Hii guys, thanks for your response on previous part.
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His gaze fell upon lifless girl, who was lifelessly sitted on chair. Her whole body is bleeding, not even single part where she has not got cut. His mind become numb seeing it. He don’t getting any idea how to save her. Fire is not letting him to reach near her. Time is slipping by his hands . He again take step to reach near her but again he only get faliure. Girl’s condition is also becoming worse by passing time. Somehow he managed to reach near her. Her face is showing how much she had got pain. There is not even single place from where blood is not flowing. His condition is also not different from her, by seeing his life in that condition he even not able to take breath properly. He open all the knots with so difficulties due current is passing from chair. He doesn’t want waste even single second to find out current source. After opening all knots he pick her in his arms. His hands are becoming wet due to blood. Now biggest problem is how to espace from fire. Fire is again stopping his ways. He put her down on floor. He opened his blazer and cover her with it. He manage to escape from fire. His own body is burning due to heat. His feet started to tumbling. But all ignoring his pain he bring her outside the mansion. He put her on some bench. He tried to awake her. All are getting in vain.
princess see na who has come, don’t you wish your prince happy birthday. Wake na princess and wish me. I want to celebrate my birthday with you.
He patted her face but nothing is happening. Several people stand their to see that scenario but no one is helping him. One girl came near him with water bottle.
Uncle take this, if u sprinkle water na aunty will become alright .
He snatch bottle from her hand and started to sprinkle it. Finally she open her eyes. He started kiss her face. Seeing it she give him little smile.
“ Sanskar, don’t leave them.”
Saying it she again closes her eyes. Someone had called ambulance, ambulance arrived there but he denied them.
“ I don’t need it, u may go. I will manage”
They all tried to convince him but he don’t listen them. Seeing his sturnboness all went from there expect little girl.
“ uncle why don’t you let them take aunty.”
He again give glanced to her. He is no mood in talking to her. Still he answer her.
“ you will not understand. I just need your little help. I am calling someone until I don’t finish my talk don’t leave her. “
He also don’t know why he is trusting this little girl just his heart is allowing him to trust her.
She nodded in yes, he called kabir and give him all instruction for her treatment. Soon one ambulance arrived there. They take her inside. He also started to go inside. But he back off and go toward girl.
“ Thanks”
She give him assured smile and run away from there. He become confuse seeing her act but he don’t want to waste his time thinking about it. He sitted inside ambulance.
After 30 minutes they finally reach some isolated place. There is only one building. He took her there. Inside that building a mini hospital is there. Kabir had already arranged room for her treatment. He put her there.
After 2 hours
Kabir come out from icu. Sanskar rushes there.
Sanskar: is she fine( with little hope.)
Kabir: Sanskar, her condition is worse. Even anyone can’t torture animal like this the way she being tortured . I can’t say anything. Now only your prayer and her will power can save her.
Sanskar: can I meet her?
Kabir nodded in positive.
Sanskar entered there, he held her hand.
Sanskar: princess you know how much it’s paining here( pointed toward his heart) I promise I will never leave you. Whatever you will say I will fulfil your all wishes. Just you come to me, I will also let you do oiling.
She slowly opened her eyes, he started to call kabir but she signed him in no.
Swara: Sanskar, I love you. Happy birthday, sry I don’t able to give you any gift. They destroyed all thing sanskar. I am going far away from you , you will never forget me na and move on.
Sanskar: stop rubbish talking, you are not going anywhere. Do you understand? If you will leave me na I will die.
She tried to put her finger on his lip but due to pain she can’t able to do it.
Swara: shh, don’t speak like this. If you will die who will send them jail. Do you not give me justice. They destroyed many lives Sanskar , all want justice. Plz give them justice na. Don’t leave anyone.
Sanskar: not only I , you will also punish them. First you become alright.
Swara: now this not possible Sanskar, I want go from here. This pain is beyond my limit. You have live for our love.
Sanskar: yes swara I will live for your love. I know nothing will happen to you. You also have comeback to me for our love. Listen swara, now Sanskar will cross every limit “ in your love”
Kabir reaches there, he started to check her.
Sanskar is still blabbering.
Kabir jerked him, then he reliases her eyes are still close. He don’t know whom he till talked.
Kabir: sry Sanskar, she is in coma. Now only we can wait for correct time.
Sanskar: when will she wake up?( in stern voice)
Kabir; I don’t know. May be after 2 minutes or never.
Sanskar give him smile. He become confuse seeing it.
Kabir; why are you smiling?
Sanskar: she will comeback for my love until she don’t come let me cross every limit” in her love”
Kabir: what do you mean?
Sanskar; nothing, can I aso get treatment?
He nodded in yes, he started to take him from there.
Sanskar: plz give treatment here itself. I don’t know when I will see her again . I don’t want waste even single moment.
Seeing his condition, kabir agree to give him treatment there.
Kabir: Sanskar what are you going to do?
Sanskar: don’t worry about me. Just you take care of my life. Can you leave me alone for sometime I wanna talk her.
He nodded in yes and went away.
Sanskar: princess I know you are listening me. Today I want you give some promises to you.
1. I will destroy everyone who are reason of your pain.
2. Until I don’t take my revenge I will not even drink water.
3. I will wait for you my entire life.
Now I am going, you should take care of yourself. One more thing princess the day you will leave this world that day will also last day for me.
Last time he give her glance and went outside.
Kabir: Sanskar, where are you going. You can’t leave from here. They may harm you.
Sanskar: Don’t worry nothing will happen to me.
Kabir: don’t act being foolish.
Sanskar: I am going to give them same and more torture of their deeds.
Kabir: do you even have any idea. Where they are?
Sanskar: no
Kabir; Sanskar,we will go to police. We will fire FIR they will find them.
Sanskar: no kabir, I can’t trust anyone expect you. You pls take care of her. She is my everything. One more thing one day a girl will come here. Give this diary to her.
Kabir: who?
Sanskar: ragini, her best friend.
Kabir: Sanskar, in bad time all friends and relative leave people. I challenge you she will not come.
Sanskar: she will
Saying it he handed diary to him and went away.
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After two days
Sanskar is standing at some unknown place. There on every wall Swara pictures are hanged. Middle of room there is one punching bag. He is continuously punching on that.
Ranjhan dhoondhan main chaleya
Ranjhan mileya naa ye…
Jigraan vichon agan laga ke Rabba
Laqeeran vich likh di judaai
While punching, he remembering their first meeting where he is more nervous than her.
Kho gaya, gum ho gaya
Waqt se churaya tha jo
Apna banaya tha..
Ho tera, woh mera
Saath nibhaaya tha jo
Apna banaya tha..
He remembering how on his confession she told her truth. How he give her shock. How she accepted his love.
Remembering it smile come on his face.
Chadariya jheeni re jheeni
Chadariya jheeni re jheeni
Aankhein bheeni ye bheeni ye bheeni
Yaadein jheeni re jheeni re jheeni (x2)
Their marriage, her fights, her cute antics, her condition when laksh tried to molest her. This raises his anger, he started to punch more harder.
Aisa bhi kya milna, saath hoke tanha
Aisi kyun sazaa humne hai paayi, Ranjhana ve
Phir se mujhe jeena, tujhpe hai marna
Phir se dil ne di hai ye duhaai, Saajnaa ve
Laqeeron pe likh di kyun judaai..
How he don’t listen when she was telling about his parents. How he slap her.
He started to punch more harder and harder.
Gair sa hua khud se bhi, na koi mera
Dard se karle chal yaari, dil ye keh raha
Kholun jo baahein, bas gham ye simat rahe hain
Aankhon ke aage lamhe ye kyun ghat rahe hain
Jaane kaise koi sehta Judaaiyaan.
Her jealousy, his drama, her shyness.
Again he smiled little.
Chadariya jheeni re jheeni
Chadariya jheeni re jheeni
Aankhein bheeni ye bheeni ye bheeni
Yaadein jheeni re jheeni re jheeni (x2)
His shouting, her tears, her anger, her silent treatment,their kiss, finally their marriage consumption.
Ranjhan dhoondhan main chaleya
Ranjhan mileya naa ye…
Jigraan vichon agan laga ke Rabba
Lakeeran vich likh di judaai
Her condition in mansion, her pale face, her bleeding body, her last word.
“ punish them, I want justice”
He fell down on ground
“ swara” he shouted. He started to cry loudly
He stop crying after listening ring. He picked the call.
Caller: sir we founded them. Expect sahil, everyone is with us. You can come and see them.
Sanskar: torture them until I don’t come. Send some of your man to find sahil also. This time no one should escape.
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Precap: I am not giving you, you may guess.
Give ur ideas to torture all of them.
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Bye, take care and love you all…
39 Comments
wow
revenge time
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Superb waiting for next
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Nice..
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nice
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nice
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Awsomee and torture should be 100 times more than swara ?
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Sanky will torture them really more than worse…
Wow… Awesome… Amazing….Really eager to see them getting tortured…..update next one asap
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I will update next part asap
Soo emotional epi…. m not being able to stop my tears seeing SWASAN in that condition…? .. but but but Finally revenge time has come…. ?.. i have a request don’t kill them or shoot them or burry them alive,,,, their punishment would be 1000 times more harder then Swara… with which hand Ap Dp Sahil slapped n Laksh gave electric shock to Swara… just cut their fingers … damn i just wanna kill them with my hands in my way…that too so brutally that death too will also fear coming in between my revenge…??
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Don’t worry sanky will not give them easy deaths, he will torture them more than swara being tortured…
awesome….!! It’s revenge time now…!! waiting for next part..!!
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You have to more for next part…
No part today…
Mind blowing i really feel like crying their love their pain revenge it really touches my heart thank you
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You don’t need to thanks me , end is suspence it may be happy or sad. But one thing is sure she will get justice and they will be united…
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But plz save swara and give her justice and reunite swasan
awsm dr nd i just loved it dr nd the way u explan the sng in sanky flaskbck is vry good dr nd i thnk in nxt part sanky’s revenge frm his family nd shehker,sahil nd realy eager to see them gettng tortured nd waitng for nxt part……
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Wait for next part to see them getting tortured…
Awesome post soon dr
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I will update asap…
Sanskar, Swara ! Be strong guyz, and gud Luck!
that wish for you too Anniya…..
I will convey your msg to them….
Thanks,but why good luck to me…
good luck for everything on your life of course weew 😀
Superb n its revenge tym…
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I thanked you for writing this one.I usually dont become emotional after reading any story but this one literally made me cry i can feel sanskar’s pain his love plz update soon i think its laksh who kidnapped swara
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May be your guess is correct…
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awesome revenge time waiting for next episode
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In next part , ur wish will surely complete…
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