Hello frnds….i am here with another os on our fav pair swasan….
A college is shown….all the students are coming into the college….its the first day of thw college….all the seniors are very happy as they got a chance to rag the juniors….in the same time juniors are very afraid for the same ragging….
A group of students are sitting in the stairs and ragging the juniors….the group has 4 boys and 3 girls….in that a boy ragged the junior to swim in the ground….all were enjoying and seeing this…..
At that time a girl came there in bmw car…..she is very modern and beautiful…..by seeing her all the boys mesmerized….even the 4 boys look her with open mouth….seeing this the girls tapped the boys shoulder…they then come into the senses…..
(Boy1-Sanskar
Boy2-Laksh Girl1-Ragini
Boy3-Sahil Girl2-Kavya
Boy4-Karthick Girl3-Kavitha
Ragini and Laksh,Sahil and Kavya,Karthick and Kavitha love each other….the only one who is single is sanskar….)
Seeing the girl sanskar got mesmerized….. all his frnds start to tease him….
Laksh:sanskar close ur mouth man….
Sahil:ha sanskar…. if u didn’t close ur mouth the all will drain….
Hearing that sanskar immediately closed hia mouth and glared them….
Karthick:sanskar first c whether she fits into ur condition….
Sanskar:ha ha sure i will check…. after that only i will make her my gf….
Ragini:sanskar dont dream in the morning itself….
Kavya:ha ha s ragini is correct….i agree with her….
Kavitha:sanskar c her….she is too modern and rich too…pray to god that she loves u….
Hearing the girls comment sanskar got angry and challenged them….
Sanskar:ragini,kavitha,kavya speak whatever u want but now i m challenging u she will definetely fall for me and we both will get married and live happily….
Trio:first make her love u….
Sanskar:soon she herself will come and say that she loves me…..
Trio:ha ha we will c….
The other 3 boys kept their hand in their head seeing all arguing….then all went to class…..
Even the girl went to her class….she entered into her class….seeing her all boys were happy as she studies in their class….
She didn’t have any place to sit there….at that time she saw a girl sitting silently in her place….she went to her and sat near her….seeing this all were surprised as the girl sitting is very poor and none talked to her….
Girl1:hello i m swara(s the girl who is modern is swara)
Girl2:hi i m uttara….
Swara:y r u very silent???
Uttara:nothing like that….i m very poor and a scholarship student so none talks to me….
Swara:dont talk like this….from today we both are frnds k….
Uttara:(with smile)k….
Then both became thick frnds….many times swara is seen only in uttara house….her parents to consider swara as their own child….swara doesn’t have parents….they died in an accident when she is 10…..
She belongs to a rich family….she is alone in her house sorrounded by many servants….she treats all of them as her relation….
As time and day passes sanskar start to follow swara and collect her information fully….he also collected her likes and dislikes….
Then one day he went to her and talked with her and made her his frnd…. Next day sanskar went to swara house….. Seeing the house sanskar’s mouth opened wide as its looking like a palace…. He went inside the house…. But watchman didn’t allow him…. Then sanskar asked to call swara….. By seeing sanskar swara is shocked then asked him to come inside….
He went inside her house…. Its very beautiful….. Sanskar is just mesmerized in the beauty of the infrastructure….. She made him sit in the sofa and asked the sercant lady to bring juice….
Sanskar:wow swara ur house looks very very beautiful….
Swara:thanks sanskar…..
Sanskar:really ur parents have good taste….
Swara:what???
Sanskar:ya ur parents might have ordered to design like this right???
Swara:no sanskar my mom and dad died in an accident when i was 10….. This is full of my ideas….
Sanskar:i m sry swara….. I do no that ur parents….
Swara:ha ha leave it sanskar…. Its a suprise that college handsome guy came to my house???
Sanskar:swara not like that yesterday we became frnds so thought of going to college together…..
Swara:oh sorry sanskar but i go with uttara……
Sanskar:no pblm swara we 3 will go together…..
Swara:ya sure…..
Then swara took her car….. Sanskar parked his bike in swara’s house and sanskar told he will drive but swara opposed saying only she will drive…. Then sanskar sat in the passenger seat and swara drived to uttara house….. Uttara hearing the sound of the car came out and opened the door to sit but seeing sanskar she is shocked…. Swara assured her that she will tell her through eyes….
Then swara drived to the college…. All three got down from the car…. All were shocked seeing sanskar with swara….. Mainly his group members were shocked….. By seeing them in shock sanskar felt proud…. Then after bidding bye to swara and uttara sanskar went to his gang…. After he went….
Uttara:swara whats this???
Swara:uttara yesterday we both became frnds….. He came to my house today and wished to come together…. So that only….
Uttara:swara pls dont get together with him much he is not good….
Swara:uttara he is just a frnd…. I will manage…. Dont worry my dr sweetheart….
Uttara:ha ha u very well know how to smoothen my mood…. Chalo lets go to class….
After telling bye sanskar went to his group…. He smiled proudly….
Sanskar:hello guys….
Laksh:man u did it…..
Sanskar:what i did???
Sahil:buddy u came with swara…. Our whole college is yearning to have a talk with swara but u came with her that too in her car….
Sanskar:if i say another thing u all will get heart attack….
Karthick:whats that buddy???
Sanskar:we both became frnds…
Ragini:what????
Sanskar:s ragini…. Only some days…. She will become my lover….
Kavya:so sanskar u achieved ur dream…. Is it???
Kavitha:kavya darling it didn’t happen….. So sanskar dont fly over….
Sanskar:ha ha kavitha i didn’t get angry on ur words but surely one day or the other swara and i will love each other….
Kavitha:we will c that….
Then as time passes sanskar and swara get together well…. Inspite of the warning of uttara that too many times swara didn’t listen as she started to fall and like sanskar more….. So one day swara decided to propose sanskar…. She called him and asked him to come to beach….
Sanskar too came there…. Swara was standing there wearing a white frock till her knees…. She is looking as an angel….. Very gorgeous….. Seeing her Sanskar is mesmerized…… Even he is looking handsome in his black suit…..
Its a private beach…. In the sand there is a lighting…. Something is written on that….. Swara is standing near that words…. She asked him to come and see that…. After seeing that sanskar is very happy…. Swara came near him and holded his hands and told him “i love u sanskar…… I want to spend my rest of life with u….. I want to grow old with u….. Want to be the mother of ur children…… will u be my life partner…. Will u marry me….. ”
Sanskar just hugged her and told her “love u soo much swara”….. Then swara took him to dinner….. Arrangements are done in the beach itself…. Both had a moonlight dinner and went home…. Sanskar after reaching his home send phts and videos which he took in the beach with swara to his frnds…. Seeing that eveyone thought he is very lucky….
Actually the fact is sanskar didn’t love swara he just love her money…. He is from a poor family…. He wanted to live a sophisticated life…. So to enjoy the richness he thought to make swara fall in his charms and he got succeeded now….
As time passes swara’s love for sanskar got increased…. Slowly sanskar too started to love swara but his desire didn’t let him realize….. Swara even helped him by arranging best treatment for his father when he got heart attack….. Seeing her care sanskar loved her more but still didn’t realize…… Though uttara warned swara she didn’t listen…..
One fine day swara thought to talk to sanskar….. So she searched him as he didn’t attend her call…. When she saw his frnds talking thought to ask them…. So she went near them…. But she got shocked hearing what they were talking…. She just stumbled and before she fell down uttara catch her…. Seeing her swara hugged uttara and cried loudly…. Hearing this all turned back and saw swara and all got shocked…. Before they could talk to her she went from there….
They tried to tell this to sanskar but they didn’t get him…. Sanskar do no anything went to her house…. Seeing him there Swara didn’t say anything….. He just hugged her and kissed her in her cheeks….. Swara didn’t react…. She just asked him to come inside…. When he went inside he is shocked…. As there are many people there….. Swara’s servants, uttara and her family and a lawyer…. Swara asked sanskar to sit and gave him a paper…. Sanskar just took that from her….
Swara:sanskar read that and sign it….
Sanskar:whats this swara???
Swara:u read Sanskar…. U will know…..
After reading that he is shocked…. He stood immediately from his place…..
Sanskar:swara whats this????
Swara:sanskar u loved my money right??? Not me…. So that only….
Sanskar:(hearing that he is shocked)no….
Swara:(interrupted)no sanskar i know everything…. U just loved me sry sry u just loved my money…. So that only…. Pls sanskar just sign it…. I have signed… Even for witness all signed…. Just u have to sign sanskar….
Without any option sanskar signed the paper…. The paper is nothing but swara transferred all her properties,bank balance everything in sanskar name….
Swara:sanskar i loved u truly…. Even now after knowing the truth i cant hate u….. I thought someone is there for me to love and take care of me….. As till now i didnt feel it from anyone….. Even uttara and her parents have maintained some distance as they treat me as a rich girl…. I thought u too be my everything but today only i got to know u love my money and not me….. Bye sanskar….
Saying this she went taking her luggage…. Uttara and her parents called her to their home but she went stating she got a job in delhi so she is going there…. But she went to Australia as she doesnt want to live in india….
After she went sanskar sat in the sofa with a thud…. That time he realized how much he love swara…. After that he searched her for knook and corner of india as he thought she will be in india…. But he didn’t get any clue about her…. Even uttara and his gang helped him seeing his love for swara…… But none got to know about her….
Sanskar didn’t loose his hope….. He thought to make her company reach high…. He also thought to give everything to swara when she return back…. He now realised that “MONEY IS NOT EVERYTHING” it will not give him happiness…. He just want swara’s love now…. He worked hard and brought swara’s company in the first place….. Sanskar just took his salary…. All the profit are saved in the bank…. He didn’t touch any penny from that amount…..
One day when kavitha and karthick went to Australia to attend a meeting….. In the free time they went they went for shopping there they saw swara…. But swara didn’t c them….. She just got her things and went to her home…. Kavitha and Karthick followed her and note down her house address…. Then they call sanskar and told about swara….. the next moment sanskar took a flight and reached Australia…..
Getting the address from kavthick sanskar went to swara house…. But he is very hesitant to knock the door…. After getting some courage he knocked the door…. The door got opened….. Sanskar got happy seeing swara but swara is shocked seeing sanskar…. She didn’t let him in…. After much pleading swara let him into the house….
Seeing her house sanskar is shocked as the house is full of swasan, swara and uttara, uttara family, raglak, kavhil, kavthick photos were there….. Sanskar just went to her and hugged her tightly…. Swara didn’t hug or oppose…. But after sometime she too hugged him and cried loudly…. Then sanskar asked sorry and told that he realised her love only after she left…. Then swara told that she still loves him…. Then both got married at church in australia itself….
After that they return india…. All were very happy…. Even uttara got married…. Sanskar then made her to sit in the m.d chair…. But swara opposed….
Swara:no sanskar i wont sit here…. Its ur place……
Sanskar:swara if u accept this only i will be very happy that u forgive me….
Without any chance she accepted that…. After that they lived happily with their children…. Ya they had a girl and boy….
The End
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Guys i do no whether u liked it or not….. If its long and u feel boring i am sorry….. I cant give detailed scene as its an os….
I just want to say all that money doesn’t make us happy…. Love i mean affection its more important than money…. With money we can buy everything but cant get anyone’s love….i dont say that we dont need money at all….. We need money but to get money we should not loose our loved ones…… So value ur loved ones more than money…..
Tata….??
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Shan plzz give d link of ur previous os/ff.
And it’s Fantastic!!!
Thanks dr….. ?
my ff:
http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=angel%20vs%20cunning%20business%20man
http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=my%20heartless%20queen
os:
http://www.tellyupdates.com/swasan-os-swaras-cute-love-story/
hey Shan… nice one…… good attempt
Thanks Bhumija….. ?
awesome
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awesome……….
Thanks Soujanya…. ?
omg shan, itz not boring its wonderful, amazing brilliant, fantastic, fabulous. loved it. love u more , keep smiling 🙂
Wow thank u soooo much Ameera…. ?Post ur next update of ur ff dr….. Waiting…. ?
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shanu di. How u can write so many good story. Jast awsome. When u give tata i understand it is u before i read writers name. Love u.
Wow samaira dear love u….. Thank u sooo much dr….. ??
nice dear
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Awsm…
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awesome
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Awesome dear.it’s true love .
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Its Awesome Di…Don’t tell that it us boring…Your each and every os is superb…I loved it…
Keep Writing Di
Thank u soooo much Prakriti….. ?
Wow di, it’s amazing. Loved it.You gave us a precious massage,thank you.Keep writing like this.
Thank u soooo much Uma….. ?
Amazing
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shaaaaann… happy friendship day dear…
love swara-uttara bonding, luv it <3 it
Thanks Mica….. Happy friendship day dr…. ?
Awsm dr !!
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Shan …. shan …. shan ….
It is not very good ……
But it is v.v.good ….. just love it …… ur r an awesoem writer …… muahhhhh ..
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Wow Sanjana thank you soooo much….. Love u….. ????
Amazing 🙂 🙂
Thanks Crystal….. ?
Superb dear.. Loved it
Thanks Anuann….. ?
its really awesome the message u want to give is really nice thet money is not everything the most important thing is loved once family, friends, relatives as swara live without family she know about their importance she have alot of money but without loved once its nothing for her even she don’t want money she only wants love once and a family as everybody treat her like rich girl and all atlast sanskar also got to know the importance of lovedonce he also keep loved onces above money as he got to know about and here friends also play a very good role as kavita and karthick tell about swara to sanskar and uttara care for swara this shows true friendship
happy friendship day?? and sorry for keeping u bore by my bak bak. love the os and the message
No dr…… I love this comment a lot….. U wrote whats in my mind….. Thank u sooo much dr….. ?Till there are many swara in this world who is yearning for love and care….. ?
ur welcome and the girls like swara will get that what is their in their destiny may be they also get their sanskar and i am glad that don’t keep u bore and its my pleasure that u love my comment and what i wrote is the things that i just get in my mind and my heart that i wrote it down and really the os give a good moral??
Hey shan happy friendship day dr.. 🙂 🙂 awesome os… loved it… 🙂 🙂
Thank you soo much nive….. Happy friendship day…. ?
Wow it ws suprb os… with moral…
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Awesomee!!!
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Awsum..loved it .
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it was just awesome. . loved it so much my dear bestie.
Wow love u jwala…. ??
Superb.. Dr
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superb..!! Loved it..!!
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Thanks Chandu….. ?
amazing
Thanks Vyshu…. ?
Its so beautiful Shan!! Loved it.. I’ve fallen for the way swara made Sanskaar realise by showering her love on him.. Its really impressive!! ❤❤❤❤❤❤
Thanks dr…. ?
So cute it was????
I really loved ur creation n concept..
Do more n write more??
Tc???
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