Hiio guys I am sanjana and I am new to tashan e ishq telly updates page . I write ffs for swaragini . And recently I have written os for swasan . I had edited that os made it of twinj .
So here we go ….
A collage is shown
Class
A girl was shown studying and some a group of girls are surrounding her .
Rhidhima – u know what twinkle {yes the girl who was studying is none other than our twinkle }…. today our new proffesor is going to come and u know what he is so handsome
Chinki- yes u r right ….
Twinkle- so what ??????
Vidhushi – what do u mean by SO WHAT ….. don’t u have any interest in boys ……
Rhidhima – no …. she only likes to study …. am I right miss bhenji ????
Twinkle got teary eyes.
They gives hifi .. just then a angry voice comes from behind .
Voice – how dare u to say like this …..
Everyone turns back .
Rhidhima – sir aap …..
Chinki – who is he ?????
Rhidhima whispers – buddhu …. he is our new proffesor MR . KUNJ SARNA …..
Kunj can’t see twinkle’s face as her face was hid behind the girls . He comes to girls .
K – how dare u to call anyone bhenji …… C- sry sir …..
K – last warning now move …..
Girls leave …..
Kunj sees the face of twinkle . He was memerized to see her face . She was wearing a pink salwar suit with a side pony tail and some flakes of hair were coming out on her eye . and having tear in her eyes .
Kunj in mind – she is too cute …..
He smiles .
K – hello miss …….
Twi got afraid and stands immediately .
Twi – ye….s…. s…I..r
K- why r u afraid ???
Twi- nothing sir ……
K – ok no need to afraid …. if they again call u bhehenji then tell me ok ….
Twi nods yes . Kunj smiles n leaves.
Twi sits and start studying again .
Days passes on like this …… twi and kunj became good frnds . All girls are jealous seeing their closeness . Slowly slowly kunj started falling for twinkle . And one day he decided to propose her .
Canteen
Twi was sitting in canteen and solving some problem . Kunj comes to her .
Kunj{pointing to a chair in front of twinkle } – may I sit here?????
Twi – yes sir …. why not …..
Kunj sits on chair .
Kunj- twi I want to talk to u something important . Plz meet me in xyz place at evening .
Twinkle – but what????
Kunj – I said meet me matlab meet me ……
Twi- ok .
At evening
Twi reaches there . She was wearing a blue lagy and pink kurta and cute pony tail .
The place was dark . As soon as she enters There the light gets on and flowers start falling on her . She became happy . She comes in and her eyes were searching for kunj . Just then kunj comes wearing a white coat with a pant . Kunj bends on his knees . Twinkle was comfused by his act .
Kunj – today I am here to tell u about my love .
Twi was shocked .
He continues – u know what when I first time saw u I was mermerized . Slowly slowly I became ur frnd and started falling for u . And now I can’t imagine my life without u . Now my day start with u and ends on u . Will u be mine forever ????
Twi was hell shocked .
Twinkle {shouts } – how dare u to propose me ????? How can u think tgat I can love u …. u always supported me but that doesn’t mean I love u …. I HATE U MR. KUNJ SARNA ….. u believe me or not
….
Kunj was shocked . His woeld became upside down . Twi runs from there having tears in her eyes .
Next day .
Kunj comes in class n can’t find twinkle . Days passes on like this and twinkle doesn’t come to clg . One day kunj thought to enquir about her . He goes to her best frnd anniya .
K – anniya …
Anniya – yes sir….
K – can u tell me why twinkle is not coming to college ???
Anniya – I also don’t know sir ….
K- can u give me her addresss
Anniya – ok sir …
Anniya tells him the address .
Kunj immediately goes to twinkle ‘s house .
A maid opens the door .
K – where is swara ???
Maid – sir who r u ….
K – I am kunj sarna twinkle ‘s proffesor ….. now plz tell me
Maid – sir she is in hospital ….
K – what happened to her ????
Maid – I also don’t know sir …. but she became unconcious and her mum took her hospital …..
K- can u tell me which hoapital ???
Maid – City Hospital …..
Kunj leaves .
Hospital
he enquires rexeptionist about twinkle and she told him the roomno.
he goes to the room and she sees Twinkle lying unconcious on bed with a oxgen mask attached on her nose n a pipe attached to her wrist through a glass on the door . kunj becomes sad . He turns amd sees a lady talking to a doctor . He recognizes her as twinkle’s mum as she had shown photo of her mum . He goes and hid behind a wall amd listen’s her n doctor’s talk .
Leela{twinky ‘s mom} – doctor ….. plz save my twinkle ….
Doc- I don’t wetger we will able to save her not …. but as u know she has a hole in her heart we need someone’s heart
…
Leela- take my heart ..
Doc – sry I can’t take ur heart …. u r an old lady ….. and more ever who will take care of her after u …. she is no one none other than u ….
Leela cries while kunj is shocked . He understood that why twinkle said no to his proposal . {I hope guys u all also understood .}
Hospital
At evening
Leela comes to twinkle’s room who now gained consciousness .
Leela – someone had came to meet u twinkle ……
Twinkle {in a very very low voice }- who.???
Leela calls the person . The person comes . twinkle was shocked to see the person . He is none other than kunj.
Twinkle {trying to shout}- u here jao yahan se …
Leela – calm diwn twinkle .. and listen to him once ….
Kunj comes and hold her shoulder tightly and asks leela to leave . Leela leaves . Kunj had already told leela about his proposal .
Kunj – U R SOOO BAD …. U BROKE MY HEART …. GIVEN ME PAIN…. I HATE U MISS TWINKLE TANEJA …. HOW DARE U TO GIVE ME PAIN.?????? HIW DARE U ….. I HATE U ….
Twinkle was not able to listen HATE word from his mouth for her . She put her lips on kunj.’s lips and start kissing him . It was passionate lip lock.. soon they parted due to lack of oxygen .
Twinkle – never say HATE word to me ??? BCOZ I LOVE U ….. when I 1st saw I was also mermerized to see u …. slowly slowly I become to fall for u … but u know since 6 months I kniw that I have a hole in my heart … so how can I say yes when u proposed ……
Kunj -calm down angel … don’t worry I just said this so that u can say I LOVE U ….to me .
Twinj hugs each other . . They breaks hug . Doc comes .
Doc – miss taneja …u r in a very critical stage and tomorrow is ur opreation and we had not got any heart till now …. if this will be the situation then sry …. we will not able to help u ….
Twinkle got teary eyes .
Next morning
Doc – congo miss taneja we had got heart for u …
Twinkle {happily}- but of whom ????
Dpc – u will get to know after the opretion …
Twinkle was very happy that she is going to spend her whole life with his kunj
Twinkle was soon opreted .
After opretion
Twinkle {trying to speak}- plz doctor tell me who is the person .
Doc gives her a gift . She opens the gift and found a photo of her and kunj and also she found a letter.
In Letter – my angel … happy birthday … I know today is not ur birthday but today u got a new life …. I know u got happy that u are going to get a new life with me ….. and see u got a new life but difference is that it is WITHOUT me {a tear skipped from twinkle ‘s eyes } … n know u are excited to know who had given u the heart its me … I had given u that heart on that day only when I saw u 1st time …. this is just I have given u my heart officially and now plz take care of heart …. it only beats for u and will always beat for u .. and plz now don’t cry like a crocodile … bcoz my heart can’t see u in pain …. my angel … and keep this photo with u …. this our memory TWINJ’S memory ….. and plz don’t try to come to me {suicide} … main nahi chahta tum mera peecha karte karte swarg tak aa jao….
UR AND ALWAYS BE URS
KUNJ
Twinkle cries aloud . Leela knows everything and was seeing this standing at the door . She was crying like anything . She was not able to control herself . Here swara decided to live her life again . As kunj is always with her in her heart and her memories .
So guys according to u IS THIS TRUE LOVE ????
Guys how was it …. I was crying while writing the letter wala part … I know this concept is little common but plz do read and comment ….. guys sry for sad ending and I will come back with another os with a happy ending … and do u want to me write more one shots . Waiting for ur comments .
Lots of love ..
Ur sanju …..
59 Comments
Ohoooo sanju tune toh rula hi diya yrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr , but yes it it the TRUE LOVE…………………. and dnt b disheartened yrrr wt if it’s common at least u gave it a try dear !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! n u knw wt…. i’m the 1st to cmnt as i cnt see any cmnt till now but dnt knw yeh cmnt kab tak moderate hota rahega………………….. ??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? loads of love meri sanju………………………………??????????????????
Thnx yashuuuuu dear and it was the 1st comment and I hate the process of moderating the commenting ……. and thnks for so many hearts love u dear …. ??????????????????????????????????????????????
awwww meri pyaari sanju tere liye ek good news he , even i’m writing a twinj os and will post asap……………………… haye mere liye bhi itne sare hearts love u !!!!!!!!! ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
HAYE MEIN MAR JAWA ??….. THNKS FOR WRITING AN OS WILL BE WAITING FOR U ….. AGAIN SO MANY HEARTS FOR ME …. LAGTA HAI YE HEARTS SILSILA CJALTA HI RAHEGA … ??
?? BAS ISS BAAR DO HI KAAFI HAIN …… KHATAM HO JAYENGE TOH AGLI BAAR KE LIYE KAHAN SE LAOOGI ….
Chal tooh bhi kya yaad rakhegi do aur le lo ??
But yaar mere symbol se toh heart hi nahi nikalta hai it is looking like someone is whistling ‘whisling smiley’
theek he tu wait kr mere os ka………………me likhti hu…………… lekin mere paas toh hearts ka khazana he mere dil me , mera dil bht bada he na ????
tu bhi kya yaad rakhegi le le jitne chahiye ???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Oh aisi baat toh mene abhi abhi tere bank se chori karke aayi hoon ye lo …
???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
haye ram tu chor bhi ban gyiiiiii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!??
koi ni ban ja apne paas bhut he
It’s so touching I had read the same os on either RAGLAK OR SWASAN loved it even I was on the verge of crying when I read that letter Wala part???do come up with another os or ff
Thnx and it is written by me only dear was on swasan ….
Amazing sanju fab yaar
U nailed it yaar
Lovely is do write more like this
Loved it to the core
Thnx and I will come up with more ….
Omg!!!!!!!!! Sanjana u made me cry….it was such an awesome story….u just nailed it…and dont call it a common story becoz it is TWINJ’S STORY AND TWINJ’S STORY IS NOT COMMON,ITS ULTRA SPECIAL!!!!!! JHAKAAAASSSSS!!!!!! AND PLEAZZZZ WRITE More os on twinj pleazzzzz …..ok? And this story was SUPERB!!!!! Keep it up!!!
And yeah one more thing ,thus story was little bit some like the movie SANAM RE….AM I RIGHT?
Thnx rochicka twinj rocks and yes only the concept is taken from the movie not the dialouges ….
Sanju….this was so emotional…. Loved it a lot….awesome
Thnx
Sanju I m speechless. ..this is true love….this was fab…pkz do write more
Thnx arundhati …… and I willl come back with more …..
Heyy sanju..
It was just heart touching..i loved it..
Do write more os..
And yaa this is called true love…
Hope u dont mind me calling u sanju.
Thnx fatima and I will come back with more and u can call me sanju … ??
Sanjana very bad very very bad you made me cry???? I legit cried while reading the letter part…why did you kill my kunj(Sidhant Gupta)? OS was very emotional and heart touching…please come back with another OS with happy ending…
Thnx and sry for making u cry {puppy face} and I was myself crying …. sry fir killing our beloved sid but what to do this is only the concept …… and I will come back with more
Sanjana
I was also crying like hell
That part after the operation uffffff my God
Loved it n felt sad for twinki
Thnx and I also felt bad for her ….
OMG!!! What a beautiful story… Loved it.. Nd it is true love… Nd write more like this..
Thnx and I will come back with more ..
It was superb Sanju Di…It was so heart touching…Reading it again…Even I am new to Tahan E Ishq Telly Updates…Read almost every ffs and oss but never commented…It was superb Di…It is amazing In Twinj version DI…
Thnx and once again thn for breaking ur silence …..
Really emotional yaar
Thnx for commenting .
Amazing sanju dr…
Thnx an u read it again ….. I think so u read in swaragini TU page also ….
Yes dr….mind blowing…..
I’m rly addicted to ur ff sanju dr????
awesome emotional cute lovely……loved it…..
Thnx …
Shit yaaar, you made me cry. Itna emotional. But really it was just so well written. Looking forward for more of your os. Loved it 🙂
Thnx
Amazing os.. and emotional too.. you write well.. do continue to write more os.. with a happy ending.. cuz I don’t like kunj dying ?
Amazing os.. and emotional too.. you write really well.. do continue to write more os.. with a happy ending.. cuz I don’t like kunj dying ??
Thnx will sure be back with another one ……
??? tooo cute n emotional yaar!! While reading this story n the letter j remembered the movie sanam re … Please Write more i want to read more of ur writing 🙂
Thnx …. and this os remind me of sanam re movie …. and I will come up with more….
I love u but cant be urs.
Correct ….
Awww!!! It is definitely true love!!! I am floored…?
Yhay was soooo beautiful!!! Does this kind of selfless love exist?
Thnx and don’t think so this type of love exist …..
Such an emotional Os Loved it ?
Thnx sidmin
very bad u made me flow my precious tears…
bt don mind i can cry 4 sidhant…
letter part was so emotional…
loved it…sanju
n yes in nxt os come wid happy ending plz…
post asap yaar suspense is killing me…
loved it..
Thnx and I was also crying for my sid …. and I had thought the concept of next os but it will take atleast one week to write and upload … ??
Its awesome even I feel like crying especially when he was saying angel it was toooo good
I loved it to the core
Thnx thammy and I know kunj never call twinkle angel ….. twinkle is kunj’s SIYAPPA QUEEN …..
sanjana amazing yr u srsly made me cry osm emotional lovely adorable os
luv u dear
Thnx
Love u to dear …. ??
Srys ry sry for late xomment or should I say a very late comment and he as was amazing u know.sanam re is my fav movie and your os was having a touch of.it.so loved ir to infinite but ur dialougues was written by urself and I loved them and in.the letter part.trust me I was also crying wwoooww yr very heart touhing story loved.it and love u