Hiii frnds I m fizo currently writing ff heal my wounds but on independence day I thought to write one shot on…..I m a Pakistani but I want to give tribute to all people who helps us in freedom neither they r Indian or Pakistani as we all knw the war of two countries are from years but many less people tried to remove it all country have their own value we r not any one to judge in other countries we all have diffrnt religion diffrnt faith but why we peoples force others to believe that….we all have are own faith on ours religion we both countries got freedom for our own hardwork not others I just want we just all believe in ourslf as we all knw in pak vs India match both countries such peoples bash each other n make other ones low I just hate that if our country men’s will do that I just hate them I just want that the fight n hatred btwn these two nations stopd but what can we do in our educating systems they tell us the history but we people take them to others side ssooo today I just wrote a is on swaragini and sanlak but difrnt charactrs n religion I just hope u all get my point n don’t hate me n sorry if I hurt anyone…..
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ragini as zoya Muslim girl indian
swara as helly Christan and Indian
laksh as rahul Indian
sanskar as varun Indian
these four characters are mature and don’t judge people by religion but by heart helly ,varun,raj trio studies in same colg n always wants to do something for their country
@mumbai exel collg
hhelly enters the collage n sees everyboday is gossiping about something she directly goes to sanlak
helly: hiii varul (rahul and varun)
varul:hiii shona (they call helly as shona)
helly:why r everybody is gossiping about something did something happens
varun: don’t ask
helly:tell na
rahul: an Muslim girl comes here to study u knw na what all thinks
varun:yeah everybody is teasing her she runs ssomewhre
helly:what??? comeon find her let’s go
rahul: I m nt coming
helly:shut up u fool she needs are help come
varun:yes rahul come n he dragd him
they trio reach to the corridor n sees two boys n girl are making fun of her
boy1:hey u did u come here to kill us haan
girl1:nop she must b come here to plan to do blast right u BL**y girl
The girl starts crying
boy:look at her she start crying
girl:such a coward
one boy tries to hold her hand but someone stops his hand yes helly stop it
helly:heyy u leave her y r u troubling her
boy: don’t intfre shes muslim
helly:soo what
girl:they are here to trap evrybody
helly: did u knw her
boy nods no
varun:so how can u say that she is here for some purpose
girl:bcz she didn’t belongs to us
helly: ok then I m also dnt belongs to u bcz I m Christian do u think same about me
boy:of course not bcz we knw u yr
rahul:exactly so how can u judge her by her religion give her some time u all will knew her n now leave
(guyz I m ssoo sorry if I hurt anyboday but its the many peoples judge others by their religion I will not say that in my country people don’t do that ofcouese they do in our skol students also does the same n I hate them that’s y I m writing this to tell u all)
helly consoles girl n says:what’s ur namr
girl:zzoo..yyyaaa(crying)
(zoya as ragini)
helly:hi zoya will u b my frnd n wipes her tears
zoya:really u want b my frnd
helly:yyesss not only me but these two also
varul:hiii
zoya smiles: don’t u think like others
varun:not at all we should judge people by their nnature not their belongings
rahul:yes n u seems to b nice that y we three wants to b ur frnd
helly:ssoo will u
zoya smiles: yes of course n shakes hands with all
All smiles n talk for sometime in canteen
zoya: u knw u all are my first frnda nobody does frndship with me n becomes sad
all notice this
varun: yes bcz they know that soon u becomes frnd of mine that’s y they don’t do bcz I do frndship with special persons n winks
all laughs
helly:don’t praise too much
rahul: u leave him zoya he has some mental prblm
zoya laughs And varun glare
helly:leave them lado tell me how much u score in ur skool
zovarul: laado who’s this
helly: u bhuddu I want to ggive that name to my sister u also like my sister that’s y I ggave it to u
zoya eyes becomes moist n she tightly hugs helly: thank u ssoo much helly for ggiving me so much value
helly:dnt call me helly call me shona its my pet name kept by these idiots
zoya:ok shona
varul(pouts): u nver gives us pet name
helly:bcz u r already pets na n I call u by that only
varul(confused): MATLAB??
zoya: I think her means is monkey n donkey right shona
helly:yeah exactly
both laughs n hi-fi
varul makes angry face
varul: ooo great she comes in ur life just an hour before n we r frnds from years but now we becomes monkey n donkey right we r going
zoya huriedly holds both hands n says i m soorry bcz of u me u both become angry sorry shona i cant be ur frnd i dnt want to become a wall in ur frndship i m sorry u r right she said almost crying
varul brust out into laughtr zoya becomes confused she looks at shona
helly: dnt take them seriously they can never becom serious they r juat teasing u
varul hi-fi n zoya eyes him n beat them playfully
in short time thwy becoms good frnds almost after 2 weeks heya n varul becoms best frnds n share a gud bond but all others studnts still make fun of zoya n tease her n many of them mis behave also n all studnts broke frndship with helly n varul too bcz they always supprt zoya
@canten
heya n varun are chating
rahul:hey guyz did u hear collg students wwre planning to do program on independence day
helly: but what we can do nobody iis ready to take our help n we can’t participate on it
trio becomes sad
zoya: I m sorry
helly:for what lado
zoya:bcz of me u have to face many thing I think u should broke frndship with me
varulhel(shouts): noooo
helly: y r u blaming yrslf this is not ur fault this is fault of our thinking we are new generation we have to end this but nobody will understood that unity is power
varun: yes u knw we always wants to do something for this but what can we do old thinking n if we can than we can give speech in clg only
zoya:actually i always want to do but nobodyngives me a chance
rahul: so tell me what u wants to do
zoya: i always want to do small programs in small areas of city n want to helps those peoples who can do but nobody gives them a chanc in our country well educated peopls do wrng things n many of girls dnt get education the country is distributed in many culture n religions nobody though that our mother land is same our values is same but thinking is difrnt i also want to help in cleaning dirt from streets
tats it…..
varun:omg u have sooo much inside u yrr (almst shokd)
helly: yes yrr we always wants to do the same
rahul: yes but waht we get
zoya:freedom a real freedom did u really thing we got independent
helvarul:Means’s?
zoya: today u all just obsevr ur surrounding for few days u all get ur answers
soo as zzoya says trio observe evrything n got theor ansrs
at phne conversation
zoya: what happnd y u all call me at this tym
helly:we want to say as u say we obsrve evryone
zoya:soo what u get
varun:oue answrs
rahul:yes n we want to do something
zoya: ok soo i will tell u at colg what to do
all says ok n bids byr n gn to each othe
#morning
@collg
zoya tells helvarul something
hell: is it wrk
zoya:100%
all nods ok
helly talks to principal n makes all colg gathrd at coridor she makes an anocmnt
helly: gud morning everyone i kne many of yewh will not listen to me but for ur country sakes u have too i n varul wants to do something i wnat u all to supprt ua
one of stdnt: we will not bcz u supprt that muslim
all gossipng
hell:stop it from now we will not just tell me that u want to do something for ur aountry or not
after many effrts thwy all agree for it
helly: soo guyz we will make three groups in 3 parts
one will do public awarnss programs at small places for education and rights
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scnd will do cleaning of all small places n big places n throes all trash to a trash place
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third will hhelps all those peoples who are needy like helps in donation n many others thing for all those poor peoples who don’t have knowledge or money food….we have to spread at every end of our city this is our gift for our country
All sstudnts claps but one is hiding and crying silntlu that’s our zoya who is very happy
next day all starts at their mission “azadi”
bands matram songs play in BG
All students goes at very big n small places n do program
Girls should have their rights they should b educated that should b do the responsibility of sons
bbande matram plays
All students do donation n hepls needy gives them food money n knowldgr n heols children who is doing labour n gives them education by themselves
BG song plays
All students are doing sweeping n cleaning roads along with helvarul n zoya who hide her face but doing everything helping labours in work
in one week they all get famous evryboday proud of them all country n their fathers collg are very proud of them bcz of their mission azadi
On the day of independence day live broadcasting of their program of going after some tribute and tablos n songs at the end of the show everybody wants ylisten the vvoice of that person who made this plan
principal: please welcome on stage ms helly the main leader of group
All cclaps for her n wnts to knw her
helly: hii evryone “azadi mubarak” u all are eager to knw that how can i thibk thid much n today i will getting the aeard of ‘true indian” but i m sorry i cant take it bcz i m not capable of it the rally n plans are not mine the mind is someone else soo plz put ur hands togethr for zoya khan
zoya eyes becoms moist but varul assurs him n take her to stag
few peoples are just clapping
studnt: u said that u are not talking to her than whats this….this is all her plan it means she come to destey everybody
helly: today i will not give u the answr she will gives
stud: we ask u not this trerist
helvarul are fuming n zoya is silent
helly hold her n says: today evrybody is watching u just say what inside urs this is ur opportuninty dnt losse it
all makes her confindent she nods
zoya: salam evryone my name is zoya khan and i am not from this country but from few years this is my country whre i live…..i m not a hindu but i m a muslim n now i m indian…..i knw many of u dnt like me n hatss me bcz of my culture but this is not a reason to dislike anybody if one religion peoples of othr religion do wrng with each othrrs that doesnt mean thr rest of all our wrong when i come here i observe everything n got to knw that only rich peoples are going ahead but middle class n poor peoples are becoming more poor day by day girls are not having education bcz of old thibking n bcz of dirtnss many germs n illness are spreading day by day n poor peoples are getting affcting soo what i did not born in this country so what my cultural n values are diffrnt the fact is we all our humans cant we judg eachother by our naturs n heart n our values we all want one thing n that is bright future of our country soo y cant we think positive and considrr each n evryone sames in every religion all mens are same so y dnt we follow it i knw i m muslim but i m human like u all n i just want stop war n i m very blessful to have frnda like helly n varun n rahul unity is strengh bcz of u all we all can do this much for our country thank u n happy independence day n jai hind 🙂 (guyz i dnt knw what u exactly say)
helly varul claps but after few scnds all claps whole heartdly
zohel n varul are having teard of hapns n hugs each other
they four end the show on dancing on india wale…..
all exptd zoya in colg n becms frnd with her all having proud of their childrn
varun: u did it lado
zoya: no we did it
all smiles n hold eavh other hands n says “Togthr forevr”
helly pov: finally all exept zoya she is very kind hertd n she is just like my sister i love her to the core
zoya pov: finally i got hapins i got my soul mate sister n undrstanding frnds n cool colg now no will make me outsider like i m always live here n grow up like i m just like them love u all
varun pov: finally we can do someyhing for our land now in evry week our colg do wlfare soon i will do charity
rahul pov: i just love my country n my buddies in these weeks many things changs i think i live in a new city of great peoplws
story end on pov
“happy independence day”
guyz i m sorry if i hurt anyone with my story i just want to stop the hatrd btwn our countres when many countries attack theu blame pakistanis mostly muslimd n whrn pak got attavk they blame othrs trirism have no religion they have just hatrd among countrkss y cant peopl undrstnd this y putting blames on neigbouring counties we all are humans n no religion will thought to hate other…..n plzzzzxxx i m really sorry if i hurt anybody emotions i juat want to tell something through this plzz dnt mind n this is tribute to m ghandi g n quaid azam n late army officrs of indian n pakistan n sorry again…..forgive me for my mistake n be happy love ur country
Allah hafiz take car 🙂
36 Comments
Nice….. I really appreciate your thinking.. Infact I also don’t like these things….
thank u solo much 🙂
Kudos to u….We all r humans first and afterwards comes nationality, religion, etc.
sorry I don’t understand
I meant well said….humanity should come first
Masha allah…..awesome epi…. well said???
thank u 🙂
Hattsss off dear….u jst nailed it…superbbbbbb….happy independence day!!!proud to b an indian…
Really good attempt…..very NYC of you….
I accept with you…yes we all r humans first….next comes to our nation……
belated HAPPY INDEPENDENCE DAY dear..
N HAPPY INDEPENDENCE DAY to all Indians…..love you all
It’s just awesome dear….. Thanks To u for writing this beautiful OS……Thank u
nice
Awesome
Mashaa Allah…super episode…..you are such a great writer….and super….happy independence day….
I accept that this is not right we must never judge any one with their cover (religion, culture) n u wrote a very gud os on our country .
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Awesome dear …. u had potrayed ragini ‘s chatracter so beutifully …. and u r right we are not muslims or hindu we are indians ..
Nice
Awesome dear love it. Superb os yaar. Love ragini, swara and varul . ???????????????
wow so awesome and emotional story love it to the core..I am not from Pakistan or India but I understand how much a man has to go through just because of religion and I don’t like it as first we all are human then other thighs..love the way you showed ragini also helly so amazing..
Thank you ? thank you ? thank you ?…..Fizo…… I really love ❤ you and your thinking….
I have friend Sana Samreen. She is just like Zoya. Even she face this type of problem when she first entered into our college. I was the one who made friendship with her when I saw her first… After making friendship with her my friends stop talking to me… But I never mind it… But when they started bad mouthing about her I couldn’t take it… So I beat one boy … Sorry I forgot to tell I am black belt in karate…. Then it was big drama in college principle call my parents and all but my parents supported me cause they taught me to respect every religion… Then they make principle realize that I was right…. Then he made every student realize their mistake and now every one is treating Sana friendly… No difference, no doubt and no hatred… Only Love ❤ and respect for every one… Sana had her Schooling from Urdu school so she could only speak Hindi not our language… But now every one is trying to learn Hindi perfectly.. And Sana is teaching them and I really love ❤ this…. And when I read your ff I really wanted to say Thanks…. And Happy Independence day…. Love ❤..
This country is not only of Hindu but every religion people.. India is country of every one… Don’t judge people on religion… Love ❤ their hearts…. Love country…..
belated happy independence day you too , sorry i didnt know that you are from pakistan otherwise i would have been wish you yesterday only 😀 , but its better late than never.
yes i appreciate your thinking. you have written it beautifully, the way you have explained everything is commendable. loved it. 😀
Thank u soooo much for such a beautiful message.. ? ? ?
hats off
Outstanding dear. Loved it. It’s so heart touching.Welltouching.Well, I am not from India and Pakistan but I can understand your feelings.I liked your thoughts.I also don’t like all these. We are humans first, then religion n all. Thanks for writing such a beautiful os.
“HAPPY INDEPENDENCE DAY “???
Take care
Keep smiling
Lovely os dear….loved your concept…. Happy Independence Day…love you
Guys my best friend is a muslim
But shes a human
And that thought u have applied here
Happy independence day
To all my brothers and sisters
Proud to be an indian
awsum.i really appricate ur thinking.religions custom are no bar to become a friend. our overpossesiveness to religion superstition are main enemy to our society.
we can not forget before partition there was one country.nd both country follow same history of freedom
unity in diversity..
luv it so much
Awesome one shot…v havent faced much issues in my place..hats off to u for such a gud thot..nd proud of u….
Nice os….ur thinking is awesome…..we all should be like this and love all people…..that is the day when ee people can enjoy the real freedom
thankkkk uuuu soooooo muccchhhhhhhh I did not expt this much from u all love u sooosooo .much n Sam we r proud of you…u did a great love u hats off n proud of u all who thinks in this way thank u soon much n love u n happy indpndnce day 🙂 🙂 always b happy
I loved you’re thinking I’m also from Pakistan but i live in Switzerland I also want to end this fight we all are humans and i salute to those who risk there life for us ❤️ I also have Friends who are Hindus I don’t care all I know is they are also human belated Happy Independence Day Fizo and Happy Independene Day to all of you❤️
Nice story I am also from Pakistan I am appreciate you thinking I am also suppose that yai war ab friendship mai badal jani chahea happy independence day all my friends
Superb & happy independence day. Hats of you dear for giving a great msg to all
Haatts off Dear…..we respect your pov…..so dont say sorry….you did right thing ur POV is juz awesome… nd m happy that u expressed and shared it with us….lovely dear awesome…..
HAPPY INDEPENDENCE DAY….
Vande Mataram
Jai Hind?