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Hi all. I am back with the next episode of Kuch Rang Pyaar Ke Ek Duje Ke Vaaste- The different shades of love we have for each other. This time I came back in rocket speed XD because exams over. I can write fan fiction whenever I want to. I hope you all liked the episode.
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Here is episode 17.
Which scene(s) is for which shows:
Scene 1, 4, 6: KRPKAB part only
Scene 2, 5, 7: EDKV part only
Scene 3, 8. 9: Both
Scene 1: Devakshi’s Room
(KRPKAB part only)
Next day morning,
The episode begins with Dev and Sonakshi sleeping in each other’s arm. Dev wakes up and caresses Sonakshi’s hair who is sleeping. He looks at Sonakshi and smiles. Later, Sonakshi wakes up and they share an eyelock and remembers about yesterday night. Music plays. As Dev and Sonakshi was about to kiss each other, just then Sonakshi’s phone rings. Dev again falls down from the bed. Sonakshi laughs.
Dev: Not funny.
Sonakshi picks up the phone.
Sona: Hello, Sumo?
Dev: Shravan is right, you both always talk for hours for no reason.
Sona: Dev, let me talk.
While Sonakshi is talking, Dev gestures her to talk to Suman later.
Sonakshi doesn’t agrees and Dev insists Sonakshi to talk later again.
Sona: Yes I am
Sonakshi throws the pillow on Dev. Dev gets hurt. And he covers his eyes.
Dev: Ouch!
Sona: Dev!
Sonakshi keeps the phone and rushes to Dev.
Sona: What happened?
Dev: I got hurt.
Sona: I am sorry Dev. You do such things due to which I had to like this. I am so sorry.
Sonakshi blows Dev’s eyes. Music plays. Dev looks at Sonakshi and smiles.
Sona: Why are you smling?
Dev still smiles and nods.
Sona: Are you okay? Is it really hurting a lot?
Dev nods and makes a cute face.
Sona: Where?
Dev points at his heart. Sonakshi hits Dev.
Sona: Dev?
Dev: This really hurts.
Sona: Now stop acting.
Dev: Really!
Sona: Now stop this childishness and get ready for office.
Dev: I don’t feel like going to office. Please na. I want to spend time with my sweetheart.
Sona: Now don’t even take that sweetheart name infront of me.
Dev: Someone is getting jealous.
Sona: No, I am not.
Dev: Should I say I love you to again?
Sona: Dev?
Dev: The way I said falling down from the bed.
Sona: No thank you!
Dev: Let me say.
Sona: No way.
Dev pulls Sonakshi close to him.
Sona: Dev what if anyone sees us like this?
Dev: No one is even at home.
Dev puts his arms around Sonakshi’s neck.
Sona: Get ready.
Dev nods no.
Sona: Dev?
Dev: Okay fine but at one condition.
Sona: What is it?
Dev: Kiss.
Sona: No way.
Sonakshi nods.
Dev comes close to Sonakshi and Sonakshi closes her eyes.
Scene 2: Shraman’s room
(EDKV part only)
Shravan is sleeping and smiling in his sleep. Just then someone pours water on him, and Shravan wakes up shocked.
Shravan: Sumo what is this!
Sumo: You were not waking up that’s why.
Shravan: What way is this?
Sumo: Sumo special. You want more.
Shravan: No thank you.
Sumo: Oh so you got scared? Coward boy.
Shravan starts coughing.
Sumo: Shravan are you okay?
Shravan continues coughing. Suman gives him a glass of water.
Sumo: Drink this.
Shravan takes it and smiles and throws the water on Suman’s face. Suman is stunned.
Sumo: Shravan!
Shravan starts laughing.
Sumo: This is not fair.
Shravan holds Suman’s hand.
Sumo: Shravan leave my hand.
Shravan: You look so cute even when you are angry.
Sumo: You can’t trap me so easily with your sweet words.
Shravan: But your stupid tactics got me into trouble. See you woke me up so early.
Sumo: So early? You know what is the time now 10 am and you say its early?
Shravan: But today it’s holiday so let me sleep as much as I want to.
Shravan gets to sleep.
Sumo: No wake up.
Shravan: No I won’t.
Suman removes Shravan’s blanket.
Shravan: Now what do you want? Why you don’t let me sleep?
Shravan feels like crying.
Sumo: I also have no interest in disturbing you.
Shravan: Then why are you disturbing me? Let me sleep.
Shravan again sleeps.
Sumo: Sona’s call came, something happened to Dev Jiju!
Shravan: He must be too excited for no reason as usual.
Shravan sleeps.
Sumo: Shravan? Really nothing can happen about you. I said this because I heard him screaming.
Shravan wakes up.
Shravan: What? Then why you didn’t tell me earlier?
Sumo: I wanted to but you never even gave me the chance.
Shravan: It’s all your fault.
Sumo: Wow you didn’t wake up and that’s my fault?
What do you think of yourself?
Shravan: A hero. Now let’s go.
Sumo: Not hero, zero.
Shravan: What did you say?
Sumo: Now let’s go before you blame me further.
Shravan: I am not deaf. I heard what you said.
Sumo: What?
Shravan: Zero.
Sumo: Now you yourself also admit it.
Shravan is stunned and Suman laughs.
Sumo: Fresh up and then we will go.
Shravan: Fine.
They get ready and leave.
Scene 3: Devakshi’s Residence
(Both)
As Dev and Sonakshi were about to kiss each other, just then someone knocks the door and they get up.
Sumo: Sona! Dev Jiju! Is everything fine?
Dev: Sumo? What is she doing here?
Sona: I have no idea.
Shravan: Dev? Is everything fine?
Dev: Shravan also?
Sona: What are they doing here at this time?
Dev: They are taking revenge from us.
Sona: Revenge?
Dev: You are so naive?
Sona: Huh?
Dev: We spoiled their romance during honeymoon and now they are doing this to us. Tit for tat you see.
Sona: Dev let me open the door.
Sonakshi goes.
Dev: No Sona.
Sona: Why?
Dev: Just see.
Sona: You quickly get ready. I try to manage them.
Dev goes and Sonakshi opens the door.
Sumo: Sona, is everything fine?
Sona: Yes, why?
Sumo: I heard Dev screaming.
Sona: No no nothing like that. Just that he fall down from the bed.
Suman is laughing.
Sumo: Why does Dev Jiju always fall down from the bed?
Sona: Sumo?
Shravan: See Sumo, it’s nothing you were just overacting.
Sumo: You are also no less.
Shravan: Sorry Sona Dii for disturbing you both at this time. I shouldn’t have listen to this dumb girl.
Sumo: How dare you call me dumb?
Shravan: Sumo Dumbo?
Sumo: Go home first then I will teach you a lesson.
Shravan: You already spoiled my sleep.
Sona: Oh now can you both stop fighting please.
Sumo: Sona really sorry. Sorry for disturbing you and Jiju.
Sona: It’s okay.
Suman looks around.
Sumo: By the way where is Jiju? He isn’t around.
Sona: He is busy.
Sumo: Oh.
Shravan: Now let’s go Sumo madam.
Suman stares at Shravan and they leave and as they were about to go, Suman sees something and smiles.
Shravan: Now why are you smiling?
Suman whispers to Shravan. Shravan looks and smiles.
Shravan: Looks like Dev got successful.
Sumo: Aww so cute.
Shravan: Now we should leave them alone.
Sumo: Yes.
Shravan and Suman goes.
Dev comes.
Dev: Where are they?
Sona: They left.
Dev: Left?
Sona: Yes
Dev: Wow they spoiled our romance, just like that.
Sona:Dev Tumi Ekdom Impossible. (Dev you are just impossible)
Dev: Wah wah.
Dev smiles at Sonakshi. Sonakshi stares at Dev.
Dev: When you used to say it I didn’t enjoy and now you said Dev I loved it.
Sonakshi smiles and feels shy.
Sona: Now get ready.
Dev: Okay fine. It’s holiday today. But still I will get ready as my dear wife said so.
Sona: Dev! Wow good.
Dev: Maa is not here, so today’s day I will spend with you only.
Sonakshi smiles.
Scene 4: Devakshi’s Residence
(KRPKAB part only)
Sonakshi is in the kitchen and she is cooking something. And just then Dev comes and holds Sonakshi’s waist.
Sona: Dev!
Dev: Yes.
Sona: You?
Dev: What is my lovely wife cooking?
Sona: Food and now you tell me what are you doing here in the kitchen.
Dev: Why I can’t come in the kitchen?
Sona: No you can’t.
Dev: Sona, don’t forget that I am the one who taught you cooking.
Sona: Is it? Not you, Maa taught me cooking.
Dev: Okay okay fine. Maa taught you cooking and I did nothing right?
Sona: Yes
Dev: Then who helped you in baking Maa’s birthday cake?
Sona: Okay fine thanks for that.
Dev: Really? I don’t think so.
Sona: Now what should I do to make sure that I am thankful to you.
Dev: I want something.
Sona: What?
Dev: Kiss.
Sona: No way.
Dev: Sona please.
Sonakshi looks around and kisses Dev, and she feels shy and runs,
Dev smiles. Music plays.
Later, Sonakshi comes and just then she collides with Ishwari.
Ishwari: Calm down Sona where are you going.
Sona: Maa, you and here? Weren’t you suppose to be here after two days.
Ishwari: Bhaia is better now, so I decided to come here early and surprise you two.
Sonakshi smiles.
Ishwari: Wow my daughter-in-law looks so beautiful when she smiles. May God Bless you.
Sonakshi comes and takes Ishwari’s blessings. Ishwari blesses her.
Ishwari: Thank you so much for taking care of this house in my absence.
Sonakshi smiles.
Nikki: Sona Bhabi, if you and Bhaia went with us it would have been more fun.
Sona: But your Bhaia had some work that’s why we couldn’t go I really wanted to go.
Nikki: Never mind, next time.
Just then Dev comes and smiles seeing Ishwari.
Dev: Maa, you and here?
Ishwari: Yes beta.
Sona: Maa came to give us surprise.
Dev: Wow that’s great.
Dev comes and takes Ishwari’s blessings.
Dev: I am so happy you are finally here. The house was so lonely without you.
Ishwari smiles.
Sona: Maa, I have cooked your favourite dish.
Ishwari: Is it?
Dev: Yes she did.
Ishwari: I have such a loving daughter-in-law.
Sonakshi smiles.
Dev: Sona, I am not like you. You never give credit to me if I help you.
Sona: See Maa, he always complain.
Ishwari: Dev, if you disturb my Bahu I won’t spare you.
Ishwari pulls Dev’s ear.
Dev: Leave my ear.
Ishwari leaves.
Dev: You all always support your dear daughter-in-law.
Just then someone comes,
Ishwari and Sonakshi smiles and Dev becomes surprised. It’s none other than Neha and Ranveer.
Dev: Ranveer?
Sona: Ranveer Ji, good you came here.
Dev: What is he doing here?
Sonakshi is surprised.
Ishwari: Dev beta, he came to drop me and Nikki here.
Dev: Then why will he even come here?
Ranveer: Dev, I am sorry I didn’t want to but
Neha: Ranveer, no need to say sorry. Let’s leave from here, here you always get insulted here.
Ranveer: You stay here.
Neha: It’s fine.
Neha takes Ranveer and leaves.
Sona: But Neha dii? Ranveer Ji?
Dev: Let them leave.
Sona: Dev how could you just?
Dev: I am not interested in this topic.
Dev leaves.
Sona: Why does Dev hates Ranveer Ji so much? He is such a nice guy.
Ishwari: Yes Ranveer is a kind hearted guy.But Dev is never happy with Ranveer and Neha’s marriage.
Sona: But why?
Ishwari: That’s because he belonged from a middle class family. And he always wanted a rich guy for Neha but Neha loved Ranveer. Dev was never happy for this marriage and he disagreed so Neha and Ranveer eloped and got married.
Sonakshi is surprised.
Ishwari: Who will explain this to Dev that not wealth a person’s good heart is necessary. Ranveer is a really nice and understanding guy. He just cant hate Neha, because she is his sister and
Sona: Maa, no need to worry I will try to explain to Dev.
Ishwari: Thank you so much beta.
Sonakshi goes.
Scene 5: Shraman’s Residence
(EDKV part only)
Here Suman is cleaning the room and she is cleaning the wardrobe. She takes a stool and tries to clean the topper part of the wardrobe but she still fails to reach.
Sumo: This wardrobe is so high. But I must clean. It’s so dusty.
Suman tries to clean but she fails to reach the top. Shravan on the other hand, is speaking with some client on the phone.
Shravan: Okay all will be done soon. No need to worry.
Shravan sees Suman struggling to reach the top and clean it.
Sumo: Now how will I clean it?
Shravan goes to Suman and lifts her up. Suman gets surprised as she looks at Shravan. Suman and Shravan looks at each other and shares an eyelock. Music plays.
Shravan lifts Suman up and Suman cleans the wardrobe up.
Sumo: Finally this work is done.
Shravan: Good.
Sumo: At least my like-giraffe tall Shravan came of some work today.
Shravan: Are you trying to call me useless?
Sumo: When did I say that? I just said that you never help me in household chores.
Shravan: Is it?
Sumo: Did you see Dev Jiju? He even helped Sona to bake a cake. Unlike you.
Shravan: I shouldn’t have even helped you.
Shravan leaves and as Suman was about to fall, Shravan holds Suman and they look at each other.
Sumo: Thanks Shravan you saved me.
Shravan: Its fine.
Sumo: Are you angry with me?
Shravan: No.
Shravan makes an angry face. Just then Suman gets an idea and smiles. Suman comes to Shravan and kisses him on the cheek. Shravan smiles.
Shravan: Wow very romantic mood you are in.
Sumo: Finally!
Just then they hear the ring of the bell.
Sumo: I think Maa is here.
Shravan: Maa?
Suman and Shravan goes.
Suman opens the door and is surprised to find Ramnath.
Shravan: Dad?
Ramnath: Shravan I am back.
And Shravan and Ramnath hugs each other. Suman smiles.
Just then Nirmala comes and she sees this and smiles and as she was about to go. Suman comes to Nirmala.
Sumo: Wait a minute.
Suman comes and brings Nirmala. Nirmala doesn’t agrees and Suman assures her.
Ramnath: She is still here?
Sumo: Please give her one more chance.
Shravan: Dad, please give mom one more chance.
Ramnath: Shravan, you also?
Shravan: Yes, dad. I have realized the real value of relations now.
Ramnath looks on.
Sumo: Please agree.
Shravan: Dad for me. Just look at mom.
Ramnath looks at Nirmala who is sad.
Shravan: Dad please, I know my dad very well. Please dad forgive mom.
Ramnath cries and breaks down. Shravan consoles him.
Ramnath: It’s all because of me.
Shravan is surprised.
Shravan: I didn’t get you.
Ramnath says how he did all this and always taunt Nirmala who always did for Shravan only. Shravan gets angry. Suman and Nirmala are teary-eyed.
Shravan: Such a big lie and cheat!
Ramnath: Please forgive me.
Shravan is about to go, Suman holds Shravan’s hand.
Sumo: Shravan please.
Shravan: How Sumo? Because of this guy I always treated mom badly and also I threw you out and due to this we suffered a lot also. Don’t you remember how much we lost due to this.
Suman cries.
Nirmala: Shravan beta, please forgive him.
Shravan: See how kind-hearted your wife and my wife is. Because of you I had a wrong impression on women. I should be thankful I got a best friend and wife like Sumo,
Suman looks on.
Nirmala: Please beta.
Sumo: Please Shravan.
Shravan: I can’t forgive him so easily.
Sumo: Shravan look at me.
Shravan looks at Suman.
Sumo: See Shravan, you and Ma gave each other another chance, we gave our relationship another chance, then why cant dad get another chance.
Shravan looks on.
Shravan: Because you two were not at fault, he is.
Sumo: See Shravan. I also gave you another chance even if it was your mistake. What if I didn’t give you the second chance? Just imagine.
Shravan looks at Ramnath.
Sumo: See how much bad he is feeling he is even regretting.
Shravan looks on and leaves. Suman follows him.
Scene 6: Devakshi’s Room
(KRPKAB part only)
Dev comes and sits down and gets angry. Sonakshi comes and sits besides Dev.
Dev: I am sorry, that was my mistake to scold you.
Sona: I don’t agree that was your mistake. It was your mistake to scold Ranveer Ji and throw him out.
Sona: Dev, what happened?
Dev: Now please you also don’t start talking about Ranveer. I hate his name and face.
Sona: Relax. Dev. But see Neha Dii is so happy with Ranveer Ji then where is the problem?
Dev: Ranveer is a middle class guy. How will he fulfil Neha and Nisha’s demands. And Nisha she is just a baby she deserves so much more.
Sona: You love Nisha a lot?
Dev: A lot. She is like my own daughter.
Sonakshi smiles.
Sona: Then for Nisha please accept Ranveer.
Dev: Now please you dont use Nisha to emotionally blackmail me. I will never accept that guy.
Sona: But why? Just because he is from a middle class family?
Even I am from a middle class family. Then why did you marry me?
Dev: Your case is different.
Sona: So you are trying to say that middle class people have no right to love each other?
Dev: When did I say that?
Sona: You didn’t but you meant so, because you are not accepting Ranveer,
Dev: Look Sona, I don’t want to argue with you over this. And Ranveer I just can’t accept him. I dont know why.
Dev leaves.
Sona: Dev listen?
Sona: (in her mind) It won’t be easy to do so. I must do something so that Dev accepts Ranveer Ji.
Scene 7: Shraman’s room
(EDKV part only)
Shravan comes and cries. He sees his and Ramnath’s picture and he was about to throw it Suman stops him.
Sumo: No Shravan!
Shravan: How can he do like this? He kept me under dark for years for this I hated mom without any reason.
Sumo: Look Shravan, whatever happened years ago that was not your mistake.
Shravan: It was how can I hate Ma like this?
Sumo: Shravan these misunderstandings happen. Even misunderstandings came between us and then we got separated but we solved them and see now we are together.
Shravan: But Dad, how did he do so? I trusted him the most in this world. He was everything to me but now?
Sumo: Please Shravan dont cry.
Shravan hugs Suman and cries. Just then Suman sees another pic in Shravan’s hand.
Suman sees it.
Sumo: Shravan that is you but who is this next to you?
Shravan: Chottu.
Sumo: Chottu?
Shravan: Yes, my younger brother. He stayed with mom and he hates us to the core now. I also hated him but he did the right thing.
Sumo: Now where is he?
Shravan: No use now Sumo.
Shravan leaves.
Suman sees the picture.
Sumo: Now he is the last hope. Only he can make this family happy again.
Suman gets determined.
Scene 8: Conversation
Shravan is sad as he thinks how his dad cheated him, Suman tries to cheer him up. Just then Suman gets a call,
Sumo: Hello?
It’s Preeti.
Preeti: Sumo dii how are you?
Sumo: I am fine, how are you?
Preeti: I am fine, but?
Sumo: But what?
Preeti: Today is Pushkar’s birthday.
Sumo: Wow. Wish him on behalf of me and Shravan.
Shravan: Oh yes it’s Pushkar’s birthday.
Preeti: No I wont
Sumo: Why
Preeti: You have to come tonight. I have arranged a surprise for Pushkar.
Suman gets sad.
Sumo: I am sorry Preeti, but we can’t make it.
Preeti: Why?
Shravan: We are coming.
Preeti smiles.
Preeti: Okay I am sending the address.
Preeti sends the address.
Shravan: Now get ready for the party.
Sumo: Finally! I hope this party will make him feel better. Thanks Preeti.
On the other hand, Sonakshi gets thinking, and she looks at Dev.
Sona: How to persuade him? He is so stubborn.
Just then Sonakshi gets a call, its Suman.
Sona: Sumo?
Sumo: Are you going for the party?
Sona: Which one?
Sumo: Pushkar’s birthday.
Sona: Oh yes. No I am not. I am not going to Pushkar’s birthday.
Dev is surprised.
Sumo: But why?
Sona: Even Preeti asked me but I had to deny her. She was quite sad.
Dev: Sona, tell Preeti we are coming.
Sona: But Dev the problems.
Dev: This is daily routine, you just tell her we are coming.
Dev leaves.
Sonakshi smiles.
Sona: We are coming.
Scene 9: Bar
Devakshi and Shraman reach the bar for Pushkar’s party.
Dev: Now where is Preeti-Pushkar?
Shravan: Pushkar never told me about this.
Sumo: Preeti said that this is surprise for Pushkar.
Sona: Yes.
Dev: But where are they?
Just then Suman gets a call,
Sumo: Hello? What!
Shravan: What happened?
Sumo: It is Preeti’s call.
Sona: What is it?
Sumo: Preeti have a message for all of us.
Dev: Give it on loudspeaker.
Suman switches on the loudspeaker.
Preeti: Hi Sona dii, Sumo Dii, Dev Jiju and Shravan Jiju. Preeti here. I am so sorry. I know I invited you all. Actually Pushkar himself surprised me for a dinner date, and he wanted to spend this time like this for his birthday and it’s his birthday I am so sorry I just wasted your time and invited you all here. I am sorry I really feel bad. Sorry from Preeti and Pushkar.
Suman hangs up the call.
Shravan: There is no party. Its cancelled.
Dev: Yes we wasted our time.
Sona: We should leave now.
Sumo: Yes, we should.
Dev: Since we are here, I think we should go to the bar.
Suman, Shravan and Sonakshi agrees and they four go in.
There music is going on. Dev and Shravan are speaking about business matters. Suman and Sonakshi conversation.
Sumo: I hope our plan works.
Sona: Yes.
Sumo: Thanks to Preeti who agreed to help us.
Sona: True.
Sumo: But why was Dev Jiju sad?
Sona: Ranveer Ji. Neha Dii’s husband. He is not willing to accept him, today Ranveer came and Dev behaved with him badly everyone became disappointed. He is such a nice guy.
Sumo: Why?
Sona: Because he wasn’t happy with the fact Neha and Ranveer eloped just because he is from middle class family. Dev wasn’t happy.
Sumo: Then?
Sona: Dev I tried to explain to him but he wont. And I feel so bad for Neha Dii.
Sumo: How is Nisha?
Sona: She is fine.
Sumo: Don’t worry I will help you in this.
Sonakshi smiles.
Sona: But what is it about Shravan? Why is he upset?
Sumo: Long story.
Sona: What do you mean?
Sumo: Maa and Dad.
Sona: Oh so he is still disappointed with Nirmala Aunty.
Sumo: Shravan got to know that it was his dad responsible for all this problems not his mom and he is super disappointed with him regarding this.
Sona: But how can Ramnath uncle do like this?
Sumo: But everyone deserves a second chance, even I gave Shravan another chance.
Sona: That’s true.
Sumo: I feel there is something more into it.
Sona: What is it?
Sumo: Today I found Shravan sad. He was thinking about Chottu his younger brother, and he lived with Maa all these years. I feel he is also like Shravan not ready.
Sona: If Chottu agrees, Shravan will definitely agree.
Sumo: But we have to found out who Chottu is.
Sona: I am there for you.
Suman smiles.
Just then Dev and Shravan comes,
Dev: So you are still chatting?
Sumo: Jiju let me, you always spent time with your wife. Now let me speak with your sister.
Shravan: Your chat is never ending.
Sona: Yes, Shravan what to do. This is what sisters are for.
Sonakshi and Suman hug each other, Dev and Shravan smiles.
Just then a guy comes and makes an announcement.
Guy: Now we have a special thing for all at this special night. A dance challenge. And anyone interested? All can join slowly. And we will give any song we want.
Dev, Shravan Sonakshi and Suman chat.
Dev: We should order dinner.
Guy: Anyone who is interested raise your hand?
Shravan: Waiter.
All looks at Shravan.
Guy: So finally we got someone who is ready to dance.
Shravan: No!
Guy: Now you have raised your hand you must dance.
Shravan: But I wanted to call waiter.
Suman tries to laugh.
Guy: No excuse.
Dev: If he dont want then I will dance.
Sona: Dev?
Dev: Yes, I will dance.
All claps.
Guy: So what’s your name?
Dev: Dev.
Guy: Cool Dev we will give a random song and then you will dance on the song.
Dev: (in his mind) What have you done Dev?
Guy: DJ
The DJ plays Beat Pe Booty from Flying Jatt.
Dev: Now how will I dance on this?
Sona tries to laugh.
Sona: Impossible.
The music starts. Dev dances on Beat Pe Booty.
Dev dances swiftly. Sonakshi is stunned.
Sona: He couldn’t do a single step few months back how come suddenly he can?
Sumo: Wow Jiju you rock.
Shravan: He kept his talent hidden these days.
And then the girl part plays. Suman runs and Suman and Dev dances on the song.
Suman also dances well, Shravan is stunned.
Shravan: Is that Sumo?
Sona: Dont underestimate my sister.
Suman and Dev enjoys. They request Sonakshi. Sonakshi smiles and joins them. Later, Suman is enjoying but wants Shravan to dance. Shravan makes the final entry and also dances well.
All claps. Even others joins.
Devakshi and Shraman smile looking at each other while dancing. They later dance with each other.
The episode ends.
Precap: Suman and Sonakshi help each other. They try to make all fine between Dev and Ranveer. They also try to find Chottu. Sonakshi is shocked to see Chottu. Later, as Neha tells Sona to go, Sonakshi says no one will leave from here. Dev and Neha are surprised. Shravan sees his brother and is about to hug him his brother Chottu pushes him. Even Sumo is shocked to see Chotu.
will try to upload the episode earlier if possible. Actually it takes me 1-2 days to write one episode so that’s why. Will try to upload the next episode tomorrow or day after tomorrow. Once I finish writing the next episode will publish immediately.
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56 Comments
Jo merit behna it was too gud.post sissy
I was really happy while reading it
It made my day
It was awesome
What to say u have written such a nice that I m left empty
Precap so sumo and sons to help haan let us see what will happen
Post soon
Love u sweety
Hey preeti thanks for commenting happy u liked it 🙂
really? 🙂
aww so sweet ab bas bhi karo 😛
and well u have to wait
will try to post tomorrow
love u too dear 🙂
Awsome…Amazing
Ab mat yeh bhi end karna.. Pehlei kuch aur start kar?
Chotu-Aditiya??
Hey zaku thanks for commenting
and well only if i end this
then i can start new one 😛
dont worry more epi to go for this one 😛
and keep guessing XD
Super duper fantastic..
Mmuuaahh??
I think ranveer will be chhotu..but maybe there will be a new entry..
Hey aaru thanks for commenting happy u liked it
well who is chottu to know that keep guessing 😛
Nice
Hey ali thanks for commenting happy u liked it 🙂
post soon..
can’t wait anymoree..
how were your exams??
episode was as usual AMAZIINGG..!!
love,
nikki
Hey nikita thanks for commenting happy u liked it
well will likely post it tomorrow 🙂
exams were not that easy but better than my tests and expectations
and how it actually was depends on results 😛
and happy u liked the epi
love u too 🙂
Very nice epi. Just beautiful ?
Hey sharica thanks for commenting happy u liked the epi 🙂
Nice one yaar I think this line does not completely gives a complement for this part
Hey shramansangel thanks for commenting
yaar honestly speaking i almost got an heart attack reading ur comment
i though i did a mistake 😛
but anyways haha thanks again 😛
Loved It! It Was Awsm!
Hey simplesweety1 thanks for commenting happy u liked it
happy to see u back 🙂
Loved this episode a lot. Post soon ?
Hey zainab thanks for commenting
happy u liked the episode 🙂
and will try to post tomorrow 🙂
Superb episode ???. I think ranveer will be chotu. Rest of the episode was just flawless ??. And we will be waiting for the next surprise ?
Hey anonymous thanks for commenting happy u liked the epi 🙂
well i will say keep guessing 😛
and happy u liked the epi
and hope u all will like the upcoming surprise 😛
Farin Api!
OMG!!!
This was beautiful! M waiting for the next epi! M a bit unwell, but for compensation, I’ll comment long in next epi. Love u?
Hey laddoo oh dear take care of yourself
get well soon dear 🙂
thanks for commenting happy u liked it 🙂
and well will post the next epi tomorrow most likely
and ur wish 😛
love u too
and take care of your health health is more important
Superb episode
Hey princess thanks for commenting happy u liked the episode 🙂
Brilliant epi…Finally truth is out..Feeling so happy. That evil Ramnath, I hated him, but he will b gd now r8? And Pushkar’s entry!!! Wow looks cool. Post next part soon
Hey ariana thanks for commenting
happy u liked the episode 🙂
yeah the truth is out 🙂
ya i hate him too and no worries he is a positive character now 🙂
and pushkar? i didnt get u
and well the next part I will post most likely tomorrow
and amazing dp i love it so much i know i m late but still 😛
Fatarajo..
Awesome yaar…
U r so talented ..
One should have talent write…such a complex…story…
With these many complications…
U r too great..
Loved it.??
hey sona thanks for commenting
happy u liked it
and complex? ya complicated i know 😛
hats off to writers of telly dramas whose shows r more complicated 😛
and thanks again 🙂
and i m not great 😛
Very nice dear !!! Precap sounds interesting !! Write fast ok !!
BTW in which class do u read ??
Hey SONAI thanks for commenting happy u liked it 🙂
happy u also found the precap interesting 🙂
yes will try to post the next epi tomorrow 🙂
well i just finished school now I m studying first year engineering 🙂
Awsome Fatarjo………Can u plz add some more Devakshi romance scenes.
Hey angell thanks for commenting happy u liked it 🙂
and sure will add more romance though i m not good in that
will try 😛 thanks again 🙂
OMG farin API……..!!!!! That was such a great amazing n fantastic ep….these compliment r not enough to express ur talent……!!!!.!!!!!! U r so talented Mashallah…..!!!!! 🙂 🙂 🙂
U have a writer inside u…!! A very awesome writer….!! I loved each n every bit of this ep…!! Both devkashi n shraman…..!!! Both Jodi’s r awesome…..,there was romance b/w devkashi which was awesome…..but shraman I want their romance more….!!!! N in upcoming ep…!! I knw there will be….!!! OMG excited abt d precap….!!! Who is choto……?? Maybe ran veer haha wild guess…..I don’t knw who is he….but plz post ASAP se bhi jaldi….!!!!
U r n amazing n brilliant writer…..!!
LOVE U SO MUCH API…..!!!!
TAKE CARE…..!!!
By by
FRM UR SISOOOO MARIA…. 🙂
Hey marie thanks for commenting happy u liked the epi 🙂
and no yaar i m still writing as all of ur lovely comments encourage me to write 🙂
and thanks 🙂 and well i love to do many stuffs
writing is one of them which i recently discovered this year 😛
and well no yaar 😛
and i love both devakshi and shraman
and okay will try to add more romance
though i m not good in it 😛
and welli will say keep guessing 😛
and will post tomorrow maybe
and love u too 🙂 bye
fantastic
Hey nida thanks for commenting happy u liked it 🙂
Superb…… Dance part was best.. ?…. So in 2-3 days u will post next episode…. Shocking precap… ?? Lots of luv…❤
Hey bhoomi thanks for commenting happy u liked it 🙂
even i enjoyed writing the dance part the most 😛
and well will post the next episode tomorrow most likely 😛
and precap is 😛
love u too 🙂
Wow…….. just awesome….loved it
Fabulous…… marvellous……… amazing……..
Interesting………. lovely……….mind blowing..
Perfect………… wonderful……. loving it….
Fantastic……… superb….. please post the next part soon…. eagerly waiting…
Hey kaya thanks for commenting happy u liked it 🙂
and wow so many words :O
and well will post next epi tomorrow 😛
Awesome yaar.. I mean its really a tough job to type the whole ff..and urs has always been the longest.. V can totally understand that it’ll take tym for u to think ND update.. So no worries…and ..i love the way u portray DEVAKSHI.. Jus love them.. I was jus imagining Shaheer dancing on BEAT PE BHOOTI.. God it would hav been soo much fun ? to watch…? ??
Hey varsha thanks for commenting happy u liked it
and aww so sweet u asked yes it takes me very long to write it 😛
but i dont feel content writing small thats why 😛
and happy u liked it 🙂
and hahah ya shaheer in beat pe bhooti
i really wanna see shaheer or nikita at least to do the challenge 😛
and i seriously ddint know about beat pe bhooti until my friend showed me
i got addicted to it 😛 and i also decided to use the idea 😛
yeah ikr 😛
Jodi, forgive this Leeti again
Dev itna slow kiu he super fast train ki tarha jaldi jaldi kiss nai kar sakta….
wat did Shraman see???
the chotu is our Pushkar right…?????!!!!”’
hahahahaha bechara Dev har bar bed se girta he…?
Kumbkaran Shravu?
pls pst asap like dis one
onek bhalobasha- Leeti
hahahahaha Shraman and Devakshi also accepted Remos’ challenge and completed it hehehe….I think dj ko Remo ne challenge diya aur dj wo pura karne ke bad inhe pass kar raha he??hahahahahaha
Hey leeti thanks for commenting happy u liked it 🙂
and hahhaha kiss? 😛 ahhahahah
and well who is chottu? keep guessing 😛
and well ya dev got no control XD
what is kumbkaran? 😛
and well maybe i try to post tomorrow 😛
dhonobad tomake o bhalobasha 🙂
and hahhaha then assume dj as remo 😛
hahahah
i m so addicted to that song thanks to my friend 😛
hahahahahaha Remo dj hahahahahaha????
kumkaran is Ravans’ bro nw don’t tell me u don’t know Rava,, Ravan is the villain in Ramayana
I can understand ur a Muslim so u may nt know Ravan or Kumbkaran,.. even I’m a Muslim bt I understand dem cs I always watched Hindi shows? hehehe
Super good amazing
Hey devsfan thanks for commenting happy u liked it 🙂
Awesome episode!! Just like you!!! Post the next part soon!!
Hey maria thanks for commenting happy u liked it 🙂
and u r awesome not me 😛
and i love ur dp again i love the mishal-sanjeeda one and this one is also too good
next one i will post tomorrow i think 😛
Ohh ho thank you thank you☺☺
Ok my dear.. Will wait for it!!
Nice epi…..
Hey laxmi thanks for commenting happy u liked the epi 🙂
Okay, okay…So I guess I am back on this FF after a long time and read all episode from episode 14 till here, reading, all without any gap was CHERRY ON THE TOP 🙂 I seriously enjoyed reading 🙂 Good going Fattu ???
Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂
-Zuha
Hey s.z.f.z 😛 thanks for commenting happy u liked the epi
and woah :O
and happy u liked it