FINALE EPISODE!!!!!
Ok so fist of all tqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqq alllllllllllllllllllllllllllll of u for sooo much comments….love u alllll..really 60 comments…it really is soooo much for me…n I m on 9 th cloud..or maybe sooooo much above that I m shaking hands from God…???tqqqqqqq love u all so much…..
N A VERY VERY HAPPY INDEPENDENCE DAY ALLLLL OF U..!! I love my country….
In case it is updates happy belated Independence Day,..BT I have uploaded on 15/816 only…. Ok so let’s start….
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It was morning BT the sun had yet not come out of his shelter properly as it was around 7 o clock in winter…
The surrounding had fresh air which is trying to take away all the negative thoughts and black night and leave over only the happiness n bright ray of sun…
The birds were singing in their melodies voice to indicate everyone about the fresh n pleasant day which has come….
the trees were swinging in sync as if they r dancing in the song of the birds….
It was a fresh n lovely environment….little cloudy..which was hiding the lil Ray’s of sun….fresh n cool air…voice of the birds…trees dancing…
n a lonely road where there were only two love birds I.e manan in the car who had celebrated their love the previous night n that was clearly visible by the view of them..both in eos arms…
Nandu wearing Manik’s shirt n Manik shirtless…both in eos embrace sleeping peacefully with a pretty smile on their faces…
BT I think the cloud no more wanted them to sleep..
bt wanted them to rise up n see the beautiful day after celebrating love for the first time…to see a beautiful day with his/ her love together for the first time…
that’s because the clouds which were previously hiding the sun had now moved away n had given free space to the sun to spread his arms n hug the whole world….
manan’s sleep got disturbed by the rays of the sun as the windows were down…
Manik woke up n saw that Nandu was in his arms…he smiled as he remembered the night….
Nandu too woke up n the first view when her eyes opened was Manik’s breathtaking face….she smiled looking at him…
Nandu got up…BT soon realised what she had done last night..
Somewhere she didn’t feel it wrong….
She got up…Manik went out taking his blazer( don’t get wrong ideas..ofcource he was wearing his jeans?)
Nandu wore her top n went out of the car too..( she too was wearing her jeans!!?✋✋)
She handed over Manik’s shirt to him…n without uttering a single word she went driving her car to home..
Manik to got into his car n smiled remembering the night….(Bg music sibo )
Manik saw an earring of Nandu on the backseat by his rear view mirrors….
He was smiling..n was really really happy….
Nandu went home.. She sat on her bed n took a deep sigh…
She remembered the night too n smiled a huge one…she saw her hand which had one broken nail..she remembered that when she had held Manik tightly then the nail broke..she blushed remembering that….
Soon she realised that what she had done….she became worried..
NANDU P.O.V
Ufff….y..y only with me aaiyapa…what so wrong did I do to get this….y r u taking so much tough exam of mine?? Y…..
I have done everything by ur words na aaiyapa so then y now…y now for once u r not forgiving me….
Hhhh…ok..yesterday whatever happened..I don’t feel wrong in that..I don’t feel guilty n bad…I m happy to spend that night with Manik…BT then that is only I don’t want…I don’t want to like that night…I want to hate Manik..to hate everything of him..every bit of him….BT to my unluckiness… I loved it…I love it when he touches me..when he hugs me..when he kisses me….I love him very very much….BT I cannot be with him….
God…plzz help me…
END OF P.O.V
many days passed….fab5’s practices were going on fully…Manik decided to give Nandu some time..to again be her friend….
Manan now became friends….
All were happy…BT not Manik…
Manik missed Nandu….he wanted to make her his mate…for life…
BT Nandu was against this….
New Year came….it was a nyc new year…
Space i.e Manik had thrown a party for all the ppl of space… Not the teachers..BT only for the students…the party was I a bigggggg garden…it was very beautifully decorated with the balloons and hangings…
The trees were decorated with light…
There was a huge bar…the small pillars were decorated with Champaign bottles which had candles inside them…
Tables had rose petal candles…which gave a sophisticated n rich feeling….
All the ppl had started coming….
Maximum crowd was there…
BT our Nandu has a very rigid habit of coming late so she was not there….
Suddenly the fab4 came on the stage….
Manik was looking at them curiously as to what ll they do now….something really wrong is going to happen coz fab4 is on stage??
Cabir said-” helloooooooo ppl….welcome to Manik’s farmhouse wala garden…we have here our supreme King of girls hearts I.e Manik himself…hahaha….u all must be wondering na..that y m I talking this way…vo isliye kyuki I from childhood always wanted to become an RJ of radio mirchi…hahaha….
( cabir is now only lil bit drunk…before the party even started her is drunk…jst think..he is seriously gonna take the party to some other zone only…u all know him right?!!?). Haan so where was I…Haan…ki Manik as u all know is super hot…n the ruler of all the girl’s heart…so today we r gonna make Manik’s fandom ever go even more crazy..u know how??? By showing..his hotness…!!!! Yes..yes…his hotness”
Manik was like what- the – hell..!!
Manik-” no..cabir stop it..I m not gonna do anything…”
Cabir-” oh..plzz Manik…its ur party na..come on..u have to do something…”
Manik-” no…”
All pleaded Manik…fab4 n all other ppl present there….
Manik was still rigid…he didn’t agree…
Mukhti-” ok..Manik…don’t do it if u wanna loose the challenge…yes…it is a challenge to u…n all we alllll know..that Manik never looses to anyone..wether it is a fight or a dare or a challenge and bet…he always takes it..n wins..na?? BT now…u r saying no…ok..no problem…”
Alya-” ohh..mukhti BT Manik lost a dare…Manik lost….oh my god!..his world famous record broke today…shit”
Druv-” this was not good…shit Manik…”
Manik knew they were forcing him…BT he didn’t want to break his record so he took it…Manik rolled his eyes n said…
Manik-” ok..say what do u want?? I ll do it”
Ppl started shouting n hooting…
Cabir-” that’s my boy..ok..so we have planned something…
there is a red carpet on the main entrance…after I say get set go..
the first girl who enters..ll be the most lucky one of today….
as soon as she enters…she ll be the princess of the night…n u r the prince..
when she enters..u ll have to go towards her…sit on knees n ask her for the dance…
N u ll have to dance a sensuous one with her…”
Manik said ok…
Cabir-” ok..get set go”
On the entrance…a white bmw came….
Manik don’t know how n y..suddenly turned towards the gate..he was like attracted BT the presence…
He saw towards the entrance…
The gate of the car opened..
A girl came out…she was wearing silver n black high heels..a black n silver gown which had a deep neck at the back n a cut at the place of stomach…
She had two rings on her middle n last finger..she had a sliver clutch…
When Manik’s gaze moved towards her face…her lips was so beautiful with red lipstick…n no other makeup..n she was none other than our very own Nandu…
She had left her hair open n freely curled…
She was looking super beautiful n breathtaking…she was so attractive…
Manik Was mesmerised…
Fab4 n all others were smiling looking at Manik how he was staring at her…
Cabir-” Manik..I have said..go”
Manik started walking towards Nandu…
Nandu saw Manik walking towards…
He was wearing a black jeans,white shirt and a black blazer..he had his hair perfectly gelled up like a gentle man…
Nandu couldn’t take her eyes off him as he was simply looking super hot…
Manik walked towards..
Nandu stood there looking at him..or rather staring at him n checking him out…
Manik came to her n sat on knees…
Nandu was at once shocked n surprised..
Nandu widened her eyes on Manik’s gesture…
Manik-” miss nandini murthy..would u like to dance with me..Manik malhotra..coz it would be a beautiful senerio if a gorgeous lady like u dances with a handsome boy like me in this beautiful night!!”
Nandu laughs n nodded in yes…
She gives her hand in Manik’s hand…flower petals fall on both of them…
They both walk towards the stage..
They reach the stage…
Cabir takes Nandu’s purse and puts the music…
( this song is really very special to me as I have danced in my college fest in this song two month ago..so I added the song to have the feel….it creates a very sensuous dance…I don’t know wether u all have seen the dance performance of salman in jhalak dikhlaja 2016…last week wala performance…the same dance will be portrayed here….so imagine a sensuous n seductive dance which shows intense love n pain..PLZZZ PLUG IN FOR BETTER EXPERIENCE…U LL SERIOUSLY LOVE THIS ONE)
Manik took Nandu….
Tujhe yaad kar liya hai
Tujhe yaad kar liya hai
Aayat ki tarah
Aayat Meaning: Verses from Quran are called “Aayat”
Manik lifts Nandu…n takes a turn…
Kaayam tu ho gayi hai
Kaayam tu ho gayi hai
Rivayat ki tarah
Both dance with passion…
Tujhe yaad kar liya hai
Marne talak rahegi
Marne talak rahegi
Nandu runs towards Manik, jumps n hugs him like she will never leave him…
Tu aadat ki tarah
Tujhe yaad kar liya hai
O tujhe yaad kar liya hai
Aayat ki tarah
Nandu bends down in the dance posture n Manik kisses her neck….
Ppl were spell bounded seeing their dance…
All were hooting n clapping to their fullest…
Fab4 were over excited….
N then the count down began
All shouted
10
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All shouted at once..HAPPY NEW YEAR….
ManIk opened the Champaign bottle n show red it everywhere…
Manik-” guys happy new year…good bye 2014 n welcome to 2015!!!!”
The party ended….
Everyone was very very exhausted…BT as they had to attend the college n practice their performances…
Days went..manan were busy exchanging glances…
Nandu still wanted to stay lil away from Manik n not come so close to him again..as she now didn’t want the same feeling to Aries in Manik’s mind..as she thought that Manik has forgot Nandu n moved on….
It was 12th January n in the college Manik saw Nandu crying very much alone in a room…manik went to her n asked her y she was crying..BT she instantly wiped her tears n made an excuse n went…
It was 17th January….( remember their anniversary in the first epi)
It was the band round of musicana…
Fab5 was ready…all were looking super hot n awesome….Manik had worn black jeans with red shirt n black blazer…he was looking total gentleman…
Manik went backstage n saw Nandu…she was wearing a beautiful one peace of red colour n white heels with hair open..she was simply looking beautiful….
Nandu wished him good luck by showing him a thumbs up…
Manik came to her n too her into a beautiful garden of space..an alone space…
Nandu-” Manik…y did u take me here?? U have ur performance after one year..!! Go be with fab5!!”
Manik-” no…today I want to clear it…to clear everything..everything between us….listen Nandu….I m fed up by this!!”
Nandu-” fed up with what?”
Manik-” with this fake friendship…I can’t…I can’t pretend anymore…see I can’t be ur friend anymore…ok…n plzz don’t ask me y..u know it..coz I don’t have feelings for u as a friend….i.i..can’t be ur friend…coz I really really really love u Nandu…n I have had enough of this pretending game…..that u done love me….I don’t love u…..plzzzzz..”
Nandu-” so what do u want?? N I m not pretending…ok….I seriously don’t have feeling for u!!”
Manik( he shouts very loudly) -“ahhhhhhhhh…nanduuuuuuu…..plzzzzz..enough..enough enough…..jst shut up OK..jst shut up…..”
Fab4 was in green room so they heard their voice…fab4 started searching manan n saw them…they hid under a tree n saw what was going on with manan….
Manik-” ok…ok..u don’t have feeling for me…then tell me…when I touch u…y don’t u move away…when I kiss u..y don’t u push me…on that night….u gave in….y didn’t u leave….I asked u to stay n u stayed….if any one else would have Kisseed u then would u also kiss him ? or u ll slap him right away..BT in my case u too gave in to the kiss..that means I m not anyone…u too wanted to kiss me right…n u admit it or not..BT I know that u love me…bcoz it’s not only about our actions BT many things else also…ur eyes also say that u love me….if u say that I hate u..then u should say it with anger na…BT u..u say it with pain…when u say it..u have tears in ur eyes…which always says that I m lying n I love u….y…y do u cry when u hate me??? Haan?? Tell me…..”
Nandu started crying…
Fab4 saw all this n called Navya n Aryaman also to come…
Nandu-” Manik…Haan…Haan…I love u…I love u..to the infinity Manik…n I ll always love u….BT…I don’t love love…I hate love….I hate it…n that’s y I hate loving anyone…plzz plzz leave me….tum..tum kyun aaye mere life mein??(y did u come into my life?)
I was well n happy…I was always sorted in my life….I knew what I have to do..what not to do….I was so happy….BT as soon as u came…u made my life hell…see….I was happy without love..BT as soon as u came…my love came in my life..n see…I m broken…love never gives happiness..it always gives pain only…I knew it….see….y do u love me so much..Haan…I had a simple n straight aim to be a very successful doctor..BT u..u snatched it away from me…I m no more focused… I have no decision..I m so much confused!!” She started crying very much….
Manik-” ok..listen…Nandu..trust me… Trust me..this love isn’t a bad thing..n u feel so only bcoz u go away from it,….when u feel love na..n u have ur love..then the world is jst so beautiful…ok..listen to me…Nandu…( he cupped her face..) trust me n tell me..y do u hate love..what happened that u hate it so much?? Tell me…!! Y??”
Nandu-” u seriously want to know it…”
Manik-” yes got dammed…tell me!!”
Nandu-” ok..so listen….abhi se 6 years pehle..( 6 years back from 2015…) 2008…I was jst 13 years…on 12th January…I had my birthday…….
FLASHBACK( guys see the dates carefully n try to remember it coz it playes a major role…)
12/1/8
It was Nandu’s birthday..she celebrated her birthday in school..distributed chocolates…n enjoyed a lot..she came back home by bus…
The bus dropped her on the bus stop…she came to her home…
(Nandu’s dad was a very rich business man..n was very famous..mr Vivek murthy..he owned the murthy industry which was a very big industry in the coal mining sector….he was very famous all over india..).
When Nandu came home…on the main door she saw many reporters standing on the main door…a big crowd was there…she tried to reach the main door BT due to the heavy croup we she couldn’t reach the main door…
Nandu secretly went backside of the house so no one notices her…
She could hear noise of crying n shouting coming out…
Nandu went inside her house by the back door of the house about which only few ppl knows…she saw her mom dad standing..she ran n hugged her mom..
Nandu-” mommy…my 13th birthday was super grand…I enjoyed a lot in school…I had distributed chocolates…ate many things..got birthday bombs by my friends…bahot maza aaya(I enjoyed a lot)”
She keeps her bag on the sofa…she sees an tall n middle aged women standing…
Nandu-” nyonika aunty…(she ran n hugged her..) how r u…”
Nyo smiled n said happy birthday day…Nandu could see her..she was crying…she had tears n kajal spread all over her face..n same with her mom…
(Nyonika is the wife of a very famous business man…Ranvijay malhotra..he was very famous n most rich man in india…he owned malhotra industry..it was an Industry of steel production…he was very ambitious..nyo was his wife..they both had one son…nyo was the co-partner of his husband in malhotra industries…nyo was very close with mr Vivek murthy as they were working together in a tie up..)
Nyo to Vivek (Nandu’s dad)-” see Vivek..ur daughter also loves me…she can easily live with me,…. She also is friends with my son…they both study in same school also…a..Nandu..uk Manik…he is…my don na beta…”
She was sounding like a mad…drunk woman…
Vivek-” shut up nyo…how can u…see…we have had enough..how can u just say to leave mohina (mohina is Nandu’s mom) n be with u…she is my wife…”
Nyo-” n I m ur love..”
Vivek-” oh..who told u that…”
Nyo-” u urself…ur eyes told me everything”
Nandu was seeing all this…
Mohina-” plzz get out of my house…stop it nyo….we took u so close…u were like my sister…BT u..u kept eyes on my husband only!! Chee shame on u…”
Nyo-” u shut up bl**y….I m talking to my Vivek..see Vivek…we ll live very happily..I ll give u everything thing..my time…my body….my money…BT plzz leave her n be with me…. See u too love me na..say….since so many days we r working together…I started liking u…I proposed u twice BT u rejected me..y what is wrong…y not me..y her..I can keep u very happy…n about my husband…I ll leave him..n u me Manik n Nandu ll be happy….”
Vivek-” ahhhhh…stop it….I understand we were close to eo…we shared gr8 bond but that doesn’t mean that I love u..ok…plzz”
Mohina-” BT how did she started loving u??”
Vivek-” see..we had an tie up with mr malhotra..we decided to wrk together as my company was suffering lose n I had given a proposal of become one industry n working together as mr malhotra too wanted to increase his empire n go to other fields also rather than steel n I had the business of coal…so we both did a tie up…Mrs malhotra..I.e nyo was Incharge on the upcoming project of our company…bcoz of that we had to spend time together to discuss things…n I think that’s y in this small time she fell in love…BT I don’t understand how??”
Nyo-” see..love is blind n it takes no time to form…I love u..plzzzz come to me…”
Mohina-” he ll not come to u….think of what will happen to ur husband..he will suffer so much…of Manik..what ll u answer him…where did ur dad go…what will I answer Nandu..y I m going…?? Plzz don’t take wrong decisions..plzz I beg u..don’t take my husband..he ll not go to u..ok”
Nyo-” oh.shut up u…I married mr malhotra jst for money n I don’t love him…so I don’t care about him n my son…it’s ok..he is jst a child n I ll convince him..Nandu ll be happy with me…n I don’t care about u…even if u die..I don’t care..so go to hell..”
Nyo came towards Vivek n held him…
Vivek pushed her away n said to go away…
Nyo stood…
Nyo-” ok..if u can’t take me..then I won’t let u be happily..”
Mohina-” shut up u…Ik now..u r coming to Vivek also jst for money na….I won’t let that happen..”
Nyo-” oh plzzz…..ok..yes I was coming only for money..BT now..as he ll not accept me…I ll not accept ur love….I ll not let u live happily…no.by no means”
Nyo took out a gun from her bag…
Vivek tried to stop her…
Nyo said-” stay away other wise i ll shoot my self n u both ll go to jail..”
Mohina-” plzz don’t do this..what ll happen to Nandu..”
Nyo saw Vivek n said-” ok..if that’s what u want..to make Nandu happy then…ok”
She shooted Mohina with the gun…
Nandu ran towards Mohina…..
Nandu-” mumma…..”
Vivek was stunned….
Till then media ppl crashed the door with the help of police…
Police took nyonika to the jail….
Vivek took the gun…he hugged Nandu….
Hugged mohina…n said-” there is no reason for me to live…”
He shooted himself…Nandu’s parents died at that point of time..the ambulance came BT the doctors couldn’t save them….
FLASHBACK ENDS
Now..17th January 2015….
Nandu-” so this is what happened….this is y I hate love…..this love took everything from me..n only gave pain…only pain…nyo aunty took the life of amma only for love…appa also took his own life only for his love..he didn’t even think about me for once…ke what ll happen to me…how ll I stay….no..jst died”
All this while Manik was jst seeing Nandu in shock n amused n confused person…he had tears in his eyes…n Nandu toh was crushing badly….
-” Pata hai..I once loved that Manik..the small boy…in my school..son of nyo aunty…BT from when I started hating love….I hated him too…then that Manik went from school..his p.a took him to mumbai..n when I came here..I started loving one more Manik only…I sometimes wondered that are the same Manik..who was once with me in my school in manglore….BT then I realise..u how can u be there…u r some one else…”
-” that nyo aunty….she was arrested by police n kept in jail..”
N then Manik continued-” n she died in the jail itself…”
Nandu looked at him in shock as to how he knows about it…
Manik-” she died in jail…she suffered a lot..she was a drug edict n when she didn’t get drugs then she took the whole jail on her head…she was going mad..n one day she died…”
Nandu was in shock…
Manik-” I don’t know that after knowing this how I’ll ur reaction be..maybe u l, start hating love n me even more or u ll have mercy on me….
Nandu…I m the son of Mrs nyonika malhotra n mr Ranvijay malhotra…I m that boy who studied with u….in ur school.i was the one whom u feel in love with then too n now too….n I also had some sort of feeling that u r the same girl of mangalore BT never related it so much…
.my dad….he loved nyo so much….he got to know that she took drugs..she did so much with Ur dad n mom…in spite of knowing that he loved nyo…he knew that she was bad..that she was wrong..BT he still loved her…
my dad from Pune came to manglore jail to see nyonika n then when he met with her..she said..that I hate u mr malhotra n u were jst a bank for me n nothing else….
My dad was heart broken..he took his car..all the thing were in his mind…whatever she did…everything…n suddenly he saw a truck coming…”
Nandu-” then??”
Manik -” my dad died….”
There was a pin drop silence for sometime… Fab4 n N1A was in tears by knowing their story….
Nandu came n hugged Manik tightly….Manik too hugged…
Manik-” Nandu….I get what u say….that love took their life…BT can u see that love is so strong…a person can die for love….n n love has only made us…yes love do comes with pain..BT it also comes with immense happiness….when u love someone then it is a feeling which doesn’t come in any other thing..BT only when u love someone….n in life one has to experience every emotion na….if u don’t experience the emotion of love then u didn’t experience the most beautiful emotion…till now u saw sadness…pain….friendship wala emotion..now see the emotion of love….n yes it brings pain…BT this is what love is…n every person who goes through this love at some point suffers pain..BT some leave hope n stop his/ breath n go to God…BT at the same point some keep hope n trust on eos love n fight through the pain together…na…..our mom n dad’s love story was incomplete BT it’s us who ll make their story complete…na…..
N ik what u r thinking now…that love takes life…N u r scared of such strong emotions right….(Nandu hhmmmmss) so I would say that in every relations pain comes..wether its parent n child relations,or friendship..whatever comes has a plus n minus point..BT we have to take in n fight with u n what is good..we need to enjoy that….”
Manik -” so let’s start again….i”
N guess what happened…y did Manik stop speaking in the middle…
Precap- the end….coming soon…
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Hello….everyone….first of all I ll again thank u alllllll for sooooooooooooooooo many comments in the last epi….I love u allllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll…..seriously tq soooo much….
N plzzzzz like last epi…I now also want that much comments….n soo this was the second last epi of my ff…..
BT BT BT…..their is a surprise coming soon…sooo don’t be sad that this ff will end…ok…n plzzzzzzz ALL MY SILENT AND ACTIVE READERS..PLZZZZZZ TODAY I WANT ALL OF UR COMMENTS…how was the past which I wrote about manan….
43 Comments
Nice.cant wait for next ep
Tq soooo much Amy…next part may be today or tomorrow…
This is so beautiful story..I love it..and first time I am commenting on any ff..I wish u would write another ff..
Oh my god!…tq….so much..first time u r commenting on my ff..tq…it means a lot…n as I have said there is a surprise waiting so done get sad about ending this ff….wait for some time…tqq?
Just mindblowing epi di …loved it ..but sad u r ending it soon ☹️☹️….anyways waiting for the surprise …
Tqqqqqqq tasni….don’t get sad to know that I m ending it….there is a surprise waiting..so jst wait for sometime…tq again??
amazing………….. i m waiting for the nxt because curiosity has killed d cat
Tq crystal…..next part soon…tq for commenting…????
Superb mindblowing tashu
Tq piya dear..????
Tash is was commendable ……I mean the understanding between manik and Nandini…the way manik defined love….I just loved it….wow!….
Excited for last update……and Yash for the surprise toooo……
Keep going……
Keep smiling……..
Hey vrutika….tqqqqq….so much…??? n jst wait for the surprise…u ll love it….tq..
Keep smiling u too??
Tash dear…..
kya bolo me apko….
YAR PLZ….ISE ITNI JALDI KHATAM MAT KARO PLZ……
This is one of my favorite story yar…..
PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ NAA yar…..
I know…itne busy schedule me se thoda sa time manage karna….thoda difficult hoga….
But plz apne itne sare fans ke liye try kar sako too plz plz try kar loo….
Love u loads…..
Hope so ap ek bar plz try karo…ise continue karne ke liye….
Kavya kavya kavya….don’t get sad dear….as I said…there is a surprise waiting…so don’t get sad thinking that this ff is gonna end BT be happy as there is a surprise for u all…..n jst wait for the surprise..I m sure u ll love it…..n I m sooooooo happy to know that u love my ff this much…really I m on 9th cloud….tq soooooo much kavya…..
God!! Its so damn cute.., i love it… U r an amazing writer, i must say.. I love ur ff … Will keep waiting for more.. Plz do update fast yaaar… Awesome !!!???
Tqqqqqq jazz….it means a lot to me….tq for commenting….n plz wait for the surprise….ll try my best to update soon….tq for reading n commenting…????
Di superb, amazing update ??. Manan past was a big shock though. U r amazing. I’ll miss ur ff a lot. It’s 1 Of my favourite ff??. Waiting for ur surprise. Take care. ???
Tq soooooooo much mahi dear…..tq for the compliment ??? n I feel so good knowing that u ppl love this ff this much….BT I m sure u all ll love the surprise…jst wait…
Take care u too…
Tq???
Amazing its jusss fab yaar I lved itt nicer waiting fr the finalee partt
Tq so much Manu dear….ll try to update soon..tq again???
Superb episode
The past was really emotional
Pls update soon
Tq so much Lara…glad u liked it….
Ll try my level best to updates soon…tq?????
toooooooooooooooo goooooooooooooooooooood loooooooooove itttt
Tq soooooooo much anwesha dear☺️☺️ Means a lot??
Bakwas.. stop writing
Hey will u please stop attracting ppl towards u!! I men I don’t understand what is ur problem?? Haan?? Y do u do this.. What do u get??? Do u know how much difficult it is for us to write this.. N u.. Jst simply say that.. Do u know how much hurting it is to see ur comment.. We write taking so much efforts.. My hands literally pain.. After writing this.. N i only feel happy.. All my pain goes when i read all the ppls comments.. Bt u ppl make me feel that I don’t write good n i m not skillful… Plz jst stop irritating me.. N get a job
N plzzz I m telling u this for the very last time….I ll not stop my ff….got it….don’t read if u don’t want to……
Ms. Shreya if u hate this story so much then why do you waste your time in reading and commenting?
And you don’t have any right to say about this ff
One more thing you doing nothing but just gaining attention, you cheap attention seeker ?
I hope you don’t poke your nose next time, because I am not that sweet, when it comes to bashing I am in first I hope you don’t be victim of my bashing.! ??
Hey sindhu…tq for supporting me..n waise let’s stop giving attention to this shreya..I think she wants attention n we r giving it to her so she is blabbering….lets ignore her..I don’t care what she says….next time if she comments also na..then also I ll not reply her.coz that’s what she wants comments on her n replies..n if I don’t give importance to her only then that ll be good I think….so we ll ignore that shreya…n tq again sindhu for the support
superb sorry for late comment
Tq so much isha dear.. N its ok.. Don’t say sorry??
So less comments?? Guys….where r u all…plz tell me ur views a bout this epi
Hi all…its been long tym ryt…sorry for making u alp wait so long for my ffs par kya karu i was in bed rest …grounded literally without mobile nd lap toptop bcoz of my health due to that stupid accident.. Now I’m perfectly fine nd kalse aapko daily updates milega nd I Read our entire story frm where I left till today…its really awesome nd cool tashu..nd once again sorry for all lovelies who msgd me privately but I was unable to rplyrply as my mob isn’t with me nd once again gud work tashu but u r ending it too quickly …feeling sad…luv u all lots..nd belated Happy frndshp day. I know its too late but kya karu maaf kijiye Na Sab log mujhe
Prahaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!! Dear……..u r back…m soooooooooooo happy today….I was literally thinking that u have left writing.. I was soooooooo worried u know…. What happened to u..y aren’t u here….BT m very happy to see u back…. N plzzzzzzzzz itni mafi matt mango….don’t apologise so much….it’s ok…..we missed u BT then we knew that u r not well….so it’s completely f9. N about commenting here…..tqqqqqq….thanku sooooooo much for appreciating my work…. It really means a lot….. Getting good comments by u is soooooo nyc…. Tq.. N I m sure all other ppl will also understand u….. Best of luck for tomorrow’s update… N Haan plzz take care….. Health if first ok… N HAPPY BELATED FRIENDSHIP DAY to u too…love u…
Hello Praha !
How are you ? And don’t call it stupid accident,and did you take complete bed rest ? And sorry for messaging you in personal as my clg started and I am unable to manage evrything ?
And take a lot of rest, I have missed you so much, I was so tensed but then somewhere down the heart I was sure that you are completely fine ? And you do take your time and upload ur ff, as ur health comes first.!!
And I think it quite long comment ?
Hope to see you soon all fit ?
Lots of love
Sindhu ??
Supurb outstanding…waiting fr ur surprise
Tq soooooo much nee…..????
Hey Tash
It was superb
It was my birthday
N really dear more than my gifts I enjoyed ur ff
Keep going
Eagerly waiting for ur surprise
Hey dear…today is ur birthday…a very HAPPY WALA BIRTHDAY TO MY DEAR DEAR FARAZA…love u loads…n I m sooooo happy that u liked my ff so much…tqqqq???????
Hii tashuuu….Awesome episode…waiting for more….I’m soo sorry for being late to comment…anyways I loooovd the episode…u jst rock it all the time …waiting for more….?
Hey…first of all plzz don’t say sorry..it’s ok if u r late,.at least u commented..it a very big thing for me…n Haan..tqqqqqqqq sooooo much..glad u liked it
Hello Tashu.!!!
Thanks for your advice, and the update is in process will update soon ?
This part is extremely amazing, nyo is very bad ? Stupid nyo
And if I am not wrong in guessing you are coming up with a new story or you are writing a squeal to it ? I hope I am right ??
Update soon ?
Hey sindhu…. Tqqqq..I know nyo is really bad….n yah…ur guess is 50% right..BT not whole right….u ll get my surprise in the next part….tqqqqqq again….??