Thnk u all guyz…ur comments means a lot for me as its my 1st story ever..once again thank u..now let’s go to the story…
Manan : It’s You ~ my firefly
Itz midnight.. A girl was running through a dark jungle.Some goonds were chasing her..She was really scared..She became tired & hide behind a tree..She was panting very badly..She was looking here & there for the goonds..Suddenly she heard some sound..She heard them carefully.. It’s sound of cars..She got it..She was near the highway.. She started running towards the noise..One of the goonds noticed her & they again started to run after her..She came to d highway successfully & suddenly she hits with a car & faints..A boy came out from the car & took her inside d car & left..Yes..it’s none other than Manik Malhotra..So the goonds missed her & started searching her in the jungle..
Manik’s POV :
I’m coming from a party..Such a boring party it was..But yeah, it’s really imprtnt 4 business.. Otherwise I would’ve never attend such a boring party..Now I just want to go home & sleep as it’s Sunday tomorrow & I love Sunday..God it’s already midnight & I have to reach home soon else mom will kill me today..She must b waiting 4 me..Oohhh..shit..I’ve hit a girl with my car..Oh God !! What have I done??!!! I should better go & check..
I got down from my car & went towards the girl..I saw her face..So beautiful & innocent.. Wow !! Long hair,chubby cheeks,juisy pink lips,soft skeen..just lyk a fairy..But what was she doing here at this tym?! Cut the crap manik..She needs help..I should take her with me..
So I carried her in my arms & took her to my home..
End of POV
Nyonika was waiting 4 Manik.. She was angry at Manik as it’s already late & moreover he was not picking up her calls..she was frustrated..
Manik entered Malhotra mansion.. Nyonika went running towards the door hearing car’s horn.. She watched manik carrying a girl in his arm..
Nyo’s POV :
Who is this girl?! Oh God !! Now what this boy have done ?!!
End of pov
Manik came home with Nandini..he laid her down in the couch & called doctor..
Nyonika asked Manik : Manik.. Who is this girl??
Manik : mom, she is ur bahu..I’ve kidnapped her..
Nyonika was shocked..
Nyo : what ?!! What r u saying?? R u crazy??
Man : relax mom..I was just kidding..
Nyo : then who is she?!!
Man : I don’t know her mom.. I was coming back from the party..at highway, suddenly she came in front of my car & fainted.. So I brought her with me..
Nyo : At this tym..what was she doing there?!! Look at her..she is looking so pale..may b she was in some trouble..
Man : mom what if she is some ghost ?!!
Nyo : manik !! At this tym u r thinking about jokes?!!
Man : ok ok..sorry mom.. I’ve called the doctor.. He must b on his way..
Nyo : ok then go to ur room & come again after freshened up..
Man : ok ma’am.. As u say..
Manik left the hall & went to his room..
Manik’s POV :
Who is she?! She is so delicate..in this condition she is still looking so amazing.. I don’t know why I’m getting attracted to her..I want to know her..what r u thinking manik?!! She is just a normal girl..stop thinking about her else u will b found in some mental hospital..
End of pov
Meanwhile nyonika was sitting at hall near the couch..
Nyo’s pov :
Who is this girl?!! Don’t know why I’m getting a feeling that I know her..I’ve seen her before.. But where?!!
End of pov
So this was the 1st chapter..if u lyk it plzz let me know through ur valuable comments..I’ll be waiting…
Till then…bye bye…
#stay_happy_n_b_safe_&_spread_love 🙂
#Nishita
25 Comments
Ur 1st epi is osom..good start..keep updatng soon…nyc
Thnk u anjali..I’ll update soon
Awsm yaar
Thank u shrutika
Wow. i like manan very much
Thank u so much
This was the start?? Really?? Like seriously?? Haan???
I did not like it at all
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Bt i loved it?❤️❤️❤️ It was so cute.. Aweeee my manik carriying nandu n thinking that she is so cute… I seriously loved it n if this was the atart then u r gonna rock ahead.. Keep going.. N sorry if u got angry on me at first bt this is how i comment.. Always different?
OMG tash !!! U know I was not angry..but I got a shocked
I got really scared…but thank u so much for ur awesome cmnt…u r really dfrnt but really swt ???
Superrr amazing update loved your story line keep going
Thank u piya 🙂
Awesome episode
Pls update soon
Thanks lara..I’ll update it as soon as possible
Oh no!! I think there’s something connected between nyonika and nandu…Loved the suspense….Awesome 🙂 Keep writing 🙂
Yeah..u r r8..thank u ?
Hey nishi its really fab re like seriously I jus lvd it ….
Thank u many ??
Nic story.
Thank u
Ur ff is amazing. I’m in love with this new Manik??? ur story is different n i loved it. It’s superb??? update asap plz??
Thank u mahi..I’m glad that u lyk it..I have already submit my nxt epi
Nishita ? I am really upset with u ?? why u did not write the story before in holidays ?? This story so awesome I loved the way u wrote now u update u parts and I won’t be able to read then regularly ?
And sorry ?
Oops !! I’m sorry dear as I didn’t start it earlier..I was really confused if I should publish it or not…anyways..whenever u get tym do read it..I’ll be more than enough 4 me…thank u so much 4 ur awesome cmnt !! ????
Start is awsum!!
Thnks naaz 🙂