Hai All Frndsss….
So sry for not give rply…actually i don’t how many of u give comments for previous epi…only i can see tani’s comment…and i give rply…unfortunetly i couldn’t see that too….something is wrong….
I really hope all my readers got enjoy and gave comments….
So anyways now i’m uploading 11th epi….
I’m sooo glad that my FF crossed 10 episodes…….☺☺
Tanx to each and every1 who support me frm very frst beginning and till now….and i knw u all will be support me till end…..☺
frnds this s my first story in my life….and it becme dream story now…..
Bfore i start to write evn i don’t knw the difficulties of a Author….now i knw vry well it…and being an author i surely tell that reader’s comments only give us strength and motivation…..
Ok enough of my words….i’m directly going to EPI…..☺?☺
EPI-11
RAIZADA MANSION
Sona and Elena are coming towards Main Hall..
Sona’s eyes are get wet by crying….
Elena hold her…
S- No Elena i can’t handle myself…..
She tries to go back..
Elena holds her hand
E- Sona…now u hav to come…atleast for our bhaii’s sake….
Sona eyes get still teary eyes…
E- Sona i knw u r depressed….look him(points towards Arnav who is enjoying alot with his frnds…)he s too happy bcoz of u…i knw U can’t face Mr.Dixit….but hav to face all things…u already knw vry well that u hav to face all types of difficulties so nw y r u back off…??? U r my strong girl..r8…come lets go
Sona wipes her tears and both comes to hall…
SCENE-2
ISHWARI VILLA
Khushi’s room
Khushi is standing near the window and seeing outside…she is lost thinking deeply about something…suddenly someone came and hold her shoulder..she wakes up frm her thoghts and turned back shocked…
K- Maa…U….!!!!
Yh its Ishwari Maa
I- Yh..i’m y..???whr r u lost in thoughts…???
K- Nothing like that Maa…
She tries to hide the matter…
I-Khushi come here….
She hold her hand and make her sit in bed..both sit in bed….
I- Khushi….wat s bothering u tell me openly….
K- Maa….
Ishwari interrupts .
I- Beta i knw we both live seperately for many yrs….but it doesn’t mean that i can’t undrstand ur heart…i’m ur mom i can read all frm ur face….so don’t try hide anything..if u want to tell me something u can….
Khushi gets teary eyes and keep her face in her Maa’s lap…
Ishwari also gets emotion and cares her….
SCENE-3
RAIZADA MANSION
Dev and Arnav are talking to their business frnds…
Sona & Elena r also talking to their frnds and Sona is much better now…she s tensed…
Elena sees her tensed faced…
E- Sona wat happnd..??r u still….
S- Woh…i’m afraid
E- Y bcos of Mr.Dixit..????R u afraid bcoz he wil reavel to bhaii…
S- Not at all Elena…I trust him…he s not that kind of men…i knw
E- ok..then y r u afraid..???
S-I’m afraid bcoz whn Mr.Dixit can got this much hurt…Thn whn Bhai came to knw how much he got hurt…,??? My fear getting increase day by day…..
E- Sona don’t wry all get fine now only concentrate on bhai only……ok..???
S- Ok…
Arnav And Dev are talking to each other…
Dev is still in upsert and angered….but doesn’t shw and make fake smile in face pretend to be happy infront of all…
A- So Mr.Sixit how s party…?? Do u like arrangements..???
D- yh nice i lyk it…
A- ☺..ohh i so u should tell this to one who had this responsibility r8…
He called her…
A- Sona sona
both Elena and Sona turned…
A- Come here…
Both got nervousness…
Sona whispers in Elena’s ear..
S- Oh god Mr.Dixit s also there how can i face him…?????
E- U have to come…bhai is calling…
By saying this both are walks towards Arnav & Dev…
Dev got angered and turned his face…
Sona sees his anger and get more upset …..
With much hesitation She comes and stands there….
A- So Mr.Dixit She is My litle sister Sonakshi Singh Raizada…Sry Dr.Sonakshi Dingh Raizada…☺
Saying this by put his r8
hand around her shoulder….
Both Dev and Sona look at each other…and She can’t even face him so looks down…
Elena is also soo tensed seeing their looks and behaviour…
A- And yh He is my New business partner Mr.Dev Dixit…arreyy wat happend…..??y r u not stand statue…????
Both Dev and Sona Pretend to be unknown and Shake their hands..
D- Hello..Ms.Bo…..i mean Ms.SONAKSHI SINGH RAIZADA…
S- Hello Mr.Dixit….
A-☺…Mr.Dixit u told that arrangements are vry nice r8 its only bcoz of her…she had that responsibility….
D- oh…Its nice…Ms.Raizada
S- Tanq…
A-☺
Suddenly Arnav is called by someone and he went….
S- Mr.Dixit….woh..
Dev doean’t stand there and leaves….
Which make Sona hurt…tears are coming out of her eyes…
Elena sees her…
E- Oh Sona plzzz control urself……
S- Yh yh..
She wipes her tears…..
Sona’s POV
Its hurting me…i made him upset and he is anger on me…..i knw very well that whn my truth come out this could b i hav to face but i don’t knw early that Mr.Dixit make me hurt this much….evn i can’t see his face…his eyes are only filled with anger….i can feel that he will feel iritation whn i came infront of him…..Oh god wat happened to me…..????
Elena shakes her….
E- Sona…Sona look all r going to have food come lets help them…
S- Yh yh…coming…
By saying this both are leave to catering area…
But still Sona turned back and sees Dev is busy in talking with someother…..
She turned and go head…
Suddenly Dev turned back…..
His POV..
I didn’t except this frm u…I feel betrayal….i knw this s ur personel life nd matter but somewat i get hurt bcoz of ur personel matters….i feel like something is broking in me….heart is feeling do heavy…i feel like something(1) is going away frm me… i hav only fake smile on face….bt y i feel like this much….???
So friends this s the end of this epi…
I wl post nxt on nxt satuday… bt wednesday is holiday so if i can i wl post on wednesday…
Hope u all enjoy this….if it bcome some senti and irritation…sry….
U all support me till now i want ur support till end…..
I request all readers to give comment….
Feel free to give new ideas and suggestions…Really i need some new ideas/suggestion to take it further….soo plzz if anyone has such idea plzz tell me…..
Thank You
SAGAA☺
9 Comments
It’s really awesome saga
I am getting addicted to it day by day can’t wait until Wednesday
Tanq Sumaiya Sumi…
nice 1 ….plz try to post nxt part ASAP …eagarly waiting for it …^_^
Superb epi. Eagerly waiting for next epi. Plz post next 1 as soon as possible. I can’t wait until Wednesday.
Nice epi
It’s nice sagaa. If possible post on Wednesday only
Nice one sagaa
Amazing episode sagaa it was emotional yet touching…. Poor devakshi..post soon
it was really an amazing epi…u have written sona and dev’s emotions sooooo beautifully….pls continue soon can’t wait for the nxt part…..