hiiiii…..i think u all r not liking my ff as only 4 cmnts.i m really disappointed.if u all wil not supportt me den i will not b able to write further
anyways….i would like to thank u to d cmnters
ANGITA
SIDMIN
PURNIMA
SAYEEDA
u know i m on time today……..but if u all r not liking den i will stop it
anyways….today i m writing for whom who had cmnt on my ff…..
EPISODE:15
episode starts with kunj jerks off tw hands….n tw falls near d bed due to sudden ..n den “AAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH” TWINKLE SHOUTED n turned around…..kunj was first confused den he also “aaaaaaaaahhh” but not so loud as tw…actually d towel which kunj had wrapped around d waist got unwrapped coz it was loose n kunj had hold it but wen he takes off his hand from it for jerking tw hands dat time…………it unwrapped
kunj quickly bend down but with lots of difficulty as his joints wer bleeding…he took d towel n wrapped it around his waist n takes d clothes…while all dis tw was looking different side as she had seenn………………….
kunj went to bathroom but on d way to bathroom d t-shirt falllll down which isnt notice by both n he left.in d bathroom he wear capry(actually it was jeans cum capry…but he wore capry coz it was paining)
n den he notice dat t-shirt is not der
he thought dat tw would hav left d room so,he came out
he sees tw sitting on d floor at d same position n was feeling very guilty.
kunj bows down to her n tw turns.she thinks:i know dat kunj cant see me crying dats y he came to console me
but her thought came to an end wen she became shocked…as kunj hadnot bowdown to console her but for taking his t-shirt which is near her(bechari…..twinki……………popat)
kunj was trying to wear his t-shirt but was not able to
tw goes to him n starts making him wear his t-shirt
she takes his one hand n make her wear 1 sleeve same she does with another…at dis procedure both were lost in eachother n having intense eyelock
now twinkle stands on her toes to make him wear .she was very close to her face dat both could feell eachother breath n bymistake tw soft lips touched his cheeks he got hurt n he smile still not in his sense…now he had wore his t-shirt completely but both were in d same position
until
“thak thak”yes some1 knock d door
both come to der sense……both smile hiding it from eachother dan again
“thak….thak”
tw quickly goes n open d door
purnima comes in
purnima:kunj…….come let me bamdage u
kunj was about to say something but…
tw:no purnima…i will do it….give it to me
purnima:i said naa….i will apply ointment n dats finalyy
tw:no i willl
purnima.no me
dey both continue fighting until dey notice dat sayeeda is applying ointment
seeing dis purnima left being disappointed but tw………
tw:hey sayuu give it to me…i wil apply
sayu:no i m doing dis
tw:GIVE IT TO ME(while shouting)
sayu:i will not…..coz of u only my kunj is suffering…
tw feels bad n jealous tooo
she sits on bed silently
kunj who was noticing dis feels bad coz he also want tw to apply ointment…n feeling uncomfortable with sayu..she is coming close to her face n appplying ointment…n touching his fingures on her face sensually(sorry sayyu)
tw felt very jealous coz dis happening because of her only
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i hope it is long enough…n do cmnt
n sorry sayu but he to dthis
12 Comments
Nice ?? arah yaar aamu wo tu ki site open nai hori thi isliye we r late in commenting???
Well epi was awesome do cont asap
Sorry for late comment go reply updates KO koye problem theh isiliye late hogayi. Episode was amazing yaar
awesome epi…loved it…& don’t u dare to end this ff….your ff is amazing……
Amu di sorry as i usually dont comment..but srsly i dont get any time to comment..but yeah i read all..plzz plzz plzz don stop ur ff..i love it very much..plzz na..n about todays epi..it was just awesome..super duper hit..fantastic..i noe u r thinking ki makhan laga rahi..buttering nvo bhi amul butter but nahi di i srsly loved it..or comment ki tension kyu lete ho..u will surely get comments di..see me..i started my ff before u n i dint completed 10 epis also..i noe i m lazy but this lazy girl commented this much..so plzz dont end it..loved it..love u..muah
aamu i m reaaly very sorry that i am late in commenting as i was bzy from 6 days thats why i was not able to write my ff also “YOUR LOVE TAUGHT ME MEANING OF LIFE” but now i will commnt and pls forgive if i will not be able to do it early and one more thing pls all the guys do read and commnt on my ff
Nice epi..sorry 4 not commenting on the last epi but kya karun tu site was not opening.
Hey aamu it was too good yaar
N u know na that this site was under maintenance…. So I wasn’t able to read ur previous episode…
Loved it❤❤
Amazing epi and don’t end it please loved the epi
Don’t be sorry Aamu it’s OK ….
I felt so happy to see Twinkle getting jealous with me …nd kunj feeling uncomfortable …as Twinj is made for eo …nd I wanted them to be always close… nd I loved that part very much….
Plzzz……yrrrr ….don’t think of ending ur ff …its too good ..u know na TU sever problem nd coz of that many ppl r not able to comment so don’t feel bad….
nice epi aamu
aamu…. darling dont get dissapointed darling…..
i m on an hectick schedule…. just know came across all this ff’s…
love ur ff so much….
and specially love uh more.. as uh do so much efforts to bring smiles on our faces….
love uh so much darling and thank you for this amazing ff and todays episode?
wat to say…… sayuuuu ko puch kitna blush ho rahi hogi….
omg ammu osm yr srsly luvd it bt twinj