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Part 16:
continue frm prev prt…….
— Shr is thinking.abt Sumo—
—he remembers smthng n goes to ram n nirmala—
ยซยซ door knocked ยปยป
Ram : cm in….
Shr: hey dad……i wanna talk to u abt smthng…..
Ram: yeah sure…..
Shr: dad i will join company…….aftr i will get my engineering degree ๐
Ram is soo surprised n nirmala also she stands up…..
Nir: but u said u will nvr evr join malhotra industries as it is boring …….. ๐ฎ
Shr: i said dat…….but now wat i am syng is my final desicion….
Nir: oh lekin is ka mtlb ye nh ke tumhari shaadi nh karwai jai gi…. ๐
suman se…… (she says naughtily)
Shr: AP ki marzi (he smiles) (n go bck to his room)…..
Both r cmpletly surprised by dis…….nirmala thinks smthng……—–…..—-
—-3 days pass lyk dis—-
At kapoors villa all r gather for dinner includinf shravan group—-
Nir: priya……actually i want to talk abt smthng if u dont mind…..
Pri: ofcourse u can y would i mind…..???
Nir luks at ram—
Ram: anurag….priya bhabi….hum Shr ke liay suman ka rishta mangana chahte hain… ๐ ๐
All r shocked—-
—-silence—- fr secs….
Shraman luk at eachothr—in shock—
Anurag n priya breaks d silence—
Aurag: ram ye hamare liay boht khushi ki baat hogi agr Shr se Sumo ki shaadi hoti hai……
Priya hugs Nir—-
All r happy except trisha……
Tia gives a thumbs up to Shr- ๐ — he smiles ๐
ram : aray ek bar baccho ki marzi toh pooch lo…… ๐
anurag: suman Shr kya tumhe ye rishta manzoor hai…???
Both say : if u r agree then i have no prob….. (n den luks at eachothr)
(both r happy vryyyy happy ๐ but didnt show their happiness)
Sumo cms to Shr: hey……umm…..tumne shaadi ke liay han kyun kari….??
Shr: kyun ke mom chati thi…… Or tum bhi toh yhi chahti thi na….?? ๐ (he smiles n walks awy leaving hr confused) she smiles ๐
Sumo: chati thi toh nai lekin ab chati hoon…..
Trisha cms frm behind:
Oooh Sumo how can u say yes fr marriage?? ๐ฎ
s: y nt????
T: i think u dont want Shr to be happy…..huh??
S: wat u mean?? ๐ฎ
t: babyyy……. Cant u evn c…..he is nt happy wid dis marriage….!!
S:wat…!!!???
T: yep!! he dont evn luv u how can he be happy!???
—-Sumo luks dwn in sadness—
S: but he said yes……….. ๐
T: dats because or Nir aunty……u knw that he nvr evr deny his parents order…..or phir us ne tumse khaa bhi toh hai ………..
Sumo is vry sad—–
Tr: luk at him…..( she makes Sumo luks at Shr)
He is so happy wid his frnds……. ( shr was laughing wid his frnds)
—-actually dey all r teasing him by d name of Sumo—–
—-n trishaaa ki bacchi knws dis—-
Tri: he is so happy……but if be will marry u his happiness will be ruined fr evr…..
S: no i….i cant see him sad….i….i love him
—–trisha is shocked—-
Wat!!?? U…u luv him??
Sumo sadly nods—–
Tri in mind– no no no…..Shr ko ye kbhi pta nai chlna chahiay…..
Tr: plzzz yr return him his lyf……..plzz
Sumo: Wat should i do……??
Tri: go back to London……..
Screen freezes—-
Precap: Shr to arrange a date fr Sumo ๐ ๐ aaj mai usy bata doon ga how much i luv her!!!! ๐ Tia: i am vry happy fr both of u……on d othr hand Sumo to leave India forever…….
So guys how ws d ep n how ws d Precap…..!?? ๐
dont worry sm good moment will cm up soon ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐
So here is d ques: Wat do u think will Shr find dat Sumo is leving him?? will he able to stop her???
Give ur views through Cmmnts …….! ๐
N yeah socho sochoooo ans bhi zarooir dena ๐
silent reader m dsprtly waiting fr ur Cmmnts…..!
By frnds !!
Love u all!! ๐
45 Comments
Amazing … I am waiting for the next part…..
Thanks dear…..! Keep loving n commenting !! ๐
Plz don’t create misunderstanding btw them,n I think shravan will stop sumo n confess the feelings
Hahahah don’t worry dear I already sad in lasts at good things r going to happen soon!!
Stay tuned……. ๐ ๐
Very good….keep it up…waiting eagerly for f next epi
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Thanks a lot WS !! Keep loving n commuting like dis !! ๐
Maria..shravan..ya..suman..ka tho pata nahi..??par yadhi tum chaho..tho ek pal mey sub kuch badal sakti ho..?????
Aur..mujhey lagta..hai..shr pakka sumo ko ROK lega ..aur ha..us good time k liye..him besabarisey..intzaar rahega..???โบโบ
Hahah thanks a lot sona di!! ๐
Nice tukka ๐ let’s see wat will happen ๐
N yeah good tym and wala hai
Ahhhhhh this trisha!!!!!!!!
Loved the epi ohhh i,m eagerly waiting for that good thing post soon
I hate hr but dont worry us ka bhi ilaaj ho jai ga ๐ ๐
Thanks fr cmmnting Di!!!
Ohhh Trisha ki bachiii ?? .. ep was superb … I think suman will not go … sharavan will stop her? .. waiting for shraman moments .. post soon ??
Thanks alot dear……!!!! M really glad u lyked it….!! Keep cmmnting dear…
Yeah their will be shraman moments soon… ๐
Btw fatima will u be my frnd??
Ohhh so sorry !!!! Mene apka reply abi dekhaaa … well frndship … I think I don’t know u … so m feeling hesitation? .. hopefully u will don’t mind Han ?
Maria ap hum se itny questions pochti ho lekin ap ne abhi tak mery question ka reply nahi kiya…….kya ap sab i mean ffs writers and readers mujhse frndship karo gy …….mujhy apni shoti si ffs ki family ma accept karo gy????? plz yarr do reply I’ll be waiting
Aray naina dear i already said dat in my prev prt Cmmnts u can c….
I m saying again dear y nt….. ๐ i will be very pleased to have such a nice frnd lyk u dear….!! ๐ welcome to our choti si family…… ๐ ๐ ๐ !!!!!
Lots of luv…..!!
Plzzzz yr ab tum bhi replyyy kari i am alsooo waitingg ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ dat if u read it dear…..!!
Yeah i read it and thanks for accepting me can i do me a favor plz????? Can u introduce me wd ir choti si family????? Actually i love making frnds but mujhy samajh nahi aati k frndship ka start kesy karon
Yes ofcourse but kuch memebers aj kl missing hain such as Fatarajo lavwly Di n khusi
baqi members angel Di nikita ufaq aff Sumo Di sona Di abhi kittu n many more….tum already is family ka part Jo dear…..!! Kisi se bhi baat karlo every treats u lyk a family member….! ๐
Oh hod naina y r u asking permission of getting entry sweetu
Anyway welcome to our family sweetheart
Kese ho????
Age kia h apki?????
Kis class main parhti ho?????
From where u belong????
So sorrrry itne share questions k liye answers needed
And ya will u be my friend main a
Naina naina naina oh god I like ur name very much
Outstanding and I think shravan will definitely stop her and misunderstanding will be cleared soon
Thanks alot Preeti dear…..!!
Nice tukka lets c Wat will happen….!!
I will be vry glad to c ur Cmmnts on next parts also dear…..!
By the way I am preeti and I love ur ff a lot
I m Maria….! naam toh sunna hi hoga :D. hahha just kidding (its a dialoge of srk) thank u sooo much fr loving my ff dear……
U also loved d way u described abt me n othr brillant ff writers ……..
Dear u r amazing tooo i believe….!! ๐
Btw Preeti will u be my frnd??
Yeah my guess was right….. osm epi Maria …. waiting for nxt part….??
Ur guess is always ri8 dear….! ๐
thanksssss alot fr cmmnting keep loving dear…..!
Knock knock Mario kese ho I hope u don’t mind if I call u Mario will u?? Anyway the epi was amazing but there should b no separation plzzzzzzz order h mera lol acha keep it up love u and ya plzzzzzz pray
Opening d door………
Hy api mai theek AP kaisi ho??
Absolutly nt a problem Pyaar se Jo bhi kho ๐
Thankssss alot api m really glad y lyked it!!
AP ka order slakhon pr….. ๐ ๐
Their will be a happy ending fr sure..!!
I m gud Mario and weather oh god garmi ki hakumat h
Karachiiiiiii Mario halat tho hain wahan ke ?????
And ya I don’t mind and I m from lower punjab
Hah!! ๐ halat sahi hain…….. Karachi kai!!
Wow lower punjab !! ๐ nice how’s d weather their!??? ๐
Karachi main garmi??? Seriously????
Garmi!!!?? same here ๐
Yep !! Boht!!
maria u r my friend already dear no need to ask
Awwww thanks alot dear….! ๐
BTW I m from Punjab
Wow punjab !! ๐ btw India wala punjab ya pak wala ๐
India wala punjab
Ooooohoo ๐ wow!!
awesome story….waiting for the next part…plsss update soon…
Thanks alot silent reader…..!! I will be very glad to c ur commnts on my nxr parts also!! ๐
This was amzing..ShraMan ki shaadi but sumo leaving.. No… I think shravan will go to the airport n propose… Post soon
Well very nice tukka dear…! ๐ lets se Wat will happen !! n thanks fr cmmnting!!