Hello guys…..!! 🙂
Thanks a lot fr cmmnting on prev prt…tight hug frm me to all…! 😀
—guys m v pray fr me I m infected with a virus…..wanna post early bt can’t cause I didn’t write it…..now I wrote it cause m little bit fyn n also it’s late I guess. So enjoy–
Here is prt 9 of my ff….it’s a little bit short…
Hope u lyk it…..
Previously: shr fainted,sumo cares fr him whole ni8……
———-PART 9————
Continue frm prev ep….
–BREAKFAST TABLE–
K: little??…..a lot !!!
Shr is confused—-
Ayesh: yes don’t u knw that she care fr u…….
—everyone shouts “whole ni8”—-
(Shr jaw drops in shock ness)
Adi pats him: ooh bhai moon band kar warna makhhi (fly) ghuss jai gi….
(Everyone laughs)
Shr: ooooooooooy really?? She…….she..stayed wid me whole ni8??
K: yes yr…!! (She tells him everything)
—-bcz of happiness “shr ka dil garden garden ho Gaya—
Shr: that means she……still cares fr me…..a lot.!
(Everyone smiles)
—SCENE SHIFTED TO KHUSHI’s HOUSE—-
—-she n adi r on a conference call wid ayesh n rohit except shr n sumo bcz they already said no—–
K: so u both r coming na?? C’mon yr plzz I brought I new farmhouse n u have to cm once to visit it……
Ayesh n rohit : yep done!
K:gud !!
(She hangs up n thinks how she reconcile shraman through they r nt even facing eaChOther……)
Scenes changes to farmhouse…..
Everyone (Khush,adi,rohit n ayesh) r chatting wid eaChOther n it’s heavily raining outside——
Suddenly two voices heard……one frm back door who has a gift infront of face n one frm front…..wid a bouquet infront…..
Voices: Surprise!!!!!!!!!
( they heard eaChOther n removes their things)
Both sumo n shr r shocked to c eaChOther……
(Everyone gets happy)
—they gets up n greets them—
K: sumo!!!!!!
Adi: shr!!!!
Ayesh: both came!!
Rohit: in same tym!! Wow!
—sumo give gift to Khush—
—n shr fives bouquet to adi—
Both in same tym: I though to give u a surprise…..
(N then luks at eaChOther in surprise)
A: whatever now you’ve both come so let’s gup shup (chit chat)
—shraman feels awkward—-
—AFTER SM TYM—-
S: yr it’s heavily raining….n also late I think we should go home…
Shr: ri8 …..
K: hey it’s only 9 yr…uff if u both go then how we fun?? N u knw this……
—-she throws chips at adi who is watching news—
K: pagal…..he is soooo boring n these two (rohit n ayesh) the love birds who r always busy in love confession…
(Shr laughs)
K: ye I will felt bored alone….
S: hawwww so cm wid me….
(Khush don’t want them to go bt to keep them together)
—IN NEWS—-
Most of d ways r bloked due to heavy rain…(they tell d areas name)
—n shraman gets shock hearing all the name which r around farmhouse—-
S: that means……………??
Shr: we stuck here….!!!!!!
K: so?? We all have brought cloths wid us cause we knw that it will happen….
Shr: that’s means u all r staying here!!????
(Everyone nods)
A: u didn’t brought cloths wid u ???
S: wat the hell!!!??? Why didn’t u tell me before…!!??? Ahhh y I came here..
K: oooyyyy chill anna band kar meri maaa….hame toh pata Bhi nai tha that u both r coming…..
Shr: yr…..!!! I don’t have cloths…
Adi: share mine….
S: mee tooooo….
Khush: share mine…..
(Both gets agree cause they didn’t have a choice)
—THEY IGNORE EACHOTHR —
At late ni8 shr cms to kitchen fr water…sumo is already present there making sandwich fr her…..
Shr saws her wid a smile on his face bt she ignores him……..
Shr: so hungry huh??
—sumo doesn’t reply—-
Shr luks at her…..
Shr: thank u……( still no reply )
Shr: hmmmmmm….I knw u take of me whole ni8……
—-she luks at him in shock—-
Shr: yes i knw n thank u so much fr that….
S: keep ur thanks wid u I don’t need it…..
—-shr gets irritated wid her such behaviour—-
—she strts to go but he holds her hand frm back—-
S: wat is d prob wid u???
Shr: no…correction wat is d prob wid u?? Here I m trying to be nice trying to forget everything n u…………
S angrily: correction wat u did isn’t easy to forget…..n I need tym I want to stay away frm u…..
Shr: oh so that’s why u came last ni8 huh…?
—sumo doesn’t reply—
—shr strts to cms closer to her by taking steps forward n she takes back ward—–
Shr: wat happen?? Don’t have any ans of this..??? Answer me y u came last ni8 If u want to stay away frm me…..
(Shr pushes sumo back into the wall and lowers his voice)
Shr: the thing is u can’t stay away frm me………..
—sumo strts to say smthing bt he cuts her—-
Shr: I loved u….not love u..wat is so hard to accept that I loved u it’s past…can’t u think abt present n future..?? Let me say 1 thing very clearly….I don’t love u..! U r only a best FRND of mine…..
(He leans closer to her face n luks at her lips….sumo closes her eyes in nervousness)
—shr more lowers his voice—
Shr: n abt the kiss……….it WS a joke don’t take it serious either….
(Sumo opens her eyes n luks at him)
—-saying this he goes away—-
–n sumo is just standing there in shock by his such behaviour….she never saw his this side—-
–she sighs–
In morning at breakfast table…..
All r having breakfast……
Shr: hmmm yum who made this pancake…..
K: sumo…..
Shr: nice yr sumo u r nt a bad cook…! Warna I though after that cake accident…
(He laughs everyone gets surprised seeing his such behaviours)
A: everything is………..
Shr cuts ayesha: ok….(He luks at sumo) Haina sumo??
(He smiles)
(S didn’t have a choice instead of saying yes…..so she nods wid a fake smile)
Scene shifts near kitchen after 15 min where shr n s r talking…..
S: wat u think of ur self?? How can u behave so normally.?? Don’t u forget that wa………..
—he cuts her—-
Shr: wat happened ?? Huh…. Let me tell u….nothing happened….I already told u yesterday abt everything…..do I need to tell that again (he moves closer to her)
S: stop…stop…..(she stops him coming towards her by placing her hand on his chest) y u always cm closer…….??
Shr: I will doing that until u accep me as ur FRND again…..(sumo gives a confused Luk) Luk sumo….I don’t love u….anymore..I just want my FRND back…..I want a chance frm u……that’s all…..(he says in a little loud tone) but if u still think of me as a cheater…..n liar go on…..I already explained many things I won’t explain again…….
—-saying this he goes away—–
—–sumo stands there in shock cause shr has totally changed he is not that shr anymore…whom she used to fight…..whom shr never listen n never let him talk is not listening to her now…..n not let her talk either……——
—she sighs n thinks—-
—–SCREEN FREEZES——-
Precap: a promo…..
So guys how WS d ep…??
Hope I didn’t bored u guys…
If so then u r free to cmmnt….free to criticize…
Here is d ques: wat u think shr really don’t love sumo anymore or just acting….
Ok guys do cmmnt n support…..
Till then byy byy
Love u all….!!!
54 Comments
so it was amazing.. loved it.. shravan’s new avtaar was needed.. loved it completely..?????
Thank u soooo much fr such a sweet cmmnt sumo di….haha his this type of character really needed…. 😀
Lots of luv… !!
Maria
Hey !!!! It was amZing .. now Shravan’s this attitude was very much needed .. nd I think now Shravan is not pretending .. he moved on ..
Post soon ..
Take care .
Hello fatima…!
How r u??
Haha thank u soooo much fr cmmnting yr…..
Well it will be reveal in ep….weather he moved on or nt.. 🙂
I will try to post soon…
U toooo take care…
Lots of luv..! 🙂
M fine ..
Maria di Itna accha likho ge to main mar jaungi. Soooo sweet epi.
Baise maine pehle bhi ans diya tha ab phir se mujhe lagta hey shr is acting, he still luvs Sumo.
Luv u Maria di- Neeti
Hello my dear…..!
Haww tum mar gai toh mera kya hoga…??? Think abt ur sis yrr 😀
haha thank u soooo much fr ur cmmnt yr….
oohk well we’ll c in upcming ep weather he lover her or nt…….
Love u toooo my dear…
Frm
maria
Maria di,ap logo ke waje zinda hu. Warna zindagi ne itne dukh dia he mar hi jane wali thi. (ab tak serious mode tha bt ab nrml and joking mode pe) -Sab batane lagungi toh phone fat jayega. Di itto accha likhke jan to le hi rahi ho waise bhi.
Always be happy and keep writing, never end this ff, bye bye- Neeti
Maria di,ap logo ke waje zinda hu. Warna zindagi ne itne dukh dia he mar hi jane wali thi. (ab tak serious mode tha bt ab nrml and joking mode pe) -Sab batane lagungi toh phone fat jayega. Di itto accha likhke jan to le hi rahi ho waise bhi.
Sry di health ke bare bolna vul gayi waise maine dil se pray to kia he bt cmnt me likh ne main kya harjh he.
Always remain healthy, get well soon and never fall in sick again.
Always be happy and keep writing, never end this ff, bye bye- Neeti
Awe neeti thank u sooo much yr…!! U r tooo sweet haww kyun kya hoa…u can share anything with me my dear…..we r always there fr u !! 🙂 🙂
Hahahah thank u ji…..
Yr ek din toh end Karna hi pade ga na…..bt I will make it as long as possible. 🙂 thank u so much fr ur love n support is also got a great family…n supporting sis lyk u all…!!
Thank yr tu bht achi hai….!!
Oh ya….m little bit fyn….bt this virus attacking me again n again……
Well thank u sooo much fr sacchi wali pray yr….I knw tune dil se hi ki hogi tu hai hi itni sweet 🙂 🙂 🙂
Anyways thank u SO SO much fr ur sweet wishes my neeto…!!
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Ur di love u mostttttttttt se Bhi bht ziada….
N m again saying if u wanna share smthing to us go a head me n everyone r always there fr u…..n I will help u… 🙂
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The biggest pain in my life is…. First promise me you will not laugh…..My life my most dear one, my dog died this year….???☹….
when i used to b sad i used to cry hugging her….
wen some unwanted prsn came i used to send her to scare dem….
wen i felt afraid at night i used to hug her and sleep….
wen i was alone at home i used to sit with her and watch tv….
i always shared everything with her… Be it backbiting or praising someone…
and now i see hatred fr me in everyone’s eye…now she is nt here with me…
now no one can help ne with dis …. No one can return her to me…
bt thank you fr your support…
woh now let dis emotional things die and post epi soon…
agar sache dil se pray nai krti to cmnt nahi likti itna bara wala
abhi ke liye gud nigt by by luv kal le lena-Neeti
Awwwww no no no….why would I laugh yr ………
U knw wat I love animals so so so much even I had a cat….he also died 🙁
So I can understand ur sadness my dear…….I can totally understand it….
N I don’t knw abt d person…..but it’s d rule of universe that if we love sm now more than us……that it’s must that we have to lose them one day….I can only said dat plzz don’t sad yr…..m always there wid u ifu have anything to share wid me u can msg me my dear…. Through m nt in india bt still m there fr u……
N no one hates u…..don’t think like dat…..u r so sweet how can smone hate u..??
Hhahaha thank u so much fr ur love towards me dear !
Byyy byyyy….!
API loves u most…!!!!!
Gud ni8…
Hahaha okyyy mujhe pyaar kal Dedena 😀
Yes fb, instagram, gmail tino main hain msg kar dungi id name. Till den halwa puri khao aur chocolate khilao???
Ap ko sayad lagega Ki main paka rae hoon,bt sry
u no she was with me since my birth…
she was elder bt she always obeyed me….
even today i go to my garden and talk to her ( her body was buried in the garden)…
i was really rude to her bt now i really miss her…
you did not meet my friends, so you can say so bt they are really mean baki main apko bad main pri msg kar dungi mera night data he Na so badme likhungi ( mere bhai ne internet package kharida main chori kar rai hoon??????)
Nai yr tum aisa Bol Bhi kaise sakti ho ke tum paka rahi hoo…???
Kisi se apni prob,baatein shre Karna pakana nai hota……..or tumne mujhse apni baat share ki…..Mai tumhari ahsan mand hoon ke tumne is laiqq samjha apni di ko 🙂 🙂 🙂
Jab koi apse apni koi baat share karta hai that means d person trusts u fully….n thanks fr trusting in me…. 🙂
Neeti my dear…
I have no words…….I m so sorry I can’t understand ur Looniness…
Jab koi person apni lyf Mai kisi bht impor insaan ko kho deta hai…toh bht ziada dukh hota hai…..I can understand d pain cause I have also……………….
Anyways I just pray to god….dat he always keeps u happy..n listen ur all wishes my dear…….may u have a bright future in which u always smile & laugh……
I knw she must be very important to u…..pr plzzz don’t be sad…..zaroor kuch acha hone wala hai…….jab koi bht azeez cheez Chen jati hai toh….balance home ke liay kuch acha hota hai…. 🙂 🙂
May god give u courage my dear…..
Hahahaa Okyyyy we’ll talk on msg…..
Btw r u on any other social media site… Like FB twitter hike watsapp ya Instagram ??
Love u !!
Hi Marie di..!!
Kya likhte ho yaar aap..
Shravan ka different nature, mujhe thoda confuse kar raha hai..
Par, thik hai..
And ye avtaar zaroori tha..
And abt the question,
Mere khayal se woh sumo se ab bhi pyar karta hai, par woh Sumo ko aisa keh raha hai taki Sumo uski best friend waapis ban jaye.. Ab kya pata..
Jo hoga, jo aap likhoge, accha hi hoga..
Keep writing!
Post Soon..!
Love,
Nikko..
Hello my sweeto….!!
Awww thank u sooooo much fr such a sweet n lovely cmmnt my dear….!!
Hmmn is avatar ki need thi…… 🙂
Oohk thanks atone fr ur ans my dear….well it will be revealed in ep…weather he loves her or nt 🙂
Thanks again dear…!
I will try to post soon… 🙂
love u toooooo my nikko…!
Enjoyed it thoroughly…
Suman deserves this side of Shravan…!!!
Nd hope u get well soon….!!
Coz I want u to post d next epi vry soon…!!!
??
Thank u soooooooo much fr such n amazing cmmnt my dear…..
N thanks a tone fr ur sweet wishes yr…!! 🙂
M bit fyn…..will try to post promo asap…. 🙂
Lovely??
Oh..promo…???
Excited..☺☺☺
When it will be?????
Thank u so much sona di…!
Umm promo ……I will write it tommorow ….so after 1- 2 days .. Maybe… 🙂
Awesome episode di I loved it and get well soon
Lots of love and care???
Riya
Thank u sooo much my dear…!
Aww thanks a tone fr ur sweet wishes.. 🙂
Love u toooooooo !! 🙂
Frm maria..
A sweet epi….waiting for the next
Thanks a lot dear….! 🙂 🙂 🙂
Amazing ? Loved it ? Please post soon ? Waiting anxiously ?
Thank u
Thank u…my dear…! 🙂
Will try to post ASAP… 😀
u r too good marie keep it up just loved today’s episode to the core and yeah the farmhouse scene was too good just loved it n gws dear 🙂 n loved shravan’s new side 🙂
Aww thank u sooo much fr dis sweet cmmnt….n m really glad u lyked it di…. 🙂 🙂
Lots of luv
Maria…!
superb episode…. i really loved it….plssssssssssss next part jaldi se upload krna….pls pls…
i think shravan sumo se pyaar krta h but wo chhupa raha h…
Get well soon dear
Thank u soooooo much yr….!!!!!! Haha yr I will post promo Frst…. 🙂 after that I will post nxt ep,..! 🙂
Oohk thank u so much fr ur ans we’ll c in upcoming ep……dat shr loves her or nt..
Thanks a tone fr ur wishes…
Lots of luv
Maria… 🙂
Ok Maria it was my fault coz I didn’t read it b4. Yaar I was sleeping. Uk time difference between India and Canada. Anyways back to the epi…..What was it???? I literally got goosebumps when he came close to her. U rock!!!! Nxt epi should b up asap. Nd get well soon. Love u (………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………..) this much or even more… <3
Ahaaa no no…..absolutely not u read it now na…… 🙂
oohooo wow di u live in canada well i have many relatives there……
Hahha di m nt frm india m frm pakistan…..so yeah there is a big tym difference bw here’s n there’s tym….
Well thank u soooooo much fr such n amazing n lovely cmmnt di…
Yeah yeah 🙂 i will try to post nxt 1 asap…. 🙂
Thank u so much fr ur wishes….
Awwww me tooo love u soo soo soo infinity……………… 😀
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Take care di….!
epi was awsm
hw r u nw
Thank u so much di…..so happy to c ur cmmnt here….well how r u ??
How’s study going…?? Hostel wagaiara???
M a little bit fyn bt this virus attacking me again n again……….
Bs do pray fr my health…. 🙂
By by di..
Lots of luv….
sry m@ria
mere phn ka key pad khrab ho gya h typ krne me bahut dikkat hoti h
i read ur ffs bt typ krne me itna dikkat hota h isliye cmmnt ni kr paate h
mai thik hu bahut kuch nya h
nya hostel nya collg nya envrnmnt
acha lg raha h bt adjst krne me thora dikkat hota h
its ok
meri ek room mate h bahut achi h
wo bhi serials ki fan h bt edkw ni dekhti h
ishqbaaz aur yhm
she is cute n mastttt
soo frank
really niss u yaarrrr
sabko sry bolna tha fr not cmmntmg anywhr
pta h ek baar angel mail ki thi
hm reply bhi kiye bt mail bounce kr gya
kitba bura lga hoga
chlo bye
Oohooo di not a prob…!
Ohkkk chalo no prob I must hope ke Ahista Ahista …….u will be able to adjust.. 🙂 🙂
Ye toh bht acha ho gay ke room mate itni achi hai….chalo now ATLEAST wo toh achi hai…!
Haha us se kehiayyy ga ke edkv Bhi dekh le Jo ek baar dikha toh fan hojai gi is ki…bt current track na dekhe fighting n fingering hain na….. 😀
Ohk di no prob I will tell everyone …!
N also tell angel di abt ur mail….
Everyone include me missing u very very badly…..!!
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Take care
Study hard…..
Love u most…!
It was a really nice epi and yeah i think that shr still loves sumo bcz agar aisa na hota to shr ko sumo ki ignorance se itna farq nahi parta……..
Thank u soooo much fr cmmnting naina 🙂
Well we’ll c in upcoming ep whether he loves her to not….thanks fr ur ans..
Lots of luv..
Hi mario di! Missed me???? Well am sorry… i commented earlier but dont know why it didnt post. Well, u were awesome as always! Get well soon. Get well sooonn. U definetely didnt bore us and curiously waiting for the promo dear;) lots of love di. Get well soon.:)
Hyyyy my sweeto…..!!!
Missed u..?? A lot…!
Well how r u..???
Awww thank u sooo much fr such n amazing cmmnt yr…..!! 😀
N thank u
Thank u
Thank u soooo much fr ur sweet wishes…!
I will post d promo ASAP…. 🙂 thanks fr waiting 🙂
Love u tooooooooooo!!
I am toa fine as always. Hope u get better. But this virus or whtever it is, it isnt serious na? Or just common cold and flu types???post soon – only.if u feeling gud. Bye.. take care miss. P.S. – is marie ur real name????
Thank u so much dear…….
This virus is not serious if we care fr ourselves otherwise it will become d most dangerous one…….
Ok dear I will try to post ASAP……yeah m feeling a little bit better now….
Bt still needs ur pray my dear….
Thanks again dear……
Yes my real name is maria… 🙂
If it turns out to be that then pls ls take xtra care of urself dear. Kaisi baate kar rahi ho- u always have our prayers with u. I just hipe that u become fine and gud. I just asked ur real name cuz mujhe laga it isnt
Lots of love dear.
Awww dear thank u sooo much m taking care of myself…. 🙂 🙂
Hahah I knw my sweeto that u always pray fr me…..kaisa ho salta hai meri pyari bhen a mere liay pray na kare..?
Never…. 🙂 🙂 🙂
Oooho no prob actually I changed my name…..it WS different bt now it’s maria…
Thank u so much fr worring again…!
Love u tooooooooooooooooooooo…!
No knock nock because my love is sick
My dear how r u yar ???? Thk ho na???? Taking ur medicine???? Health is most important thing yar solo plzzzz take care
Epi ammmm
It was ammmmmaaaazzzzziiiiiiinnnngggg
Waiting for the new epi
Waiting my sisi to b fine
So swwetu get well soon
May u have those hours in ur life which shine like sunlight
Twinkle like stars
And takes a lot of pyar
Love u
Take care love
Love u
Love u
Love u
Awww…………..
Hy API…! M little bit fyn bt not gud now….
Ya m taking my medicines….thanks a tone fr caring !! 🙂 🙂 🙂
A tight hug frm me…..!!
Well API how r u…????? I WS missing u badly…… 🙂
So so happy to c ur cmmnt…!!!
Aww thank u soooo much fr such a lovely cmmnt…..
Bs API pray karo……..I too want to be fine….
Thank u sooo soooo sooo much !! Fr ur such sweet wishes…..!!
Love u
Love u
Love u
Love u
Love u……infinityyyy….!!!!!!
Take care api….!
By.. 🙂
Love ap ko hoa kia h???
Mtlb which virus love????
Acha take alot care of itself like a baby OK?¿?
Love u most se b mosttt OK
And I m gud alhamdolilah
Result KB araha h love ka????
Pray for urself and mine too
Tc
Love u
Ye virus karachi Mai bht pehla hoa hai Aaj kal……
Like fle fever cough ke saath saath weakness Bhi bht hoti hai……
Hahahaha ok API I will take care of myself…!!
Love u soooooooo…………………………………………………….much se Bhi bht ziada..!
Result kuch pata nai abhi…..Aj toh matric ka result aaraha hai…1 hour ke baad unka result out hoga science group ka……
9 ka result toh September octubar tak hi aaiga I guess….
Ya API I will always pray fr u….bt I really need ur prayers dis tym cause…ek toh m sick uper se school tests n projects…
So plz pray fr me n urself…
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Take care
Love u..!
Marieeeeee my sweetuuu…first of all you made me happy by your ff….then when checked you’re comments….I so uffaq lovely….I don’t know to explain how happy I’m….
How are you…feeling bette…Thank you soo much for posting…
Episode was outstanding…marie how you’re doing this Haa super se uparrrr
…I just loved…keep writing love you lots…
Mmmmmhhhh
Hyyy my pyaari di….!! How r u…??
Alhamdullillah m fyn now…..bs Little weakness……
Thank u
Thank u
Thank u
Soooooo much api…. Hahaha m blushing now….!! 😀
Yeah me tooo missing her…so much…..
Thank u soo much di….fr caring 🙂
Stay blessed…
Love u soooooo much se Bhi ziada.. 🙂
superb fantastic loved the change in sharvan plz post soon hru now feeling better?????
Take care lov u……
Thank u so much fr cmmnting angel api…!
M feeling better now……not much but better…. 🙂
I will try to post ASAP 🙂
U tooo take care…API
Love u most…!