hiii frnds this is 2nd tym I m re_writing hope this will b posted……thanks to all ur love n support n thanks to silent reader’s also finally I m writing 10 soo much happinesse thank u soon much for liking it now enough start…
episode10
recap:game n punishment
#farmhouse
@morning
All are gatherd at dining table except are sanswaraglak
dp to ap: annu where is ur nalayak sons did they don’t wake upup till now
ap:they are already wake up but I didn’t saw them…
dp:zror kam khrb karahy hoge
shek:even I didnt saw swarag
dp:now definately they are doing something…
ap:adarsh go n chek them
adrsh nods n goes
scene shift to ap room
ragswasan are doing something all the stuffs are here n there
SWA: rags go n bring my red frok n sanku u bring my shoes n jwellry
ragsan:yes mam n goes
ragsan comes n give them to SWA n SWA gives it to someone n goesgoes
adarsh comes n says : what r u doing here i m finding u all in whole house
rags:Bhai cool down BTW y r finding us
ADR:bcz all r w8ing for brekfst so come let’s go
sanky:bhaii w8 relax n w8 for the show
swaraf:yes Bhai w8
ADR: which show n where is laksh n what r u doing with mom stuff
swaragsan: Maaaa..gggg…iiiicccc
ADR:tell me what u all r hiding
ragsanlak:our nw frnd
ADR:which frnd
SWA goes towards the washroom door n saysssss
TADDAAAAAAAAA….here u meet our new frnd lakshikaaaa
adrsh widen his eyes: Laa…kkk….as..hhh what is this n brust out laughing
(yes guys laksh wear swarad dress n shoes n make up :p u can imagine him as cutiee lakshikaaa hahahaa :p)
SWA: arahhh lakshika wwhy r standing there come meet ur big brother adarsh
laksh: jangli billi don’t call me that(anoy)
SWA:awwe meri pyari frnd got angry…laksshikaaa
ragsan laughs
rag says: today I got my new frnd lakshikA n pull his cheeks
sank: n I got my sweet sister n winks at laksh
laksh: shut up u all otherwisw
SWA:otherwise what? u will cry laskhikaaaaa
laksh(angry): I will kill u just shut ur mouth
adr(controlling laugj): ok enough SWA n lakshikaa…(laksh glar) I mean laksh come on let’s go for breakfast
laksh: I m not hungry u gooo..
SWA: omg laksh n not hungry am I dreaming
laksh pinces her hard n says its reality devil
SWA:aaaaahhh how dare u
sank: plz don’t start now n laksh must say u r looking too sweet n cute haina
rags;yessss
laksh: ooo really Bhai if I m looking cute than u should also do the same rrigt everyone
swaragadr: yesss not a bad idea come on sanku
sank,(shouts): nooooooo never n runs outside
all laughs n SWA: lakshika u knw na u have to b like this infrnt of family also can v go n smirks
laksh sadly nods
scene shift
@dining
rp:sujata listen na I m sorry
suji: I m not talking to u
rp:plzz suji u r sweet plzzz
suji ignore
dp : what happnd choty did she is angry on u for nights matter
rp: g bhaisa c na she not looking at me also do something
shek:yes bcz of u this all happen
dp:ok ok n says sujata
suji:jii bhaisa
dp: why r u not talking to chote that’s my order that u will not talk to him 2 days he did the mistake he has to pay for it n smirks
rp(helpless): bhaisaaa what u have done
dadu:hhes ur enemy ram dont take his help in futurw this is the trailer n laughs
shek: yes first tym baba says corrct
dadu:thanksss maa ka chamcha
shek glare n says maa
dp: ok ok dnt curse me chotay u said na u want peace tats y i said sujata not to talk to u
all shok sujata glare rp: achaa jii u want peace naa now i will show u whats pead is
all laughssss suddnly all stops laughing n shokd to c the scenerion what thwy saw
dp(laughng): y u all stop likw u haveee scenn……(shouts)…..ghoooosssssst n brust out laughter bcz the ghost ia lakahikaaa aka laksh
laksh: stopp laughing i m laksh not ghost like u (shoyts)
suji:naa chora if u want to bcome a girl than y u wear these clothes tell us we do the operation of u….
All widen theri eyes n stop laugjing first all look at sujata than laksh tha. suji than laksh than again
suji: kyaaa hoaaa
All burst out into laughing while laksh is glaring swa in i will kill u ritw now wala look ;p :p
voice: did i come to the correct house of mine or some mental asylum where evryone are laughing like mad
All turns to that side n huge smile appers on everyone faces especially laksh bcz his saviour arrives but exept one person who is not ywt happy that is our paru dadi
(yes guyzz the prson is our didaaa who wears a blue cotton jeans n colorful shirt n beautiful hat bcz shes modern)
dadi: lo agai bangalan
laksh shouts diddaaaaaaaaaa
he goes n hugs her but she push him n saus: when this new poti come n y her vouce resemble to my pota laksh n analyze lakshikaa (laksh :p) omg is this laksh twin sistwr annu
all start laughing
swa comes n takes blessing n says: didaa this is ur pota laksh
laksh: haa didaa i m laksh this jungliii did this with mee
dp:well done shona god job
swa:thnmx sweety n dida hows this makeover me n ragsan did this
ragsan comes n take blessng
dida: what u all have done with my grandson
laksh:now u r gone n smirks
rags: didaa is thjs not good
dida:who said its not good
all look at her
dida: itsss mindblowing my sweet grandaugtr is looking cute she takes out her phne n take selfiesss
laksh:didaa not fare
did a:its fair lakshikaaa n winka
All laughss (all took blessings n meets did a)
dadi: hay bache to bache par yeh bangalan chi chiiiii
dida: did u say anything marwaran
dadi: not at all
bechara laksh sad cry face n all are lqughing n teasing him
all are having breakfast
dadu: thank god shobha u come u knew how much I was missing u
sanky: missing did a or sweets
rrags n dadu : sameee
dadi glares
shobha lok at dadi n saya: i knw deenu that u miss sweet bcz mirchi cant give u sweet na
dadu:yess
dadi angrily ses dadu n dadu sees her n gulps in fear
shobha give one swert to dadu but dadi refuse n fighting all are just enjoying there figt
dida:deenu will eat one marwaran
dadi:chup kar bangalan he will not eat hea my husbnd
dida: hes my best frnd n brother he will eat
dadi:nooo
dida:yess
they both are fighting n dont notice that dadu already eating swets while watching ther fite n everyboday laughing seeing this
dida n dadi stops fight n sees that dadu are eating sweeta n give hi-fi to dida n she winks
dadi: huh again u both did the same make me fool i will not spare u huhh (angr)
all laughs ( when ddida n dadu meets did a always fight with dadi n Dada eats sweetss)
after breakfast all aarw gather n talk for sometime n having fun n swalakragsan are at garden
swara: yrr I m getting bore let’s do something
rags:makeover sanky too
sanky:nooo ways u should do ur make up
rags: I don’t need makeover bcz I m already pretty
sank laughs n says: NYC joke bhenjii
rags: whom u called bhnji idiot
sank: u bhnjiiiii
SWA: stop guyzz…where is laksh
ragsan(teas): oooo look someone is impateint
SWA:shut up u both……look lakshikaaaa is cominggg
laksh: shut up now don’t call me that
SWA: ok chill yr
laksh: guys I have bad news
swarahsan: what???
laksh: we r shifting to Kolkata next week leaving u all alone (sad)
swaragsan(shock):whattt.??
SWA: I knw u r ttroubling us that’s y u r lying
laksh: nop i m not lying let’s go inside n u herd it by urslf
all goes inside
swarag: dost u r leaving us
dp: sorry pari what to do my buisns is settled there I have to leave
swarag: u will never come back
dp: who said I will come back to meet u both
swarag:promise
dp: yes pinky promise n they all fakely smiles
sanlak: we don’t want to go guru
shek: my champs don’t b sad soon we will also come there when my busns also got acheivmnt
sanlak: nooo guru how can we live without u all without gfs food n beautiful dadi lov n urs logic n ur churails daughters we cant
shomi n shk are trying to conving sanlak whre as dp ap n dida are trying to convincing swarag
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maheswari are shifting kolkata without there wish
All hugs eachother n recalling there movmnts
dadu: how can i hadle this marwaran alone
shobha: dnt worry i m shifting to london to janki but whenvr she troubles u call me I will teach her
dadi: yes yes of course bangala I will
trio laughs n did a n dadi hugs each other
dp shek shomi ap hugs eachother n says take care of my bestiee
all comes into hall n shokd to c swalak peacfully talking to each other
SWA: laksh one more thing don’t troubles sweety n kaki n Chachi Chachi n yes in skol learn ur test bcz no one will show u n yeah stay away from chipko girls ok
laksh: OK swada mam as u say but I will miss u
SWA: but I will not
laksh: y
swa;:bcz finally bandar is going
laksh:shonaa chipkalo don’t today ok
SWA:ok but promise me u will contact me
laksh:I promise
swalak hugs each other all family are happy but they hear a shout
dp:if they both are here than who will b there
scne shift to swarGs room where ragsan are fighting like swalak
rags: don’t show me ur face again idiot
sank: who will sshow u face annaconda
finally I m happy that I m getting rid of u
rags: yeah mee to I will distribute sweets when u leave
all goes to there n sshokd to c them fighting like this sswalaks to shokd
swalak stopping ragsan
SWA: rrags stop he is going
laksh:yes Bhai u too plz this is our last day
rags: yes shona finally this idiot isbgoing
sanky:yeah finally I get rid of it
all stops them at hall all hugs each other swarag n sanlak meets everyone n took their blessing
rags: all the best laksh miss u
laksh: mee too lado n hugs
rags: I hope that swara give u lectures keep it with u n b in contact n tell somebody to never talk to mee
laksh looks at sanky: says ok madm
they smile
sanky:shona take care of urslf n tell somebody that I have no interest in talking to them
SWA loks at rags: ok n u took care urslf n this dhakan too n b in my contact otherwise u both are gone n hugs each other n says miss u
ragsan are giving glares n swalak are talking happyly
All bids gud bye to each other
last tym they four look at each other n drives off tears escaped from swarags n sanlaks eyes
they are silently crying in their car n rags rushed to room n cry n SWA at garden
To b continued……
Precap:leap of 13 years
guyz I kwn its all sudden but I take my story to next level so plzzz comnting n liking it bcz next is our hero heroins real life is started hope u all enjoy till then take care n love u
thanks (fizo)
34 Comments
Awesome… But after leap please make it as swasan and raglak….
Waiting for next one
thnkx n dear u will c all fou pair there..
Amazing but plz make it swasan n raglak I hate ragsan it request plz dear
thnkx dear n don’t hate ragsan n I el make all four pairs don’t wrry
superb hope ragsan
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Make it swasan and rraglak
thnkx n yes for sure I will make all pair’s
ahahaha, hillarious lakshika…
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Awesome epi…I hope it is ragsan….
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its so funny, waiting for the next
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Superbly funny?
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nice
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i only want ragini love her so much
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nice
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awesome…n plz make swalak n ragsan
thnkx 🙂 n I will surely make all pairs
Awesome yaar love it ????????????????
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awesome
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Mind blowing chappy. Sorry for late comment.Keep it up. Waiting for nxt.
Take care
Keep smiling
thnk u dear n no prblm 🙂
Swasan and Raglak..fiction..hope so….
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I love this seriel i am fan of swara
thnkx 😉