Sharvan was busy whole day in work and in evening he was relaxing in his cabin and he closes his eyes and again went into thoughts….
I i was disturb by this i was restless by her anger at me then my frnd come back to town i explain whole thing to him then we sell that part of land to that old man and all things get sort out then we take that man to suman and he told her all things she smiles and that smile give me a big relief and i said sorry to her she says its all right uncle got his hotel i didnot want anythng else then i said but i want smthng she asks what i tell ur frndship so frnds? i bring my hand towards her she thinks for while and that time i want time to stop there as she was looking most cute. And said she frnds we shake hands frm there our frndship starts we become very good friends how days spent with her i didnot realize as time passess i had start falling for her and her love is also clear from her eyes but we never confess to eachother and the came when i get job in london we got seperated but though we was in contact we use to tell our whole day to eachother by social media 2 / 3 months passed like this then i decided to confess my love so one day while chatting
sharvan:suman i hv to tell u smthng
suman:i also hv to tell u smthng very important
sharvan:let me first
suman: no plzzz listen to me then that will not make any diff what u wana say
sharvan:say
suman:tomorrow is my engagement now say what u want to tell
sharvan:i,ll never tell that now
thats all and now months hv passed we had not talk to eachother and yesterday i hv got card of her marriage
sharvan comes out of his thought and take card from table and see it,,,
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woah! nice one.. post soon
Its really good and different…I love it..!! 🙂
Wow vryyyyyy nice!!!! I loved it !!
Awesome ! fantastic!! plz post nxt one soon!!
Arey..yaar..itni badi twist..WO bhi itni jaldi..that’s really..superb..when u r gng to post the next part..?
Keep it as fast as possible?☺?
Is it u lovleylAdy???
Someone?????????? I don’t know whether It is lovelylady or Pihu di or Khushi Or Kittu or someone new. But the episode was awesome yaar, Keep it up. It’s the best and the biggest twist.
guys it is not me…….
purane ffs ko to update kr ni paa rhi hu naya kaise shru karu 😉
purane records se to angel lg rhi h…..
pr hamari masti khor khushi ya maria darlings ho skti h…..
😉
ya pihu di? ???
arreee ye to kisi ki real story lgti h……
agar ye koi hmari family ka h… jst story likh rha h to …. this was very heart touchng n emotional n aisa kisi k sath na ho……
aur agar ye love story kisi ki real h to…… plz aap sad mt ho…. i kb real life me move on krna mushkil hota h bt agar aap ko lgta h ki wo khushi se kr rhi h to aap move on kr lo aur agar aapko lgta h she also lvs u to ho skta h ki wo family ya kisi k prssr me aakr k shadi kr rhi ho… u shd immediately cntact her n cnfss feelings n apne pyar ko dur hone se bcha lo….
sry agar meri advc buri lgi ho to
n agar ye sm one koi buddies me se h to plz mere cmmnts ka majak mt uraNa …. i jst wrt kyuki mujhe lga ki ye likhna chahiye….
Nop dear its not real story 🙂
who r u smone……
do i kn u? ??
Amazing…. I don’t have words to explain yr……u r too good…..Maine nhi socha tha ki shadi ka card hi aa jaayega….but u totally shocked me….
Yr plz apna naam bta do na…I just can’t handle the suspense and all…..vaise bhi sumo di apni ff aise suspense pe khatam ki and next part post hone mein abhi tym hai…main bas yahi sochti rehti hun ki aage kya hoga…..but plz yr…..tell ur name….I guarantee u that today I will not be able to sleep I will just keep on thinking that who can be this someone….plz iss suspense ke jaldi parda uthao….awesome episode
And yes m soo sorry I couldn’t comment on ur first part….I was very busy but I read it and enjoyed every bit of it….keep it up
khushi mai bhi soch rhi thi ki ye kaun h infact abhu tk soch rhi hu…… mujhe aisi feeing aa,rhi h ki ye koi buddies me se h…….
ni to new wrtr hote hue, frst ff hote hue cmmnts ka rply kyu ni krege .. ye koi purana wrtr h jo msti kr rha h….. SHAYAD
Nice episode…post your next episode soon…..
pari is dat u???
nh baba its not me i cant write so well 😀
it was nyc someone itna bara twist!!!!!!