Hi everyone!!!! ……heres the next episode…..pls …the silent readers and even critics …… do comment this time………I need to know if the track is being liked by u all or not…..
Ep2
All family members reach the resort ……
At the reception(whole family is present)
Pihu-shagun mumma u will be with me and papa na…
Raman-actually pihu ruhi wants me and ish…[ishita interrupts]…
Ishita-yes ofcourse pihu
Pihu rejoices and runs towards the garden…..
Mrs bhalla-but u should think about ruhi …ishita
Ishita-I am thinking about her only mummyji….i and ruhi will be in the same room….
Ruhi-Wait a minute …..[everyone worry that if ruhi is angry now]….i think even alliya should stay in our room….
Everyone smile with a relief….
In raman’s room
Shagun-I know u wanted to stay with ishita but I m sorry I could’nt say no to pihu……
Raman-its not like that ,…..and it doesn’t even matter….becoz even ishita doesn’t want to stay with me …[saying this he leaves]
Shagun[to herself]- by ishita coming to bhalla house I thought she will be running behind raman to get him back but…all situations are different…ishita is just thinking of her daughter and raman is trying to get back his daughter as well as ishita ……..i could have stopped ishita from coming in btw me and raman but now…..how to stop raman from going away from me…
GARDEN
Alliya and ruhi are chatting sitting on the garden bench……
Ishita is sitting on another bench far away and smiles looking at her daughters….raman notices her and move towards her……..
Just as he was about to address ishita….the beautiful picture of lady sitting alone is completed by another perfect pairing…..none other than mani…
Mani sits beside ishita…..
Raman steps back…clinging his fingers blood red eyes…….
Mani[to ishu]- hm..nice weather right……
Ishita-yeah…
Mani[looking towards her engrossed]-I have a compliment for you….
Ishu-compliment?[she looks towards him with big surprised eyes]
Mani- this pretty smile really looks good…….just keep smiling ..
Ishu-hmm….u know wat… in these seven yrs I never found a need to look in the mirror……ur words describe my looks and also my feelings…..
Mani-its very easy…. becoz wats in ur heart, is on ur face ….u look beautiful becoz ur heart is beautiful……
Ishu-I really missed ur company at bhalla house……
Mani-well not more than me…..
[both mani and ishu smile….raman turned his face off ..]
Adi and pihu come and pull everyone ……..asking both to come with them…..
They bring them to THE BEACH…..
(the whole family is there ..)….they all sit on a big round wooden table with a big umbrella shed on top…
Cool breeze blows and only sound of waves lifting and falling can be heard……..
Romi[breaking the silence]-so we all are going to play a game………u all obviously know….
TRUTH and DARE……..
Adi-the one who cannot answer or complete the task ….will have to bear the punishment…..
Mr Bhalla-wat punishment…
Mihika gets a tray with glasses of shots!!!!!…..
Alliya-you will have to drink a glass full on this……
Amma-what we are Brahmin ……how can we….
Mrs bhalla-So wat are u afraid madrasan??!!
Amma-not at all………
Pihu-so lets begin……
Everyone agrees….they spin the bottle at the center…..
It stops on……….alliya!!!
Adi signals romi…
Romi-so alliya …..truth or dare…..
Allliya-umm…dare…
Romi-okayy…so …u ……got to……..sing a song ……..
Everyone cheer alliya…….she sings the song (kuch toh hai..)
Alliya[closes her eyes and continues ]-
…..Dastakein dete hai dastakein
Kyun ajnabi se pal,aye dil bataa
Kuch toh hai jo neend aaye kam
Kuch toh hai jo aankhein hai num
Kuch toh hai jo tu keh de toh
Haste haste marr jaaye hum…….
Adi is just mesmerised by her voice as if it was just for him……….
Everyone clap…….ishita hugs alliya….
Bottle spins again….it stops on……………..Mani ……everyone hoot except raman ofcourse
Vandu-so truth or dare…….
Mani[little tensed]-Hh…dare….
Alliya-great so u have to do as I say right appa………[mani nods]
You got to recite the shayari u usually write in ur small diary…….
Everyone look shocked towards him…….
Mihika-OMG….then surely we want to hear it….
Mani looks down and is about to take a glass of shots ………..just then ishita holds his hand and stops him……..
Ishita-I want to hear them….
Everyone continue asking him to say
Raman-its ok if he doesn’t want to say……why are you all forcing him…….
Mani-umm…I will say………..(he takes out a diary )
(sound of waves are heard in background and birds chirping along ….sunset time with orange sun……)
Mani-
“Jis din aap Jami par aaye ,
Wo Asman B khub Roya tha,
Akhir Uske Ansu Thamte Bhi kaise,
Usne Hamare Liye
Apna Sabse pyara Sitara Jo Khoya Tha”
All(except ishita, raman)-wah wah!! One more!!![ishita was engrossed in mani’s words …..and both ishita and mani were looking towards each other…..]
Raman held ishita’s shoulder to break the eyelock….[looking at this…… mani took a deep breath and realised that destiny has played such a game that ishita has to be with raman for her daughter ruhi’s sake …….]
Ishita removed raman’s hand and sat back looking towards the other family members……
Ruhi who had witnessed everything ……(thought something)….and continued……
Ruhi-abhimanyu sir can u pls give me ur diary ….i want to read one of them……
Mani-Oh.. ruhi ……umm..sure….
(everyone cheered)….ruhi searched one and read aloud…..
Ruhi-
‘’Manzilain bhi uski thi,
Rasta bhi uska tha.
Ek main akela tha, Kafila bhi uska tha …..
Sath Sath chalne ki soch bhi uski thi,
Phir raasta badalne ka faisla bhi uska tha…
Dil sawal karta hai, kya Khuda na uska tha…..?”
[For a second there was pause….]….then…..vishwa cheered all of them up..
Vishwa-wah!!!really good shayari…..
Everyone clapped………
After two turns of simi and then amma…..the bottle is turned again and stops on ……ISHITA
Everyone hooted…..
Ishita-aah….truth……
Ruhi-can I ask the question….
Ishita- yes ofcourse……
Ruhi-I want to know ur thoughts…..i loved u 7 yrs ago…..But in these yrs that love was lost………u want me back ………how can love happen second time…………
Ishita-why not ruhi……forget whatever happened in the past ……look at me as a new person….love me in a new way……pls ruhi try ……..this time I won’t disappoint you……..
Ruhi-Are these words for only a daughter mother relation or is true for other relations also………
Ishita-ofcourse……… it is true for all relations also….
[everyone looks towards ishu………ishita realises what she just said………she understands the ruhi was indirectly talking about her life……she was talking about loving second time and giving mani a second chance……..]
Pihu[dint understand whats going on…and continued ]-now I will turn the bottle….
Bottle spins and stops on …………Raman…….
Simi-so bhai truth or dare…….
Raman –NOTHIG……..[saying this he drinks two glasses full of shots and leaves off]…..
Everyone looks towards him with a little shock but at second thought with obvious reaction…
Precap- beautiful music playing in the background……..all dark atmosphere………with spotlight ….on the dancing couple…ishita and mani …….both are in white outfits…..Raman is sitting at a corner …….clinging his fist…..with blood shot eyes……
looking forward for ur views…………..
21 Comments
so sorry purna, I may not comment every day from now as my school started and I am going to be busy, but trust me, I will definitely read everyday. please forgive me
Yeah…no problem. ….but keep reading. ….
amazing love it
Thanks rusksy….will update soon ….
Really great. Good work. Don’t focus on comments yaar. There will be a lot of silent readers like me.
Thanx anjali….i m happy to know u r liking the storyline. ….
hiii purna…i’m egerly waited for ur epi…ur writting skills were marvellous!! i like this story line very much!! wht’s the meaning of shayari???
Thanks sweety…..shayari means a short 3 or 4 line poem…..like the ones mani composed…..keep reading. …
i m sorry ….i think i took u wrong….if u meant the meaning of the two shayari above then….first one considered ishita as a precious star that came from sky to earth…….
second one explains how destiny has separated mani and ishita after 7 yrs…….
………keep reading
Am extremely sorry……..ur writing skills are more than awesome…….the way u express feelings is amazing……..but am sry I am unable to digest the fact that ishu and Mani are a pair……..I know u have taken a different perspective ….but am extremely sry I cannot see separation of ishra…..I didn’t want to comment till today…..but seeing ur lines at the starting of ff I could not resist….sry if. I hurt u
Hi lekha….i feel obliged to know u read my ff though being ishra fan….i respect ur views in liking ishra…um…at times just give a glance on my ff….
Thanks
Its grt … Just keep writing and update regularly …. Purna??
thanx Ruchi……..will update soon…..
Hii purna was waiting for ur ff
ur ff is seriously treat to eyes
are these shayaris written by u?
amazing work
Thank u Rushi…really like ur support…..in shayaris some are my lines and some are bookish!…..
…..keep reading
hey purna, i am new here in yhm forum, ur ff is awesome, totally loved it.
Hii Akshata…….welcome to yhm forum……..really very happy to know that u liked my ff ……..keep reading……will update soon……..
Hiii Purna
Dear mai 2din se tumhare update ka wait kar rahi hu….. plz update regular asap m waitting
Hii anam…….Srry for late update ………..will update soon………………..
waiting for your update………love your ff……….
Hi Sarayumane , i have uploaded my update. …..