheswary to give away the price..and the winner is our ragini
Kavitha hugs her..
She moves to the stage and takes blessing frm dp..shekar too is seated there and have tears in eyes…
She takes the award and sits in ger place
Sahil:next award is for best topper of our college infact in university exam, she have scored top..I call shekar gadodia to give away the prize and cal upon kavitha to receive prize…
Kavitha was very happy that she is receiving the award frm shekar whom she consider as father
Kavitha comes and takes the award…
shekar hugs kavitha…
Shekar:im very happy that im giving awards to my daughter….
Kavitha have tears in eyes…
Swara stands there and claps her hands…
Followed by everyone…(everyone used to taunt kavitha saying or calling her as orphan)
Shekar comes to the stage
Shekar:today..I need to announce one more thing…my beti, kavitha is gettinh married..so I invite everyone to join..
Kavitha looks at shekar
Shekar:u all are well knw who is my son in law
Shekar calls sahil and kavitha
Shekar:my daughter kavitha and son in law sahil…
All claps…
Sahitha (sahil kavitha) takes blessing frm him
After function:
Dp is looking at swara
Dp thinks something
Kavitha goes to her orphanage(she stays there)
Shekar and swara reaches there
Kavitha comes to them
Shekar:take all ur belongings beta
Kavitha looks on confused
Swara:we are goinh to our house…
Kavitha stands there shocked
Shekar:beta…its ur engagement marriage and all na…so as ur father, I have many responsibility…
Kavitha cries
Kavith:I don’t knw how to thank u
Shekar:so u are thanking ur father….its bad….
Kavitha smiles..
Meanwhile swara takes all her belongings and comes ouy…
Trio leaves to gadodia
They reaches there
Sumi:dont enter..
Kavitha thinks that she dont like her
Sumi:sheena (maid) go and get the aarti thaal
Kavitha becomes happy
Sumi does the aarti fir kavira..
They gets inside…..
Kavitha is shocked to see sahil with his family
Sumi:swara…go and make her ready
Kavira goes
Shekar:raj jii…I very much happy that, my daughter is getting married to ur family..
Raj:no mo shekar…its me, who should thank…we are going to get such a nice daughter in law…I knw that u are father to her…bt now she will become my daughter
All smiles..
Swara brings kavitha…she was looking stunting. L..sahil cant take away his eyes..
Swara:jiju…dont stare her like this
Sahil feels embarrassed
Shekar and raj takes and finalise the engagement date…
And they leave
Shekar gives swara and kavitha his card, and ask them to go to shoppinh….
Both leaves
At mall
Kavira were taking dress…kavitha is looking at the prize and takes dress with law prise…swara notices this…
Swara:kavi….don’t look the prize….see u should take a dress which u like…..
Kavitha nodes and takes a dress
Swara:wow…kavi…its awesome…go and change naa…let me see hiw my jiju”s princess looks
Kavitha gets shy and goes to trail room..
Swara was roaming here and there….
Just then she collides with someone and she falls down…
Swara:maa…
She looks angrily at that man
Swara gets up
Swara:dont u have eyes mr
Man:(showing eyes) I have
Swara feels irked
Swara:cant u walk properly….because of u I fall down
Man:so what…do u need money
Swara opens her mouth in shock
Man:I knw girls like u are made fir this…
Swara:lool mr…I dont need ur so called money…the mistake was urs..and at least say sorry..
Saying she leaves from there…
That man feels guilty..
A women keeps hand on his shoulder
Women:laksh…what happened
Laksh:nothing maa…
The women is ap and guy is laksh(sanskar)
Swara was goinh she finds something in her pocket…
swara:credit card??
At the same time laksh was searching for his card…
Laksh:where can it be..
Ap:go and check beta..
laksh leaves…
Ap and swara was near by….just then swara notices that someboys where disturbing kavitha…
Swara rushes to there
Swara makes them run…ap finds this and smiles….
Kavitha:we can go naa
Swara:bt kavi…see I collide with a man and I think it’s his credit card…
Ap hears this and comes to tjem
Ap:I think its my son card
Swara:what proof u have
Ap was shocked to see her talkinh harshly
Swara:dont take me wrong aunty…it is my responsibility to give tjis to that person…in this century we cant trust anyone…if im wrong plz forgive me..
Ap says the no. And name…now swara gets confirmed and gives the card..
Ap:what is ur name beta
Swara:ragini…
As soon as kavra leaves laksh comes there
Ap:we got ur card beta
Laksh:frm whom…
Ap:dont knw beta…her name is ragini….
ap describe about her…
Both leaves….
At engagement day…
Gadodia mansion was decorated beautifully
Even dp and ap goes there…and swara is stuck due to break down of her car…
All were busy in preparation…
Shekar was busy in introducing kavitha sahil to partners…
Sumi:swara…where are u beta….come fast…
Ap:sumi jii
Sumi;namaste jii
Ap:are waiting for someone
Sumi:aha…jii…my daughter havnt reached yet…
Someone calls sumi and she goes….
Laksh was going to gadodia house…his car was stopped by some children…
Children:will u help our swara dii to reach house
Laksh agrees…
Swara comes and sits in car
Swalak was shocked to see each other…
Laksh didnt say anythinh
Swara:I need to reach gadodia mansion
Laksh was shocked
Laksh:even im going there
Swara:haa…good…
Laksh:engagement
Swara:yes…kavitha is my best frnd
Laksh:bt the way im laksh….
Swara:im ra
Laksh(interepted) swara
Swara lools at him
Laksh:dont mistake me..actually that children only say
Swara nodes…
Both reached there..
Swara runs inside…
Laksh looks on confused…..
All were waiting for swara…..
Just they all hear a noice….
“Hii everyone….im very much happy that u all are presented for my best frnd cum sister’ s engagement….I cingratulate kavitha and my jiju sahil….im wishinh u a happy married life)
Kavitha:swara…
Soon they changes the ring…
Swara again goes to the stage….(dp and ao are also presented)
Swara:on behave of our college, we are dedicatibg this dong and dance for our kavitha and our sir, sahil….enjoy…
Swara comes in dress(ranveer in yeh jawaani hwi deewani) and ger whole crew dances on badthamees dil….
Laksh looks at her lovingly….
All went on its full wings…..all enjoyed a lot….
Marriage date was fixed…(5 days left)
Raj comes shekar
Raj:shekar do u knw that boy??(pointing towardd laksh)
Shekar:raj jii..its laksh..dp ji’s son…
Raj:bt…he have only daughter naa
Shekar:I dont knw much about it
Raj:bt I have seen him some where else….3 yeard back at a conference
Shekar:in that case we can ask to dp jii
Raj and shekar goes to dp…
Raj:dp jii…
Dp:I knw for what u come here…I have heard ur talkings
Shekar:dont mistake me
Dp:no shekar jii…actually I dont knw who is he….in fact his or anything…3 years back, I have found him on road..there I came to knw that he have memmory loss…bt at the same time I feel connection towards him..so I give him my surname
Raj:bt infacy its his surname
Dp:(shocked) what
Raj:he is ur sister son..SANSKAR MAHESWARY
Dp is double shovked..
dp:what
Raj:yes..jii…3 years before, I have met him…at that time he only introduced…I dont knw what happened next
Dp:sujatha…mere chottu…
Dp remembers his times with sujatha…
Dp makes excusr and leaves
He sitting alone in a room
Fb:
Dp:chottu…After gettinh married u wil leave me naa
Sujatha:no bhai…I will stay with u in frnt of u
Dp:u should do one thing…if u are blessed witu a boy, u should name him sanskar and if its a girl sanskriti
Sujatha:and u also..if u have boy, name him laksh and if its a girl, uthara
Both nodes each other and hugs
Fb ends..
Ap comes to him..dp tells her everything
Ap:u cant forgive sujatha
Dp:I have forgive her long back…now im craving to here her calling me bhai…
BHAI
Dp turns and finds sujatha there
Dp cant believe his eyes
Dp:chottu
Sujatha without wasting time hugs him and cries…..
After sometimes
Sujatha:where is my son bhai
Im here only mom
They turn and finds him
Ap:laksh
Sujatha:sanskar
He gies and hugs them
Sanskar/laksh folds his hand
San/lak:im sorry papa and maa…I did this memmory loss drama to unite u both..I dont have any wrong intention, when I see u all after that accident I easily recognised u because mom uses to say a lot about u two…I want to stay with u two, thats why I did this drama..forgive me badepapa
dp:no laksh…sorry sanskar..it hurts me when u call me badepapa..call me papa
Laksh:call me laksh papa
Dp and ap hugs sanskar
Sujatha ask for uthara ap says that she went fir excursion
Sujatha and rp changes their business to kolkata and stays in maheswary mansion
All lives there happily
Sahil and kavutha gets married happilt with all blessings..sumi did her bidaai…
Meanwhile
Swara gets the job as intern in maheswary comapany
Shekar:swara….y are going as intern…u can directly help me naa
Swara:baba…I need experience naa…after workinh there I will join our company kk..
Shekar nodes
Meanwhile sanskar/laksh also joins there as accountant…as laksh maheswary….
Laksh still dont knw that swara is actually ragini gadodia
Swara joins the office
Swara became friendly with everyone especially laksh….
Swara too don’t knw that he is maheswary
Both started to spend time together…
Everytime in house, swara takes only his name…
Sumi:beta….I think u r in love with him..
Swara looks at her in shock
Swara:what type of a mom u r…u r encouraging ur daughter to love someone…..
Sumi:because I trust my daughter…she wont take any wrong decision
At gadodia company..
Shekar calls swara and ask her to come to office…
Swara goes to office and finds dp and rp
Shekar:she is my daughter ragini gadodia
Swara:whats this baba
Shekar:beta….im doing this for u…plz sign this paper….
Swara reads it and looks at shekar angrily
Swara:what is this baba..how can u transfer all ur share to me…..and u said that I should take the charge…..
Shekar:beta wo
Swara keeps her hand
Swara:chup chap bet karo…
Dp and rp smiles
Swara:(turns to rp and dp) uncles..u only say, u have a son or daughter, he dont knw even to ryt abc alphabets. .and u r saying to him that write a essay…what will he do…will he be to write it
Dp&rp:no
Swara:exactly… (turns to shekar) I hope u understand…
Shekar gives a smile
Swara:dont worry mere baba…my intership will get over by 4 months
.that time I will obey…now smile plz
Shekar smiles
Swara:thats my boy…
She leaves
Shekar:jii…my beta is like that only…
Dp nodes and leaved
At maheswary mansion
Sanlak used to say about swara..and both ap and sujatha where interested to see her…even they have bought bridal dress for swara
Dp:ram…I was thinking that sanskar should be married to ragini…if u r kk
Rp:what is this bhaisaa..even he is ur son..I dont have any problem..
At night
Laksh calls swara
Laksh:hii swara
Swara:hii laksh..
Laksh:I need to talk to u imporatant thing..will u plz come to xyz place today
Swara thinks for a while
Swara:kkk laksh
They cut the phone
Swara says this to sumi
Sumi:chalo..swara..and confess ur feelings..ur mom is always with u
Swara:thanku maa
At mm
Ap:today my son is going to propose his love
Sujatha:haa jiji…let swara accept this relationship….they only we can discuss future plans…
At xyz place
Swara reaches there, it was fully darkness…
Swara:laksh…are u there…u knw naa..im scared of darkness…olz come laksh..
Suddenly the lights strtd to come…(in rab ne banade jodi, srk proposing anushka, after the song tuj me rab)
I LOVE U
swara doesn’t knw if she was dreaming or not……
Tears were flowing in her eyes
Laksh:swara, the day I see u I felt something…and whenever I finds u im getting attracted towards u…then I finds tha u are my soul mate..I love u swara…will u marry me
Swara was in cloud nine..she without wasting time hugs him tightly…
They spend sometime there and leaves..
Meanwhile rp and dp has convinced for the hands of ragini to sanskar….
Next morning
Sujatha and ap disclose laksh love for swara and sumi disclose it to shekar
Shekar:i gave promise to them naa..now what will I do
Sumu; for us swara happiness is firat priority naa…let she marry the person she.loves
Shekar nodes
At mm
Dp&rp:we need to talk to shekar…we cant force sanskar to marry ragini, if he loves swara
Dp rp ad shekar meets
Both dont knw how to start
Shekar:dp jii…dont mistake me…my daughter is in love with a boy….I cant force her to this relation
Do and rp looks at each other
Rp:thank god..infact we were coming tp tell u this..sanskar is in love with his collegue…so even we dont him to accept this firced marriage….
Both leaves
Dp:sanskar call swara family and ask them to come to park..we can discuss ur future
Sanskar/laksh informs this to swara
Swara:maa baba…laksh family wants to meet u all..so he called to meet at park
At park
Dp rp ap sijatha are already presented there
Laksh sees swara…swara too sees laksh…
Laksh:maa she is
Ap&sujatha/dp&rp:swara/ragini
Both looks at each other in shock
Sumi and shekar sees laksh
Shekar/sumi:sanskar/laksh
All stood there confused
Swalak lools at each other
Dp:what are doing here shekar jii
Shekar:actually my daughter…
All start to say..full of confusing…that time sahil and kavitha comes there
Sahil:I will clear ur confusion…
He holds swara…this is ragini gadodia aur pyaar se swara
Kavitha:aur this is sanskar aka laksh
Swara:that means I rejected sanskar proposal and that was laksh
Laksh:ragini tum..aur I tejected ur proposal
Rest of them burst into laughing
Later they too understands
Dp:I cant stop laugjing…tbey loved each other and rejected each others proposal….oh my god
Swalak too laughs…
Sumi:so swara, to whom u want to marry??sanskar aur laksh
Ap:and u…ragini aur swara
Swara:sanskar
Laksh:ragini
Swalak:because it was choosen by our parents
All smiles…
Next week their marrige too happens
At night:
Laksh:swara
Swara:yes sanskar
Sanskar:call me laksh
Swara:then call me ragini….
Both feels irritated…so to make silence laksh/sanakar kisses swara/ragini on lips……both get intimate
So guys say was this os swasan or swalak ragsan or raglak
Love u all…..
7 Comments
wow nice n interesting seriously in whole os i was just thinking who is who like should i imagine in them swalak or ragsan in last i have imagine swara n raglak hehehe too much confusing bt good experience
Amazing
It was awesome……n nice idea of taking the heroine as swara n ragini n hero as sanskar n laksh…… It created humour as well as all the fans i.e. fans of all 4 jodi’s were happy…..
awesome
Awesome
Thank you so much
Loved it a lot……
awesome…………
actually really confusing
one get easily uninterested