Hi frds… im back with my part 6… hope u all enjoying my story…. I ll try to justify with d both d couples… AND A BIG THANK YOU FOR WHO S READING..AND SUPPORTING… every time when I see d comments… I got fully charged to write another part.. keep supporting…
Story starts with—
Shona sees sanky near d gate… she is shocked to see him here aree he is d only one dat that ladka who clashed with me in hospital
Shona(in mind) – aree …he is so handsome….he dint look like watch man..(she misunderstood him as he standing wr watch man used to stand) he seems like a prince… shonaaaa stop..! wt u thinking…. From when u watching boys like this way….
Shona- (to sanky) hey yeah dr. maheshwari ka hi ghar hain naa ….?………. Mujhe andhar jana tha kya gate koldenge pls….
Sanky-(he dint here anything .. he just looking at her expressions ) hmm
Shona- open d door pls… I wanna come in …
Sanky – opens d door
Shona- tq…(with a broad smile)
Sakny – ( doing same which she made…smile… seeing till she disappear… after disappearing also looking at d same direction as if his angle will come again ;-))
Lucky- bhai kya hogaya aise statue ki tarah kyu roke huve ho…..
Sanky- luky… do seen angel ?
Lucky- wttt?
Sanky- I just saw her
Lucky-oh bhai … aap uncle ki beti ko dekne ke bahane ladkionki chedrahe ho…seriously … I dint expect this type of behaviour from DR.SANSKAR MAHESHWERI (in teasing tone)
Sanky- (coming to sence) aise kuch nahi lucky… aree hame tho sir ki beti ko dundana hena…
Lucky- leave all that… (in serious) who s that lucky girl who stole mr.sanskars heart in a fraction of sec… I never seen u seeing any girl this way…
Sanky-(slitly smiles)I ll tell u later 1st we have to find baby…
Lucky- understands) u r baby in d mansion….
Enters house—-
Ap—sanskar where u went..? all waiting for d dinner ….come sit…laksh u too beta…
sanky – sorry guys…sir aapki beti?
Shekar- she went to washroom …
Ap- she is so pretty…and a very good upbrining…
Sanky is so exited to see his sirs daughter… finally she came…seeing her … he gets shock
Sanky- wt d hell? Am I becoming mad…? I saw her few minutes ago and imagining her everywhere….(in mind) he turned to another side so control his madness..
Shekar- sanskar… look my daughter came she is shona, and shona he is sanskar..
Both looked at eachother at d same time… both were shocked …. There is an deep eyelock.. which is disturbed by the horn sound… they composes themselves… and smiles in friendly manner..
Shona-(in mind) shona ki bacchii…how can u think him as a watchman….(while remembering his behaviour) she smiles seeing at him
Sanky- in unbelievable expression… looking at him shekar understands his condition….sanky opens his mouth to say something.. cuted by rags….
Rags-maa… sorry… im again late… from tomorrow I ll come early… actualy neha and me doing combine studies no soo… (stops looking at shoshek)(she s totally araid seeing them… laksh notices this)
Laksha- sir apki accident naa…(purposefully telling in dramatic way)
Rags- namste uncle….(in shaking voice) bhai… apke bhare mein bolta rehtha hai…..(laksh enjoing seeing rags expression…) ma I finished my dinner there itself… so im going to my room..(luks at lucky angrily and goes from there…)
Ap took shona to guest room…Shekar and sanky went to study room… seeing his pic there.. shekar become emotional…he higs sanky….
Shekar-tq sanskar for giving this much respect….
Sanskar- tq u for showing me d right path….
Few tym they were talked realating medical.. hospital matter..
Sanskar- sir aapki itni badi beti kaise ho sakti he..? I mean when I m in clg my clg days u r bachelor then…..?dont get me worng…
Shekar- I don’t wann discuss it now … I ll tell u everything when right tym come… don’t think anthing –ve… don’t ask her anything( saying this he went to guest room..
Sankar stood there for few min… figuring wt would d mistry?
To take fresh air he went to garden there she again see shona
She enjoing greenery under moon light… he came and sit beside her
Sanskar- hey.. wt u doing here? Y dint u sleep?is there any problem?
Shona- hey… nothing u r garden is so beautiful… just enjoying .. u know I love greenery…
Sanky-(unknowingly) and I love y………(she looks at him) I love my profession
Shona- u know today .. when I see my in dis condition (with teary eyes) I lost every thing… pls I don’t know y I feel like baba hiding something big matter from me.. I can sense it pls.. help me to know dat reason…. Will u help me?
Sanky- do realy feel lyk dat then I will help u… I too feel d same…
Shona – then we are partner ryt…?(forwarding her hand)
Sanky- partners(shake hand with her)
He feels current passed through his whole body… shona stands to go and tuned and said
Shona- gn partner from tomorrow the mission RAAZ is on….
Screen freezes to sansky seeing shona in wide broad smile….
Recap- mission razz… sanky to know about……?
How is it frds hope u all lyking it..
Pls u can also tell any –ve point in story line? Give suggesions as im weak in romance section… keep reading….
16 Comments
nice
Tq any…
Sorry Anu…?
Nice…
awesome…..pls update n english alone
Yeah… I ll try dea… as. Sometimes I dint get D exact word in English so I’m using Hindi words… tq for suggestions…. even me to want to reduce Hindi words…
Awesome…… Continue soon…..
awesowe yaar
nice one …varu……..
Tq deeksha…
Superb
nyc..
Nice one dear..Waiting for mission Raaz.. 😀 Stay blessed and keep smiling.. 🙂
nice…i have a doubt that sanky knows swara before her surgery
Awesome
Nice