Hii guys here with new ff I hope you all like it…….please comment I will post only if you like it but I have a condition I know mei bahut demand kar rhi hu but kya karungi mei bhi to aap sab ki cutteee si pyari si intelligent si behen hu????
So hu naa mei aap sab ki behen(plz haa batana jarur)?
Ok scroll maat karo mei batati hu aage apne demand haa to wo ye ki
1 and 2….
Aab sonch rhe hoge ki ek boli aur do demand mang rhi hu but aap logon ne to suna hi hoga buy 1 get one free???
So here intro warna aap logon mujhe bolo ge aur meri demands niche hai
Characters:
Twinkle taneja:- a cute bubbly self confident girl.
-loves her family a lot.
-teacher by her profession.
-do anything for her family.(point the word anything my lord???).
-daughter of leela rt and pinni.
Mahi taneja:sister of twinkle and loves all a lot but loves herself more……
Maya singh:cousin sister of twinkle and mahi but regarded themselves as their own or say more than own.
Rt taneja:father of twinkle and mahi.
Leela taneja:mother of twinkle and mahi.
Pinni singh:bua of twinkle and mahi and sister of rt.mother of Maya and twinkle. (Its secret).
Kunj Sarna:-a handsome boy but has some dark past.(which will be revealed later).
-hate his father and mother due to some reason.
-love his brother and can do anything for him.
-love his mother a lot.(aab aap log sonch rhe honge mei pagal hu but nhi ye saach hai I mean ye nhi ki mei pagal hu but ye ki he loves and hates his mom)…(kaise ye baad mei pata chalega).
Manohar sarna: father of kunj and yuvraj.
Anita sarna:mother of yuvraj.
Yuvraj sarna: cutteee sweet smart caring boy love his brother kunj a lot.
Rest characters will be revealed as story take place.
Twinkle is from a small village of Amritsar whereas kunj is from London let’s see how they meet this time with their love.
So tell me if you like the plot only then I will post the first episode.
And at last mera demand.
1: you all have to comment either you like it or dislike it.I mean agar pasand aaye to tarif or naa aaye to tomatoes aur Jo bhi chaaho wo comments mei daal dena but promise karo comment karoge ok.
And now 2: I will post rarely I mean after a gap .ye batao ki koi problem to nhi usse .
So mere Teeno questions ka answers mujhe chitthi ke dwara I mean comment se bhej dena bye love you all…..???
And kya aapko mera new style aacha laga?
Agar aacha laga to dil pe Lena nhi to dimag mei bhi nhi ok ok jyada ho gaya I know bye but request hai aap sab se refuse maat karna mere ff pe comment naa dekar mere dimag ko fuse maat karna???? just joking bye…see you light camera off…….bye????
16 Comments
welcome back little sister π
Seems interesting! Looking forward to the next update!
-Zuha
Hey lover nice plot..do continue..n i dont mind if u post the epi late but plz give a short precap..
Hey lover
Glad to see u back
N the plot seems interesting
Go for itβ€β€
Amazing Plot lover…..
Looking forward for next update..
I’m happy to see u back ….
About ur gaps it’s OK …whenever u feel comfortable Post it…
love u
Hahah welcome back sis n like this plot along waiting for story now n do post whenever u get time ????
Missed u
I am glad that u r back
interesting…..eagerly waiting for part one…..
oh dear lover amazing pls post asap u cn
Interesting plot looking forward for the first part
Oh I think I understand why he love and hates his mothers as maybe usha is his real mum that he loves and Anita is his stepmother that he hates and maybe he hates his father cuz he ccheated on his real mother usha? I hope I am right…
Amazing plot and concept dr can’t wait to read????
Hi! lover . wow,u r back with an interesting ff…d intro was really amazing & so many suspence wow its…& d way u introduce every thing with a tadka of ur comedy was perfect…& here I’m too exited for ur first epi….& hope this time I would able to comment on ur every epi….eagerly waiting for ur first epi…but u can take ur time
Interesting but but but I’m sorry I think the character sketch is a bit complicated yaar
Amazing plot…I feel Usha is his real mom n Anita his step mom.. that’s y he is hating…do continue..post whenever u feel comfortable…
Wow di I loved it vey very mich but manohar father of kunj and uv and anita sarna mother of uv hmmmmlots of mysteries and ya no problem if u post rarely.. ..but plz continue as soon as posible and ya I live u . ur ffs and os and urbakbak nd ya ur r like my sis only
The plot seems to be interesting .. continue asap π and regarding for posting , post them whenever you are comfortable π
Lover…. Glad to see uh again….
Welcome back….
And loved the plot… Many confusions yaar…
Kunj loves and hates her mom???
And dark past sounds interesting???
Do come with the epiii soon…. Love uh??