Hey guys !! So I thought that more I make you guys wait, the more you’d be excited for the 2nd last part, the more it’ll be fun.. Anyways, read this.. And Maria di, this is your belated b’day gift…
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‘Oh c’mon Sumo! Grow up’ said Shravan annoyingly..
‘I should grow up? Seriously? Look at yourself… You’re still in your bed.. And its 11 am’ she said..
Shravan got up from his bed and said ‘I’m not on the bed.. We’re talking on phone Sumo, you never know..’
‘Yes, you’re not in the bed, you just got up’
‘How do you even know?’ said Shravan confusingly..
‘That’s what best friends are for !’
He smiles..
‘Okay, now stop smiling, and come home soon.. Those people must be coming’ she said..
Shravan smiled and said okay, and disconnected the call..
It was the day, when some guy was coming with his family to see Suman, for their son, Aditya.. Suman seemed annoyed, she never wanted to marry whoever it was…. She knew whom she loved, she knew whom she wanted to spend her life with, but she just couldn’t confess.. Cause deep down, she knew that he wasn’t over the mistake she did 10 years ago.. She knew she needed to give him time, to forget everything and start afresh..
Their came running Marie, Suman’s sister..
(Preeti-Marie)
‘Di you’re ready?’ she asked in her joyful voice, that Suman loved.
‘Yes.. Is shravan here yet?’
‘Nai di.. Woh time pe aata kab hai’
‘That’s true..’
The doorbell rang and Marie got super-excited and opened the door happily shouting ‘Jiju is here’ … She saw Shravan, not the guy who was gonna marry Suman..
[Well, Marie had predicted the future! Who knew]
‘Oh sorry.. I thought it was Aditya’ she said innocently..
‘Chill mario! Happens.. Now where’s she?’
‘Inside’ she pointed..
Shravan moved in.. He loved her, he knew it.. He was hoping that she wouldn’t be dressed beautifully.. He never liked her dressing up for someone else, not even for her family… Possessiveness he had towards her.. He went in, and Suman at an instinct knew it was him.. She could feel him, and leaving aside that fact, he was the only one who entered her room without knocking..
‘So there comes the Late-Latif’
‘Hey stop that! You know how far your house is..’
‘Yes.. That far that it takes me 5 minutes for me to go to your home, but it takes you 30 minutes for you to come’
Shravan smiles.. She sighs..
*Doorbell Rang*
‘He’s here I guess’ she said annoyed…
‘Tujhe usse shaadi nai karni toh phir..’
‘Mami wants to get me married off soon. You know na’ she said sadly
‘Don’t cry.. I’d be there.. ALWAYS’ he stressed on that word, cause he knew whatever would happen, he would be there *ALWAYS*
There came in the guy, with his family members… Shravan was with Suman, he was sitting on her bed with a pillow on his lap and Suman was sitting on the opposite side..
Mami, unaware of the fact that Shravan’s there, sent Aditya in..
He knocked on the door, Shravan got up to open it..
‘Who are you?’ asked a guy, almost 5’6, a little shorter than Suman, wearing a plain tee with jeans. Quite good looking, but nothing compared to Shravan..
‘Who am I? Mere ghar pe mujhse hi aise sawal puch rahe ho?’ He said
‘Shravan.. He’s Aditya let him come..’ said Suman, quite in thought as Shravan called Tiwari Killa as HIS HOME
Aditya stood confused there , gave a glare at Shravan and walked in
[ps: Aditya has met Suman before.. ]
‘Ye kaun hai?’ asked Aditya..
‘Shravan.. Shravan Malhotra’ said Shravan with an usual SWAG he carried..
‘Toh ye aapka bhhai hai’ said Aditya
‘Abe oyyee’ started speaking Shravan…
‘Bachpan ka dost hai, bhai nahi’ said Suman laughing…
‘Acchaa.. toh ye aapke kamre mei kya kar raha tha??’ Said Aditya..
‘Tujhse matlab?’ said Shravan..
‘Mei toh bass ye kehne aaya tha ki…’. Aditya started talking..
‘Di… Aapki engagement hogi 2 din baad’ said Marie running in the room and standing beside Shravan..
Shravan-Suman’s smile fades..
‘Yahi kehna chahta tha’ said Aditya
Aditya walks out with Marie leaving ShraMan alone…
‘Mei sab theek kar dunga’ said Shravan..
Suman nods…
-ToBeContinued-
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31 Comments
cool nice amazing
Aww!! Thank you so much
Hilarious Nikku! Just set everything back to place. Love u?
Thank you so much !! Love you too Laddoo
Aaaa
Wow man
It was super no no super se bhi upar
I love it nikki
M eager to kno k aage kya hoga
Plzz iske liye ab jyada wait mt krwana
Plzz plzzz
Post it asap
Aww thank you so much Anamika..
You have to wait yaar..
I won’t make you wait much!
Thank you..
-Nikita
Hey Nik
Amazing yrr…
possessive Shravan… :-* 😉 🙂
wow..mindblowing..
waah .. kya bezzti kri Shravan ne Adi ki.. Maza aa gya..
u nailed it..
take care..
post soon..
Love you !!
Ruchi.. 🙂
Aww thank you so much Ruchi di!
Shravan bezatti karne mei expert hai..
Hehe..
Thank you !!
Love you too,
Nikita
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Thank you so much Kaya !!
I would post soon..
Thank you for the wonderful comment
Nikita
Haha..
Loll..
So.lovely…
Nice..
Enjoyable…
Post the next part soon..?????
Oh thank you so much SHONA !!
Thanks..
I would post soon
-Nikita
Oh Nikki..wat should I say… I m speechless. ..d way u portrayed d bond of friendship btwn shraman…it left me feeling so good…
What else…
Eagerly waiting for d next part…
Post very very soon…
Luv u loads nd loads…????
Aayyee.. Di.. Thank you so much..
I would post soon..
You’re so cute di !!
Love you too
Nikita
No tension shravo sab theek Kar dega
Haan.. Sab theek karega woh.. Chill
Nikko u made me left with no words
I was really mad reading it
I liked it
No no loved it
U. Write amazingly
Yasr kya kho
U stole my heart
Post soon
Hayye meri pretty preeti…
Thank you so much..
Thank you..
Hayye, dil chura lia na, ab wapas na dungi mei
I would! Bye
-Nikita
abhi do ghanta bhi nai hua aur itne cmnts….hai hai…itna jyada fan following he apka ?…
meri Queeny api toh khusi ke mare jhum uthe gi…are di confuse mat hona Queeny api means Maro di…
Shravan was amazing imean abhi bhi he bt aha jyada amazing tha….kya muo tor jabab diya usne….Adi ko….
di ap kaha kaha se idea lati he…me bhi jara le sakti hu kya?
pst d 2 shot now….
luv u bye – Neeti
aur ha me janti kab pst hua kiuki me jab aha chakkar laga rahi thi tabhi e pst hua ?
Fan following? Nai nai..
These are my sissys.. Fans kaha yaar
Haan.. Hope so unhe pasand aaye
Thank you so much… Haa yaar, shravan bada mast banda hai..
Ha ha! For sure.. Are woh ideas bas aa jate hai.. I’m talented you know.. Hehe just kidding
Love you too!
Accha hua is baar LEETI nai aai..
-nikita
Oyyy nikooooo jan le gi Kya…?? Nai nai man le li meri….!!!!
That’s so sweet of u itna acha birthday gift…..!!! Awwww my siso that’s amazing….!! Ab Mai had kis I ko keh sakti hoon meri bday aj tak chal rai hai hahahah
Lekin yr ep….ufff Kia kahoon….!! Chalo jinni kar sakti hoon utni karti hoon apna best deti hoon…
So abt d ep….
It’s was too too nai nai us se bhi ziada amazing fab MINDBLOWING I was just lost in it….!!! Kis li khati hai yr….!!! U have a hidden writer inside u my dear…..!!!! ??????
U r a wonderful writer…..???Kahan Kahan se ideas lati hai bhe….!!??????
Hahahahah it was DAMM funny the dialogues omg just amazing….!! N sai wali beseti hoi Adi ki….!!! Hahahaha bhai shr ka bas chalta na toh sumo se rakhi bandhwadeta Adi ko…hahah
I loved each n every word of this shot……!!!! Kampala shamal beaks all m IN LOVE WID U N UR SHOTS……!!!?????????❤❤❤
Next part plz plz plz plz jaldi post kar na wait nai ho raha hai…!!!
Love u itna ke koi soch na sake…..!!!!!!!!!!! ?????????❤❤❤?????????☺☺☺????????????❤❤❤?????????☺☺☺???
Take care my love……!!!!!!
Ur badi behnaaaa
Hayy di.. Itta sara na likho.. Mei blush kar rahi hu yaha pe, aur meri maa confused hai ki hua kya? Kisne kya kaha? Ab mei kya batau unko..
Hayy di, I’m so glad that you liked it.. I was hoping that you would liked it.. I love you so much !! Haan.. Aapka b’day chalta rahega.. Srry to be late actually, mera plan toh likhne ka aapke b’day ke din tha.. But idea na aaya, aur jab aaya, toh TU walo nei nautanki ki, toh din post na hua.. Toh galti TU ki hai..
Nw to ur comment,
Hidden writer? Shayad ho.. Pata nahi.. Jitta banta hai, utta likh dala..
Ideas aa jate hai bas..
And thank you for liking the dialouges..
Haan yaar, abhi Adi ko show mei peet raha hai, yaha shayad rakhi bandhwa de.. Ab uske like padhna padega aapko !!
I would surely post sooon as aapne kaha hai, aur aapka OS hai..
Love you too !!
-Nikko
This was amazing. ?
Loved it to the core. ?
Post soon ?
Thank you so much Zainab..
I would…
Take a gun a shoot me. Is this how u end a part? Girl y???? Now I have to count stars until next post is up, Nd alas! Its day time so no stars…Can u pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls post soon?
As for this part then do I have to ensure tht u r an awesome writing again? Girl u deserve some standing ovations for killing me with the end of every epi nd giving me a life back with another dhamaka!
Love u
Take Care
Post soon
No di !!
I won’t kill you.. Aisa karoge, toh itne pyaare pyaare comments kaun likhega?
Don’t count stars.. My next one’s coming up soon..
Arre di !! Mei sharma gayi..
Thank you so much !!
And standing ovation ke liye khade na ho.. Sit down, cause next ep mei jhatka lagega
Love you too!!
Nikita
oyehoye niki tune to ek hi shot se mujhe tera majnoo bana diya!!! next shot mei toh …. pata nehi mujhe kya hoga???? loved it !! post asap
Hayy Deotima… Thank you so much !! Majno ban gye ap to !! Hehe. I would post soon
-Nikita
Amazinggggg super duper awwwwesome fantastic fantabulous .. superrrrrrrrrr excited for the next shot … luvvvvved it …?????????????????????? ..
Post veryyyyy sooooooon ..
Take care ..
Thank you so much !!
Hayy di, aisa na karo, meine comment se hi mar jawa
I would post soon..
-nikita