Yeh dooriyan
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Recap : dadi n masked man’s talks. Mehndi ceremony
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“Hmm..mom.. write swara’s name in my hand this way that she can’t find that out”sanskar said
Everyone burst out to listening to him
“Why you all are laughing” sanskar ask with a puppy face
“Beta! Name is written only in bride’s mehndi “ap explains him
“No way! I also want her name to be written in my hand. When m tolerating this mehndi I want her name in it.. to make it worth “sanskar said
“Mai joru ka gulaam ban ke rahunga” laksh sings
“Laksh!!” Sanskar gave him an angry glare
“Vo.. I was saying this for shlok bhai”laksh covers
“Are yaar! Why are you targeting me. Target sanskar na.”shlok says
“I don’t want to die soon”laksh mumers
After the completion of mehndi ap calls everyone for dinner
“You All please have something and after that we will start sangeet ceremony”ap said
Sanskar gets irritated with the mehndi n removes that as soon as that dries.
Swara was waiting for sumi to bring dinner for her in room.. as she can’t eat by herself. Sanskar grabbed the opportunity n immediately went in.
“Hmm.. so waiting for me”he said
“Hmm.. umm.. noo”she said with absent mind
“What happened swara? You are looking tensed??”he ask
“Sir m scared!I don’t know why! But but I feel like something bad is gonna happen.. “she said with nervousness
“Ya something bad will definitely happen tmrw”sanskar said teasingly and turned around
Tears welled up in her eyes which were unnoticed by sanskar as he was standing facing back to her.
“Tmrw I will get married. My batchelorhood will be ended. Now what can happen worse”he said n turns n got shocked to see tears
“Why are you crying”he cups her face
“Sir something will happen.. I can feel that.. “she cries
“Stop crying swara.. nothing will happen”he said and wipes her tears
She was still scared
“Mera Bachha come here!!” He said n hug her
“Be careful sir don’t spoil my mehndi”she said
“Ohh really!! U were crying like hell n now u r asking me not to spoil ur mehndi!! Wow!! ” He pouts
“M stupid I always makes him tensed, but no I won’t show my restlessness to him it’s very important day for him”she thought while hugging him
“Swara??”he nudge her
“Haan sir!”she immediately replied
He releases the hug n pulls her closer by waist, not even air can cross them now.she shivered with his unexpected action.
“What are you doing sir!”she ask
“Just call me sir once again n I will show you what I can do”he said with a naughty smile
She widens her eyes and can sense his intentions.
“Vo.. I.. I.. mean.. vo..”she fumbles
“Speak up swara”he tightens his grip
“Sir please!”she realised and bites her tongue
“Now you have to pay for calling me sir”he said n leans towards her
She closed her eyes in nervousness . They were just couple of inches away when sumi came n gets embarrassed
“Sanskar!! Swara !! There are tons of guests here n u guys are romancing!!”sumi said
Both gets embarrassed
“Ya mom coming!! “Sanskar shouts n ran.
After the dinner everyone heard someone singing
It was shlok
(“Rab rakha, Rab rakha, Rab rakha..
Rab rakha Rab rakha Rab rakha.. aa…”)
He came forward n put his hand on swara’s head
(“Rab rakha, Rab rakha, Rab rakha..
Rab rakha Rab rakha Rab rakha.. aa…”)
Swara smile. Trisha n swati came n hugs her.
(“Ye khushi, ye khushi ka samaa
Dil me goonji hai shehnaiyaan
Ye khushi, ye.. khushi ka samaa
Dil Me goonji hai shehnaiyaan
Ye Haseen
Ye dil-nasheen
Ik mohabbat ki hai jo daastaan”)
Shlok took sanskar’s hand n put swara’s hand on his hand. And hug both
(“Rab rakha, Rab rakha, Rab rakha..
Rab rakha Rab rakha Rab rakha.. aa…”)
Laksh took ragini in center and starts to dance with her
(“Celebrate the feeling
All the day and evening
Beautiful hearts are beating
Love is in the air “)
Here swara was crimson due to shyness.. Sanskar starts to sing. Holding her Hand tightly
(“Koi poochhe aankhon ne aankhon se
Kya keh diya aa.. kya sun liya
Reh de na chhup ke se
Dono ne hai chunn liya, ik saathiya”)
Sanskar talks with swara in eyes..Swara sang
(“Ye reshmi se pal ye narm si halchal
Ye sapno ke badal Rab rakha…”)
She saw him with loving eyes. Shlok looks at them n sang
(“O ye Haseen
Ye dil-nasheen
Ik mohabbat ki hai jo daastaan
Rab rakha, Rab rakhan”)
Swara has tears of happiness in her eyes.. sanskar put his hand on her cheek. She put her hands over his on her face
(“Mahi shaguna manaaiya’n haaye
Bajde sang dhol shehnaiyaan
Mainu mill gaya mera ranjheya
Te Rabba kh’air manaiyaaan”)
Laksh came and took swasan to dance. All the family members were dancing and enjoying.. The most beautiful moments of the pre wedding function of two love birds
((Nachle yeh dil mera kahi da
O aaja nachle yeh dil mera kahi da
Saath tera bas chaahida
O goriye saath tera bas chaahida
O mere naal tu aa haaye
O zara taal mila haaye
Nachle yeh dil mera kahi da
O aaja nachle yeh dil mera kahi da))
Swara was going forward but sanskar held her hand and she turned her face
(“Tumko yun jo dekhun Jaane kyun
Mera jiyaa, dhadke piyaa
Mehki si, lehki si, dehki si
Main hoon piya, yeh kya kiya”)
She lowers her gaze due to shyness,he lifts her chin softly
(“Yeh husn aur yeh tu
Yeh aanch yeh khushboo
Yeh roop yeh jaadu, Rab rakha
Yeh haseen
Yeh dilnasheen
Ik mohabbat ki hai jo dastaan
Rab rakha…”)
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Next day “WEDDING DAY”
HALDI CEREMONY
@MM
Sanskar was getting ready in white kutra n dhoti. Laksh was helping him
“Lucky! You are sure na that this dhoti won’t get open?”sanskar ask
“Ha ha Bhai it won’t open! Trust me. Still if you have doubt put ur belt on”laksh said
“Are you crazy!! Who put belt on dhoti!”sanskar gave him weird look
“Me.. u know I too had doubt so I putted belt on” laksh chuckles
Sanskar burst out laughing
“No dude I don’t need belt just tie this properly” Sanskar said
Soon sanskar get ready n went downstairs for the ceremony
Ap makes him sit on a wooden plank n rolled his sleeves upto his elbow and starts to apply haldi
Everyone was done now it was laksh’s turn n laksh has a naughty grin on his face
Initially laksh dipped his one finger in haldi n applied that on his face. Sanskar sighs thinking that laksh isn’t planning anything , but the very next moment laksh took the whole bowl n pour that on sanskar’s head.
“Lakkkssshhhh!!!!!!” Sanskar shouts
Laksh showed his tongue to tease him
Sanskar and laksh ran in whole MM, spreading the signs of the wedding everywhere. Everyone laughs seeing the two.
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@GM
Swara get ready in simple white n yellow anarkali and everyone was waiting for anyone from MM so that they can start the ceremony.
Meanwhile Kaveri message sumi to talk and she went backyard
“What you want!”sumi ask uninterestedly
“Sharmishtha! I just want to attend her haldi ceremony!! I want to apply haldi to my daughter”kaveri pleads
“Swara is my daughter! U r no one to her!”sumi said strongly
“Sharmishtha please!! I know I did wrong to her. Please. I just want to attend her wedding function. I promise I won’t trouble anyone. Please”Kaveri cried
“Fine. U can apply haldi to her but make sure swara can’t see ur face. She will get hurt n I don’t want to hurt my daughter on her special day”sumi said and left
Here dadi was listening to all that with evil smile.
Soon RagLak came with haldi and the ceremony started.
Everyone has applied haldi on swara now it’s turn for Kaveri. She has covered her face with veil.
“Hmm now I should see some action. Let’s see how swara will react to the deed of her lovely ‘mother(sumi’s)” dadi thought
Kaveri was about to apply haldi but dadi spoke “Kaveri you!!”
As soon as swara listen this she held Kaveri’s hand n removes that veil
“Why the hell you came here.. ! Can’t you understand you are no one to me.. ma please ask this lady to go”swara shouts
“Beta only Sharmishtha has allowed Kaveri to come .”dadi said
Swara was shocked with this. Dadi was expecting swara to get angry on sumi.
“Okay. I now u have taken advantage of my ma’s kindness. U r such a disgusting lady. M ashamed that u hv given birth to me” she gets hyper
“Swara beta please. M sorry I will leave. Don’t get hyper. Your health will get affected. Just a month back u had been operated . Please calm down”Kaveri said while sobbing
“You don’t need to care about me!! U left me na then it should not bother you whether I live or die. U just leave I said!!!” Swara shouts
“Shona calm down.. it’s not way to behave with elder. “Sumi said
“Ma please ask this lady to leave. “Swara said while crying
“Princess don’t stress yourself”shlok said
“You are such a shameless person! After listening to this u are standing here.. get lost.. can’t you get me.. Jao yaha se” she screams her lungs out and ran to her room crying
“Kaveri! M sorry whatever She said to you. She didn’t mean to insult you. Don’t mind her rants” sumi said
Kaveri left crying
Here swara looked herself in her room n cries miserably.
Soon her head starts to ache and everything Infront of her eyes starts to rotate. She somehow composes herself and drank some water which has already been spiked by dadi.
Here sumi wants to see swara
“Shlok I should see swara. She is so much hurt only cz of me”sumi said with guilt
“No chachi u did what was correct. Just go n see her she needs her mother”shlok said
Sumi was about to go but dadi stopped her
“Don’t go now. She needs time. Let her cry her heart out.”dadi said
“Ma but!”sumi resist
“U hv already hurted her alot by calling Kaveri here”dadi taunts
Sumi felt bad n agreed
*Meanwhile in swara’s room*
She was crying holding her head tightly.”Aaàhahh!!! Maaa!!!”
That masked person was already hidden in her room.
Swara somehow got up n had a painkiller. Soon she fell unconscious on floor.
That masked person Pats her face and she opened her eyes slightly. And he made swara sign on a paper n write something on that.
Within half n hour dadi n that person took swara out of GM without get noticed by anyone.
“Shlok I am going to see swara. I can sense she is Not well”sumi said in worry
She went n found her room empty with a letter on bed.
**Ma,
U hv hurted me Alot today. I hv never expected this from you. I hate you. I hate sanskar. I hate everyone. I am going away to get peace. For god’s sake don’t find me. If I want I will come back. And about marriage ask sorry to mom n dad on my behalf if sanskar wants he can marry anyone else I don’t care.
Ur swara**
Sumi sat on bed with a thud.
Within an hour all the maheshwaris were in swara’s room
“Huh I have told you! Blood will show it’s true color.. look swara has eloped” mouli taunts
“Masi ma swara Can’t go like this m sure”sanskar said in tension
“Sanskar stop giving urself fake confidence”mouli said
Sanskar was fed up of her allegations on swara. He was pissed off now.
“Enough!! Masi ma enough!! U hv no right to judge my swara.. m sure something has happened to her” he said n again read that letter
“U hv proof in ur hand sanskar.. this letter itself proves that she has left” mouli again said
“No. Yes. Yes .. this letter isn’t written by swara.. she never calls me only sanskar she calls me sanskar sir.. and she always address mom n dad as mam n sir.. she still can’t adjust herself.. now m sure something has happened to her.. “sanskar said
“Where is my daughter”sumi cried
“Ma don’t worry.. it’s 12 n mahurat is at 8 I promise I will search swara by that time. We will get married today”he said with determination
To be continued…
Precap: marriage???
So. Guyz today I need ur help actually i want to know whether u want to read this ff further i mean after their marriage or not.
If u want to read this story after the marriage I will continue. If not then next part will be last part .
72 Comments
I will read plz Continue nice episode
Thank-you for telling dear!
Nooo, I want to read it after their marriage.So, keep writing.Anyway,superrrr chappy.Who is that mask person???Today first time I saw naughty sanky in yeh dooriyan.And swara always in tension.Song is very nice,great choice. I loved loved laksh in todays chappy. He is soo cute and naughty.Waiting for nxt.
Take care
Keep smiling that to big wala????
Okay I will continue?
Mask person Kon h.. umm.. m Kyu batau!!
Don’t worry now u will see this naughty sanskar daily?
Thank-you for liking laksh?
Awesome. Omg swara is kidnapped ????. Who is that masked man?y is he trying to harm swara n separate swasan? ?y?y?y?.omg these many questions. My chotu sa brain will blast. Plz post next part asap. Will be waiting
Jee swara has been kidnapped?
Don’t stress ur chotu sa brain.. u will get to know as the story proceeds
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Me her where we’re u I was waiting for ur ff continue dear
Sorry for making you wait dear..
Thank-you so much..
Glad you liked it
Yes. Bcoz still swara is nt comfortable bt i want to see swasan romance, nok jhok. Pls pls continue.
Okay I will continue..
Thank-you for telling?
are continue the story dear
Thank-you for ur opinion?
it was amazing meher….
plzz continue…
Thank-you dear????
we want u to continue meher i love ur ff so much to the infinity i want 1000 episodes from u and 8 seasons u have to continue till that otherwise i will complain to tu that meher is missing love ur ff so much and post kit2 asap and this ff also can’t wait to read more love u lots lots lots keep smiling always take care and remember my warning hehe lol i am not joking okay
Thank-you so much dear I will definitely continue…
Haww don’t complain TU..???
I will try to post kit2 either tmrw or day after tomorrow
Luv u
i will read continue.. arey yaar unite swasan soon.. update next part soon
Thank-you so much dear I will definitely continue
Superb.let marrige happen.thank god sanskar ki dimag chal gaya
Thank-you dear
Uska dimag chalana he tha
Make sure atleast there mariage happen
Definitely dear
Awesome
Thank-you
nice..continue ur story lz..
Thank-you dear
Awesome… Please continue it after marriage also…..
Update next one soon
Thank-you dear will definitely continue
Meher di
I am sorry but I never shouted on any elder, except for my real sister. But, today I guess I’ll break my rules. HAVE U GONE MAD OR WHAT? How can u even think of ending so soon? If u dnt extend it till 50 epis at least ne, I’m sure I will kill you! How dare u think of ending it tomorrow? I mean jus today’s episode was such a special one, so many shocks and so many surprises, and u, u r asking that whether u shd stop this ff? Never! U wnt stop it before 50 episodes at the least, and don’t u make an excuse that u have no plans in ur head which u would use for the further story. Coz I kno ur head if full of new ideas, and u van get one any tym.
Okay, enough of shouting, coming to the episode, I wnt say anything, jus that upload the next one asap, and KIT 2 also, afterall it’s my fav character’s engagement there!
And also, di, do u kno where Chaitali di is? It’s been long that she hasn’t uploaded her ff, m missing both of her ff’s.
Take care di, love ya.
Aaaaaa don’t shout *puppy face*
I just thought to end it?
I hv submitted that hopefully get updated soon.
N ya Chaitali is bzy in her studies.. she isn’t very much action on fb also
Luv you loads
nooooo a big wala noooooooooooo plzzzzzzzz dont stp dis di its really awsm till now iam a silent reader bt u r question made me comment today.i luv u r both ff a lot .both r having its unique style. cming to this chappy na,its awsm di keep writing baiiiiii di tc.
Aww thank-you so much dear for reading this..
Okay I won’t finish this..
Luv you loads
Dear Telly Updates it’s chapter. 29.?
Di aap kisko dear keh rahe ho!!???
Seriously do u think that they r worth of this word???
Kya Karu yaar.. Kuch or bola to Kya pta ye log mera article he post Krna band kr de toh!! ???
Loved it ❤️ I’m back and plz don’t seperate swasan I want to read it also after marriage ❤️
Thank-you dear will definitely continue it
thanks God ,sanskar didn’t believe the letter..
luv it soo much, don’t ended soon pleaseee
Of he believed that letter then his love won’t be real na
Plz continue it meher ji.plz. n about today’s episode it fantastic.
Thank-you dear
nice
Thank-you
Amazing please continue the story after marriage
Thank-you dear will definitely continue
Di I wanna read it further also…actually after a long hectic day its my only way of relaxing….or aap isko over karke mujhpe itna bada atyachaar nhi kar sakte…??
Or tu Jo attyachaar kr ri h uska Kya..
Zalim kahiki
Maine kya kiya(innocent face)
M such a innocent girl after all???????
Innocent n Shukla ji na ek dusre k antonyms h ..
Amma
N opposite attracts..????
Dr dont end this plz…we love this ff like,a hell..plz dr….and plz dont separate swasan ……ahhhhhhhhhh plzzzzz dr….
Like,always awesome dr….update next part asap…..not last part ok just NEXT PART…..
Plz,dr…..dont end this…..plzzzzzzzzz
Thank-you dear
Okay I won’t stop this n yeah they won’t get sepreted either
Luv you
Of course we want to read or I can say I want to read… Plz continue after marriage also… Plz….
Thank-you dear
I will definitely continue
Yes di i def want to read it after marriage. Plz dnt stp tis. And the mystery is puzzling me a lot.
Loved the swasan romance and the sangeet emotional scenes. Plz dnt end tis ff di. Tis is amazing.
Thank-you dear
I won’t stop this.. n hv patience mystery will be unfold
Luv you loads
Amazing….
Thank-you
Plzzz continue dear.. And as usual a lovely and painful(not usual) chapter
Thank- you dear
Will continue
Continue the story don’t think about next part is last anyway aj ka episode cute bhi tha and shocking bhi
Thank-you so much dear
Will definitely continue
Awesome
Thank you