Hey guys, I’m back. Sorry 4 d delay but my frnd was not well n I had gone 2 meet her. Sorry again. I cud not comment on d ffs, so here I go..
Prince and princess..by shaheerica – finally u posted after such a long gap. Luvd it..
Ishq f(o)re(ver)..by DevSona – vry vry interesting..I hope Sona accepts being Dev’s hired fiancée.
Pyaar ki kahaani..by Angell – luvd d naughty side of Sona.
Poisoned love..again by DevSona – I guess Sona’s new boss will b Dev. Were devakshi in love??
A step ahead..by 4nshika – you’re gr8, jhakass, superb, fab..I more than love u 4 using my name..Dev smiles only while talking 2 me..wow..u made my day..mmmuuuuaaahhhh..luv u.
Color of love..by Anshi – superb, luvd Devakshi’s cute n romantic moments.
The land of snow..by naren – amazing..enjoyed devakshi part a lot.
The magic of love – angel_pari, it was amazing..n did soha die??
Rang pyar ka (again) by asmita- both epi 14 & 15 were awesome..mission Hitler..hehe n plzz kick out dis yash asap..plzz i beg u..
My love story (Devakshi) by Maria – both d episodes were fab n I’m happy dat finally their love story can b completed, only if there r no upcoming twists.
Kya maa manengi..by simplesweety1 – luvd Devakshi’s cute romance at his me..alone. Waiting 4 sona’s bday.
My love a fan fiction..by dimple – love d episodes..hehe jealousy track ahead.
Kuch rang pyar ke ek duje ke vaaste..by Fatarajo – u don’t know how much I wait 4 it ff, its always so long n amazing. But plzz dont put any more twists in Devakshi’s union. Happy dat u extended it for 5 episodes.
Love can be measured?..by naren – amazinggg.
Dangerous love story..again by naren – Apu is always a suspense wala character..luv Devakshi’s moments.
Kuch rang pyar ke aise bhi (ek aur rang)..by Nishi – radha Rani..not again plzz n was d memory loss n all dat jazz a dream..if yes, thank god. Actually thank Nishi..lol..now dis Tara, if I guess she’s gonna b irritating idiot!!
Guys believe me, I read all ffs n plzz dont feel bad if I forgot your ff, I typed bt it got deleted n I can’t type again even if I wish to..
So let’s start d episode
RECAP: a family picnic planned on Dev’s Papa’s bday n Sona also invited.
Episode 11
Dixit house
Ishwari is wearing a cream color simple saree n is ordering d servant 2 keep all d food stuff n badminton kit, cricket bat n ball n a frisbee in d bus. (Remember..picnic) Nikki comes down shouting.
Ni: Neha Di, Ria Di, bhaiya..plzz come down fast.
I: ohho Nikki, don’t shout, they’ll come down na. You’re not gonna miss any train, so relax.
Neha n Ria come down. (Hey, I forgot 2 tell ant their outfits..Nikki is wearing a knee length denim jeans n a black top wid grey jacket. Ria is wearing an ankle length light blue denim jeans n a sleeveless tank top. Neha is wearing a black jeans n a pink balloon top.)
R: Nikki, u shout too much.
Ni: oh hello, if u take 2 hrs to get ready, even maa will shout. N even after taking 2 hrs, u cud not beat my style.huh.. Nikki is d best. R8 maa??
I: haan baba, r8.
Nha n Ria: maa!!
I: ok baba u all r best, bass!!
Jst then Radha Rani n Vicky enter. NRN make a boring face seeing them.
RR: v r also ready jiji.
I: but bhabhi, where is bhaiya?? Is he not coming wid us?
RR: no no jiji, actually he has some imp work 2 b done today only. So he won’t b joining us.
I: ok no problem.. atleast u r there wid us.
Ni: maa, evry1 has come, but where is bhaiya??
Jst then Dev climbs down d stairs wearing a denim jeans wid black T-shirt , brown jacket.
D: here is your bhaiya. N u shout too much!!
NRN r shocked 2 c Dev dressed so casually.
Ni: bhaiya, is dis really u?
D: shud I pinch u Nikki?
Ni: no no no no no..
R: bhaiya, u in such casuals!!
D: so shud I wear formals 4 a picnic?!
R: no no bhaiya..
Ni: tell me, jst tell me where hv u kept our bhaiya hidden.. u r bhaiya’s lookalike na??
I: shut up Nikki..stop irritating him.
Ne: ok so now all hv come r8?
D: no no Miss Bose has not come yet!!
NRN control their giggle.
D: I mean..umm.. its already 6. Nikki u call her na
Nikki calls Sona n Sona answers d call.
Ni: hello, Sona di, where r u??
S: Nikki, I’m jst coming in 15 mins. I’m leaving r8 now..
Ni: ok Sona di, come fast.
Bose house
Sona comes out n goes 2wards her scooty but..
S: Elena, yesterday I told u na plzz get d puncture repaired. Now how will I go?
E: (she’s too sleepy) plzz Sona, don’t start early morning!!
S: oh my god, now wat do I do??
Sona calls Nikki.
Ni: hello Sona di, wat happened? Where r u?
S: Nikki, I won’t b able 2 make it..my scooty’s tyre is punctured.
Ni: plzz Sona di, do sth but don’t miss d picnic.
S: wat can I do Nikki?
Ni: umm..idea. bhaiya will come n pick u. U b ready bhaiya is coming within 5 mins. Ok bye
S: hello..Nikki..hel..
Nikki cuts d call without even listening 2 Sona.(she’s so smart u know. She knew dat Sona wud not agree)
Ni: bhaiya, go fast n pick Sona di from her house.
D: but y??
Ni: arey bhaiya, her scooty’s tyre got punctured..u go na go go go go go..
D: ok ok I’m going..
RR: (irked) wow jiji. Now a boss has 2 go 2 pick his servant. Dis bangalan has too much tantrums.
I: bhabhi, it’s ok na n she has no tantrums..
RR makes faces.(she herself us sooo ugly dat she doesn’t hv 2 make faces.huh)
Bose house
Dev reaches there n sees Sona sitting on her scooty. Her back is facing him. He calls her. She turns. Hawwww..Dev is jst flat seeing her new look. She was wearing a light blue ankle length denim jeans n a baby pink full sleeves high neck top n black n white shoes. Her hair, left open talking wid d air (u know hava se batein krna). She was looking damn cool n smart n beautiful n enchanting. Dev was totally lost in her beauty. Sona comes n snaps her fingers in front of Dev.
S: Mr Dixit..
D:(he comes back 2 his senses) ha..ya Miss Bose??
S: where r u lost??
D:(he thinks) in u, your beauty..
(he says) no..nowhere.. come let’s go.
S: I’m sorry Mr Dixit, actually my scooty’s tyre got punctured n bcz of dat u had 2..
D: it’s ok Miss Bose, no problem.
S: Ty Mr Dixit.
D: you’re welcome..n hurry up or else Nikki will kill me.
Sona smiles n sits in d car n Dev drives off 2 Dixit house. On their way, Dev was trying 2 change d gear n while doing dat, his hand touched Sona’s hand. They both look at each other n share an eyelock. Dev breaks d eyelock n looks forward. A smile comes in his face. Sona looks outside through d window n enjoys d wind flowing. They reach Dixit house. They get down d car n Nikki drags them towards d bus n all of them sit in d bus n head off 2 the Chhattarpur farmhouse of d Dixits. Vicky eyes Sona wid lustful eyes while Dev stares Sona so lovingly.(guys, I forgot 2 tell dat Bunty is also coming wid them.)
Ni: Neha Di, don’t u think it’s getting boring. Picnics mean singing, dancing, playing n enjoying ourselves to d fullest.
Ne: yeah Nikki, you’re r8.
R: wait I’ll play d radio.(ya private buses can hv radios.)
Ria switches on d radio n A B C D song from Hum Saath Saath Hain plays(guys it’s my favorite movie so plzz bear old song)
Music plays.. He..He
ABCDEFGHI – Bunty
JKLM – Vicky
NOPQRSTUVWX – Dev
YZ – Dev sits near ishwari
I love u – he hugs her
Hey..- all shout
ABCDEFGHI..JKLM.. NOPQRSTUVWX..YZ – All sing together.
I love – Ishwari hugs all her children.
Whistle tune plays n Vicky roams around Sona n whistles.
La la la la plays n Nikki takes Sona away from Vicky.
Chhuttiyon ke ye din h suhane, saathi tera yu Saath rahe.
Bacchon k sang bacche phir ban jayein, mauj mein jhoomein zara masti karein.
Banke badal, banke panchhi, udte rahein..- Dev sings dis for Bunty.
ABCDEFGHI – Neha
JKLM – Ria
NOPQRSTUVWX – Nikki
YZ – Sona
I love you – Neha, Ria, Nikki n Sona hug. Dev eyes Sona lovingly n sings dis line vry slowly. Awwwww so cute. (Bas Bas, enough of song.)
They reach d farmhouse. Nikki literally jumps out of excitement. She n Ria, drag Sona n Neha 4 selfies. They click selfies while both Dev n Vicky stare Sona (u know y). Sona noticed dis n she takes NRN 2 some other spot 4 their selfie session. Ishwari n Mami roam around d garden. Evry1 is having cold drinks n snacks. Nikki, as usual, speaks up.
Ni: hey, come-on, let’s play something.
B: cricket..no no, how will u girls play cricket.
R: wat do u mean Bunty bhaiya.!?
D: he’s r8. How will u girls play cricket?? It’s a boys’ game.
S: how can u say dat Mr Dixit!! R u challenging girls.?
V: sth like dat..sushmita..
S: Sonakshi..n 4 u, Dr Bose.
B: ok ok..so boys Vs girls..wat say??
All: done..
There r 2 teams, of course. In d boys’ team, there r Bunty, Dev n Vicky. In d girls’ team, there r Neha, Ria n Sona. Nikki is d umpire. Bunty n Neha r captains. The match starts.
First over by Bunty.
On strike – Ria. Off strike – Neha
0 4 2 1 0 6
2nd over by Vicky.
On strike – Ria. Off strike – Neha
6 W (Ria out n Sona in on strike) 4 4 1 4
3rd over by Dev.
In strike – Sona. Off strike – Neha
6 4 4 6 6 6 (u know na Dev was lost in Sona, so how will he bowl well)
The boys had 2 chase a target of 65 runs.
IInd innings
1st over by Neha
On strike – Vicky. Off strike – Bunty
4 W (Vicky out n Dev in on strike) 6 4 1 6
2nd over by Sona
On strike – Dev. Off strike – Bunty (guys Dev was hell nervous as Sona was d bowler)
0 0 (Bunty shouts on Dev dat was is he doing) 1 6 1 W
The girls jump in happiness especially Sona. Dev didn’t even realise dat he was out (he was busy adoring Sona). D sun was going 2 set n all were sitting near d pool. Mami was standing at d pool side n Vicky was clicking her picture.
Ni: Mami, don’t go near d pool, if u’ll fall then?
All hv a good laugh n Radha Rani makes faces.
I: Nikki..
Ni: sorry sorry
I: ok now, it’s getting dark. Let’s go inside n u all take some rest.
All go inside. Sona comes back 2 take her phone which she had forgot at d pool side. She takes her phone n was abt 2 go in when..
Guys I’m ending dis episode on d suspense n no precap today. So keep thinking.
I wud like..sorry luv 2 thank all those who commented on d previous episode.. Ty 4nshika, ibtesam, Simplesweety1, Sumaiya Sumi, AYUSHI, Dimple (I’m glad dat u commented 4 d first time n dat too on my ff), Laxmi.
18 Comments
Superb epi….
Amazing update next asap
awesome episode update soon specially loved the cricket scene
Hey. I m commenting of any ff first time. I love your series and wait for them eagerly. Luv it and update fast
I took some time to wonder what NRN but then I realised it could be neha,riya and Nikki!!!so cool!!and I Guess since Radha Rani ki bacchi was by the pool side and forgot her phone there,Radha would have pushed her,and then umm…she wouldn’t know how to swim,and then dev will save her!!oops ore baba!!sorey di!!i just tried to expose your suspense??maaf karna☹??
Loved it! Upload the next one soon???
Amazing episode
Can’t wait for the next epi….post soon…and thnq…am very happy that u liked my ff.
Very Good…. Post soon…
Wow excited! Update it soon!
Loved It! 🙂
awwwleee..! i m waiting for confession make it in the night under stars….
Awsome!!!!!!!!! Aarti please post the next part soon.
Excited for the next one …
Awesome yaar. very much excited for next epi !!!!!!!
post soon,
loved it ???
Nice epi and i think vicky will try to do smthng as he is keeping bad eye on sona
Just one word awesome ????
Plzzzz uplode next soon
Plzzzz jaldi upload karo next episode….. I am eagerly waiting for the next episode..