Hello Guyz..Its Me Goldie Here agn wid A Short Story on SwaSan..Hope U will Like it..Its something New n Different..Hopefully it will Impress U all..So Here is da Intro n a Character Sketch of the People Appearing in this Short Story..Hope u will Like it..Do Leave ur Valuable Comments in the Comment Box Below n Let Me knw hw u Liked the Intro :)..
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Destiny – Its All About Life !!!
Part 01 ( Intro )
Character Sketch :
Sanskaar Maheshwari : An Honest n A Loyal Police Commissioner of Kolkata..A Loyal Husband n a Father too..Matured n Understanding…Love His Wife the Most..
Ragini Sanskaar Maheshwari : 1st Wife of Sanskaar…Has A 6 Yrs Son frm Sanskaar..
Swara Sanskaar Maheshwari : 2nd Wife of Sanskaar.. Lovable n A Matured Lady ..Love Her Husband n Son ( Ragini’s Son ) da Most..Cn do anything fr their Happiness..A Bubbly n A Nature Free Lady..
Aryaan Sanskaar Maheshwari : A Cute n A Naughty 6 Yrs Old Son of Sanskaar n Ragini..Consider Swara as His Own Mother..Aware of the Fact dat Ragini is His Real Mother bt Love Swara da Most since Childhood..
Other Characters :
Annapurna n Durga Prasad Maheshwari : Parents of Sanskaar n Laksh..
Shekhar n Sharmishta Gadodia : Parents of Ragini..
Laksh Maheshwari : Younger Brother of Sanskaar
Sujata n Ram Bose : Guardian of Swara since Childhood..Consider Swara as their Own Daughter..
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Maheshwari Mansion
A Big Mansion n a Magnificent Mansion is Shown n its been getting Decorated like A New Bride as if its Some Imp Occasion going to take Place..A Lady is Shown Shouting n Ordering da Servants fr Further Preparations while the Servants r Bzy in Obeying Her Orders…
Lady : Arrey Ramu Kaka..Hurry Up..I dnt want any Mistake in My Son’s n My Daughter In Law’s 6th Wedding Anniversary..It shud be da Memorable One..So Hurry Up n Complete the Decorations asap..
Ramu Kaka : Ji Malkin..Dnt Worry..Sanskaar Baba n Swara Betiya ki Anniversary will be One of the Best..U dnt take Tension.. ( Smiles )
Lady : ( Smiles ) Good..
As Lady was Instructing da Servants a Late 50s Man comes n Calms da Lady making da Lady Smile n Admire da Man n His Care towards Her..
Man : Offo Annapurna ( Yes da Lady is AP ) ..Relax ..Fikar mat karo..Sab hojayega..U take Rest..U knw na if Both Swara n Sanskaar sees U taking Tension fr them n their Function..they will Cancel the Whole Function..for them U r Imp nt their Happiness..
Annapurna : Haa Ji ( The Man is DP ).I knw..bt kya karu ?? Mere Pyaare Bete aur Bahu ki Shaadi ki Saalgira ( Wedding Anniversary ) hai..n main Preparations nhi dekhugi toh kaun dekhega ??
DP: Hmm..Woh toh Hai.. ( Laughs )
While AP n DP were Talking A Cute Little 6 Yr Old Kid comes n Hugs AP n DP Cutely making both Adore da Little Heir of their Maheshwari Family..
Kid : Alley ( Runs n Hugs AP n DP ) Dadu..Dadi..Main Aagaya.M Bak frm School..Whr r My Chocolates ?? ( Innocently )
DP : ( Smiles n Takes in His Lap ) Aww..My Grandson has Come ( Kisses da Kid’s Cheeks ) Welcome Bak My Son..
AP : ( Smiles n Kisses too ) n Here r Ur Chocolates..Hw cn We Forget wat Our Son has Demanded..After all U r The Most Lovable Member of Maheshwari Family..ARYAAN SANSKAAR MAHESHWARI..Hai na ?? ( Laughs )
Aryaan : ( Laughs Innocently ) Yes Dadi..( Kisses AP n DP n Runs ) Thnk U Dadu ..Thnk U Dadi..Love U
.Muuwaahh..
AP/DP : ( Laughs ) Love U Too Beta..
Soon Aryaan Leaves da Hall while DP n AP Admires da Cute Kid n
Reminisces da Past wid Teary Eyes Thnking God fr Such A Wonderful Family..
AP : ( Teary Eyes ) Thnk God Ji..Finally My Family is Out of those Dreadfull Past..n r Happily Living..SWARA has Come in OUR Lives as An Angel n has Managed Everything Perfectly..Sanskaar n Aryaan r nw Happy n r Enjoying their Life Agn..All Thnks to Our Swara..Agr woh nhi hoti toh Pata nhi kya hota Humare Sanskaar aur Aryaan ka ..Hai na ??
DP : ( Agrees wid Teary Eyes ) Haa Annapurna..Swara is indeed An Angel fr all of Us..God Bless Her..
AP : ( Smiles ) Haa..I Wish da Same Ji..
While AP n DP were Blessing Swara In Heart,The Scn Shifts to a Beautiful Room whr A Boy n A Girl wid 7 Months Baby Bump whr Enjoying their Spcl Moments while getting Ready..
Girl : ( Pout Face n Makes da Boy Boy Wear His Upper Uniform Blazer ) Kya SANSKAAR ( Hehe..Yes the Boy is None Other dan Our Hero Sanskaar )..its Our Wedding Anniversary n U r going to ur So Called Second House ?? U Promised Me U will be wid Me n Our ( Touches Her Baby Bump ) Kids Today da Whole Day..Ok Leave Abt Me bt think abt Aryaan n Our Unborm Baby na..They will be Angry wid U ( Pout Face )
Sanskaar : ( Smiles n Turns n Hugs da Girl Carefully ) Aww..My Princess ( No Need to Guess..Who is Sanskaar’s Princess ??..Its Obiviously SWARA ? ) is soo Cute in Her Pout..Sorry Princess..Kya Karu..U knw na My Wrk is like this only..Pata nhi kab aur kaise Ek Imp Case aajaye.. ( Holds His Ears wid Apologies Face ) Plzz Maaf kardo..This Case is Teally Imp..Plzz..
Swara : ( Smiles n Release da Hug ) Its Ok..U cn Ok..I Understand..Go n Do ur Duty First Commissioner Sanskaar Maheshwari..I will make Ur Kids Understand.. ( Smiles n Hugs agn ) bt Do come Soon b4 the Party Strts.i will be waiting fr U..Ok ?
Sanskaar : ( Smiles n Hugs Bak ) Ok Princess.. ( Kisses Her Head ) Take Care of Urself n ( Touches Swaraβs Baby Bump ) Our Baby Ok ??
Swara : ( Smiles ) Hmm..Nw ( Release da Hug ) Go Fast.u r getting Late warna My Mood fr Sending U will get Chngd ( Giggles )
Sanskaar : ( Laughs ) Ok Baba..Going.. ( Kisses Swaraβs Forehead ) Take Care Princess..
Swara : ( Smiles ) Haa Ok..
Soon Sanskaar Leaves fr Police Station Happily Waving Bye to His Princess while Swara too Waves Bye n goes to a Near By Room Carefully Holding Her Baby Bump n Sits Beside a Lifeless Girl n Reminisces da Past wid Teary Eyes..
Screen Freezes on Swara n da Lifeless Girl …Who is da Lifeless Girl n was Past is Swara Thinking Off ??
Stay Tune to knw da Answers of All ur Questions :)..
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So Guyz Here was da Intro n The First Part of the Short Story “Destiny – Its All About Life”..Drop Down ur Valuable Comments n Let Me knw ur Views..Ur Comments/Response will Decide to Continue or Not :)..
#Goldie
57 Comments
too good…next part soon if possible
Thnks..Sure :)..
Nice waiting to read more
Thanks π
ragini in coma ?
frankly, i can’t bear ragsan, but dunno why i come here and read this awesome ff..
since it’s your FF goldie… luv it xoxo
I too cnt Handle Rag San..bt dnt worry Dwar m also a SwaSan Dan n Trist Me Nthing Wrong will Hallen :)..Keep Reading :)..will Post Nxt Part Soon π
Swasan scn awsm dr..
Thnks alot π
Awesome…. Update soon
Thnk U π
nice
Thnks π
Awesome but plz swasan
Thanks βΊ
Since its Goldie I’m here!!!!
I’m a hugee fan of ur ffs…..
Now coming back of the ff….as always the starting is mind blowing & as per my guess the lifeless body is of Ragini!!!
Thnks fr the Love…n Wait fr the Nxt Part to knw who is da Lifeless Girl ?. .
interesting…!! Waiting for next part…!!
Thanks βΊ
Hi,I can’t like ragsan only like swasan, but her ragini is already married with sanskar. I think the lifeless girl is ragini. What would happen when ragini come out of the coma. I think that time ragini consider swara as laksh wife I think so . that to see very nice how swasan reaction on that time,I want last swasan only the pair.please continue soon I am waiting.
I tii cnt Bear Rag San..dnt worry m.also a SwaSan Fan n Trust nthing will go Wrong bt Haa Some Unexpected Twists n Turns r Surely Thr ??..Keep Loving n will Update da Nxt Part Soon ?
Wow superb Dr…..
Thanks ?
Superb part. Waiting for further parts to know more.,
Thnks alot π
Interesting dear… Continue soon….. Maybe the lifeless girl is ragini……
Thnks :)..Will Post Soon π
nice
Thnks π
OMG!!!!Wonderful…..
Plzz read my ff KISMAT CONNECTION
Thnks alot :). . Is it on SWASAN..If Yes..Send me da Link..
Its really good but can’t see rag. San its harts a lot
Thnks. Its a SwaSan SS..So dnt worry..
Awesome yaae.. Alrdy read it in fb… And a good concept
Thanks βΊ
I cant bear rag–san… bt started reading it since its goldiezz ff who is big swasan fan lyk me ?…
I love all ur stories…continue soon
Thnks fr the Love n M.also a Big SwaSan Fan like U..So dnt Worry :)..jst keep Reading :)..will Post Nxt Part Soon :)..
Hey goldie u are back again…..like every time ur story is fab….totally loved it….I guess u are the same writer of swasan humsafar n my destiny his love….if u are so can u plz send me link of ur ff my destiny his love plz…I left it in between…plz plz..update soon
GOD BLESS YOU!!!
Thnks fr ur Love l..n Yes.Sure will.Send u da Link Soon wen m free :)..
http://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-kismat-connection-episode-4/
It’s SwaSan only
http://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-kismat-connection-episode-4/
It’s SwaSan only…?do read it
Ya Sure :)..will read π
Thank u dearrr……yeah…please comment
Hiiii goldie di .. it was awesome and plz read my ff SWASAN A LOVE STORY OF BETRAYAL ….. ??
Ya sure..will.try to Read..Give
Thnx dear waiting for ur comments …
Wow superb concept… Yaar….
Thnks alot π
Yeah angel its ws rlly awesome..no words to describe ur ff on swasan..all ur ff are spellbounded….nd its a nice concept..loved swasan scene..pls post nxt part soon..
Thnks alot π
goldie.. do u know who is the writer of swasan ff ‘pain trust love’ , from 3 to 4 days she is not updating her ff.. do u know why? when she will update.. please if u know then ask and tell us please.. please…
Sorry..i dnt knw..
Awesome…i know u won’t do injustice to our swasan. Thats d reason y will read this ff even if it has rag….san. But i have a request, plz don’t write more of der scenes
Thnks n Yes Sure βΊ..Trust Me, and
Frankly speaking dear,I can’t bear rag san.. but still came here because of you. Cause I know you are a die hard swasan fan.
Story is really interesting.. love to read furthermore.. update soon dear…
Thnks fr Liking n fr Trusting Me..Dnt Worry M also A SwaSan Fan..