Hello people a very lovely EID MUBARAK to u all…….!!
Consider dis as a second eid day gift…. 🙂 🙂
Cause tommorow i qill nt have tym to post it…..!! 😀 so lets strt…..!!
IN A MALL:
—3 boys were talking while walking—
(d boys were shr -our hero- & his frnds adi n rahul )
Adi: tu na labhi hi mat kr shaadi ….!! Sahi hai na (in a taunt way)
R: han n never love smone!!!
Shr: no yr its nt abt it i want my love story to be different frm othrs……..
A: ok…if so….lets make ur love story diff…..
(shr Ws cnfused)
A: if u find any item of a girl such as n earrinv payal or ring etc ets she will ve ur lover….. 😀 kaisa
shr: idiot.!! Who will leave her item of jewlryy fr me?? Stupid…..
(sddnly he put his boot on smthing)
S: hey wats dis….??
A: an earring…!!!!!! Yes she is ur lyf patner!! 😀
s: shut up…!!!
R: u shut up!! Look yr its a sign 😀
AT NI8—-
—shr is in his bed looking at d earring (yes he brought d earring wid him)—-
Is it true?? D owner of dis earring will be my lyf patner?? Wat if she is moti or choti!?? 😮
He keeps d earring on sidetable n sleeps
{ in his dream he saw a beautiful girl wearingvd same earring }
He wake up n its morning _____
He thinks abt d girl____
__usally he gets her dreams so he strts makiing her sketches___ 😉 😉 😉
—-He strts love hr dreamgirl—–
—But his alliance is already fixed wid sumo his father’s best frnd’s daughter—
He ws upset— he nvr saw hr—
One day she cms to his house in order to meet him cause she also nvr saw him—-
–she went to his room but couldnt find him there—-
(she strts to go sdnnly her eyes stuck to an earring)
—she goes near earring n say surprisingly—-
S: happily my earring!!! 😀
FLASH BACK:
AT D MALL:
yes guys it ws sumo whose earring got missing……it ws hr favourite earring…..
PRESENT:
She ws soo happy…..
—-shr cms fr behind he couldnt saw hr cause she ws standing with back at him—
Shr slowly: suman……..
She ws abt to turn he stops hr—
No no…no….plz dont turn badi mushkil se i hav got d courage to tell u smthng—-
Shr: look i knw our marriage has fixed i cant deny my parents wish but i want to tell u smthng dat i love smeone else……
Sumo gets a shock.-.-.-.- 😮
(he tells abt evrythng n abt his dreamgirl)
Sumo gets a double shock cause aftrall she is d girl shr love….. 😀 but she doesnt knw that she ia his dreamgirl
shr: i….i knw this is insane u think dat i am an idiot……. But i am sorry if u want to marry me after knowing dis u can ……..the choice is urs………..
He goes awy….
Nir : wat happened isnt she beautiful..??? 😀
shr lied : yes she is……
Aftr sm days shr loses all hopes…..
Shr: i will nvr able to find hr …….. 🙁
(he calls sumo n tells her to meet him at sm park) (she agrees)
AT PARK:
shr is waiting fr sumo fr a long time he ws tired so he starts making sketches of his dreamgirl…….
—-he smiles—-
U r only exist in my sketches only…… 🙁
Itne mai tezz hawain chalne lagi…. 😀
n all d sketches falls pn d ground……
Sumo reach there n ws shocked to c her sketches only……
She picks them up shr couldnt c her but he picks all d sketches n turns around………..
——-u can imagine guys——— 😀 😀
he sw d luv of his lyf infront of hr….. 🙂 🙂 🙂
Shr: sumo………….
S: ye sb……….mere sketches…????
Shr: tum sumo……??? Ho meri…….dream…..
S is tearly eyed………
Shr: i….i love u..u r my dream girl.. ws its ur earring in excitment????
(he ws dam happy) 😀
sumo : yeah…….
Shr: oohhh!! My……..god (he takes out a box frm his pocket) in opens it…. (a beautiful ring is shown)
Shr: sit on his knees……..
U knw wat today i lost all hope to find u……..
I always dreamed u….. 🙂 🙂
He is tearly eyed—–
I though ke mai aj tumse yani sumo se shaadii kr hi loon ga…..dil se hi han kardioooon ga……
Ye ring maine dreamgirl yani tumhare liay li thi…!! 🙂 😉
—-sumo is just silent—-
—-she is just sooo happy—- 🙂 🙂
Shr: will…….u marry me my love…?? 🙂
(sumo happily nods yes )
—-n they hug each othr—–
Shr: i love u……:)
Sumo: i love u more……:)
Shr: i love u most…….. 🙂
—aftr d hug he makes her wear ring…..
They sit on a bench near a fountain….
N chat…..
Sumo: i dont knw wat to say………u…i also loved u u knw wat today i saw u fr d first time ever……
N u ………proposed me…. 🙂
Shr: but i sw u day ago…….but face to face today…….. 🙂
Shr: plzzz nevr leave ne again…….
S: nvr… 🙂
——— THE END———
so guys how ws it.?????? 😀
Did u lyk it????
Plzzzz do cmmnt….!!
N silent readers u toooo!!! 🙂 🙂
I will post ep of my ff on sunday…. 🙂
By byyyyy frnds again a very happy eid mubarak to all……
Stay happy stay blessed… 😀
love u all..!! 😀
38 Comments
Superb yar what a story u r really just wow i dont have words to explain…..and sorry gor my last comments on one shot of Shraman i dont remember the name actually i just wanna share my thoughts about love but i think i was too harsh sorry for that
Thanks a lot dear…..!! 😀
Awww nt a prob dear…. 🙂 🙂 don’t say sorry ur words ws nt harsh…..naina 🙂 🙂 u just shared ur thoughts dear 😀
Hey naina u were not harsh u just spoke ur mind and there is nothing wrong in that dear….and even I agree with u partially….even I believe that true love does not exist in this selfish world and true friendship is also rare ……but I don’t care about money also….??
And yes no need to say sorry…..and so now as we r friei would like to know in which class r u??
Even i agree wid u both true love dont exist in this world people want onlyyy money…..
Mostly peoples but tu pr ane ke baad itni achi little cute family…..!! True frndship kahi na kahi abhi Bhi hai Lekin love uffffff……….
M sorry Maria….Teri OS pe main hi comment kari jaa rhi Hun….. But karun I talk alot so aadat se majboor Hun…..I hope u don’t mind yr??
Hai or rabba ye Bhi koi bat hoi…… 😮 kuch vi ainvi 😀
Evn I talk alotttttttt yr Hehehehehehehe same pinch!!
Nai yr Mai kyun mind Karne lagi mujhe toh pasand hai koi mujh se bate kare…!!! 😀
Hy khushi i m in 12 grade and even i like to talk too much so me, u and maria are same…..so same pinch ?????
Me too same pinch hahahaahaha hi naina how r u sweetu???
Hey it was damn cute… Loved it. Post ur next part soon…. Luv you di
Sure dear n thnk u soooooo much fr commenting !! 😀
Nice one….
Thanks dear……. 🙂
Damn awesome di
Thanks a lot dear….!! 😀 m really glad u liked it 😉
Awww it was so cute and amazing dear
…U have raised the standard pretty high babe…..love u yr….simply amazing no words to say aise hi bahut saari cute and mast OS and ffs lekhte rehna…
Btw kya hua tera registering ka??
I have replied u on my love is blind part 2 page check if u had not…..
And yes I have sent a mail also in ur Gmail account do read it also…
Aawwwwww thank u so sooo much dear….!!
Tera cmmnt mujhe Khush kar deta hai yr khushi…! 😀 😀
Yep sureeeeee….!!!!
Yr registering ka abhi tk koi msg nai bhaija unho nape or Jo teri mail hai us pr password mang rai hain badtameez …………!! Ab wait hi kar rahi hoon kab bhaije gai msggg tu wale……. Already 13 hours ho gai hain…
Btw do u knw where is lovely di.??
Simple..sweet and cute story..?☺☺
Thanks alooootttt sona di….!! 😀 m really glad u lyked it.! 🙂
See Mario these telly wale didn’t post my os I hate them
Anyway ur is was amaaaaaaazing awesome super duper hit
I loved it
Take care
Aaa hhhh ye TU wale!!
API ap in ko bolo na badtameez kahin ke!!
I alsooooo hate dem
Thanks alotttttt n Lott API m really glad u lyked it!!
Heyyyy guyzzzz whats up kya bt h maira os was amazing yar loved it ese e sweet os post krti raha karo……
Or han tmhari lovely di ki tbyt thori thk nh h islye she s missing……
Hahahahaha but maira and ufaq tu walon ko bari dant par rahi h tm dono ki taraf se whats gng on…..
Bht hi batameez log hain ye ullo k sar
Hahahhaahhahah ullo ke sarrrr 😀 😀
Han yar ye hain he ullo ki sar
Hahah api 😀 acha it’s me maria got registered!!
Gud
Hyyy angel di
Hahaha thanks a lot di!! 😀
Ooh 😮 lovely di get well soon …………..
Ye tu wale na di………… Bs kya bolo
Maria what to elsay ur is are always very nice and interesting one yr u write so sweetly and waiting for ur ff next epi
Awww thank u sooooo much yr….!! M really glad u lyked it dear…. 🙂 🙂
Loved It !
Thanks dear…!
Yaah it was very good…! Keep it up maria…
🙂
Thanks dear…!! It’s me got registered!
Wohooo finally our maira got registerd congoo 😉
Thank u sooooooo much!! Finally!!