Episode 20
After talking to swasan laksh got ready to propose ragini…. He came out from washroom…. He is shocked to see to the scene before him….. Ha ha s swasan were hugging and sanskar kissing swara’s forehead…..
Laksh:(shouted)guys!!!
Swasan were shocked to hear his voice…. They were embrassed…. Laksh was having a naughty smile….
Laksh:so sanskar bro yesterday u have proposed swara right????
Sanskar:oh laksh…. (closed his eyes)ya….
Laksh:but u hide this from me right???
Sanskar:laksh only i proposed her but madam needs time…. She likes me…. But didn’t love me….
Laksh:oh really??? Very nice…. Hope ragini atleast likes me….
Sanskar:bro surely she will accept you…..
Swara:laksh if at all instead of sanskar u have proposed me u would have said yes….
Sanskar:what???? This is not fair swara….
Swara:ha ha just joking…. Now i m serious laksh…. Ragini should be lucky to get u….
Laksh:mm hope its positive…. I dont want her to love me…. Let her take her time to love me…. Atleast like you she should give me a chance…. Wait wait i forgot then what about randhir???
At that time randhir came there searching for swara…..
Randhir:what about me???
Laksh:dont u guys love each other???
Swandhir:ufff….
Laksh:what???
Sanskar:laksh they were just bffs…. We only had misunderstood them….
Laksh:oh kk…. Now i m going….
Swara:buddhu have you called ragini and told her to come???
Laksh:ya i told i just want to talk to her….
Swasandhir:all the best buddy….
Then laksh went from there…. Swasandhir went to swara’s room….
Randhir:swara u forgot me after u got ur bobby right???
Swara:randhir dont be jealous man….
Sanskar:oh u know my nick name too???
Randhir:ha ha Sanskar i know everything about bobby and oreo story…..
Sanskar:wow so my oreo didnt forget me right??? I m so happy…. Love u oreo…. (winked at her)
Swara blushed hearing it…. She smiled slightly with a blush….
Randhir:hello love birds stop it…. I m here…. Swara first i said for joke that u forgot me but now seriously u forgot me….
Swara:oh ho sweeto…… How can i forgot u????
Randhir:mm kk leave it….
At that time randhir mobile rang…. Swara saw his mobile and passed a naughty smile…. Seeing her smile randhir got alert and tried to snatch mobile from her but she took that and ran whole room at last swara gave the phone to him…. He took the phone and went to balcony…. Seeing this sanskar is confused…..
Sanskar:oreo what happen?? Who is in the call???
Swara:bobby its Shwetha…… Randhir’s cousin and is madly in love with him….
Sanskar:really??? What about him???
Swara:he just likes her….
Sanskar:like you??
Swara:ha ha s…. Bobby i m just confused of my feelings…. But randhir is sure he didn’t love her but will love her soon….
Sanskar:offo both frnds are of same type….
Swara:ha ha s…. U know what shwetha too proposed him when u proposed me…. Bcoz she too thought that we both are in love…. When randhir informed shwetha about our relation she didn’t wait for a second she proposed him in the mobile itself….
Sanskar:mm very brave…. K leave them oreo…. Now come we both will spend some time together….
Swara:bobby we are doing that only….
Sanskar:offo my dear buddhu come for a date with me….
Swara:wow k i m ready…. Give me 10 minutes time i will come…
Sanskar:ha ha k oreo….
Then swara went from there enthusiasticly….. Seeing her enthusiasm sanskar is confused as he do no y she is this much happy….. He thought whether she likes to come with me to date or she is happy for any other reason??? Then he thought to ask her after she comes…. He went to get ready…. Then swara came there with a blue jumpsuit….. Its a sleeveless one….. She let her hair free…. Very light mackup….seeing her sanskar is mesmerised….. He intertwined his hands with her and both went to a hotel…. Sanskar got down first and went and open door for swara…. Then both went inside holding their hands….. Already sanskar made arrangements for their date…. He booked a table and told the hotel staff to decorate it with combination of blue and red…. The table has combination of both blue and red color cloth…. In the center there is flowers arraged in heart shape….. There are candles spread in the table….. It looks very nice…. Seeing it swara is shocked and happy…. But her words make sanskar shocked….
Swara:this is the best arrangements of my date till now i went….
Sanskar:what??? How many dates have u went???
Swara:i do no…. Its countless….
Sanskar:what????
Swara:ha ha bobby i love to go to date….. And u know what many boys where behind me….. I had went to my first date when i studied 8th….
Sanskar:what??? Oreo how come aunty and uncle leave u???
Swara:ha ha sakshi wont leave me…. She is such a devil u know….
Sanskar:wait wait who is sakshi??? Ur mom???
Swara:ha ha s bobby…. I call her by name only…. U know she always restricts me…. Dont do that dont do this….. But my dad is my superhero….. He will save me from everything….. He will convince mom…. But sakshi will leave me only bcoz of randhir…. Bcoz he will see to my safety….
Sanskar:swara u love ur parents a lot right????
Swara:ya sanskar…. I m very very lucky to get such a parents…. Though my mom restricts me for some things but she loves me a lot…..
Seeing swara getting emotional sanskar thought to change her mind…..
Sanskar:k oreo tell me y u like to go to date….
Swara:ha ha that bcoz i will get many dresses…. Many gifts and mainly i will get a chance to eat different different foods…. I have tasted every kind of food…. I have come across all food from street food to five star hotel foods in goa…..
Sanskar:oreo when did u become a foodie???? Oh no now i have to bear this foodie for life time…..
Swara:ha ha s…. Dont think that i will get angry for this and will less my foods…. No way… No compromise when it comes to food…..
Sanskar:oreo u dont worry i will get u every type of food….
Swara:u have to bobby…. Otherwise i will divorce you….
Sanskar:what u will divorce me for this small matter???
Swara:yes…. And Mr.Sanskar Maheswari its not small matter…. K get it….
After sometime their food came…. But sanskar didn’t let swara to eat instead he fed her…. After seeing him just feeding her swara to feed him…. Then both went to the garden of hotel…. There they saw raglak…. Seeing them swara dragged sanskar ans hide behind a tree to listen them….
There ragini is standing simply…. Laksh bent on his knees and forwarded his hand which has a bunch of orchids which is ragini’s favourite flower…..
Laksh:ragini i know u might have now known that sanskar told no to get married to you and i m ready to marry you….. Dont think i say that to you due to sympathy….. Bcoz from childhood i love you….. When ur dadi came for ur proposal for sanskar i was broken…. But i kept mum bcoz i thought about ur happiness alone….. But bhai was not happy with this proposal….. Then after swara’s arrival he fall for her….. Then he became strong and told dad and mom that he is not interested in marrying you…. So now i thought to propose you…. I love you soo much ragini…. I love each and every thing of you ragini…. I m not saying you to love me now…. We will get together first…. Then you say your decision….. But in this life time i was is and will love only you ragini…. Will u accept me????
Ragini:laksh stop it…. I cant even think of it…. U know what u r disgusting…. U very well know that i love sanskar…. Only Sanskar….. Even he likes me….
But that swara came in between us…. And u r using this opportunity…. R u not ashamed???? See just listen sanskar is mine…. That swara cant do anything….. I will not let her snatch my sanskar…. Even if i want to kill her i will do it…. Just get lost…. Dont come infront me….
Saying this ragini went from there…. Laksh is just standing there lifelessly….. He is feeling very sad…. He didnt expect that ragini will bash him…. There swasan too felt sad…. Sanskar is very angry on ragini for hurting laksh and abusing swara…..
In gadodia mansion dadi is talking with some one on mobile…. Ha ha s she is talking with that u.k person….
Dadi:ya have u got any idea to kill sanskar…..
Caller:dont worry parvatiji idea is ready but who is going to execute it????
Dadi:obviously swara…. She without knowing her going to kill sanskar with her own hands….
Caller:superb…. Then will discuss the plan soon….
Dadi:mm good…. Bye
After keeping the call dadi monologue “swara sanskar u both played more in my princess life….. Now both will face hell…. Sanskar ragini loved you so i m just giving you a life time punishment of death that too in your loved one hands….. Swara u will rot in jail for life long…. I cant forget ur insult when u insulted me before that mm people…. So u will go to jail that too for the mistake which u didn’t do…. Ha ha…. “laughed evilly….
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Guys pls do comment…. Silent readers pls comment….
With love…
Jwan(Jwala and Shan)
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Loved it yaar
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wow amazing…. swasan moments were awesome… foodie swara.. then lucky came to knw abt swasan. finally im heartbroken for lucky handsome is suffering alot 🙁 🙁 🙁
ragini how can she do this???
dadi evil queen first im gonna kill her..
story is gearing up…
jwan keep doing 🙂
Dont worry dr…. Laksh will soon be happy…. ?Ya dadi is very evil…. Thanks…. ?
Suprrb??
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Awsm part……
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Good one shan n jwala…. U know what due to exams i was nt able to read ur ff… Bt today only i read all d parts n i am speechless… Luv u both….
Thank you soo much dr….. ?
Superbbbb episode… I just loved the swasan moments… U guys r doing fantastic job. ????
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Swaraaaaa ? you went dating for food and gift ????? true heartless queen…omg
poor laksh *big hug for laksh
love it soo much Jwala and Shan.. xoxo
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Superb and awsm jwan…
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Amazing super duper …loved it
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Omg
Planning again
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Awesome… SWASAN moments are like Awwwwwwwwww….. loved it.. n also feelings sad 4 Laksh .. next part soon..☺
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No no plz dont do that dr plzzzzz…. save swasan dr…….let swasan plan against that devil dadi….plz dont harm swasan dr….plzzzzzzzzz……..
FANTASTIC MIND BLOWING PART DR…….
Sure dr swasan will be saved…. Thanks…. ?
Superrrr chappy jwan di.
Loved swasan moments???.
Swara is foodie, hehe??.
Feeling bad for laksh??.
And dadi, she will never change, urghhhh??.Waiting for nxt.
Take care
Keep smiling
Thank you so much uma…. ?
awesome…!! Waiting for next part…!!!
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hi shan akka unga story unmaiyave romba nalla irruku nan unga storya first epi la irundhe padikaren but nan comment pannala nan aana innaiku indha epi nan edhirpaakave illa mukiyama andha dating semma chance illa love u akka superb aana onnu please next seekarama i cant wait feel bad for laksh apparam swasan chating awesone akka ……
Wow thank you soo much mahi…. Kandipa sekirama update panrom…. Thanks dr…. ?
blo*dy dadi…..
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Nice jwan diis …you two rocks …pls don’t end it soon … nice update … actually Superbowl by words and excellently written in feelings …you two nailed it …. really
Thank you soo much janvi…. ?
awesome epi… my poor lucky boy… ragini dear why don’t u understand his love… too bad…
Wonderful ff..my 1st comment
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