Actually guys earlier I had posted yeh Dosti ff by mistake under Manzil part 10 title… My exams have drived me crazy.. Anyways this is MANZIL part 10 ok.. Don’t get confused
Recap : Everyone annoyed with ishu as abhimanyu come..
Abhi : hello Ishu.. Its late already.. When are you coming..
Ishu : ah.. I’ll be late.. I think I can’t make it tonight.. There’s one major operation to be done here.. So you sleep..
Ishu cuts the call & shagun see this & wonder why ishu lied there was no operation in hospital.
Shagun : ( to herself ) isn’t she happy.. Why is she avoiding him..? Or do she still love Raman….
Shagun come to ishu..
Shagun : ishu what are you doing here?
Ishu : huh.. Ah. Nothing .. I
Shagun : let’s go home now..
Ishu : ( instantly ) No.. I mean one patient is coming.. So..
Shagun : who will come at this hour ishu.. Its 11 already..
Ishu : its emergency..
Shagun : ok I’ll also wait..
Ishu ; no simmo you go. I’m here naa.. Please
Shagun : I’m seeing everything ishu.. But I’m not getting what’s in your mind..
Shagun come home. & is wondering what’s wrong….
Shagun : what am I thinking is it right..? No.. But ishu.. Oh .. Whom shall I share this with.. There’s no one to give me the solution..
She stand infront of a big portrait of a couple in her room..
Shagun : dekh rahe ho aap dono.. Kya se kya hogaya.. hum sabki zindagi itni ulajh gayi hai ki.. Lekin aapko kya.. Aap aaram se sote raho hospital ke bed mein.. ( are you both seeing what our life has turned into… Everything is so messed up.. But what’s that to you both.. Sleep peacefully on hospital bed )
Couple in that pic start talking.. Its shagun’s imagination..
Woman : Simmo.. What’s this you are my strong girl stop crying..
Shagun : di.. !!
Man : every problem has a solution but you should think peacefully for it..
Shagun : you know I don’t have that patience jijaji.. I need your help. I can’t handle everything
Woman : then call your partner..
Shagun : no..
Man : he’s the only one who can help you know simmo..
Shagun : no.. ( she turn away )
Woman : won’t you listen to your di & jijaji..
Shagun : but.. ( she turn towards them but they’re no more.. )
Harshad enter her room.. & she remember their words..
Shagun : I need to talk..
Harshad : yea tell me…
She explain everything what she saw.. How ishu us avoiding abhimanyu & what she saw in hospital.. Swara hears all this…
Arshi & swasan in swara’s room
Sanky : what..!!? Really swara.. You heard it right na..?
Swara : yes..
Kushi : thank God there’s still hope..
Arnav : even if I get a slightest hint from ishu di.. I’ll kick him out of her life forever..
Swara : ok guys listen now..
Hargun..
Shagun : what to do now..
Harshad : I’ll talk to ishu let’s see.. We will pull out something..
Next day..
Ishu came & freshned up & left to hospital in ½ an hour without even meeting abhimanyu….
Abhimanyu having breakfast.. Swasan start their plan.. They pretend as if they didn’t see him..
Sanky : where is ishu di..
Swara : in hospital..
Sanky : she wasn’t home yesterday night too..
Swara : may be she had some emergency case..
Sanky : but simmo di said there were no cases
Swara : what really..?
They leave.. Abhimanyu ignore their talk thinking they might have mistaken..
All 8 along with abhimanyu are near school gate to drop ruhi… Everyone is advising her…
Ruhi : oh stop it guys when I can handle you 8 these children are not at all a problem to me I’ll manage… ( she wink )..
Ishu : Ruhi.. Naughty baby… ok now all the best..
Ruhi : you both come & drop me till class ok..
Ishra go… Raman pick ruhi in arms..
Ruhi turn back and wink at arshi & swasan.. These 3 ( except Arnav) show thumbs up..
Kushi : They look so nice together na.. ?
Arnav : yes..
Kushi : I hope they’ll always be together like this..
Arnav : yes…
Sanky : ( whisper ) what yes yes.. Dialogue bolo ( tell the dialogue )
Kushi : aren’t they cute..
Arnav : yes…
Swara : (whisper ) he can’t do it.. Darpok kahike.. (coward)
Swara : yea they’re are made for each other kushi di
Sanky : kaash ishu di meri bhabhi hoti.. ( it would’ve been nice if ishu di was my sis in law )
Kushi : aur Raman bhai mere jijaji ( and Raman bhai my brother in law )
Abhimanyu gets shocked at their thoughts & gets jealous of Raman he storm out from there..
These 4 give HiFi..
Hill top..
Kushi is hugging arnav from behind…
Kushi : I’m the luckiest person… ( she scream )
Arnav : no.. I’m the luckiest..
Kushi : haww.. Cho chweet.. ( so sweet ) Love you ( she pull his cheeks )
Arnav : come let’s sit there..
They sit on a big rock seeing a beautiful scenario
Kushi : Is this the famous lover’s point
Arnav : yes..
Kushi : thank u thank u thank u.. You don’t like all these but came here for me..
She kiss him..
Arnav : ok now stop eating my cheeks.. And eat this.. ( he give box of jelebis )
Both start eating them… Later walk hand in hand there under orange shade of sun enjoying sunset
Kushi : Our life is so beautiful arni..
Arnav : all because of you..
Kushi : kaash ishra & hargun bhi saath hote
Arnav : they’ve spoiled everything themselves.. I don’t understand what happened that ishu di took such drastic step.. & shagun di she’s impossible.. They lack trust in their relationship that’s what have spoiled everything..
Kushi : hmm.. We have to do something..
Arnav : we will try kushi.. But promise me one thing whatever might happen you’ll always trust me no matter what the situation might be..
Kushi : I promise…
Arnav : I too promise I’ll always trust you
Kushi : Arnav look that rock.. Let’s carve our name there.. ( she drag him… )
She carve Arnav+ Kushi=Arshi inside a heart shape on rock
Kushi : isn’t it cute.. Wow I can’t wait to show this to our kids grandkids.. They will be so excited na arni.. Wow.. ( she exclaim )
Arnav just adore her with a smile
Kushi : what’s this arnav aren’t you excited..
She see his face..
Kushi : stop.. Don’t say a word.. Don’t you dare to say we aren’t marrying.. We will marry.. We will be uniting those 4 idiots ( ishra & hargun ). If they don’t agree na then let’s kidnap them & get them married forcefully what say..
Arnav : what if we couldn’t unite them..
Kushi : but arnav we will..
Arnav : what if we couldn’t
Kushi : ( sadly..) Then we won’t get married
Arnav : ( hold her hand ) baby but I’ll always be with you.. Its ok if we can’t marry.. Anyways I never believed in it too..
Kushi : hmm. ( still sad )
Arnav : but we can be in a live in relationship what say Kushi.. ( he wink )
Kushi : chi.. Arnav devi maiyya ( Goddess) will curse us..
Arnav : she’ll forgive us once we give her junior Arnav & Kushi..
Kushi open her mouth wide… & start hitting Arnav..
Arnav : ok ok no babies but we will be together always ok..
Kushi : ok
Raizada mansion..
Ishra have picked ruhi back from school now ishu is again all set to go to hospital..
Abhimanyu : ishu.. You’re going again..
Ishu : yea some important cases..
Abhimanyu : I need to talk..
Ishu : but I don’t have time.. Its urgent please..
Abhimanyu : yep… You just don’t have time for me isn’t it ( he say rudely )
Ishu is shocked as he never talked in that tone.. But he had changed a bit since last 3 months she had noticed it before coming to Darjeeling
Abhimanyu : ( changing his tone ) huh.. I’m sorry actually just wanted some quality time with you
Ishu : I understand Mani.. ( to herself ) but font know why I’m not able to give you
Abhi : I feel there’s no privacy here ishu.. I think we better shift to quaters till I stay here..
Ishu gets worried..
Ishu : Give me some time..
Precap :
Ishu enter her room & abhimanyu hug her from behind she get shocked…
Arnav holding abhimanyu’s collar..
Arnav : how dare you..
5 Comments
nice……………
Awesome dude……Loved it very much
?????superb.. arshi convo was really awesome… and liked ruhis dialog much…
Wow!!!! Awesome episode…. Ruhi was mind blowing yrr… 😉 U r really a good writer… Keep up ur good work…
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God bless you…
Take care…
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