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Episode 15
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Introduction
EPISODE STARTS:
(note some changes Twinkle’s dadi hates her but her nani loves her and Mahi is her younger sister both kunj and Uv were born on the same day but Kunj was a minute elder born by different mothers )
TANEJA MANSION
A BIG SPACIOUS ROOM IS SHOWN WHICH IS DECORATED BEAUTIFULLY A GIRL IS SHOWN SLEEPING WHEN SUDDENLY THE ALARM RINGS IT SHOWS THE TIME 5:45 THE GIRL SLOWLY SLIDES DOWN HER BED SHEET HER BEAUTIFUL FACE IS SHOWN
SHE IS NONE OTHER THAN TWINKLE
WITH CLOSED EYES SHE SITS ON THE BED AND MAKES SILENT PRAYERS TO GOD
Twinkle:Babaji please meri ma,dadi,nani and Mahi di ko hamesha kush rakna Because if they are happy I am happy
SHE RUSHES TO THE WASHROOM AND COMES OUT WEARING HER PINK BATHROBE SHE STANDS IN FRONT OF HER CUPBOARD AND ..
Twinkle:What should I wear today …
FINALLY AFTER 15 MIN SHE SELECTS A THIS DRESS
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SHE LOOKS IN THE MIRROR
Twinkle:Beautiful
SHE SLOWLY AND QUIETLY ESCAPES OUT OF THE HOUSE WITH HER CAR KEYS
SHE TAKES OUT HER CAR AND DRIVES AWAY TO HER SMALL BUT BEAUTIFUL BUNGALOW WITH A BIG BOARD THE BOARD READ
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OLDEN GOLDEN OLDAGE HOME
A lady:Puttar a new member is joining us today you told us to prepare a room for her we have done as you have told us to she wont face any problem here
Twinkle:Meera Dadi I trust you but I think she is late
A BMW COMES THERE AND A OLD LADY GETS DOWN THE CAR
SHE IS NONE OTHER THAN OUR BEBE
Twinkle:Mr.Sarna You earn so much but you cant take care of your mother
The Man:Miss I am not Mr.Sarna I am his PA and he can take care of bebe but he is out of town for a few months and he knows that Bebe would get bored without him and start working at home
Twinkle:(thinks)Such a gentle man when he comes to pick up Aunty I will surely want to meet him (to bebe)Aunty I am the owner of this Old age home everyone here call me Twinkle puttar you too can call me that
Bebe:Puttar my Kunj calls me bebe and so do all the office members you too can call me bebe (thinks)Such a wonderful soul beautiful,rich yet well behaved and mannered when Kunj comes back I will make him meet her I have found my Daughter in law
Twinkle:Bebe this is Meera Aunty and Kamal Uncle ,this is Chandana Aunty and Champak Uncle;this is Kaveri Aunty and Keshav Uncle; This is Yogita Aunty and Parash Uncle;This is Manorama Aunty and Uday Uncle They all are my family and now you are also a part of it though for a few months
Meera:What is your name ?
Bebe:My name is Shanti
Meera:Shanti I must say you are lucky to have a good family who cares for you
Shanti:Ha I thank Babaji everyday for it but now I am finding a daughter in law for me
Meera:Ha I wil help you tell me the qualities you want in her and I will help you we all run a marriage bureau so we can help you
Twinkle:Meera Aunty let bebe come inside and then you all start your ideal daughter in law talks now I have to leave or else the shaitans wont wake up
Meera:Twinkle why don’t you change the board and write olden golden old age home and orphanage
Twinkle:Meera Aunty They aren’t orphans because you all are their parents
Meera:Ha if they would not have been here we would not have this excitement in life
Twinkle:Aunty now I am going to wake them up
TWINKLE GOES INSIDE A ROOM WHERE THERE ARE MANY CHILDREN SLEEPING ON MANY SINGLE BEDS
Twinkle:Rahul,Kunal,Rohan,Sidhant,Ravi,Aarna,Ahana,Sapna,Gunjan and Ayesha wake up see I have brought chocolates for you
NO ONE WAKES UP
Twinkle:(pouts )Okay then I will go because you all are not talking to me (fakes crying)
Ayesha:(the youngest )Di please don’t cry I cant see you crying
Rahul:Ayesha you know na di alway acts to cry and you believed her
Ayesha:(bits her tongue) Di I wont talk to you
Twinkle:But chilar party yesterday I was busy I had to go out with UV
Aarna:Oh ho UV bhai ,Di you went on a date with UV bhai
Twinkle:NO not a date I had to go to buy our wedding dresses and yours too but from where did you learn this word date and all
Aarna:Voh Kunal bhai was going to go with his girlfriend so I heard it
Twinkle:Kunal you have a girlfriend ?
Kunal:Di everyone in my college does
Twinkle:Show me my future bhabhi’s pic
Kunal:Di
Twinkle:okay If you don’t want then don’t show at least tell me about your date
Kunal:Di this Aarna is telling anything I am not going on a date she is
Twinkle:Aarna you
Aarna:Leave it na di show us our dresses
Twinkle: I have given it for altering it will come by today so in the evening I will be coming so no masti and take care of bebe she is new here don’t disturb her okay
All the kids:Okay Boss
ALL OF THEM LAUGH
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Kunj’s POV:
I am here back to the place which has given me more pain than happiness LUTHRA MANSION
I am here waiting for UV so that he comes out of his car and I … you will get to know about it in sometime I have planned for this day since years
UV my cousin and only friend but now enemy is going to be engaged to Twinkle Taneja
Twinkle Taneja works in an NGO and is good at heart but i need to use her after all she is Uv’s love interest
Mahi Taneja the person I need for my mission a spoilt brat but a very good actress she is the only one who can help me separate Uv and Twinkle
Kunj’s POV ends as UV comes out of the Mansion and sits in his car
UV:driver move to Taneja mansion
SUDDENLY A MAN COMES IN FRONT OF UV’S CAR
UV:are you blind don’t you have eyes did you find my car only to die
Man:I am sorry bhaiya (he is a bit hurt but his face isn’t shown)
UV:By the way are you fine (gives his hand to the man to get up
Man:stays quite
Uv:(looks at the man)Kunj Bhai
Man:Kunj? I am ..(UV HUGS HIM A BONE CRUSHING ONE )
Uv:Bhai come inside
Man:I don’t know you bhai
UV:Kunj bhai enough of this joking I am serious
Man:I am not Kunj I am MAD
Uv:Bhai…(The man faints)Bhai
UV TAKES HIM INSIDE THE HOUSE AND CALL THE DOCTOR
Doctor:Everyone move out of the room let me examine him
Manohar’s POV:
This Kunj I killed him he know about my deeds the way I torched bebe and sent her to the mental hospital to die God knows why is he back I will kill the man who could not even kill him he also knows that I am the one who killed Alisha
Manohar’s POV ends
UV’s POV
God knows why Kunj bhai was behaving like this
UV’s POV ends
Usha’s POV
Thanks god he sent my Kunj back to me I knew god can never snatch a son from a mother 5years without seeing him only I know how my life was even though I have not given birth to him but he calls me badi ma can one only be a mother by giving birth to a child I have grown him up the bed time stories the hw and the result and Parent teacher meetings I have always felt proud of getting a son like him God Thank you for giving me my Kunj back
Usha’s POV ends
Anita’s POV
My son God could never snatch him from me He is back now the whole property will belong to him as I have made Uv hate his father and his property so the only heir to the Luthra company is Kunj
Anita’s POV ends
Surjeet POV:
Manohar bhai’s expression change on seeing Kunj was noticed by me He was so happy in the morning when I told him that the deal is finalised but now it seems as if a snake has bitten him God please save my son I have lost him before but now I don’t want to loose him never ever
Surjeet’s POV ends
THE DOCTOR COMES OUT
Dr:Mr.Luthra your son is in a state of shock I think he has a memory loss it is what I can say by the description given to me by Uv it seems he does not remember you people but I am not sure I need to take a few tests but till then don’t stares him regarding anything don’t try to force your emotions on him he needs time but you can try making new relations with him
Usha:Doctor will he get back his memory soon
Dr.:Mrs.Luthra that can only be told if the test reports come bring him tomorrow for a test I have dressed his wounds call me when he wakes up and tell me about his reaction seeing you people
Anita:Thank you doctor Uv Please drop Dr. Uncle till the gate
Uv:come doctor uncle
THE DOCTOR LEAVES
Manohar’s POV :
Even god is favouring me now Kunj has a mentally unstable condition so now UV will join the office and the company will be on his name
Manohar’s POV ends
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PRECAP:TWINJ MEET ,MAHI AND KUNJ TALKS
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34 Comments
Wow sidmin yaar lively story aswm fab just post next soon??
Thank you so much Sameera 🙂
Superb…….!!!
Post soooooon
Thank you Zakiyah 🙂
It was amazing! Continue soon x
Thank you Monica 🙂
Super se bhi uper wala tha ye episode…
Too good yrr… Amazing…
Kunj is acting that he has a memory loss… Nice idea to enter in Sarna house…
Loved it… Waiting for Twinj meet… Love u ??
Thank you Sayeeda di 🙂 Love you too 🙂
Well your stories are awesome and I just started reading them!!
But now I love the first episode of “My Revenge” Fan-Fiction aha.
Twinj is my favorite and you did a great job starting a new storyline aha.
Also Happy Friendship’s day!!!
Anyways keep smiling/shining like always xx.
~Nusz/ নুসরাত
Thank you 🙂
??? Gah … I loved your first episode!!!! Totally awesome sidmin 🙂 … Do post ur next epi asap!
Thank you Romaisha 🙂
Very interesting….
Loved it????
Thank you Shreya 🙂
amazing fabulous
Thank you Purnima 🙂
Story seems very interesting…waiting for twinj meet…your both ffs are fab…try to post next episode asap…
Thank you will try posting soon 🙂
Thank you Vasiya di will try posting soon 🙂
This was amazing…. Loved it
And sorry for d late comment
Thank you Kruti 🙂
Happy Belated Friendship Day…
dis is mindblowing omg i luv dis story a lot…plz…plz…plz cont soon
Thank you sujina 🙂
Hey.. awesome epi.. loved it.. can’t wait for the next one.. do continue soon ☺
Thank you SidVee 🙂
amazing sidmin osm dear post nxt asap post ur odr ff as well missing it 2
Thank you baby
amazing sidmin osm dear post nxt asap
will post my ff soon 🙂
Hey mili
The start is Awesome
Loved it❤❤❤
Thanks Shatakshi 🙂
Sorry yaar I didn’t comment earlier…I forgot I guess
Ear pakde sorry
Pls forgive me
Now its sorry
Lobe it amazing
Awesome
Thank you Its all right if you comment late all that matters is your comment 🙂