Hiiii frnds …..I’m a big fan of tisha , arshi fan , tina , emmy , naveena , aurbhi , swomiya…..I read all of the ff bt they are my favourite …..
ABHISHEK mehra- rockstar ….He loves his wife pragya…
PRAGYA abhishek mehra- wife of famous rockstar….loves her family….she is a responsible bahu , caring wife…
PURAB mehra – brother of abhi..loves his wife bulbul…He is a leading business man…
BULBUL purab mehra- elder sister of pragya ….wife of purab..loves her family….purab is her world..
AALIYA mehra- sister of purbhi ..she is a successful model…she hates Abhi
AAKASH mehra- cousin brother of purbhi ..studying in US…
RAJ mehra – cousin brother of purbhi …works under purab…but he has no ego of working under his brother….
MITALI raj mehra – wife of raj…she is very evil , jealous minded ….
PAM sunder mehra – mother of raj , aakash
SUNDER mehra- father of raj and aakash
All other characters ….dadi , dasi , rockstar dadi , janaki ma , sarala ma….
The story starts with
A big mansion is shown….In the entrance the name plate of the house is shown…..it is wwritten as “MEHRA MANSION ” Inside the mansion…Dadi is running here and there ordering the servants to complete the decoration work soon…. then she goes to pooja room…There one girl is showing Aarti to god….Dadi ask her to finish the aarti soon….she turns and give Aarti to dadi …Dadi takes aarti from her…..she takes blessings from dadi by touching her feet….now ber face is shown……yes she is our beautiful pragya….Dadi ask pragya to finish the remaining work….pragya says ” okay dadi…”pragya leaves to living area…
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Dadi goes to kitchen….there another girl is preparing coffee for everyone in the house…she is humming a song …..Dadi smiles at her , standing near the door….she turns and see dadi….she gives coffee to Dadi and leaves the kitchen …taking the coffee tray with her…Bulbul gives coffee to everyone ….Bulbul searches for pragya to give coffee to her….she sees her in living area ….she gives coffee to her and ask her to give the coffee to Abhi….pragya says “okay di…” and leaves from there. ….
Pragya enters the room….The room is full of abhigya’s photo …and in the corner of the room there is a violin and guitar ….she sees Abhi is doing exercise ….He is standing in opposite direction …so Abhi can’t see pragya…pragya greets him and ask him to have his coffee …..But Abhi can’t hear her as he is hearing rock songs using his headphones …..pragya keeps the coffee in the table and turns towards him…by this time…Abhi finishes his exercise and turns suddenly….Both have an eye lock….they are lost in each other eyes….( o Allah wariyan plays in bg ….)( kadhal aara onu vizundhuchu plays in bg….)Abhi moves towards pragya and whispers in her ears….I LOVE YOU CHASHMISH….pragya says I KNOW HONEY…..
Bulbul enters her room and greets purab ” good morng ” purab too greets her..bulbul and purab are sitting in the sofa …bulbul gives coffee to purab…purab says ” Bulbul there is no sugar in coffee” bulbul says ” No purab , i added sugar in it …” purab says ” Am i telling lie , you itself have a sip in it…” he gives the cup to her….bulbul had a sip of coffee and says purab sugar is there …purab says ” really bulbul…wait I’ll have it again….” purab had a sip and says ” yes bulbul …now sugar is there …coffee is very sweet now…” bulbul smiles seeing purab….( tum hi ho plays in bg….)( kadha kan kattudhe plays in bg…)
Pragya and abhi are having coffee …pragya finished having her coffee and goes from there….Abhi holds her hand and says ” chashmish sit here for some more time we can talk ….by saying this he makes her sit in his lap… ….pragya says ” Honey .please leave me , i have more work…you know na today your brother is coming here after 4 yrs ……” pragya tries to go…bt abhi holds her….pragya says ” honey everyone in the house are busy in preparing eveything ….but you are busy in romancing with me…whats this…”Abhi says ;” you are too unromantic chashmish…” pragya says ” you blabber what ever you want….I’m leaving…..” Abhi thinks chashmish you are very bad…..pragya turns and says ” Am i that bad honey..” Abhi leaves to wardrobe thinking …omg now she is reading my mind too….
Dadi ask bulbul and pragya ” is all the work are over…” both says “yes dadi…all work are almost complete….dadi asked them if they made gulab jamun ….which is the favourite sweet of aakash….bulbul says dadi we finished making it…pragya says what ever you told yesterday we made it….. Dadi praises them ….
Pam and sunder sees the decorations and praises prabul…..mitali sees that pam is praising them…and fumes in anger…..mitali thinks she didn’t praise me till now for any work….but she is praising them……mitali hidding her all jealousy says you two have done a great work…and praises them….pragya says ” di ..we forgot to make his favourite gobi manchuri come we can make it….” bulbul nods…
Aaliya comes down….greeting everyone….dadi scolds aaliya for coming this late ….Aaliya says she had slight temperature yesterday , so i slept having medicines …sorry dadi….by this time Abhi n purab hear her saying she is not feeling well…purbhi rushes to her …purab ask her if she is alright….abhi touches her head…Aaliya pushes his hand and goes to her room…..Abhi sees her going and remains quiet…..purab ask mitali ” where is raj bhai ??” Mitali says ” He went to office…” Abhi ask dadi ” where is dasi ??” Dadi says she went to mandir in morning , she will be back within few mins…bulbul n pragya finished their work and comes to living area….Purab ask ” bhai can we leave now ….to pick aakash ?” Abhi agrees …..they leaves purab says bye to bulbul ….Abhi didn’t say anything ….after going few steps ….he turns and give flying kiss….pragya blushes….bulbul sees this and teases her….the screen freezes….
precap:-
Arrival of aakash….dadi ask aakash to get married…but aakash denies….Abhugya says ” we will make him understand dadi…you don’t worry…
why aaliya hates abhi?? Why aakask denies for marriage ?? How will abhigya make him agree for marriage ?? Will they say about their love story to make him agree for marriage??
Guys if you like my storyline …pls comment….both poaitive and negative comments welcomed ….guys , I’m sry if there is any mistake in my ff……hope you like my ff….
47 Comments
Superb dear no mistakes yaar nice waiting fr nxt part☺
Thank you saranya
awesome episode loli dear superb loved it abhi was so lovely and aaliya i hate her but eager to know the new twists which u hv in ur mind i am waiting………..
Thank you vaishali dr …..
awesome ???????????❤❤ loli plz updates next episode and plz updates regularly
Thank you shriti
Guess aakash must hav married r loved someone else…….so he will deny…..also….I’m gonna tell dat this ff….is really really………b…..best…..I loved It di…..actually u changed Prags n Bulbul roles…..I loved it….also abhigya n purbul romance was ….haaaaa……mesmerizing….loved it….
Thank you varsha …for knowing that you have to wait for next episode
hiii strylineis really awesome…..n change inthe relation of abhi n purab is also nice……..continue it………
Thank you shaanu …
Nice
Thank you asmitha.
Super loli..very nice introduction..keep going dear..i’ll support u..
Sry arshi fan….I can’t able to comment in your ff..bcoz i usally screen shot and read later….Thank u arshi…
Nice starting….
Thank you sugan
It was super
Thank you monesha
very nice…supr intro..go ahead..update regularly…
Thank you nasima …
Awesome…plz continue….
Thank you abhigya
sweet n cute…….
Thank you Emmy
your story line is ausome but please change some character can you make pragya elder than bulbul because it sounds
Mukund raj …I’m sorry , I can’t able to change it..Hope you can understand it…..Thank you for your support
hi loli.. i love your story line. itz awsm yaar.. hats off.. keep rocking.good luck
Thank you tina….i love your ff too ….vampire ff, love from sky …..you have awesome creativity dr….
just love it
Thank you di……
Superb
Thank you lakshmi….
Nice start yaar its really interesting
Thank you durga…..
Guys can’t upload episode for next 2 days….bcoz telly updates are busy in adding some cool stuffs ….
Awesome loli….waiting for next episode
Thank you aishwarya
Nice n superb
Thank you aish.
nice intro yaar keep gng………..
Thank you krish…
Nice one
Thank you nirmal….
sry for late cmnt nyz n cool epi. tam songs selection is really awsm. vzhalthukkal .
Thank you aastha…
Awesome! ?
superrrrrrrrrr story line and continue this great job but please be regular