” I Can’t Stop Loving U – Twinj Love!!”…..
Thanks to everyone for commenting on my last episode…. Though many of my regular readers didn’t commented but many of silent readers commented which made me felt so happy….
Sona ( Sonali) …. Love u sooooooooo much for ur sweet comment.. I told u na that I’m madly in love with ur comment… U always make me blush… Thanks for being a great friend… ??….
Manu dear sorry for not replying u back… Thanks for ur lovely comment…. I told Jasmine to convey my message to u that I’m missing u… I was so happy to see ur comment… Love u ?….
Zikro… Lama…..nd my regular readers I’m missing u all..
Let’s begin with the episode.. I hope u all liked it…
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Episode starts with Twinkle’s tensed face…
T-” Ohhh.. Babaji now u tell me what should I do… Kunj wants me to wear sarre but I don’t know how to wear it…. For the very first time he expressed his love to me nd in return he wants me to fulfil his small wish… But I don’t have any idea how to tie it…
Twinkle u r siyaappa Queen of ur Sadu Sarna u can’t lose so easily…. Just recall kunj’s word in letter ultimately u will able to overcome all ur obstacles.. Nothing can stop me to do something for my Kunj… “…
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NEXT SCENE…. 7 PM….
Door bell rings…
Twinkle opens the door nd finds kunj standing at the entrance…
Twinkle smiles seeing him…. Her delirium… Her euphoria is over pouring through her smile…..
While kunj stares her rapturously…..
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Sometimes word’s r less to communicate feelings u carry for the person… Its ur eye’s which speaks at that time…
These frequent eye contact is a hallmark of loving relationships. The eye lock of Twinj clearly shows that they both feel relaxed and open with eo person.”
The complex magic of love can’t be boiled down to a wink, a nod and a grin but it is easy to see that the eyes have a lot to do with physical attraction, seduction and romantic love…… Nd currently this is what seems between them…
Twinkle’s thought… ” kunj why do u love me so much… Why u always make me feel so special”…
Kunj thoughts..” For me u r the one for whom I came in this world….
Twinkle gives him a crumbling hug….. Kunj is surprised cum happy to feel warmth of Twinkle touch….. He also embraces her tightly in the clutches of his love…
It was a perfect hug…. Both of them seems to be melting into each othe…. Both of them closes their eye’s… the noise in the room stops only eo heartbeats are audible to each other ,…. Twinkle is caressing kunj’s back while kunj is enjoying her actions….
Kaise bataaye, kaise jataaye
Subah tak tujhme jeena chahein
Bheege labon ki, geeli hansi ko
Peene ka mausam hai peena chahein
(How to tell, how to tell
I want to live in you till the morning
In this drinking weather, I want to drink
This wet laughter of wet lips)
Ik baat kahoon kya ijazat hai
Tere ishq ki mujhko aadat hai
Ik baat kahoon kya ijazat hai
Tere ishq ki mujhko
Aadat hai o.. aadat hai
Aadat hai o.. aadat hai
(Let me tell you one this if you permit me
I got used to your love
Let me tell you one this if you permit me
I got used to..
Your love, your love
Your love, your love)
They are feeling safe and comfortable like in a perfect dream…Their are no worries no fears, just a calm feeling….. No matter how tight or loose the hug it is does not matter to them as their is the feeling of love unrealised love from Twinkle side nd feeling of contention from Kunj’s side are churned in it..
Though it is a tight, but comfortable and mutual embrace
Suddenly kunj mobile rings….
Both of them realised the position in which they both were… They breaks the hug nd compose themselves.. ……
Kunj received the call…
K-” Hello Yuvi… “..
Y-” Kunj get ready fast….. Till 9 u both have to present at the venue… As without u ppl we can’t proceed ahead with the party “..
K-” OK…. We will reach their at right time.. Bye “…
He cancels the call nd looks at Twinkle… Their was a utmost awkward silence between them…..
T-” Kunj I’m going to get ready or else we will be late… U also get ready soon… Ur clothes r ironed nd kept in the room… “..
She leaves from their.. Kunj pats on his head….. He scratches his forehead
K-” Hayy re mera dil bhi kitna pagal hai apni jhalli siyappa Queen ke pyar main… Babaji sambhal lo mujhe kahi main iske pyar main baki sab cheeze bhool jaun…
( Uff… My heart is so mad…. Maniac for my
crazy siyappa Queen…. Babaji take me steady or else I will forget everything else in her love..)…
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NEXT SCENE….
Kunj comes out of washroom…he is only wearing jeans nd is bare chested…… He searches for his shirt to wear it…
K-” Oh shit I’m such a stupid ass… I forgot the shirt in the room where Twinkle is getting ready…. Ummm what should I do..? “..
He reaches the room nd finds the door unbolted
K-” I think Twinkle already got dressed up that’s why the door is not locked… “..
He enters the room…. Nd finds Twinkle standing at front of mirror struggling to drape her saree…
K-” Twinkle what happened…. U took so long time still u r not ready “…
Twinkle turns nd looks at him…. She finds him bare chested… She closes her eye’s…
T-” Kunj why r u not wearing ur shirt… Nd why u came here without knocking at the door… “….
K-” So what if I’m not wearing shirt… I have right to show my hot abs…. Nd why would I knock and come.. Did I need to take permission for entering in my room…. Actually I came here to take my shirt only nd when I found the door unlocked I thought that u r not in the room… But why r u taking so much time to get ready….
Open ur eye’s u have full right to see me like this…
Tumbhi kya yaad rakhogi ke kunj Sarna tumhe uske hot abs dekhne ki permission dedi.. Bahut kushkismat ho tum…
( U will never forget that Kunj Sarna gave u permission to stare at his hot abs.. U r very lucky…)…
Twinkle opens her eye’s….
T-” Kunj I’m already very frustrated please don’t make me more angry…. “.. Tears fall from her eyes…..
Kunj notices it nd rushes to her… He cups her face…
K-” Why r u crying…. What happened r u fine… Don’t cry please it hurts in my heart when u cry “….
Twinkle looks at him with love…” Kunj I’m very bad wife…. U do so much for me ; u always fulfil my wish but look at me what I’m doing… U asked me to wear saare but I’m not able to do so small task…. Never in my life I learned to wear it…. I’m trying to drape it but see its not happening… “…
Kunj laughs nd makes puppy face…” Aww… Siyaapa Queen u r tensed coz of it… Why u fear when kunj is here.. If u don’t mind can I help you in wearing it.. I know to enwrap it.. ”
T-” U know….how… U r boy from where did u learned it..? “.. She ask suspiciously..
Kunj thinks to tease her…” Actually once I helped my girlfriend Alisha to wear it..”.. He smirks mockingly…
Twinkle eye’s popped out…. She starts to beat him on his chest… ” U already had a gf nd u didn’t told me.. I won’t spare u now…”..
K-” Areee… Twinkle stop plz don’t beat me… I’m just joking… Alisha is just my colleague not my gf….. Yuvi taught me how to cloak saree…. ”
She stops beating him nd taunted him while having a geek smile on her face….
T-” Yuvi taught me….. Sometimes I doubt that whether u nd Yuvi r gay or not…. Or else why he will teach this to u… “… She laughs hard…
K-” Oh plz I nd gay no…. About Yuvi I can’t tell whether he is or not… For now u tell u want take my help or else I’m going.. ”
Twinkle hesitates at first but she agreed as she don’t have any other solution for her problem….
K-” Twinkle if u r not comfortable then it’s OK…. I know for u being in that state in front of me won’t make u feel good… Don’t worry I will call Mahi Bhabhi to help u “…
Twinkle loves his care… Innocence nd understanding towards her…
T-” Kunj u r my husband… I trust u more than myself… I know very well when I’m with I feel secured… U will never do anything against my will…. I trust my hubby… U have complete right”…
Kunj smiles seeing her respect for him…
Kunj moves closer to her …. He makes her face mirror.. He holds her by her waist nd makes her back touch his bare chested body… Twinkle feels butterflies in her stomach…
He starts to moves his fingers sensually on her stomach…. Twinkle closes her eyes. My. While kunj sees her reflection in mirror nd smiles….
He then removes her saare as she wore it wrong… Now she is standing wearing blouse which is having the length till her bust… nd petticoat…… He makes her face towards him….
Ehsaas tere aur mere toh
Ik dooje se judd rahe
Ik teri talab mujhe aisi lagi
Mere hosh bhi udne lage
(Emotions of yours and mine
Are connecting to each other
I began to yearn for you in this way
That my consciousness began to fly)
Mujhe milta sukoon teri baahon mein
Jannat jaisi ek raahat hai
(I get rest coming into your arms
It is comfortable like paradise)….
Still Twinkle’s eye’s were closed….. Kunj pushes her closer to him…. Now her hands r resting on his chest….. He speaks to her…
K-” Open ur eye’s…. Relax it’s me only… “..
She opens her eye’s nd looks at Kunj…. Both of them r staring deeply in eo others eye’s…. Twinkle heart beat increases due to cold touch of his body….
After few seconds kunj starts to drape the saree around her waist….
He kneels down nd starts to tucking sarre plain/upper end into the petticoat, at a position which is a little bit to the right of the navel….his fingers r playing on her navel sending a seductive shivering sensation to Twinkle’s body….
He neatly tuck the pleats into the petticoat, at the waist, slightly to the left of the navel, in such a manner that it is open to her left.
He stood up nd hold her shoulders sensuously nd draped the remaining fabric around more left to right….
He then proceeds to fasten it at the shoulder to the blouse with a small safety pin….. In order to make the pin clutched tightly his uses his lips….
His lips touches her shoulder… He plants kiss over their…… Twinkle feels exalted with his touch on her body for the first time… It’s the first time when kunj kissed her….
He moves towards her ears nd murmurs…
” Twinkle u r ready now….. I hope u liked the manner in which I made u to wear it.. “…
He smiles nd leaves the room..
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TO BE CONTINUED…...
PRECAP – Twinkle to kiss kunj….. She get jealous of Alisha’s presence…. Nd lot of romance in store for Twinj….
Finally my ff will complete 25 episodes in next one so I thought to give Twinj romance as a treat to u all..
If their is any mistake then I’m sorry as I wrote the episode in hurry nd didn’t done proof reading of it..
Guys tell me whether u liked sarre romance or not?….
LOVE U ALL… KEEP SUPPORTING…
78 Comments
Awesome yr….
Kya sarre drape ki hai…
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Loved it
Thanks Joon…
I’m soooo happy that u liked it….
Keep smiling ??
Awwwwwwww sayu di
It was so so cute yr I loved it so so much
And so sorrrryyyy for not comnting on ur previous ff epi
I am ill and I am having exams so can’t help but mamma is not allowing me to touch phone but somehow I have managed to take it
And this sarre to romance is killing me ufff still in the dream world
Bukhar mujhe hai asli wala Lekin Aapke ff ka bukhar bhagwan karne kabhi na utere
Bas Ab jaldi jaldi post karo
And again a big wala sorryyy
Bulbul jaan ur comment made me felt as if I’m on cloud nine…..
Dknt be sorry.. It’s OK….
U take care of yourself….. Thanks for sooooooooo lovely word’s for me…
Love u too ??
Awesome sayooo dii
Just mind blowing???
Left me speechless
The way you described Kunj crapping Saree made me say hawwwww
Thanks Angita…
I’m soooo happy that u liked saare part….
Love u too ??
Amazing awsm fab cool nice marvellous
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Aur kuch bacha hi nahi bolne k liye sayu
Kya dhassu epi diya hai maza aagaya
Wow finally u reached silver jubliee
Waiting for next epi ….
Plz post caught in love embrace of wild beast plshh waiting for it
Love u yaar …..????
Thanks Sam…. Ur words made me felt so happy…..
I’m happy that u liked it….
Yes finally I reached my silver jubilee….?????….
Dear I submitted my next ff..it will be uploaded soon…
Love u too ???
Awsome
Thanks Zaku..
I’m soooo happy that u liked it…
Love u ???
Sayeeda di Love you
Loved the episode and Twinj eye lock was too good and Kunj made Twinkle were saree and the kiss and the draping part and the putting the plates part Loved each and every bit of it Loved it di Love you
Waiting for Twinj romance and Twinkle’s kiss and Twinkle’s jealousy 🙂 waiting for the next episode Love you 🙂
Thank you so much Sidmin for making me know that which part u liked the most….
Thanks for being so supportive….
Will try to post next one soon….
Love u too ???
????? wz waiting for our ff eagerly finally such an awsm epi…luvd d way u potrayd their emotions….
Thanks Maggi…
I’m glad to know that u were waiting for my ff….
I’m soooo happy that u liked it….
Love u ???
Sayu……it was amazing
And that sudden hug????
The way ur potraying the purity…the respect in a relation is beyond description…..I am so loving the way twinj’s relation is progressing
Eagerly waiting for d nxt one
Love u ???????
Thanks Kruti…..
I’m soooo happy that u r liking the story track…..
Will try to post next one soon.
Love u too ???
Di??????????????????
U always make me shocked. Saari pehnane mien bhi romance ????. Waooiohoooooooooo
Nobody can beat u in romance ???????????????????????????????????
Loved it. Waiting for next one ????????????
Thank you…. Thank you so much Chiku for ur pyara pyara sa sweet sa comment….
Will try to post next one soon….
Love u too ??
Woww sayeeda awesome yrr waiting for nxt part…. Amazing…
Woww sayeeda awesome yrr waiting for nxt part…. Amazing… Rlly i jst loved it…
Hey Sana…. Thanks for commenting dear…….
I’m feel so blessed that u loved the episode….
Keep smiling ???
hot loved saree wala romance but plz post the next epi soon precape read karne k bad i m really excited
Hey Presha thanks for commenting dear…..
I’m so blessed to see ur comment…. Nd moreover I’m happy that u liked saare romance part…..
Will try to post next by tmrw….
Keep smiling ???
Masha Allah Sayooo Api!That was amazing! I am left spell bound……After readinf and the songs sellection was sooooo amazing! Very gooddy job???Hehehehe???? I keep inventing new words ??? Don’t mind huh ? Waiting for next quarter century Episode 🙂
Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂
Love u sooooooooo much ❤❤❤❤❤
-Zuha
Thanks Zuhoo for ur beautiful words…. I’m so happy that u liked it…
Plz post ur ff as I’m waiting eagerly for it……
Love u too ???
Wow wow wowwwwwwww…… lovely episode…….. very cute one..??????????… just loving the way they are getting attracted to each other???????…… nd ya waiting for nxt episode…… plzzzzz post asap…..????
Nd ya one more thing…. i just love your name “SAYEEDA” …… seriously you have got a very beautiful name??? …….
OMG Angel u loved the episode so much….
Finally my efforts bored fruits…..
I’m so happy after reading ur lovely word…..
Love u so much… ??.
Will try to post next by tmrw….
Thanks for the compliment dear….. ???
Wht a lovely episodeeeeeeee…. loved it to d coreeeeeee…. ??? saree romance was to superbbbbbb…. nd nxt will be ur silver Jubilee yeee yepieeee….. ???was eagerly waiting for it…. post soooooooooooon….. love u…. ???
Awww Shonu Monu tumhe accha laga episode ye jaan ke baad mera toh din hi bangaya…..
I’m soooo happy that u liked it…..
Love u too ????
Wow….Sayeeda awesome episode….amazing… Brilliant
Thank you so much Rashi…. I’m so happy that u liked it…..
Love u dear ????
I was always excited to see the saree draping part…and see…it turned out to be blockbuster!!!
That was epic meli Shayu di! Haan haan pata hai Sayu se Chayu phir Chayu se Shayu…
Hehe….agle epi ke liye main??
Iss haalat mei hu…kya hoga…uff…main to garmi ki wajah se marr na jaau…hot hot hot!…
Ufff…bass bye bye…love uh?
Alllee meli paali si chweet si Icchu Phil se nannhi chi…. Cute chi baby ban gayi hai….. Tumhe pata hai na ke mujhe ye cute si Icchu kinni pasand hai ????…
I’m choooooo happy that my cutiee pie Ishu loved the sarre part…….
Love u sooooooooo much….. More than the infinity ???
Mastttt…the epi was wonderful…kya epi tha…amazing…luved twinj’s scene specially saree wala…and can’t wait for the nxt one….the song was also soooo gud…I luved the way u translated it…overall fabulous…post the nxt epi ASAP…
Thanks Aksa…. Seeing you commenting on my ff means a lot to me…..
I’m soooo happy that u liked it….
Love u ???
Sayu di fab epi.. Words r less so a short comment… Sorry.. Fab.. Ctd soon.. Luv u
Thanks Aaru…
I’m happy that u liked it….
Love u. ???
Omg yaar.. how well do you write.. its superb, mind blowing, fantastic, amazing, awesome.. words are less to describe my feelings.. it was just WOW.. loved twinj’s saree wala romance???.. and ur ff was beautifully written with no mistakes.. do cont soon ?
Thank you so much Sidvee…. U don’t have an idea how much your words means to me….
Thanks for making me smile… Thanks for each nd every word of ur comment….
Love u. ????
Awesome sayu diii u made me speechless again how manage to do this ???
Ur toooooo good and thank u for the gift!!! Yay!!!
Love u dii
Thanks Thanmy….. Ur comments always make me speechless to thank you…
I’m soooo happy that u liked it…
Love u dear ????
Haa haa i know you’ll kill me because i commented late nah? But no i won’t apologise.. I’m glad i left this to read later (don’t get any ideas its just that i was busy ?) because something this superbbbb is worth reading and your mind sets its imagination to its edge ? …….
No i have no idea what i just said but yes it us true 🙂 …….. Dyamnnnnnnn sayuuuu ???????????? twinj ki romance .. Like hot hot hot !!!
Aur haa arijit Singh aadat hai fav song!! Btw what’s the other song? Coudnt quite make out the lyrics …
You r too awesome!!! Just yesterday i thinking about this ff .. Since i remembered those msgs from the letter and today’s episode was just a blackbloster ka episode!! Superbbb mindblowing diii !!
Precap seems rather freaking interesting ??
Post soon as i cant wait to witness their upcoming romance 😉
Love you ??
Oye Romu I would have killed u yesterday for the folly u did in ur ff… I hope u remember it ????…… But after reading ur sweet reply I forgived u……. If u wouldn’t have agreed to my words then yes I would have surely killed u???….
I’m so happy that such an amazing writer loved my writings…..
Now u have said so yes I will try to post next one by tmrw… Hope so I can do it….
About ur doubt so that lyrics is of aadat song only…. Its of second para…..
I’m so glad to know that u were remembering letter part….
Thanks yr for showering so much love on me….
Love u too ?????
Ohh finally u posted…..I am sorry I always get time late…btw I am Jas and sid lover due to registration issues it is written In different manner…
The episode was fabulous ….u describe it so well their talking through eyes…this was the most beautiful part…I loved it…u r focussing on twinkle’s feelings …that’s just awesome….u r depicting the feelings so well…ahh that feelings are also taking ur readers’ Hearts ??…I loved it dearly…
And yeah please don’t make twinkle more jealous??
Love u and ur writing??
Hey Jas nd Sid lover I recognised u….
U know what I always look forward for ur comment as ur words always touch my heart… The way u tell me that what part u liked the most in the episode made me feel overwhelmed…..
Yes for now I’m focusing on Twinkle’s feelings as for Kunj side he did enough for his lady love nd now it’s Twinkle turn to realise his importance in her life… To understand kunj’s love passion towards her…
I just hope I can do justice with her feelings realisation too……
I’m so happy that u liked it….. Remember ur comment means a lot to me… ???…..
About ur request… Don’t worry that jealousy will make Tiwnj to come closer…..
Love u too ????
Sayu,
Kya bolu….ek dum mast…. pehle socha… comment likhu… phir socha…type baad me kerte hai…ek aur baar pad leti Hun..??????
Wah…kya romance that…sari pehnate…..
Nd for 25th u have kept more romance….wow…
Ur imaginations are just worth reading twice or thrice…may be it be your grand style of wedding arrangements of marriage or these awesome romances…
Love you….
Jisha di one day I will surely come to ur place nd hug u???….
U really means a lot to me…. Whether it’s ur ff or ur comment are very close to my heart…….
Getting so good comment from my fav ff writer nd my inspiration means a lot to me……
I’m soooo happy that u liked it…. Whenever I read ur comment I feel so contented that finally I managed to impress u di….
Love u too di…. Love u?????
Come to Bglore…I am waiting…I will be the happiest to meet you…????
Okay Shatakshi u have to do this…
Soo let’s start
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Sooooooo sorry for not commenting on ur previous episode
As I started reading all the ffs from today
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The episode was shooo cute
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Dil chahta h ki aapko puppi de du
Aur Haa…zyada wait mat karvana Suyu nahi to mai gussa ho jaungi
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N yes last but not the least
I love u shoooo much
❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Alllee meri Sattu don’t say sorry it OK…. Jao tumhe maaf kiya maine ????…..but on serious note missed u so much yrr…. Two days without your presence TU was nothing…. Happy to see u back..
I’m happy that u liked it…
Don’t worry very soon ur wish will get fulfilled… When I will visit to Mumbai then u can give me cute pappi ????:…..
Love u too ????
sry sayu 4 being late…
wow i don hv words 2 express ur writting…u r masterpiece of writing…saree part amazing…reminded me of tei…bt it was much better here…i m so excited 4 nxt 1 as u r going 2 give us a treat i ‘ll b w8in desperately….n love u 2 d core…
Hey Sujina please don’t be sorry it’s OK…. For me ur lovely comments r more important…. ???….
I’m so happy that sarre part made u remember tei… ???….
U always manage to leave a smile on my face through ur words ??….
I just hope u all like the next episode… Fingers crossed..
Will try to post next by tmrw..
Love u too dear ???
verygood amazing…….saree romance was superb
Thanks Aamu…
I’m soooo happy that u liked it..
Love u ???
Sayoo tumhare saree romance ne to maar hi dala…..
It was soo……. Ummmmmm…. samajh ni ara kya bolu…. Tumhare romance ne bolti band kar di…
Twinkle aankhe kaise band kar sakti hai yr itni hot body ko dekh k….. Agar mai hoti to aankhe blink b ni karti??
Ye romance hi itna awesome tha… I am just thinking ki treat wala romance kaisa hoga….
Loooooooooooooooooooved it❤❤❤❤❤
And love u???
And ya ek treat aur dedo na on ur 25 epi…….plz thoda jaldi post krna next…
Oyyeee hoyeeee Shreya ur comment made me blush….
Kya kahaun main ab tumse…. ???…. See I’m speechless right now…. Smjh nai arha ke kaise tumhe thanks kahaun…
Waise na u r right agar Twinkle ki jagah main hoti toh eyes kabhi na close krti ?????……
Yes dear I will surely try to post next one tmrw only… I won’t make u wait for so long….
Love u too….. Muaaaahhh??????
Plz updates the Link of 22 episode
Hey kiya here’s the link of 22 episode…
http://www.tellyupdates.com/cant-stop-loving-u-twinj-love-happy-friendship-day-chapter-22/
ohhhhh a very nice part
you are really good at it
Saree draping part is really very nicely written by you with every touch’s description
and next part will be awwwwweeee
Thank you so much Shikha…..
I’m soooo happy that u liked the sarre draping part….
About next part I hope it can meet up to your expectations…. ??…
Love u ??