Hey Guys! Thank you for the comments in the last chappy16 🙂 I am so sorry for being late! I had uploaded two weeks before! 🙁 I am really happy too se all your positive response or else I would had stopped this ff as I am having a very hectic schedule now a days!!!
Link to previous chapter- Chapter 16
CHAPTER 17
~ONE STEP AHEAD~
“This is probably the last time we all are watching a movie together”, Swara said with a sad smile.
“I guess we ALL are going back to KOLKATA, we can watch a movie together there too”. Laksh said.
“But there we can’t do the fun which we are doing here”, Ragini said.
“Don’t worry we will rock there too”, Sanskar said.
Finally everything was sorted out among these four friends. They are now the same BFFs which they were previously. Ragini and Laksh have no objection of Swasan being together. 1 year has passed and their course was now over. They were now going back to Kolkata.
“ I have made this cold coffee for you guys”, Laksh said coming out of the kitchen.
Everyone smiled and took one cup.
“Have you mixed something in the coffee?” Sanskar asked.
Swara and Ragini gave a serious look to Laksh.
“No”, Laksh answered.
“Then why am I feeling like the fan is rotating?” Sanskar asked.
“Because it is on”, Laksh shouted.
“But it was off few minutes back”, Sanskar said.
Laksh, Ragini and Swara burst out laughing. When life gets too serious, you need someone with whom you can always be stupid! Laksh, Ragini, Swara and Sanskar always acted stupidly. Swara thanked the almighty for sending such people in her life, people who can make her soul smile. They loved each other and had accepted each other in spite of their shortcomings. Swara looked at Sanskar and smiled.
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“It’s time. It’s already 8:30”, Ragini shouts.
“Oh crap”, Sanskar said and stared at the watch mentally calculating time required to reach the airport.
“We are late. We should rush”, Laksh exclaimed.
“We have our flight in just one hour”, Swara said.
“Sanskar called the taxi and then they placed all their suitcases inside the taxi. Everyone was sad. They all were going to miss each other terribly.
They got on the flight and Sanskar sat beside Laksh but Laksh asked him to sit with Swara. Laksh closed his eyes, though the air hostesses were hot but they could not held his attention for long.
“Don’t worry too much”, Ragini said looking at him.
“I am not worrying”, Laksh said.
“You’re cute”, Ragini smiled.
“Where did that come from?”, Laksh asked.
“You look cute when you get nervous”, Ragini said.
They both looked at each other and smiled.
Pyar karna naa tha, pyaar karna pada
Tum pe marna naa tha, Tum pe marna pada
Dil dena naa tha, dil dena pada
Dil dena naa tha, dil dena pada
Aa ho…
Dard lena naa tha, dard lena pada
Unpe marna na tha, unpe marna pada
Pyar karna naa tha, pyaar karna pada
He really don’t care what anyone thinks or says about him, all he truly care is about her. His true aim in life is to see Swara everyday and to keep her happy.
“I love you”,Sanskar said.
“I know you do” Swara said running her fingers on his face.
“Do I look happy when I am sleep?” Swara asked.
“Yes you do”,Sanskar replied.
“Then I’m sure I’m dreaming about you”,Swara said and put her head on his shoulder.
These little things are what make his life worth living.
Phool khilne naa thhe, phool khilne lage
Humko milna naa tha, roz milne lage
Aankh ko ratj-age, acche lagne lage
Raat ke saaath hum raat jagne lage
Unpe marna na tha, unpe marna pada
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“Dad! We are back”,Swaragini screamed as they entered the house.
“Awww… My dolls. I missed you very much”,Shekhar said hugging them.
“At last you both monkeys are back”,Sumi said.
“Mom”,Swaragini jumped to hug their mother.
“I missed you very much”, Ragini said.
“What about you madam?”Sumi asked looking at Swara.
“No I did not missed you”,Swara said.
“That’s why you are crying? Liar!”,Sumi hugged her daughters.
“Something went in my eyes”,Swara said.
“Now go and get fresh. I am going to make the lunch”,Sumi said.
“Mom,make some extra lunch”,Ragini said.
“Why?”Shekhar asked.
“My friends are coming”,Ragini said.
“Which friend?”Swara asked.
“You will get to know when they will come”,Ragini winked.
“Now go and change”,Shekhar said.
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“Uff yeh Sanskar v nah… He is not answering my call”,Swara said in anger.
“Don’t worry you will see him soon”,Ragini smiled.
Swara felt something fishy.
“What are you upto?”Swara asked Ragini.
“Nothing”,Ragini replied.
“Pakka?”Swara again asked.
“Haan”,Ragini smiled assuring her
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Gadodia family were about to start the lunch when they heard the sound of a car’s horn.
“I guess they have come”,Ragini said running out.
“Who?”Swara tried to peep through the window but nothing was visible.
“Surprise”,Ragini said entering the room.
Swara was dumbstruck when she saw Laksh, Sanskar and DP with Ragini. The spoon fell off her hands.
“Who all are they?”Shekhar asked Ragini.
“Dad! They are our best friends. We used to share the flat with them in Mumbai. He is Laksh n he is Sanskar and he is their father”,Ragini said.
“Namaste”,DP folded his hands and greeted Shekhar and Sumi.
They greeted him back. Swara looked at Sanskar, Laksh and Ragini shockingly.
“Lets have lunch”,Shekhar suggested.
“Come this way”,Sumi guided the way.
“Uncle try this paneer kofta. My mom makes the best kofta all over the world”,Ragini said proudly.
“Beta please eat some. This chole bature is Ragini’s favorite”,Sumi said to Laksh.
“Aunty this jalebi is delicious”,Sanskar said.
“This is my Swara’s favorite”,Sumi said.
Swara signalled Sanskar through her eyes asking him why he is there. But Sanskar gave her a flying kiss. This was noticed by Shekhar.
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Post lunch,everyone was sitting in the hall discussing some few common topics. Shekhar and Sumi had got a hint about Swara and Sanskar’s relationship by observing their moment and Ragini’s behavior. They weren’t orthodox so they decided to give Sanskar a chance.
“I know today’s generation does not like their parents select a partner for them. They are too independent to care about such trivialities. I believe that times are changing and we elders should adapt accordingly. So in short, if Swara hugged her father happily.
“I know that I am too young to say this in front of you sir but I will always try and keep Swara happy to the best of my ability. We love each other and I am glad to have finally met you. I am lucky to have a father-in-law like you”,said Sanskar.
“Swara,I have never opposed Sanskar’s decision. If he is happy with this union, I don’t mind it. Swara is a nice girl with strong morals and a sensible head on her shoulders”,DP said.
DP blessed Swara and she was on cloud nine, blessings from her guy’s father. What more could a girl ask for? Swara and Sanskar held hands and hugged each other. If a guy is not comfortable holding his girl’s hands in front of his parents, the girl should not let him hold her when they are alone. Sanskar was comfortable disclosing his relationship to his dad and thus taking it to the next level. Love is not always convenient but if it’s true love,it will outlast any strain,overcome any obstacle and grow consistently and exponentially for all eternity.
They loved each other passionately. Two lives were soon going to embark on a new journey. Vows to take and prayers to be kept on the engagement day. Tears will be shed when the rings will be exchanged and the bride will bid bye. They will be one step close to the eternal bliss. She will look gorgeous in bride’s dress. They will dance to the tune of love. Two hands will be embraced forever. Two souls will be fused together by commitment. Two hearts will join by the purest form of love.
Sanskar touched her dad’s feet along with her to receive his blessings. Ragini and Laksh looked at each other and smiled. Probably this was coming on their way too.
Everyone have put one step ahead in their life.
So guys how was this chappy? Please do say! I will update the next chappy on coming Thursday!! 🙂
THANK YOU!
Love you all forever! 😉
91 Comments
nice
Tysm! 🙂
Awesome…
Thank you! 😉
Super b yaar.
Thanks a lot!!
Awesome….finally swasan one & no hurdle in future hope
In life we are bound to face hurdles!!! 😀
Very much better than previous.
Thank you so much! 🙂
Wowww yaar very good. This is the first ff I am reading n it attracted me towards it???
Thank uh dear!! Keep supporting me!! 🙂
nice
Tysm! 🙂
Wow! Swasan marriage?? M damn excited for it????
Yaa Swasan marriage in coming few chappy!!!
Toh tu aa hi gayi?? Kidhar thi two weeks tak??? Yarr tu kitni alsi hai.. N next chapter ib Thursday??????
Seriously its too irregular???
Sorry re I am lil busy but I will definitely try to upload a lil fast!! 🙁
Friends are back again. Way to rock more.. The little effect n combo of friendship and romance in ur ff makes it tempting…. Soooooo goooddddd??????
Thank uh Sanky!!
hey Jyotii. It is my first comment , I am a silent reader, but today i am commenting becoz i like ur ff very much and followed from frst day..
so don’t make it end soon..
Btw I don’t know what has happened to you.. But take care dear..
U have really a good heart, I can feel that by ur ff..
Thanks Sana for breaking your silnce!!!
Thanks a lot for showering ur love!!1
You all are the one who inspires me to write!!
Heyya Jyotii ur ff has a very gripping story especially SwaSan romance episode was one of the best I ve read even their sacrificing part was awesome u can make readers feel the pain!!!
Thanks dear for ur wonderful comment!
Awesome
Thanks
Amazing update Jyotii. It’s so nice that SwaSan and RagLak are best friends like before again. Their friendship is so heart touching ?. The way they all share jokes, support each other in everything, and respect one another is so lovely. I admire the way you write their friendship bond a lot. And aww, SwaSan and RagLak on the airplane were cute. I enjoyed reading the conversations they shared ❤️. Also, the family dinner was lovely, it’s nice the family were happy with SwaSan’s relationship. Can’t wait to read more.
P.S: Thank you so much for writing this update even though you have a really hectic schedule at the moment ?
Again such a long comment! :O
Thank uh soooo veryyy muchh!!!!
Its like a protein shake for me!!!!
I will try to upload soon!!!!
Thanksss yaarrr!!! Luv uh!!!
nice…..
Thanks!
Superb
Thanks!
i m a silent reader from the beginning.. I would like to thank u for d sweet ff on swaragini.. Hat’s off to ur patience..u r replying to d comments even if you are in such a condition.. Luv u dear… I was afraid when u told about quiting d ff before..dnt do this..i really love this…
Noo!!! I wont quit!!! I will continue this to its end! 🙂
It’s Fabulous plzzzzzz update soon
Thanks!!
Noddy???
its awesome……nice amazing innovative. ..n entertaining. ..swaragini writers should have taken classes from uhh…den dey wont displeasure us with their bullshit….bt u r really nice in writing noddy!! I luvd d part when Sanskar asked for.Swara’s hand for marriage!!! I want a guy like him… Hayee????
Thanks Big ears!!!
Noo there aree more amazing writes than me!
I am nothing infront of them!!!
loved the update… one of the best update… thumbs up…?????
Thanks Mani!! 😉
Jyoti. You rushed a little in his chap. And you didn’t mention anything about swara’s recovery of leg. Or I missed it? Btw this was indeed one step ahead.
Yaa dii I have not mentioned anything about swara’s leg! I will do that in further epis. thanks for reminding!! 😀
Super awesome episode……loved raglak!!!!keeep rockng dear??
Thanks a ton!!
wow superb dr. awsome.
the way u tell us abt wt hpnng their is so wndrful. lv it.
finally swasan r 2gether.
waiting 4 nxt part.
bye
be happy always
Thanks a lot Chanu!!! 🙂
Nice update dear..bt pls post raglak scenes too
Yaa sure I will post raglak scenes!!
swasan marrigae done but no raglak in fact raglak are not in love
Laksh loves Ragini but Ragini doesn’t!!! But soon they ll fall in love!
Dii.. This chapy was lil fast… I was expecting more swasan n raglak scenes…☺☺☺☺
Phir v no worries… Its awesome?
I ll try next tym to stand up ur expectations!
want ragini
You ll get!
You are a flawless writer. The words and the theme of ur ff is really wonderful. The way you potray characters, describe feelings make me directly connect with the characters. I was feeling like visualizing it. You have made a reel world which I can feel. Love u Jyo???
It is what a writer wants!! Thanks for ur kind words!!! 🙂
Didu❤
The best part was Sanskar conviving Swara’s dad. Tge lines what he said touched my soul. Raglak plane scene was also sweet.
Thanks a lot Baccha!! Luv uh!!!!! 😉
Perfect chap. Love it. Upload next soon.
I ll upload next in next week!!