Hey guyz, here is the next one please do read and comment….
PS: Are you guys not liking the story the way it is progressing or is it turned boring? In previous chapter I got very less response….. if so then please let me know, because your comments, your response motivates me to give you more and better…… and if you are happy with the story then please leave your comments…. Your one word means a lot to me….. I am putting a lot of efforts to give you the best, I spend my nights for this…… please it’s a request to all my silent reader’s if you really like my work just let me know….. thank you guys…. Love you all
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Previous chapter link: Here
Chapter 42
Evening, Garden area, Maheshwari Mansion
It’s almost a week to Sharmishtha in Maheshwari Mansion…. Swara recovered from her injury, now she was perfectly fine…. So, it was time for Sharmishtha to go back
Annapurna: (passing a cup of tea to her) So, Sharmishtha ji when you have decided to leave for Indore?
Sharmishtha: day after tomorrow…..
Annapurna: (sadly) wish you could stay here for more but I know your son needs you too
Sharmishtha: exactly, what could I do? I am stuck, my one eye is here and other there in Indore
Annapurna: don’t worry about Swara, we all are here for her…..and after this incidence Sanskar is extra careful about the safety of every one, he even deployed personal bodyguards for all…. I assure you she is all safe here…
Sharmishtha: (smile) I don’t know how to express my gratitude towards you and your family…. Really Annapurna ji the way you all cared for Shona is just commendable, now I am no more insecure about her…
Annapurna: it’s nothing in comparison with what Swara did for us, she earned our love and respect…. I must say you have given her best upbringing possible…. You should be a proud mother
Sharmishtha: (smiles) I am….
They exchanged smiles, after a silence of few second Sharmishtha spoke hesitantly “I was thinking if I could take Shona with me for few days, Ashu is so impatient to meet his sister” Annapurna wasn’t expecting this, she was little surprised though it was genuine, Swara didn’t visit to Indore even for once since she came here “I can underst…………….
“No!!! you can’t take her” Siya screamed
She heard them and before Annapurna could say anything she interrupted, both the ladies turned to her with bewilderment….. Siya hurriedly came up to them
Annapurna: (softly) Siya, it’s just a matter of few days, she will come back…..
Siya: (adamantly) No, no, no….. She will stay with me here, she can’t go…..
Annapurna: (holding Siya’s hand) bacha, your Shona di has a little brother and he wants to meet her…
Siya: ask him to come here, why she will go….
Annapurna: (stern voice) Siya, behave yourself….
Broken with Annapurna’s strict tone, she ran from there with teary eyes….
Annapurna: (looking back to Sharmishtha) please don’t mind, she is just a kid….
Sharmishtha: No, it’s ok…… I can understand her fear….
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Siya was running in corridor, her weak cries turned into loud weeping which was audible…..Swara recognized her voice as she crossed her room, she quickly stepped out to look for her…
“Siya….” Swara called out her name but the little fiery princess was so involved in her own world that she couldn’t hear anything….. Swara was worried, she strode behind her…..
“Dad….” Siya screamed as she reached study room where he was engrossed in work completely, startled by the voice he turned around….. the sight was displeasing for him, agonized with his daughter’s state he stood up from the chair and quickly came up to her….
Sanskar: Siya, what happened?
Her father, her panacea was there in front of her…. she immediately hugged her legs while crying….
Sanskar: (picking her up in his arm) princess, why are you crying…. Anyone troubled you?
Before she could answer, they got disturbed by Swara’s voice….. she was there at the door step, looking at them with anxious and worried eyes….
“Siya!!!” Swara called her name….
Much to their surprise Siya’s crying became more louder as she heard Swara…. little frightened with her reaction, Swara came up to her….
Swara: (caressing her cheek) what happened dear? Why you are crying?
Releasing herself from Sanskar’s hold, Siya jumped in Swara’s arms…. Clinging close to her chest she started crying again….. Swara looked at Sanskar with perplexed eyes…. They were trying to figure out the reason for her behavior….
Swara: (rubbing her back) shhhh….. you are my strong girl na, then how can you cry baby….
She made her sit on the couch and whipped her tears, due to continuous crying her breathing turned heavy…. Sanskar poured some water in a glass and passed it to Swara….
Sanskar: first drink this…..
Swara helped her to sip some….. they waited for her to calm down sitting on either sides of her….
Sanskar: (caressing her hand) Now tell me what happened?
Siya: Shona di’s mom wants to take her back to Indore….. She was talking to dadi ma and when I said no to her, dadai ma scolded me…
Sanskar and Swara both looked at each other….. It was clearly visible on his face, he was also not pleased with the idea…. How impatiently he was waiting to divulge his feelings to her and if she will go it would only make him more restless….
Siya: (looking at Swara) will you go??
Swara: it’s just for few days Siya then I will come back…. I also need vacation just like you
Sanskar was silent, he didn’t know what to say, though his condition wasn’t as worst as Siya but not even better then……
Siya: (hugging Swara) No, you can’t go….
Swara: (caressing her hair) Siya, see I am here with you for so many days, my mother and bhai missed me….. so, they also want to spend some time with me…
Siya: (releasing herself from Swara) your mother is bad, I don’t like her…..
Sanskar: (angrily) Siya!!! Is this the way to talk? Say sorry….
Swara wasn’t happy with his reaction, she glared him angrily and silently signaled not to acerbate the situation….
Siya: (teary eyes) sorry…
Swara: fine dear, you don’t want me to go, I won’t go…. Happy!! Now stop crying…
Siya: (cheerfully) really!!…. promise me
Swara: (holding her hand) promise….
Siya was all content and happy with Swara’s promise, she kissed her and ran from there shouting “I will tell this to dadi ma”
Sanskar: (looking at Swara) why you gave her fake hopes, she will be more hurt when you go….
Swara: it wasn’t a fake hope….
Sanskar: (confused) what??
Swara: yes, what I said was true….
Sanskar: (shocked) don’t you want to go?
Swara: off course, I do but not like this….. How can I leave Siya in such condition, it will make me restless and guilty….
Sanskar: and what about aunty? She will get upset….
Swara: I will talk to her, I know she will understand….
He took a deep sigh of relief, Swara’s decision was a delight for him though somewhere he was little guilty, guilt of withholding Swara here for his self-interest but as it is said everything is fair in love and no doubt he was madly in love with this girl…..
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Night, Swara’s room
She was thinking how to tell Sharmishtha about her promise to Siya. She knew her decision would disappoint her mother but she was stuck badly, it was impossible to keep everyone happy….. She was struggling with her own feelings when she heard her mother’s voice…
Sharmishtha: (flipping the pages of magazine) Shona, I think I should drop the idea of taking you with me this time….. I have seen Siya today, she was hurt to know that…. Poor kid
Swara was shocked to hear her mother…. As if god granted her wish…
Swara: Maaa….. Really!! I mean, do you really think so?
Sharmishtha: hmmm…. It’s true I wanted you to come with me but the way Siya reacted I think it’s not the right time….. you can come on next weekend, till then you have to find a way to sway Siya because it will be difficult for me to hold back Ashu for long…. He is so impatient to see you….
Swara: (hugged her mother) thank you so much Ma, you don’t know what you did for me….. I was in great dilemma….. love you Ma…
Sharmishtha: (smiles) love you too my bacha….
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Morning, Swara’s room
Swara sitting on the bed with a sad face, cursing her fate when Siya arrived…..
“Good morning Shona di” Siya squealed happily
Swara looked at her and replied coldly “Good morning”
Siya: are you ill?
Swara: No, I am fine dear…..
Siya: but you are looking Sad….
Swara: no it’s not like that but you are looking very happy today, what’s the reason?
Siya: yes I am…. There are two things….. first is a secret I can’t tell you and second is dad’s promise, you know what he promised me that you will live here with me forever…..
Baffled with Siya’s words, Swara looked at her blankly….. She was confused, why he promised something like this to Siya, what he is up to?
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Precap: Surprise, surprise, surprise…..
123 Comments
it was awesome.. What’s ur age? I mean u work in a bank…. even i help my dad in his business 😀 🙂
thanks dear and i am 28…..
Awesome….. Very nice
thanks Shan……
Superb plz try to post next soon dear and its a short one
thanks Priya and i need some time to write next….. may be day after tomorrow i could update….
No yaar…how can u tell u this is boring… My fav fiction… Sorry I couldn’t able to comment ur previous epi…I just completed it few minutes before…. Dear loved each epi…wen saw ur this epi my face light up…wow…I put msg on prev chapter plz chk……let me read this chapter… I will give u the feedback…
thanks Paru…….. it’s really sweet of you
awesome dear i jst luv yr ff its really kinda cute plz update regularly
Cant wait 2 read the nxt ep
thanks Anni….
Wow… Just awesome….
Don’t be disappointed bcoz of comments…. It’s really interesting dear….
thanks Tamanna……
it was awsm dear….
fingers crossed for d surprise….
n dont worry dear we luv ur ff….
i will be a bit irregular in commenting coz my exams r near n i am in class tenth bt i surely read ur update as soon as possible….
luv u dear…
keep writing…
stay blessed…
thanks Janvi….. n all the best for your exams….
Hi Di. ….don’t feel that you are getting less comments. ….stry is awesome. ……u r a fabulous writer. ……i love ur stry very much. …..I have read firm the 1st episode. ….I will be waiting for u r stry. …….do u know even my frnds call me crazy. ….sometimes mad. ……..there will be many silent readers. …….i am 100% sure about it. …….as I am also one of the silnt rder????. …..cntue …..loved ……really interesting. ……..waiting for nxt episode……. ……update soon di. ….sry fr nt comntng till now………
hey Aana….. that’s so sweet of you, thank you dear…..
Hi Di. ….don’t feel that you are getting less comments. ….stry is awesome. ……u r a fabulous writer. ……i love ur stry very much. …..I have read firm the 1st episode. ….I will be waiting for u r stry. …….do u know even my frnds call me crazy. ….sometimes mad. ……..there will be many silent readers. …….i am 100% sure about it. …….as I am also one of the silnt rder????. …..cntue …..loved ……really interesting. ……..waiting for nxt episode……. ……update soon di. ….sry fr nt comntng till now………☺☺☺☺☺
Soo sooo sooo awesome chappy dear.. how much my Siya cried today…,,, i dont like her crying…?? i just love bubbly,chirpy,,,naughty,,,adorable Siya… awwww such a cute kid… n d way u portray her it’s mind blowing…here all r superb…but u know what she is my fav character in ur FF… ??… plzz dear i want some SWASANYA scene… if they trio r together i feel soo good… it feels sooooo goood…☺☺..
thanks dear…… n i will try to give you more…….
hey in my opinion u really shouldn’t stop writing coz u r not getting many comments..ur writing is good and if u like to write…juz continue…i can assure u one thing that even if people dont comment on ur ff, they do read it and love it…its juz that they dont know what to say…
thanks dear….. and i won’t stop writing it’s just that when you get feedback on your work it makes you feel good, after all nothing is more precious for a writer than his reader’s review….
Yeepi…thanks for the chapter dear…. Too good….. Loved the way siya was handled by swara…. Sweet chapter…. Eagerly waiting for the surprise…. 😀 love u loads ur writing s too good…don’t u have any doubt in that sweetheart…. Keep writing…. We all live ur work…. We seriously wait for ur update…. U r a gifted writer ….update soon…. Eagerly waiting for next chapter… U increased my curiosity…. 🙂
thanks Swastika…….. your praise means a lot….
Wow….loved this one…he promised siya…I think he will do a surprise date…or proposal… Wow plz post next part soon I can’t wait….siya mera bachaa how sweet she is….remind me my childhood….
thanks Paru……
awsm..loved it..ur story is nt boring at all..it is one of d best ffs i hv ever read..dont end it..continue for ur regular readers..i always wait for ur ff..tc..
thanks Kumu…..
Ur ff is amazing dear plz continue can’t wait for next part awesome dear
thanks dear…..
Arre don’t worry we all are a crazy fan of ur ff…Be positive…Ur evry story is vry vry vry Awesome…I can’t exprss this in words..nd asusual this episode is really Amazingggggg…wht about precap???? can’t wait yaar..
thanks dear…… tysm for liking my work
It’s an awesome ff.. U showcase each n every relationship n emotions in a realistic manner… Keep writing.. N may tu update asap.. ????
From a selfish entangled love fanfan??
thanks Chris…..
We love the story. I wait for the post from the moment I complete with readers. Keep going. Love you lots and our swasan.
thanks Goldie….
u know what!!!! i have reed all 42 episodes in a single day.!!!!… at today 7am-4pm my office .. 🙁 inspite of my so much bg schedule…… i cann’t control myself to reed it…………….u r a amused writter dear… 🙂 i heard before ur story bt n’t bothered abt it….. Now i am repented !!!!!!!!! why i was being so!!! stupid me… :/ so gddddddddd night ……….. a lotzzzzzzzzzzz love & plz carry on ur story…. i will eagerly w8ing for it 🙂
thank you so much dear…… i appreciate your eagerness to read the story in one go……. keep reading and tc….
very nive
thanks dear….
very nice
Awesome yarr and bhumi sometimes many readers may not be able to comment when they are in hurry or may be thought to comment after sometimes but they forgot u r doing exceptional job because writing more than 40 episodes is not an easy task i my self a writer but i wrote only 9-10 episodes maximum but u r beyond great hats off to your work and dont stop writing may be some readers want to read the story in a fast track ?
thanks Rabia…… you always sound so sensible, love to have you as my reader……. well it’s amazing you are a writer too….. give me the link of your work, i would love to read….
Bhumi currently im writing swasan: how they met
here is the link i hope u’ll read it 😉
http://www.tellyupdates.com/swasan-met-ss-part-1/
and this is the link of my last one
http://www.tellyupdates.com/swara-u-r-everything-two-shots-part-2b/
🙂
oh hi dear, soooo soooo sorry for late comments. I am guilty for not replying on each and every chappy, but what to do as now in my country we are having college summer break…..
So doing volunteering, going out with friends and family……
But sweety don’t you think I am disliking your story, for me it’s one of my favorite stories I am engrossed reading 🙂
I love the twist and turns of the storyline, I think Siya’s part was really emotionally well written.
I like Siya’s role in the story as she is the one bringing the two opposite personages closer to each other 🙂
I hope you don’t mind if I ask you not to rush write your story take time to unravel it on a correct pace 🙂 I love it so far, and my well wishes for you, you write well and you will keep improving 🙂
adios ingenious writer, hope to read next chappy soon 🙂
thank you so much rosh……… that’s so sweet of you……… and may i know from which country you are?
you’re welcome, well I’m from Suriname, former colony of The Netherlands in South America, to be precise 🙂
Proud indo-surinamese 🙂 , one more reason I like indian serials is that I get to learn little things from diverse cultures in India, you guys mention things that I never knew before 🙂
Ok my bak bak aside, thanks for asking though 🙂
Awesome update……..I want a pov of siya since she met swara till now………will be glad if you think about it……..post the next part soon…….waiting eagerly for next part…….
thanks Tulina….. and definitely i will think about it…….
Sorry bhumija, i missed the previous part. & Read it now. As usual both parts were wonderful.
Eagerly waiting for the surprise.. ?
thanks Pramudi…..
superb
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thanks dear….
Awesome
thanks buddy….
Awesome yr …loved it …waiting for surprise
thank you Deeksha….
Very nice
thanks Ruhi….
omg… swasansiya will be a great family…waiting next surprise *jumping
luv it soo much Bhumija, ty
thanks Mica…..