LOVE YOU OS by Kavya
Hi let’s go to the story.. Guys this is my first ever try so please support me..
NO PROOF READ!!
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Story
Ragini Bhatt – a tradional girl who is a topper in the college and BFF of Swara and loves her
Swara Khanna – BFF of ragini and is glamorous
Laksh Maheshwari – he is dude of college and has a best friend Rishab who he stays with
Sanskar Chopra – he is a Casanova and has a crush on swara since school hood
Laksh gang – kamya, Kavita,Rishab,Manik
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College
A girl is entering she is looking stunning in a long red skirt kind of tradional with black shirt and red jacket like Kurti with open hair (she is ragini)
ragini – hey swara what’s up
swara – ragini come on
swara is glamorous so she is wearing blue jeans and red top with French braid
swara – well we will get late
ragini – come on
They both leave when swara clashes with s boy and he catches her by waist
Boy – are u okay beauty
ragini – sanskar sir please leave her
Yes he is sanskar
Sanskar – I will but one condition
ragini – what
sanskar – call me sanky
ragini – sanky leave her sanskar leaves her and goes from there and swara comes to ragini
swara – boih he is hot
ragini – shut up and come on
swara and ragini moves towards class but swara went to bathroom and ragini moves ahead
ragini soon clashes with some not and her papers fly in air
ragini – sorry laksh sir
ragini lifts the paper her hair flows in air and laksh is mesmerized and ragini takes her paper and leaves
laksh monologue
OMG laksh such s beautiful girl you have never seen in your life for sure
Manik – bro bet time
Rishab – yeah I agree
Kamya – what will we give him?
Kavita – I know make ragini yours like make her fall for u but no crossing limits baby
lucky – ok kavi
Lucky takes Kavita as friend where as Kavita loves him
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Canteen
Raglak are there
Laksh – hi ragini
ragini – hello sir
laksh – don’t call me sir but call me lucky
ragini – ok lucky
laksh – cool.. Now meet me after college near tree want to Rom Kolkata on bike
ragini – ok
Soon college ends and ragini goes to meet laksh
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Near tree
ragini – sorry I am late
laksh – never mind come on sit
ragini – ok
ragini sits but doesn’t hold him tight lucky gets disturbed and puts s sudden break and she falls on him putting a hug and lucky feels unknown happiness and ragini hugs all the way and he drives to a private beach
After sometime they reach and ragini is sleeping and laksh admiring her
Laksh – ragini get up
Ragini wakes up and feels embarrassed – so…so…sorry
Laksh – come on I have a surprise
Raglak walk up to beach and ragini Gets surprised seeing the beach like a picnic spot and hugs him
Ragini – thanks lucky for this
laksh – welcome ma’ am now can I gave a pleasure
ragini – sure
They reach water and play there and ragini Splashes water and he chased her suddenly ragini legs slips and laksh falls on her
Ragini hair comes ahead and he tucks her hair back and leans towards her and she closes eyes. But suddenly lucy comes in sense
lucky – sorry ragini
ragini – it’s ok
RAGLAK enjoy and leaves for their home
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Some days pass and eventually laksh falls for ragini and then love is in air but there is prom night where raglak decide to go with each other and Kavita plans to break their love story
laksh wears black suit and ragini wear black gown
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PROM NIGHT
Raglak enter and host announces a couple dance
raglak dance on Sanam Re
Host – the winner is raglak pls come on stage
They recieve awards and laksh takes ragini to propose
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GARDEN
It is decorated beautifully
Laksh was about to say something when Kavita comes and hugs him
Kavita – I love laksh I know baby you had to do this but now u won the bet
ragini – bet??
Kavita – he doesn’t love you (she tells everything)
ragini – you betrayed me
laksh – stand there and listen and Kavita I know you.. You love my money not me
Kavita – listen pls
Laksh – shut up and get lost
Kavita leaves from there and raglak are left behind
Laksh – give me 5 mins plzz
ragini – ok
laksh – listen now
❤️❤️❤️PROPOSAL❤️❤️❤️
ragini
He takes a rose? and says this rose is no better than you.. You are a more better rose with pleasant smell
He takes a ring? and says ragini this diamond is way smaller than you
He then takes ? and says you smile is so cute and this chocolate make it cuter
ragini smiles and he kneels down and says
RAGINI I LOVE YOU WILL YOU MARRY ME??
Ragini is really happy and says yes and they hug
Laksh without wasting time asks permission for kissing and she gives a +sign and he puts his on hers and sucks her lips and the kiss becomes passionate and hungry and they join foreheads
THE END
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How was it guys????
Hope you all enjoyed it?
This was a normal story showing a message that love can happen anywhere anytime????
Comment for sure?
Regards,
KAVYA
17 Comments
good one kavya.tat was short n cute.loved t.keep up d gud wrk
Awesome
Loved it a lot
Thanks for this OS……
Nice try dr…looking forward fr ur nxt OS
nice
nice one
Superb os
Awesome OS Kavya…
?awesome my dear
Nice OS
Nice
You already done thhis o’s before
Nice
hey this is a capy of my OS which I had written in swasan version.. plzz its a request don’t copy others OS but write your own OS….. plzz don’t take me rude but you copied my OS and posted in your words pls if you’re doing this atleast give credits!!!
yeah arohi is telling right i have also read this os of her its same only on place of swasan their is raglak so kavya please dont copy any one os and right if you are you should have to give the credit to original writer
Nice
I think i have read this before…but anyways nice story…
nice