Thankq to begin with for such encouraging reviews…..On a serious note when i started this it was to get over boredom…..My NEET is to be declared on 17 August and till that day I am free…. but when i started getting your comments applauds …..I am so highly obliged that i can’t tell you…basically i wanted to transform a great writer in me…..TU gave me platform….you all encouraged so here i am !…..Soon i am going to start a short POETIC DIARY OF SONA to show my poetic skills… hope it will entertain in the same manner..!
Love Devakshi’ans 🙂
Dev and Sona on road…
Sonakshi: Toh apne kaha ki mera dil apka hai aur ….is hisaab se apka dil mera hua…correct?
Dev: hmm… correct !
Sona: so you love me that much…’
Dev: I don’t knw… I love you …..how much I don’t know… because it is uncountable noun doctor sahiba..
Sona: ahahha…so agar kabhi apko apki family aur mujh mein se kissi ko chunn na pade who will you choose..
Dev: yeh kaise sawal hai….hmm… aap kehti hai na ki hai problem ka solution nhi hota …waise hi har sawal ka jawab nhi hota…!
Sona: Its ok..!
Elena rushes to her bag …. Anyhow fighting punching and pushing Vicky she reaches it…
She calls Sona first
Sona: ab yeh Elena kyun call kar rhi hai…Hello !
Elena: Sona…I need you…
Sona: Hello… Elena kya hua… is everything ok kahan hai tu…..Hello….
Call disconnected by Vicky…
Vicky: You don’t need her you need me…
Elena: stay away..!
She runs and locks her self in another room of Mr. Dev Dixit’s house
Vicky: kab tab bhagogi….aaj raat toh hum saath saath hain…
Dev: Kya hua…
Sona: Elena who kissi..problem mein hai…
Dev: kahan hai who..i will take you to that place…
Sona crying badly….: I just don’t know dev…!!!..dev kuch kariya…
Dev supports her… Hain Sona..!
Sona: Vicky !.. I know he did something I …m …sure dev….its Vicky !
Dev: agar tum itni sure ho toh mein janta hun ki Vicky iss waqt kahan hoga
Vicky (in full CID Daya style breaks the door)
Vicky: ab kahan jaogi…..bahut pareshan kiya tumne mujhe…tumhari wajah mein jail gya…aur kya kya nhi hua… ! All beause of you now pay for it…
Elena: Stay away…
Vicky moves towards her….and as he raises his hand Sona comes in between
Sona: sunaiyi nhi diya usne kya kaha….
Vicky: acha tum bhi aa gyi we all will have great time together…Right Baby…
Dev gives a tight slap on Vicky’s face
Dev: sahi kaha…we all will have great time…
——————–ENDS——————-
10 Comments
Awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeee 4nshika
awesomeeeeeee ! update soon
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Really too gud enjoyed a lot
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Greattttttt….epi.specially devakshi’s entry was awsome.seriously you r writing fabulous.loved it
Nice
great, awesomeeeeeeeeeee, superbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb…………………… , faaaaaaaaaaaaaantastic i loved it enjoyed a lot….
yaar keep writing like this and best of luck for your neet exam preparations……..
thankq …but preps are over now as exam is over….result is awaited wish me for that #THUGOFMBBS